FF: Ankahee (MP) FINAL/pg 48 12/2 - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

362

Views

90.9k

Users

38

Likes

56

Frequent Posters

j44a thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#31
Great FF.. Continue soon.. Can't wait for the nest part.. šŸ˜‰
Monu-SunNaa thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 17 years ago
#32

Wonderful, can actually visualise the characters esp Prachi and Miland saying these dialogues, very in tune with the Kayamath charactersšŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘

sam78 thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#33
it was great.

do write soon.
swetha10 thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Gr8 job..wonderful part..really gud to c a very reasonable Milind..who trusts Prachi..itz definetly unlike da KYM....well plzz continue soon...keep up da gud work.. 😊 😊 😊
PourQuoi thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#35
Hey guys...
Again, Thank You so much...
Part 6 should hopfully be up tonight.
TC
😊
x
KaneBC thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#36
I really enjoyed what I could understand. 😊 Unfortunately I don't understand a word of Hindi. If it's not to much trouble, do you mind adding English translations to the dialogues ? šŸ˜›
PourQuoi thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#37
Yep...I shall try as soon as I get the oppertunity
PourQuoi thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#38
I COULDN'T WAIT TO POST SOMETHING...

PREVIEW, PART 6

"Ji haan, halt the proceeding for the time being," Milind spoke on the phone, he turned to see Ayesha smiling at him. "Mein aap ko baad mein phone kar ta hoon, aap baas jo maine kaha woh ki jiye!" He angrily shut the phone, he didn't want to be interrupted.
Ayesha happily oblivious to the change in his mood since her arrival, chattered on..."Milind..." she saw the wound on his head, "Yeh kaise hua?" she asked, her hand reaching out, Milind grabbed her hand and bought it back down.
"Kuch nahi hai, kuch kaam tha?" Prachi's words verberated through his mind, Jab woh aap ko chooti hai, aap ke kareeb hoti hai, mere dil jalta hai Milind.
Edited by zcbcc34 - 17 years ago
sailat thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#39
atleast ur M has common sense with P's words reverberating thru his mind. btw, keep 'em comin :D
Shabz. thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#40
part 5 is brilliant and cant wait for part 6........hope milind speaks to his sister quickly

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".