Fanaa-ff 4 Neev,Prachi,Milind,Ayesha - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
a big confision........ufffffffffffff.........
u simon 😡 😡 creating all problems...........bt i can't undersatns y she's doing all this....................very nice............
👏
cont soon.......
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
Part-15..Milind reaches home.he was tuf & quiet.Ayesha is
sad:r u still angry with me?wont u talk 2 me?
A's tears fall down.M feels upset.he wipes her tears:how
can I b angry with u 4 a long time?
He hugs her.
M:why don't we go back 2 switzerland?I think that's
better.there we had more peace
A:u r right.we'l go back.but hav u ever thot the reason
which makes us away from peace?
M is speechless.M thinks:I dunno.i don't hav an answer


A phones neev:I called 2 inform that we've decided
2 go back 2 switzerland
N is shocked:what?but suddenly..
A:we realised that its better
N:ok
N keeps the ph down.Prachi:whose call was that?
N:ayesha's
P is dull.P thinks:why is she always calling neev,whats
there 2 talk so much?
P:whats the matter?
N:she & milind r going back 2 switzerland
P:what? N:ya
P thinks:I mistook neev & ayesha
P smiles:lets giv a lunch 4 them b4 going
N:that's gud


M-A cum 2 hav lunch.They all r enjoying.
A:neev & prachi,u both shud sing 4 us
N:ok,but u shud also sing.u were so famous 4 ur singing
in college
A smiles.
N&P sing:aap muje ache lagne lagi
M:very nice.u both made the atmosphere romantic.now its
my wife ayesha's turn
A sits close 2 M & sings luking at his eyes:aisa
kyon{ishk vishk}
N:that's a romantic gift from ayesha 2 milind
Every1 smiles.
P's cell rings.IT was simon.
S:I'm sending a cd 2 ur house.enjoy it
P:who r u?
S cuts the ph.S smiles:lets see whats the result.so
sweet
P goes 2 the verandah.1 guy gives her the cd.
P thinks:whats there in the cd?
All r talking in the drawing room.P puts the cd.All luk
at the screen.
They see N sleeping on A's shoulder.then they see both
of them hugging.
They r shocked


WHAT'L B THEIR REACTION?

karol thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
omg.........i just wanted 2 kill tht stupid simon 😡 ..........i think she's totally like allap.........uski bichdi behan to nhai...............
coz both r creeps........

so simon was the reason for their separation...................i'm in a big tention wats going 2 happen.........
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post the next part asap...
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#34
Part-16…Prachi screams:noooooooo
P throws the glass on the screen.
Neev:prachi!
P catches his collar:then what I do?I shud enjoy seeing
my husband with sum other girl?
Tears fall down from N's eyes:prachi,what u saw is not
the truth
P:shut up.don't try 2 fool me anymore.i'd a doubt
earlier itself.but I thot its my misunderstanding.but
now everything is conformed.u chreated me neev
N feels unbearable:shut up prachi
N raises his arm 2 slap her.but milind holds his
arm:why r u slapping her?what did she do 4 that?how can
a wife tolerate wen her husband cheated on her
N & ayesha r shocked. N:that means u also..
M:I'm not a fool 2 believe u wen u say its not true
A:milind,tell me,do u think I've cheated on u?
M slaps A.A&N r shocked.
A:u slapped me?
M:I'm a traditional Punjabi.i cant smile seeing my wife
on a rockstar's chest
N shouts:hold ur tongue
M:shut up.ayesha was crazy of u.but I thot its only a
craze 4 a rockstar.but she crossed her limit.ayesha,u
don't hav 2 cum 2 my house.u stay here with neev
A&N r shocked. P:yes,neev,u can liv happily with ur
beloved.i wont stay here even 4 a moment.i'm going back
2 punjab
M:I'l arrange flight 4 u prachi.till then u can stay in
my house
M-P r abt 2 leave.
N:prachi..believe me.listen 2 my heart.u can feel the
truth..our luv..
P weeps:I cant hear ur heartbeats.bcpz u don't hav a
heart.u've a rock instead of a heart.i heart only the
music beats coming from tht rock.that's the biggest
mistake I made
A holds M's hand:don't leave my hand & go
M pushes her.A falls on N's cheast.M is irritated.M-P
go.
All the 4 cry.

N goes near the crying A.N:whats the use of
Crying ayesha?we shud prove our innocence
A:but how cud they suspect us?how much I loved
milind.but still..
N is upset:I also luv prachi very much.but..
N wipes his tears. N:but who sent that video?
A:I'm also confused.who wants our life 2 b destroyed?
N:we've 2 find out that.then only we can prove our
innocence

N phones P.P:why did u call me?I don't want 2 hear
ur voice
N:plz listen 2 me.i'l prove our innocence.i'l find out
who is behind this;the person who send the cd
P keeps the ph down.N is upset.

P is weeping.
M:u luk very upset
P:u also M:bcoz our problem is same
P bursts into tears:why this happened with us?we loved
our spouse very much
M keeps his hand on her shoulder:sumtimes it happens
with human beings.don't cry.
P cries & keeps her head on M's shoulder:a friend like u
is my strength
They cud hear sum1 clapping.They luk 4 the person & r
shocked



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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
ohhhhhhh dii this part was so emotional.............makes me senti........
bt i thought of same kind of reaction............
both couples r rite on their side.............
ohh so this was flashbk...n this misunderstanding is nt cleared out yet..........
tht simon creep.........wat she get destroying their lives.........she separated the 2 wonderful couples...........
😔 😔 .......
very well written di......... u r portraying all the characters so perfectly....tht i can feel the pain...
cont soon..
Edited by karol - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
Part-17…Neev was clapping:wow!very nice scene
Milind:what do u mean?
Ayesha cums from N's back:I'l tell u.we cud see u both
enjoying each other's company
M:what do u mean ayesha?
A:u fought with me & is enjoying with prachi?
P loses control:enuf ayesha.its more than enuf.u both
made us upset.milind gave me shelter & comfort.he's
really gr8 as a friend
N:enuf prachi.no need of this drama.we were shocked 2 see
u guys suspecting us.we r too foolish 2 search 4 the
person who tried 2 destroy us.we were wondering..we
don't hav enemies.then who
Can do such a cheap thing with us.now we realized who
did it 2 us.u both did it
P shouts:neev!why shud we do it?
N:no need of acting.since u both were madly in luv,u
wanted 2 get rid of us.so u planned this cd 2 avoid us
M shouts:neev!
A:whats the need of shouting at neev.we never thot
that u both r the real cheaters.i'm ashamed 2 tell u
that I used 2 luv u
N:we cant carry the burden anymore.lets get separated
from each other.the only solution is divorce
M &P r stunned. N:ok
A thinks:wen neev told abt divorce milind agreed
without 2nd thots.he hates me that much.its all bcoz of
prachi.u'l never get peace prachi

Their divorce takes place.All r depressed.They cant face
each other.all the eyes r full of tears.They think of
their past.song:tu jaha

Neev is upset. A:u were the one who used 2 giv me
strenghth.but now u seem 2 b very weak.
N:sumtimes wen luv is missing,our strength gets lost
A becomes upset:its true.whatever we've,without luv life
is nothing.but still we've 2 liv.so u need 2 get rid of
ur past.
N:I don't think its possible
A was confident:its possible

karol thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
ohhhhhhh finally separated han..............
so they blame each other for tht cd thts bad..........
so tht cd was the reason for their divorce.......
i dunno wats gonna happen bt plzzzzzzzzzzzzz di unite np in any case plz plz...
neways brilliant part.....
cont soon..
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#38
Part-18…Ayesha:thru music u can 4get ur worries.music wil
bring a new life 2 u
Neev:but I don't hav a mood 2 sing
A:don't tell like that.now only we r sad.but if u don't
sing,ur thousands of fans wil also b sad.don't worry abt
prachi's absense.we'l choose another talented girl as ur
jodi
N:no need of that.i've already chosen my jodi
A:really?that's gud.who is she?
N:u A is surprised:what?what r u telling?
N:u'vent tried big platforms yet.but the truth is that u
r so talented that u deserve a big platform
A:but neev..
N:no excuse.if u want me 2 perform,u must b there with
me
A smiles & holds his hands:I'l b there with u

N&A perform 2 ah ah aashqil{36 china town}the
show becomes a big hit.
A is thrilled:I never thot it'l become such a big hit
N:but I was sure abt the success
A holds N's hand:its all bcoz of u.thanx a lot
A hugs N.

They both do many hit shows 2gether & become a popular
jodi.prachi feels sad abt it.
Milind tells P:I no u r sad seeing another one in
ur position both personally & professionally.u r
talented,why don't u do individual shows
P:no milind.i'm fed up of a celebrity life.it snatched
my happiness.i want 2 hav a simple life.
M:but prachi..
P:plz don't tell anythingelse.music reminds me of
neev.so I want 2 b away from it

Neev-A in a room.Current goes.Thunder's sound makes
A scared. A:ahhhhh
A stands close 2 N 4 strength.N hesitates 2 hold her
closer.but finally he extends his hand & holds her
tightly.
A-N luk at each other's eyes 4 sumtime.A moves away from
him.
A is on her bed:whats happening 2 me?why I'm relieved
wen neev is there with me?
N thinks:why I feel special wen ayesha is with me?

A-N in a party.All the cuples r asked 2 dance.1 guy
cum near A-N who r watching other's dance:why u both r
sitting alone?cum & dance
A:sorry,we r not like u think.we r not a cuple
He:wen I saw ur face itself felt that u've cum here
after a fight.but however u fight plz don't tell that u
both r not a cuple.this is a happy occasion.so 4get ur
problems & enjoy
A:but plz listen
He:no excuse
He takes them 2 the dance floor.A:why did'nt u tell him
that I'm not ur wife?
N:bcoz I wanted 2 dance with u
Both laugh. They both dance 2 Ache lagte ho{kuch na
kaho}
They both r luking at each other's eyes.A is shy.A
thinks:why do feel shy seeing his eyes?earlier I never
used 2 feel this with neev
N thinks:I really feel that my relation with ayesha has
changed

They both go 2 a temple.Panditji blesses them:let god
bless u with a happy married life
They r stunned.They go out. N:now I realized that luv is
necessary in life.we cant liv without it.i found my
luv.its u ayesha
A is surprised

uuuula thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#39
It's a nice fanfic
keep up the good work 😊
karol thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
i don't like this part ...........i know its beatiflly written i'm a bit sad coz na got married 😭 😭 😭 ..........n i know nw mp gonna marry soon...

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