FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 19

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Jaa Bewaafa!!! Update karegi meri jooti!!!😆

update karde naa yaaaaar😳😉😉
i lub uuuuuuu😳

aur haan doosra bhi update karde😆

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Rims will you be updating soon? Not today Yas...I got wayyyyy to distracted...blame Sangee😆😆

Btw, love part 3, love how Neev came to make sure that Ayesha is ok, that was sweet of him 😊 my fav bit was when Prachi was asking Ayesha about her Milind's name.awwwwww that's a good part actually...😃...Hai...wait till she says it to him...😉 Very curious to know about the Inder and Ayesha link?Yes...similar to that in the show......but i'll make it slightly different I guess the relation is the same as the one in the actual serial, please shed light on it soon, and does PL know? No PL doesn't...and no dadi in this FF? Yes there is...but not for the most part...she's been shipped off to hong kong...😉

Thanks for a great read 😊

Originally posted by: meteora_smt

Rimz you didn't reply to my super-long comment! Im very depressed!!! 😭 😭 😭

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Because I'm saving it for last silly...actually I'm hald way through replying that hehe...😉

Originally posted by: meteora_smt

Heyy ok before I comment actually I need to give some backstory. 😆 Hehe...Looking forward to it...😊😊

Okkay, firstly, I got to know you primarily through the Jay thread,and yet you forgot my name!!!😆 and then I always noticed that everytime you entered a thread, requests (and some even threats! 😆 ) were bombarded on you to update your FF. ahaha.....oh those people? I pay them...😉

I was like "What is up with Rima's FF's maan? Are they like magical or what?" Coz Im not an FF reader, and even if I am, Im usually silent. hehe...I wonder what you'll make of it then...

Well out of all the three FF's, this was the newest so I decided to read this one. No probs...hehe and thats FOUR now!! Can you believe it ahahaha😆😆😆but this one has NA so its better that you chose this...

AND, so I read it today, and I LOVED it. Nice idea to have both couples. awww Thanks hun...actually thanks should go to JC...she inspired me...😊

Ch 1: I loved how you started and ended the introduction chapter with a BANG! Like my attention got immediately hooked with the Neesha's first meeting (subtle tribute to the show, huh? 😉ahaha...yes yes...it was very similar to the show...hai, if only they showed my kisss😉) and I really enjoyed it, likewise the ending in which Prachi admits to being blind was a nice twist and made me curious for the next chapter. aha...good good...my tactics are working...

Ch 2: One thing I liked about the previous chapter and this chapter was the fact that you actually wrote in chawl lingo for Milind-Ayesha, I'll say it right here, I simply adore writers who go the extra mile and research and stuff to make their characters as realistic as possible, and so you've managed to do that. Thank you so much Sonia...I'm glad people like it and appreciate it...I was having a tough time with that....It shows ur commitment! 👏 I liked the last scene with Michi, it was damnnn cute. 😳 😳 LOL...me too actually I wanted to bring in the idea of him saving her again and again and then in the end...she'll be the one to save him...😃

Ch 3: I liked this chapter too, not as much as other chapters, coz it didn't have much couple interaction except towards the end, but it was a nice chapter, fun readYes, you're right, it didn't...it was more of everybody jumbled together...lol... Milind is so totally enamoured by Prachi, but I don't think he's totally in love with her, prolly just curious.Aha you got it...exactly hun...😉 Neev is just too cute with PL and his halwa, hehe haina? I LOVE love Neev and PL in the show as well...they are just so so cuteeee well when they used to show us the good stuff...😭And LOL at the Neesha scene!!! LOL...turns out...somebody has made it in to a movie scene beofre me! I feel ripped off dammit!😆😆😆Im curious about Ayesha and Inder, is it based on the same story in the show btw? Yes...somewhat...
And, yeah I loved the last scene, shows Ayesha that Neev is not such a big jerk as she thinks he is. 😳 Exatly...which we knew...I just had to let her know...

Ok now general comments: I envy the way you write,ahahahaha😆 coz ur writing has a really natural flow, intelligent but kinda easy to understand...let me help you out hun...Simple?😉, and even like typos and stuff like that are easily ignored coz I get into the story and all. Yes I apologise in advance for those...I'm so so lazyyyyyyyyy

Also, Im very excited to see what you do with Neev in ur FF, coz I know your one person who will do his character justice. 😊 Of course...I'm just so dissapointed with what the show have done to him...reduced him to literally nothing...he deserves his due...

And, uhh don't expect scholarly type comments from me! 😆 LOL...a smilie will do hun...😊

Unfortunately for you, the net result of this is that Im so totally gonna stalk you on IF and blackmail you to update your FF. Mwhahahahahaha! 😆 (hey Im just joking) hehe...blackmail? what do you know!! I thought I burnt those pics!!😉😆...

Sorry for rambling on. I never shut up! 😆 😆Aww no probem hun...it's probably because you didn't get much of a chance to during exams...pent up chatter...

Originally posted by: meteora_smt

Oh I thought you didn't notice it, coz you usually reply to comments in chronological order. So I made my next comment all super-dramatic and hard for you to ignore. 😆LOL exactly...cannot ignore it even if I wished!!!😆, yeh I usually do reply like that, but I leave long comments for last...
But since now I know, take your time! Reply when your in the mood! Coz I know sometimes I usually get annoyed, and don't feel like replying to long comments, usually after a loooong day! 😳
Just replied...phewwwwwwwwwww...lol kept getting distracted sowieeee😃