Fanaa-ff 4 Neev,Prachi,Milind,Ayesha - Page 5

Part-19…Ayesha:neev,do u no what u r saying?
N:yes.we'd a bitter past.but it'l b foolish 2 think of
sum1 who betrayed us & cry thru out.
N keeps his arm on A's shoulder:we both r happy with
each other.then why don't we liv each other?
Tears fall down from her eyes & hugs him.
They spent romantic moments with each
other.song:tauba{chalte chalte}

N-A's wedding takes place in a grand way.they
both sing & dance.Milind-prachi r really hurt 2 see it
on tv.
A-N's 1st nite.
N:it's a sweet revenge on prachi who thot I cant liv
without her
A:milind played with my feelings.but I'm sure that my
life with u wil b extremely wonderful
They both smile & hug.

P is crying.M is near her.
P:tho I was angry with neev,I really wanted him 2 cum
back 2 me.but now everything is over.ayesha entered his
life
M:ayesha had already entered his life.now they just got
married.that's the only difference.while they were with
us,their mind was sumwhere else.
P:yes M:why shud we waste our time by thinking over
sum stupid cheaters?
P:u r right
P wipes her tears.

Months passed.P is in her house at Punjab.M cums
there.it was a surprise.
P:milind?what a pleasant surprise.u r so busy.then
also..
M:4 sum matters,however busy we r we've 2 leave
everything
P wonders:4 that what happened specially?
M:nothing special happened.but I want it 2 happen.that's
why I came here
P:I did'nt get
M:wen u were here,I really felt lonely.i need sum1 in my
life 2 share everything.then I realized that that
special person shud b u.i don't hav any doubt abt
it.what I crave is 4 ur presense.
P is shocked.
M:prachi,wil u cum 2 my life with pleasure?
P is confused. M:u can take ur own time 2 think.i'l b
there in my hose.i'm not going soon 2 mumbai.
M goes.
Premlatha cums near P:what's the matter beti?
P:maa..milind proposed 2 me
Pre is shocked.slowly she smiles.
Pre:whats wrong with that?
P:maa..but.. Pre:r u still thinking abt the person who
betrayed u?
P:never.i've 4gotten my past
Pre:then what makes u hesitate 2 accept this proposal?
P:I dunno Pre:u both r very nice.but unfortunately
destiny played with ur life & had lots of pain.but
destiny wants u both 2 b happy.thats why milind felt
like marrying u.why don't u marry him & liv happiily
instead of thinking of the dark past?
P:u r right maa.i'l marry milind & show neev how happy
I'm
Pre smiles.

P goes 2 M's house.M is tensed abt P's decision. P:I've
decided
M:what? P:I'm willing 2 marry u
M is happy.

sorry for l8 reply......well written i like mp part alot.........the way neev purposed him was ossom. 👏
nw its gonna b interesting...........
bt pls post the next part soon.......coz i'm eagerly w8ing...

Part-20..Milind-prachi wedding takes place in Punjab.
1st nite.M cums.P is nervous.
M:no need of getting tense
P:milind.. M: I said I need u in my life,not as a
wife.but as a friend.but since we r a boy & a girl,if we
stay 2gether in the same house,ppl wil see us in a diff
way.that's why I decided 2 marry u
P is wondered.
M:but I really wish if I cud luv u.bcoz luv is essential
in one's life
P is stunned.
P thinks:do I really crave 4 luv?I dunno

M:I'm thinking 2 go back 2 switzerland
P:no plz milind
M:then u want 2 stay in this place which gave only
worries
P:no.i think we shud go 2 another state.that's enuf

M tells aftersumtime:I thot about ur suggestion.its
gud.we'l go 2 delhi
P smiles:delhi is a nice place

Many months passed.M-P r gud friends.
P thinks:I'm so happy with milind.wen neev betrayed
me,I thot my life is over.i lost my breath.but milind
gave me a breath.now I feel peace has cum back 2 me.its
only bcoz of him.am I falling in luv?

P is sitting outside near fire.but its very cold.she's
shivering.M cums near her & covers her with a blanket.P
& M luk at each other 4 sumtime.
P thinks:now I realize that I've feelings 4 milind

Next day P thinks:now I cant shut up my feelings.i'l
tell him that I luv him.but how?
P is tensed while she goes 2 M.she shivers.
M:I've brought a gift 2 u
P is surprised.M gives it.
P goes 2 her room with thrill.P:what wil b the gift?
She opens the cover.it's a doll.P feels awkward:milind
gave me a doll?is it the present every girl longs
4?seeing the gift,I 4got 2 make a frank confession too.i
simply wasted my time.
P is so angry that she throws the doll tightly on the
floor.The doll starts making sound:I luv u
P is surprised:that means milind presented this as a
part of his confession of luv?
P takes the doll from the floor & kisses it:sorry
P runs out of the room.M is tensed 2 luk at P.P smiles.M
is relieved.P runs 2 his arms.

Flashback is over

i liv this part........
i never liked mp jodi......coz i'm a np fan.......bt u changed my mind.........i luv them in this fic........

luved the way miland confesses his luv........tht was superb........

extremely gud....... 👏 👏

Part-21..


After the trip,Neev-ayesha,milind-prachi go back 2
mumbai.

P is seen upset. M:what happened prachi?
P:we both hated mumbai.but finally we reached mumbai
after sum yrs.
M:what 2 do?4 businees success we'd 2 cum here.but I
promise u that we wont hav any worries like b4
P smiles:ur promise is enuf 4 me

P's ph rings:hi prachi
P:hi.but sorry I cant recognize u
She: I wil tell later who I'm.i want 2 see u & milind
2gether
P:but why?without telling who u r..
She:plz.i'l tell everything wen u guys cum.i'l giv my
address
She tells her address.

M cums,P:2day a lady had called.i dunno who she
is.but her voice was familiar.she wanted 2 see us.so she
gave her address
M:why does she want 2 see us?
P:that I cant understand
M:unknown calls cum 4 a business family.don't mind
P:but this is not such a call.i think we shud go & meet
her
M:why?it's a waste of time,my job..
P:plz M:ok

Neev keeps the ph down:nonsense!
Acums:whats the matter?u r so irritated
N:a stupid call.1 lady
A:ur fan?
N:mayb.she wants 2 see us.so she invited us 2 her
house.she gave her address too
A:so lets go
N:r u mad?fans usually cum 2 see us.but now we've 2 go
there?nonsense
A:what if she's in a condition that prevents from cuming
here?
N:anyways,I'm not interested
A:plz neev.we'l go.i like enjoying our stardom.mayb she
wants 2 giv us a treat.that mayb the reason why she
called us home
N:but.. A:no excuse.we'l go
N:ok,but I 4got her address
A:Oh!u r disgusting.try 2 remember
N:ya,now I remember
N smiles.

N-A enter the house.they r shocked 2 see
M-P there.
Mu guys r here?prachi,did'nt I tell u that cuming here
is waste of time.i cud've done sum satisfying work in
this time
A:r u fooling us?sorry neev,I only forced u 2 cum
here.now I realize my mistake.i think these guys only
called us here 2 show their small house
M is angry:shut up.this is not our house.we r very rich
tho we r not rockstars like u 2.u thot only rock stars
hav gud house?u r wrong
N:enuf,ayesha,we'l go
A-N start walking out.1 lady's voice:plz don't go
They turn back & is shocked

waooooooo tht was shocking......i think she's the one who created all mistakes earlier........oh gawd she's so smart...........
nice part........

Part-22….Ayesha:simon!
Neev:I just cant belive its u
Simon is in wheelchair.a maid is near her
S:I only called u guys here.so plz don't fight abt it
A:how cum u like this?
S:I'm punished 4 my bad deeds
N:what?
S:yes.prachi has heard my voice manytimes over the ph.wen
u neev & ayesha met in the restaurant,I informed prachi
that u r 2gether
All r shocked. P:that was u?
S:yes.while neev-ayesha were celebrating holi,I mixed
sleeping pills with bang.so they fell asleep without
knowing anything.i took its video & sent it 2 u & that
caused misunderstandings btw u guys & led 2 ur
separation
All r shocked.
S:belive me,neev-prachi as well as milind-ayesha haven't
cheated each other.its me who cheated on u
They r stunned.all r silent.tears fall from their eyes.
S bursts into tears:I did like this 2 gain neev.
Again every1 in shock.
S:I used 2 luv him since college.but he married prachi.so
I broke their relation thru milind-ayesha.i won in
that.but again I failed.neev married ayesha.i wanted 2
break that relation too.but I was punished by a heavy
accident.i was unconscious 4 more than 1month.I was
saved.but I lost my legs as well as my loved ones.i
wanted 2 inform u guys the truth atleast now.otherwise
god wil never 4giv me.
All r stunned.P screams:why did u do this?
P runs out crying.S cries.M does'nt no what 2 do.bcoz on
1 side P has gone out with tears.on other side A
is standing still with tears.Slowly M goes out near P.P
is crying like anything.M is trying 2 control his tears.

P:we were wrong milind
M is silent.

A luks at N.N is silent. A:neev!
N is not moving. A:neev!
Suddenly N bursts into tears.A also cries along with
him. N:no one can 4giv us

S is weeping seeing this.

M&P at home.M:whats the use of crying like this?I
think now what we shud do is 2 apologize
P:but simply apologizing wont heal the wounds caused by
us
M is speechless.

Both the cuples reach the same place.N-P &
M-A luk at each other with tears.M-N & A-P
hug each other with tears.
Dead leaves r flying over there.
N-A go 2 1 side while M-P 2 the opposite side.they hav
pain inside the mind.they both turn back.song:tu
jahaan…{salam namaste}
The souls of M&A cum out from their bodies &
hug wile the same thing happened btw N&P.

N-A r shopping.N chooses a cream sari. A:not
this.u no milind selects the most wonderful dresses
Suddenly A is aware of what she's telling:sorry,this is
enuf
N:no.u r rite.only milind can choose properly
A is dull:lets go.i don't feel like shopping
N-A r shocked 2 see M-P there.They hav
painful smile.

oh this was very emotional............ 😭
one set for all simon has done sumthing gud bt wen she has totally ruined their lives.........
i'm very excited n curious 2 know abt wat gonna happen next.........
pls cont soon.......

Part-23…Neev:milind..Ayesha did'nt like my selection of
dress.wil u plz choose a nice sari 4 her
M & A r shocked.
N:Plz N hesitates. Prachi:plz choose one 4 ayesha.she
likes ur selection very much
Slowly M cums 4ward & stands near Ayesha.They both luk
each other.M luks at the saries.
He imagines P in each sari.finally he chooses a nice
pink sari & puts it on her body:it luks pretty on u
N & P smile.A is stunned.
Suddenly M is aware of what he's doing. M:sorry
M takes the sari from her body & gives it 2 her hand.
M goes out without telling anything.P & N luk at each
other.A notices it & smiles.
P:milind went.i've 2 go now N:ok
P goes.N is sad.


N -A in the car. N:don't u luv milind?
A is shocked. N:I no that evenif u wont tell anything
A is speechless. A:even I saw luv in ur eyes 4 prachi
N :I admit.i luv prachi.i crave 4 her like u crave 4
milind.don't u feel like going back 2 him?
A :yes N:I also feel the same.but it'l never
happen.bcoz we r already married
A weeps:if we had'nt done that blunder…
N is upset.

P is crying near M.P:I luv neev.i cant 4get
him
M is upset:I think wen we thot we hate ayesha & neev
also we'd luv 4 them.that's why they always came b4
us.we were happy with each other.but still sumthing was
lacking.it was their luv.we cud'nt 4get our past.
P :I wish our past is back with a new happy form
M :its our dream.but is it going 2 happen?
P is stunned & bursts into tears.
M :if we becum practical,we no that its not going 2
happen.bcoz neev & ayesha r very far from us.we cant
reach them.do u think neev luvs u like u luv him?
P is speechless:mayb he loves ayesha now.but I luv him &
cant liv happily without him
M :even I'l b happy only with ayesha.but I don't think she
loves me.i've 2 adit with pain that her present is not
me,but neev
Tears fall from M's eyes.

Valentine's day.P gets up from the bed & says
herself:happy valentine's day neev
N gets up from the bed:why do I feel that prachi
wished me?happy valentine's day prachi
A thinks:however busy,milind used 2 giv me
valentine's gifts.but now…
M thinks abt his past:
M tells A:happy valentine's day
He gives flowers,dresses & perfumes.
A :thax a lot M:where is my valentine's gift?
A is shy & hugs him.

A party.N-A,M-P r there.A has worn
a shining red sari.P has worn a white shining
sari.they both hav matching ornaments.They luk at each
other. A guy:this is a day 4 luvly cuples like u all
P thinks:I lost my valentine.now what valentine's
day

hey i don't understand this part coz its a bit confusing........
if mp left......
then hoecum np b in the car......n whose nishant n is ayesha is also their in tht car......
whose kripa n y neev wished him