MP FF:Jab They Met Pg271 Chap 57 31/5 - Page 6

Originally posted by: panache

I am serious when i say i am waiting for you next part...yea na..i am so bored of reading my own ffs..LOL... and your's is very refreshing....

Do post the next part soon..😳

Sangeetha.. your comments are soo motivating..!! i will try and finish the next part with in the next day or so and will post as soon as i can..!

and i can't promise that the milind prachi face off will occur in the next part..! lol..!

Yay,second part up..Totally M Mishra installemnt..
Cool intro dear about his growth,that girl(I dont like her already 😆 ).He seems to be a sweetie 😳 witha rough exterior exactly how M Mishra needs to be. liked the part where he hoped she wont cry..Okay..MI & CHI going to meet...yay

Originally posted by: lvsgm

Yay,second part up..Totally M Mishra installemnt..
Cool intro dear about his growth,that girl(I dont like her already 😆 ).He seems to be a sweetie 😳 witha rough exterior exactly how M Mishra needs to be. liked the part where he hoped she wont cry..Okay..MI & CHI going to meet...yay

Anju thank you so much..!

and yeah milsi is a big softie on the inside... and don't be so eager to hate that girl..! lol..!

will update soon..! 😃

Shwetaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!! before i give you my honest comments on your creative work...i want to give a tight whack on you backside..for making your chapters so damn short.😡 How dare you...I wanna read the rest NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Stop teasing me with tiny chapter...unless you plan on updating twice a day, everyday. So write.....i am dying to read.

Now my comments. I love Prachi's friendship. I am so glad you gave her true friends. Kekta doesn't seem to know what friendship means. Her shows never celebrate friendships as this beautiful relationship needs to be celebrated. BTW Prachi as a modern career woman sounds relatable. I love her already. And her friends seem oddly familiar. That meeting in the coffee shop is all too familiar. Like it was me sitting in the coffee shop...showing up late with my best friend who makes all the noise to attract strange looks...embarrassing the hell outta my other friend. Now you must know who it is that i relate most to. Now tell me who is this Mru person and why she seems so much like myself, except for the engineering part. I'd totally be the one to cancel all my meetings to support my friend. So your first part was very much out of my own life. Awesome job. You have a to-the-point writing without getting too carried away in details and i love that. Can't help it...my curious mind just wants to know the story.😆

Part 2: why do i have a feeling that Milind Mishra is in for the shock of his life when he meets Ms Shah.😆 I do like Mr. Mishra. But i have a feeling of detachment from him. He is not the Milind Mishra of Kayamath. He is somehow different. Maybe this is what Milind Mishra was like in Turkey when Prachi first met him before he found out that Ayesha was married. I'll wait for your next update to know what this Milind Mishra is really like. Who is this old friend and who had Chinese with him. oo i know what is missing in this Milind. He is calm and collected, calculative and a bit cold (on the exterior). Milsi was a hot head, even when he was at work there was a bit of explosiveness about him. But i think this Milind is feared because people just don't know what he is thinking or feeling.

Eagerly awaiting your next chapter...and it better be longer.😡 Or i will not read until you are well ahead in chapters so i can read all together.

Wonderful start.👏👏👏 I like the FF title 😊
It is nice that here Prachi has 2 good friends...i like the way u introduced them in the coffee shop. Milind's introduction is well-written. So now Milind is going in meet Prachi....there will be some sparks for sure 😃

Please update soon 😃

Originally posted by: jinc118

Shwetaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!! before i give you my honest comments on your creative work...i want to give a tight whack on you backside..for making your chapters so damn short.😡 How dare you...I wanna read the rest NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Stop teasing me with tiny chapter...unless you plan on updating twice a day, everyday. So write.....i am dying to read.

Sorry hun.. buti thought the chapters had been long enough..! lol...! i'll try writing longer chapters but you know its really not in my hands.. ok it is. but you know what i mean.. lol..!

Now my comments. I love Prachi's friendship. I am so glad you gave her true friends. Kekta doesn't seem to know what friendship means. Her shows never celebrate friendships as this beautiful relationship needs to be celebrated. Exactly.. her characters never have any true lasting friendships that we all see in our daily lives..!

BTW Prachi as a modern career woman sounds relatable. I love her already.
i didn't want her to be the meek docile Prachi.. in fact just wait till you see in the coming chapters...


And her friends seem oddly familiar. That meeting in the coffee shop is all too familiar. Like it was me sitting in the coffee shop...showing up late with my best friend who makes all the noise to attract strange looks...embarrassing the hell outta my other friend. Now you must know who it is that i relate most to. Now tell me who is this Mru person and why she seems so much like myself, except for the engineering part. I'd totally be the one to cancel all my meetings to support my friend.

Mrudula is actually my best friend.. and the character is based on her..! i guess she and you must be a lot a like then..!

So your first part was very much out of my own life. Awesome job. You have a to-the-point writing without getting too carried away in details and i love that. Can't help it...my curious mind just wants to know the story.😆

Aww thanks so much hun..!

Part 2: why do i have a feeling that Milind Mishra is in for the shock of his life when he meets Ms Shah.😆 I do like Mr. Mishra.

lol.. maybe he will maybe he won't..!

But i have a feeling of detachment from him. He is not the Milind Mishra of Kayamath. He is somehow different. Maybe this is what Milind Mishra was like in Turkey when Prachi first met him before he found out that Ayesha was married. I'll wait for your next update to know what this Milind Mishra is really like.

Well he just sees business as business and doesn't bring his emotions into it..!

Who is this old friend and who had Chinese with him.
you'll find out soon enough..! lol..!

oo i know what is missing in this Milind. He is calm and collected, calculative and a bit cold (on the exterior). Milsi was a hot head, even when he was at work there was a bit of explosiveness about him. But i think this Milind is feared because people just don't know what he is thinking or feeling.

He is a little different from the milind on the show. well he was like the milind on the sow but time has changed him.. you'll see how..

Eagerly awaiting your next chapter...and it better be longer.😡 Or i will not read until you are well ahead in chapters so i can read all together.

I promise i'll either write longer chapters or update faster..! lol..!

Originally posted by: dipsyworld

Wonderful start.👏👏👏 I like the FF title 😊
It is nice that here Prachi has 2 good friends...i like the way u introduced them in the coffee shop. Milind's introduction is well-written. So now Milind is going in meet Prachi....there will be some sparks for sure 😃

Please update soon 😃

Thank you so much dear..

and as to how those two meet.. well you'll have to wait and watch..!

Wonderful start..i luved da way Milind was introduced and also the fact tht Milind wnted to help Prachi out...I'm lookin forward for their meeting..
Shwetha darling plzz update soon..bcoz both Milind n Prachi seem to b very realistic and the FF is also very interesting.... 😊
Dying to knw how da love story takes off... 😊 😊 😊

Love it love it love it.... I know I'm really late, but some allowance should be there for the time difference...love your style of writing sis, might have mentioned it before, but seriously its very good... the entire thing, is extremely well written, well thought out and very well put... cant wait for the rest...
I'm a 100% sure, it will be extremely great... And the fact that its been written by someone who hates,ummm... coughektacough.. as much as i do, if not more, makes it all the more better...
great start sis, n i'm sure, it'll be one heck of a story...

ooo, before i forget, thanks for the dedication...😉😉😉

Originally posted by: meli

I'm here only meli...Infact all the time...ask Shwetha, she'll tell... Yeah meli ask her to post soon, i can't...😆😆😆...
Catch u around...