MP FF:Jab They Met Pg271 Chap 57 31/5

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Hey all..

i know its been a very depressing day.. but here is a new michi FF..

Prachi works for Shah group but its going to be taken over by Mishra industries.. Prachi is not like the one on the show.. she's quite but she very confident and very strong.. She has two best friends.. who are her pillars of strength..

The whole Alaap and Suk storyline hasn't happened.. so there is no revenge etc.. And neev and Ayesha are characters but well.. you have to wait and see..

i didn't want an intense story.. i wanted to write more of a romantic comedy..

please take a read and leave your comments below.. its the first one i've written so please be kind with your comments..lol..

Edited : I forget to add this before.. its dedicated to Yasmin who first put the idea in my head..!

to madhu a very dear friend..

to jess.. who is deluding herself thinking she's mrs.Shabbir Ahluwalia.. but when in reality it is i who is mrs.shabbir ahluwalia..! hug hun..!

and to my separated at birth twin Mrudula.. who is exactly like the character mrudula in the story.. luv ya hun..!


Index

Part 1 - page 1
Part 2 - page 5
Part 3- Page 10
Part 4- page 13
Part 5- page 19
Part 6 - page 23
Part 7 - page 27
Part 8 - page 33

Part 9 - page 40
Part 10- page 44
Part 11-page 46
Part 12-page 50
Part 13- page 56
Part 14- page 63
Part 15-page 67
Part 16-page 67
Part 17-page 72
part18- page 74

Part19-page 78


Part 20-page 82

Part 21-page 86

Part 22-page 89

Part 23,24-page 95

Part 25 - page 103

Part 26-page107

Part 27-page111

Part 28-page 114

Part 29-page119

Part 30- page 126

Part 31- page 132

Part 32- page 138

Part 33- page 144

Part 34- page 148

Part 35-page 151

Part 36- page 157

Part 37 - page 164

Part 38- page 168

Part 39- Page 175

Part 40- Page 175

Part 41-Page 181

Part 42 & 43 - Page 186

Part 44- Page 191

Part 45- Page 197

Part 46- Page 203

Part 47 - Page 209

Part 48 - Page 216

Part 49 - Page 222

Part 50 - Page 227

part 51 - page 234

Chapter 52 - 240

Chapter 53 - Page 255

Chapter 54 - page 260

Chapter 55 - page 264

Chapter 56 - Page 269

Chapter 57 - Page 271


Chapter 1

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Prachi waited impatiently, drumming her fingers rhythmically on the table. The Mud Hut was filled with people of all ages. Teenagers to senior citizens, all getting their caffeine fix. She looked at her watch for what seemed like the millionth time and thought to herself "20 minutes late." She was waiting for her two best friends Mrudula and Geet. Mrudula could be counted on to be late but Geet was more punctual than a clock. It was that fact that had Prachi a little worried. As irritated as she was by the two of them being late a little anxiety was creeping in.

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She was just about to call them when the bell over the door rang, and Geet's laughter wafted in. Prachi couldn't help but smile. Geet's laughter always had that effect. But she quickly wiped it off and pretended to look annoyed. As soon as Geet saw her she screamed "Prachi!" effectively turning every head in the coffee shop in her direction. She ran to Prachi's table and gathered her a huge bear hug. Prachi who had already turned a little red when her name had been announced was now scarlet, and having a very hard time keeping that annoyed look on her face.

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"Oh come on Prachi! Wipe that look of your face. It wasn't very convincing back in school and it isn't convincing now" Geet teased. Prachi laughed and returned the hug.

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Prachi saw Mrudula, grinning from ear to ear, standing at the counter placing their orders. Mru would always ordered for them and they always loved what ever they got.

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They had met when they were in high school and were as different as you can get. Prachi was the quite one and people always mistook her calm for shyness. They never saw her confidence or strength. They just assumed she was a timid creature that needed saving. Geet was one of the many that made that mistake. She had tried to defend Prachi from a bunch of bullies back at school. Unfortunately for her not only had Prachi dealt with the bullies in her own way, she had also told Geet that she didn't need any help. Far from being offended Geet had admired Prachi's honesty and they had become friends. So close in fact that it was Prachi who encouraged Geet to pursue medicine. Geet was confident, exuberant, a bibliomaniac and had a laugh that could make even a stone smile. Mrudula had been a witness to the bullying incident and had walked over to Geet and Prachi and introduced herself. Mrudula was a perfect foil for Geet's exuberance and Prachi's calm. She was also the biggest music freak on the face of the planet, always quoting songs that no other human had probably heard. People who knew them never understood how three people so different could be so close. But they were.

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After school they had chosen different paths. Geet was graduating from medical school, (complaining all the while that her course took twice as long to complete as the other two) while Mrudula was an engineer working for one of the top software companies (complaining that her boss was the devil incarnate). Prachi had finished business school and had started working for her father but after his passing she had to step up and run the company. Things weren't going to well but she really believed given time and effort that it all could be turned around.

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"Prachi.. Hello earth calling Prachi.." Mrudula's voice bought Prachi back to the present.

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"Yeah, I'm sorry guys. Spaced out for a moment." Prachi said apologetically. And sipped her latte.

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" Don't you want to know why we were late?" Geet asked excitedly. She was acting like a little kid on her birthday. "Ok what is it? Why are the two of you late?" Prachi asked.

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Instead of giving her a straight reply Geet took out an envelope and slid it across the table. Prachi raised her eyebrows and shot a look at Mru. Mru gave a slight nod and Prachi ripped the envelope open. The word "Tickets" were emblazoned on another envelope inside. But before she could figure out what or where the tickets were for Geet unable to contain herself blurted out, " I got front row seats to Maroon 5".

"What?! Are you serious!"" Prachi said a little unbelievingly.

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"Prachi, look at me. Listen to what I'm saying very carefully. We are going to see Maroon 5." And after that they started screaming and hugging like teenagers attracting more attention to themselves.

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It was that very moment that a cell phone rang and they all reached into their bags. It turned out to be Prachi's phone and she quickly answered. "Yes this is Prachi Shah.. What.. ok hold on.. I'm coming over.."

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She looked over at Geet and Mru and told them she had to leave.. Somehow her company had been taken over overnight and no one had been the wiser.

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When her friends heard they insisted on tagging along. Through out the ride to Prachi's office they kept trying to reassure her that it was all a big mistake but in her heart she knew that something had gone wrong.

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The past year hadn't been the best of her life. In fact it could have been classified as the worst. She had lost her father to a freak accident, she found out that her father had a daughter with another woman effectively giving her a sister, and the company had been losing money for a number of years. If it hadn't been for the two women in the car she would have shattered but her friends had held her together.

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Now Geet was racing through the city, driving like a maniac. Mrudula was calling her secretary and canceling her meetings for the rest of the day. Whenever the world seemed to knock her down Geet and Mru helped her back up. Just the thought gave Prachi some hope.
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Monu-SunNaa thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Brilliant start Shweta 👏 👏 Woo..am so happy... 😳 Prachi's company is taken over...mmmm interesting.
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shwetha what a brilliant start...i love the friendship between the three women....its nice to see that this prachi actually has friends!.... cant wait for milinds entry 😊 eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Cute. Contemporary, career woman with 2 supportive friends. Very modern and relatable. I love Maroon 5 by the way. 'Won't Go Home Without You' is on repeat on my playlist. 😃
Edited by blackcurrant - 17 years ago
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Thanks for the dedication...mwah 😊
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Aha Shwetha finally we see your artistic brilliance. It's brilliant hunny now hmm I wanna see my Milsi in black....that's how I like him by the way. Hope you'r jotting that down.... 😃 A wonderful start is Mru our Mru? lol she'll have a kick out of this. 😊 Two words Update Soon. 😆
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Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Brilliant start Shweta 👏 👏 Woo..am so happy... 😳 Prachi's company is taken over...mmmm interesting.



Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Thanks for the dedication...mwah 😊



Thanks for the great words hun.. and mwah to you too. youwere the one that gave me the idea to write my own FF..! so thank you so much for that..!


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabzc1

shwetha what a brilliant start...i love the friendship between the three women....its nice to see that this prachi actually has friends!.... cant wait for milinds entry 😊 eagerly waiting for the next part.



Thanks so much Shabz..!

and i've always wondered why Prachi doesn't have any friends on the show.. i mean she had neev but she does she have no other friends..?

And milind's intro is coming soon girls..!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: blackcurrant

Cute. Contemporary, career woman with 2 supportive friends. Very modern and relatable. I love Maroon 5 by the way. 'Won't Go Home Without You' is on repeat on my playlist. 😃



Thanks BC..

i really didn't want Prachi to be in tears al the time like she is on the show..

And i lve Maroon 5 as well.. "she will be loved" is on repeat on my playlist..! lol..1
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Originally posted by: blind horizon

Aha Shwetha finally we see your artistic brilliance. It's brilliant hunny now hmm I wanna see my Milsi in black....that's how I like him by the way. Hope you'r jotting that down.... 😃 A wonderful start is Mru our Mru? lol she'll have a kick out of this. 😊 Two words Update Soon. 😆



Muneeza..

aww... thanks so much hun..! 😃..!

And yeah Mru is our Mru..! i had to put my best friend in the story..! lol..! and she loves it..!

Milind in black huh.. i can help you out there.. maybe no tin the next chapter but very soon..! i promise..!

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