FF: WOH AJNABEE: Update:Part 48:Dec 6th 2009:p 172

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

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Posted: 17 years ago

#351

hey cb an amazing part just loved readin the fact that prachi has got some gut and was disgusted by the way ayesha behaved any ways a fab part cont soon

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tweety_me14

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Posted: 17 years ago

#352

Superb CB!
Milind's treatment of Ayesha was just what he should have done! Very good!
Loved Michi's scene too!!!

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sajidah

@MAN UTD CHICK

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Posted: 17 years ago

#353

i loved da way milind brushed of ayesha and defended prachi..dre scene was 2 cute..jus hope dat prachi dnt feel obligated 2 leave milind for ayesha...cntinue soon..gr8 work 👏

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critically-sane

@critically-sane

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Posted: 17 years ago

#354

Hey CB..!

loved this part..!

Ayesha has realy become delusional hasn't she..! But i'm glad that michi put her in her place..!

And even more glad that michi are happy together..!

Update Soon..! 👏

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#355

CB dear wonderful part...i liked da way Prachi replied to Ayesha's ques...n Milind defending Prachi n da endin was too gud... 👏 Keep ua da gud work....Hope to c da update soon.... 😊 😊 😊

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Shabz.

@Shabz.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#356

lovely part canadian beauty...i loved the way milind tried to put ayesha straight..but she just doesnt listen...she is one persistant lady....when prachi didnt respond to milinds hug i thought she was going to go on her sacrifice spree but then she hugged him at the end i had a huge grin on my face... the michi hug was sooooooo sweet 😳

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 17 years ago

#357

haila...ayesha besharam...chi chi... 🤢 🤢 🤢 ...haad hoti hai...i cant wait to see what happens to that witch when milind tell her he loves parchi and then tells ayesha to take a hike... 😡 😡 😡 ...cant wait for next update
JAZ

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Sanjana

@akhilash

Voyager

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Posted: 17 years ago

#358

Great part, keep writing.
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Nirali Hina Parasher

@nirali_hina444

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Posted: 17 years ago

#359

hi, i'm new to this forum and i just want to say hats off to you for writing such a good ff, great job, please continue soon

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canadianbeauty

@canadianbeauty

Voyager

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Posted: 17 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: sailat
awww, P is soo cute and vulnerable. she starts crying at the drop of a hat. any other female wud be seething with anger but, hey, nor ur P!!! haha love her!! as for M, he shudda just slapped that bitch so that it would finally convince her of takin her life for real!!

Good Job!! :D btw, when do u update next? :P

yea Prachi seems like a very sensitive character and i am trying to portray her that way....she is always more concerned for others then for herself

i will try to update on friday, but im going away for the weekend, so it might be updated on sunday or monday

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