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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: dipsyworld

Nice update, JC.
But as u said the story has not moved forward. 😆 lolz. I know.

So Anjali has a leg injury and thats why she moved to Kavya's place?😕 I hope Kavya gets over Anjum and realizes Anjali's feelings.😳 umm...its a tricky thing. i'll try to elaborate as much as i can but the story won't really focus too much on them.

No Milind in this part too ....really missing him. sorry Milind is really busy with his work.

Waiting for the next part. 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
JC...I'm here...gimme a few minutes Yaar...I'm too hyper at the moment...need to calm down...will comment in a sec... 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: panache

😆I am reading...will come back and post my comment!

*Edited*

Jess..Thats not my name😡😭😭what are you doing to us!!! *Shaking my head* I did not expect this out of you!! How could you do this to us!! How can you feed us such a storyline!! What were you thinking!!😆 o.k...now, after all this build up this what i really think....😆 *Don't hit me* Today is my crazy day...😆Gaaaah😡 can i plz kill you... first you get my name wrong then this😆

I like PL's no nonsense advice to prachi about what Rithwick should be calling M&P...Very nicely given and i think prachi is totally accepting her mom's advice in this case..that's good! PL is a no no nonesence kinda mom.😆 and yes Prachi is taking the advice..tho its on Milsi what he wants Ritwik to call him.

Alaap...i am liking him more and more.....I wish prachi forgives him...but then as i said earlier it is not she who needs to frogive him but suk and Milsi...yaa...ok so ppl are softening to him. Thats nice to see. So i guess i'll continue with what i've planned for him.

This Kavya and Anjali story is really annoying me now yaar!😆 Now, when will those two duffers explain themselves to each other....or are you even going to proceed further with them....lolz..um..their story will move faster...cause i won't give too much details. and hopefully you'll see how they progressed.

Hmmm!! Waiting to know what is going on with Milind these days!!😳 milind's mind is fully on business these days...but he'll be back soon. Next chapter (not next part).

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Posted: 17 years ago
LOL at everyone calling you Jess!!!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

JC...I'm here...gimme a few minutes Yaar...I'm too hyper at the moment...need to calm down...will comment in a sec... 😳



oh god What did i do now?😕😆😆

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

LOL at everyone calling you Jess!!!!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆



ok thats not funny. My name is not Jess ppl.
Edited by jinc118 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks JC. Needless to say this was as good as the rest. So you finally solved the puzzle as to why Anjali is staying with Kavya. Did she have an accident when she landed in Turkey? Is this the reason wh she wanted to return to India? Yes, the story has not progressed much and I would be lying if I say I am not agitated about not having anything about Milsi for quite some time now!

You shot down all my predictions yet again! So much for squeezing my brains! Hope I am not irritating you with them though. As to writing my own FF, I know better than to go down that road. You see my imagination is active only when it comes to other people's FF. The credit for that goes to the writers for coming up with stories which trigger my curiosity. I am afraid I cannot come up with something original which would provoke others' curiosity. So for now I will take the easy route and keep speculating on other's FFs.

Hope the next part will have some Michi scenes. You have starved us enough. Do be merciful!
Edited by optimist - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Okay...first of all sorry about the Jess joke...thats like the second person I've seen call you that...did not expect it from Sangs...DW I'll sort her out...

right where shall I start...how about Alaap...JC, this is probably a testament to your writing because in this part, as creepy and vile as he is in the show, I actually felt alittle for him...something which I had deemed impossibly till now...so I guess you deserve this... 👏 Thank you...you have really changed my perception of quite a few characters...namely Neev 😳 but also Ayesha and now Alaap...

Prachi in this was perfect...I loved her strenght the most... 😊 I also liked that she questioned Anjali, who in my opinion needs a tight smack...

But of the Kkavya Anjali part that I read...I found it to be quite nice and not at all what I was expecting...I must admit I thought at first that she would have been in a worse position than a hurt leg but this is fine too... 😊 So he has told her about Anjum and I'm assuming Anjali is not related to her in any form right now...though what you have in store I can never guess...

As for my earlier prediction...it bore no fruits as I'm still as confused as ever at the indentity of HIM... 😭

But Thank you and CANNOT wait for the next part...that goes without saying...you know I love this Fic sooooooooo much! 😊 😳

JC...Thank you 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

Thanks JC. Needless to say this was as good as the rest. ur being kind but thanx.😊So you finally solved the puzzle as to why Anjali is staying with Kavya.at least you think so. Some ppl are still confused. Did she have an accident when she landed in Turkey? Yup. Is this the reason wh she wanted to return to India? aa no. lolz..the accident happened after. Thats the reason she couldn't go home. But i guess i'll explain a few more things when you hear Kavya's side of the story. The thing is that the rest of the Anjali puzzle should be solved in Prachi and PL's presence...thats y...and Milsi shouldn't find out the truth just yet because he needs to move away from Anjali...so i didn't have Anjali tell everything to Prachi. Yes, the story has not progressed much and I would be lying if I say I am not agitated about not having anything about Milsi for quite some time now! sorry..plz blame it on the exams. I just haven't the time or i'd update more often. Also the fact that the second part was privately criticized and i am going to try doing a better job on it. But sorry no Milind in the second part either. But he'll be there from then on and won't go missing again.

You shot down all my predictions yet again! haha. but its a fun guessing game. So much for squeezing my brains! Hope I am not irritating you with them though. not at all. I love to read your thoughts. As to writing my own FF, I know better than to go down that road. 😆You see my imagination is active only when it comes to other people's FF. The credit for that goes to the writers for coming up with stories which trigger my curiosity. I am afraid I cannot come up with something original which would provoke others' curiosity. So for now I will take the easy route and keep speculating on other's FFs. I think you should give it a try. You write well and i think if you 'squeeze your brians' like you do here..you'll come up with a good story.

Hope the next part will have some Michi scenes. You have starved us enough. Do be merciful! *sigh* sorry darling. Next part really doesn't have Michi scns. But next chapter will.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Okay...first of all sorry about the Jess joke...thats like the second person I've seen call you that...did not expect it from Sangs...DW I'll sort her out... Thankyou... but i didn't expect that from her either.i'll blame it on her being drunk.😆😆😆

right where shall I start...how about Alaap...JC, this is probably a testament to your writing because in this part, as creepy and vile as he is in the show, I actually felt alittle for him...something which I had deemed impossibly till now...so I guess you deserve this... 👏 Thank you...you have really changed my perception of quite a few characters...namely Neev 😳 but also Ayesha and now Alaap... Ok now i am more confident. So it is possible to feel sympathy for him.😃 will build on that.

Prachi in this was perfect...I loved her strenght the most... 😊 I also liked that she questioned Anjali, who in my opinion needs a tight smack... lolz. haha..possibly.😆 but yes Prachi is very strong...tho its not expected of her.

But of the Kkavya Anjali part that I read...I found it to be quite nice and not at all what I was expecting...I must admit I thought at first that she would have been in a worse position than a hurt leg but this is fine too... 😊 Well i didn't really explain her injury...maybe you'll change your mind.😃 I just said that she felt the pain when the car went over the bump. So he has told her about Anjum and I'm assuming Anjali is not related to her in any form right now...though what you have in store I can never guess... ya..so wait for what i have in store.😆😆😆

As for my earlier prediction...it bore no fruits as I'm still as confused as ever at the indentity of HIM... 😭 Thats ok hun. The HIM can't be revealed until Prachi opens her mouth..and you should know how trying it can be to wait for that. So just enjoy the rest of it until then.😃

But Thank you and CANNOT wait for the next part...that goes without saying...you know I love this Fic sooooooooo much! 😊 😳 Thankyou Rima. And the next part...*deep breath*...will try my best but when i am less distracted. Got exams this week.

JC...Thank you 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry, JC. That was foolish of me to think that Anjali wanted to come home because she hurt her leg! Guess I was not thinking. It does'nt help when you have to quickly breeze through the chapter to know the contents. By the way my cryptic remark has nothing to do with what I thought of the chapter. It is just that I will have to leave for work in a few minutes time and really did not have the time to give more detailed comments on the chapter. You see I ponder quite a bit before giving my take (although it may not seem so). So I'll reserve my detailed comments after I read Part II.

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