FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 2

Wonderful start JC!
Keep it up!!

Wonderful start 👏.
It looks like Ayesha has put behind her past and moved ahead...good to see a positive Ayesha.

Please continue 😊.

u've made a brillinat start JC..loved part 1. cant wait for prachi,neev and milsi introducion 😊

love it.. great to see a positive Ayesha.. hope she is with neev..

keep up the good work

Aha Jc you decided to brace us with some literary invention at last. Liked the first part I hope my persistence for quick updates will not be regarded as pestering on your part.....can't help it I'm a reading buff especially wen it comes to Michi. 😊

Liked chapter 2, we know more about Neev, waiting to know if Prachi feels the same way about their marriage as he does.

Thanks Jc.

what!! 😲 Prachi and Neev are married already?but what Milind and Prachi?because to me they are the one who should be married not Neev and Prachi,anyway thank u very much it very nice,awesome and lovely 👏and I'm sure that once Michi get together it's going to be an excellent FF,so please do more soon thanks once again I love it 👍🏼

Very nice part. You created an element of suspense here.

I am a little confused after reading part 2 about what might have happened with Neev and Prachi.

What i think is Neev-Prachi are married though Neev didnt want to. The kid is Prachi's and Milind's and Prachi doesnt love Neev but married him. And Milind is missing somewhere. Am i right?

Please continue 😊

Thankyou guys. I am glad i am getting the response i wanted. 😃 But i don't want to spoil the fun. I'll give you guys a hint though. After about 2 more chapters, you might have to come back and read chapter 2 again...kyunki Kahaani mein Twisht hai. Lets see if anyone can guess where i am headed.

Dipsyworld...you are right about the suspense part that i wanted to create. Thats all i will say now. But i won't maintain the suspense for too long. You'll find out by Chapter 4 (i think) or Chapter 5 the latest. At least i won't drag it like Shweta did about Milind's mystery lady...for several excruciating parts. 😆 😆 😆

PS. If you read this Shweta, i love your FF.😛

My take: Neev is not married to Prachi but to Ayesha or Soumya. The kid is not even Prachi's.

JC very interesting part two. Could you please translate these for me?:

"Aapko badi maa ne bulaaya… nahi suna?"
"Sorry baba, galti ho gayi. Main toh aa hi rahi thi. Itne mein aap aa gaye. Chalo ab chalte hain nahi toh aapki badi mammy hamen dinner mein kha jayengi"

Thank yooou. Mwah!