FF: Ankahee (MP) FINAL/pg 48 12/2 - Page 6

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Posted: 17 years ago
#51
Wow...Awesome work..Part 7 is breathtaking... 👏 👏 👏 simply luved it...Finally Michi misunderstanding has ended.. 😳 😳 😳 now cant really wait to c wht happens next.... 😊 😊 😊 plzz update asap..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow,its beautiful 👏
will be waiting for teh next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
Part 7 is brilliant!!!
Cant wait to read the next bit!
awesum!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
Aw dear that was too damn cute was it the first time they made love? seemed so but hun great going wish Ayesha rots in hell in your ff. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
Oh lol I do make it sound like that dont I?...my story started from when prachi was by the cliffs after the court scene...so they have had the C-night. But Thank you guys, Alveera's right...Praise is awesome!
Edited by zcbcc34 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part seven was a pleasure to read....it was soo cute. it makes u wanna fall in love with michi all over again 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww.....that was adorable, sweet, everything n more. Truly amazing! The way you sequentially described everything it was beautiful!! Just a thought: i somehow get the feeling that ur P is more fragile, shy altho that seems impossible (w.r.t. to how much more of an introvert/shy cud one be); one wants M to really protect her. how cute cud it be but he was crying n their hug lasted for quite some time....SWWEETT!

Waiting for tommorrow already :D
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oh wow... I just read in one go... The use of words is fantastic to say the least! *whisltes* 👏👏 I love the dialouges and the context in which you use them is so perfect... The connections, teh subtlety... everything is so defined and beautifully laid... Awesome work! Continue soon... Btw, the title is ace!

Cheers,

dc

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Working on an Update now...It's not healthy to be this obsessive is it?? 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART EIGHT

As dawn broke, sunlight flooded into the room. The sweet melody of her mother's aarti filled Prachi's ears. She strained to open her eyes against the brightness. She froze momentarily as she felt a
Foot slide up her leg. She felt dazed; unsure as to whether this was reality.
She relaxed as she felt Milind's hand pull her waist closer to him. She shifted to fit snugly into the curve of his hard body. She felt slightly self conscious as she felt pressed up against his unclothed body. She shook the thought from her head; as much as she wanted to, they couldn't stay here all day. She attempted to pull the top sheet from him to wrap herself, but Milind had it trapped under his leg. She tugged unsuccessfully, waking Milind in the process.

"Prachi…Kya kar rahi ho? Sone dou naa…" Milind said hazily, trying to pull Prachi back into his hold again.
"Milind…subah ho gayi hai, jane dijiye na…" Prachi pleaded, wriggling free.
"Abhi abhi to paya hai mane tumhe, itni aasani se kaise jane do? Muje kya milega?" His eyes twinkled with merriment and an amused smile formed on his lips as she blushed crimson as he held her wrist to stop her moving.
"Milind…" she said, bringing her face inches from his, he parted his lips, licking them unconsciously, "…maa muje bula rahi hain…" she laughed, grabbing the sheet when he was caught off guard and ran to the bathroom.
As if on cue, Premlata's voice was heard from outside the door, knocking she said "Prachi beta, tum tayaar ho gayi? Ritiwk tumhare liya rou raha hai…"

Milind thought as to what to do, should he open the door or wait for Prachi? They would find out soon enough, he thought, putting on his jeans and shirt Milind walked towards the door.
"Haan Maa?" Milind asked
"Beta…" said Premlata visibly surprised, her face quickly regaining its former composure, she continued, "Prachi? Teek hai?" she sounded worried.
Milind smiled weakly, mentally working out what to say to her, "Maa, aap aaye, mein bata tha hoon sub"

Prachi emerged from her bathroom to see her mother in tears, she hurried towards her. "Maa? Maa, aap rou kyun rahi hai?" She looked at Milind who stood by the window, "Milind kya hua?"
"Milind ne muje saab kuch bata diya hai Prachi…" said Premlata smiling, "Mein kitne khush hoon Prachi, meri beti ko aapni khushiyaan mil gayi"
Prachi looked at Milind, dread forming in the pit of her stomach, what had he told her?! Before she could say anything, her mother spoke, "Acha beta tum duno…" she paused, "Mein chalti hoon"
"Maa…" Prachi stopped her,"Ritwik?"
"Tum pareshaan mat hoo, mein use sambhaloongi, tum Milind ke saath raho, mein breakfast upar bhejti hoon" she kissed her daughter's forehead and left.

"Milind, aapne maa ko kya bataya?!" Prachi asked, her voice betraying the fear she held within her, "Agar Niharika aunty ko patha chala…"
Milind walked towards her, holding her shoulder, he sat her down on the bed, "Prachi, kuch nahi hoga, meina maa ko aisa kuch nahi bataya, yahi ke hum dono saath hai aab"
Prachi closed her eyes in relief, Milind smiled at her, she was still thinking about his family and with the thought, pride swelled in his chest. He kissed her hand, Prachi smiled shyly at the simple gesture.

"Milind, aap ko office nahi jana?" Prachi said suddenly
"Pehle ghar pe kuch kaam hain…" He said enigmatically
"Kaisa Kaam?"
He kissed her softly, "Bata du?" she smile against his lips.

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Edited by zcbcc34 - 17 years ago

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