Fanaa-ff 4 Neev,Prachi,Milind,Ayesha - Page 6

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I was absent minded.So all d alphabets which show names went wrong.Sorry.plz read it again.I hope ur confusion wil b over

Part-23…Neev:milind..Ayesha did'nt like my selection of
dress.wil u plz choose a nice sari 4 her
M & A r shocked.
N:Plz N hesitates. Prachi:plz choose one 4 ayesha.she
likes ur selection very much
Slowly M cums 4ward & stands near Ayesha.They both luk
each other.M luks at the saries.
He imagines P in each sari.finally he chooses a nice
pink sari & puts it on her body:it luks pretty on u
N & P smile.A is stunned.
Suddenly M is aware of what he's doing. M:sorry
M takes the sari from her body & gives it 2 her hand.
M goes out without telling anything.P & N luk at each
other.A notices it & smiles.
P:milind went.i've 2 go now N:ok
P goes.N is sad.


N -A in the car. N:don't u luv milind?
A is shocked. N:I no that evenif u wont tell anything
A is speechless. A:even I saw luv in ur eyes 4 prachi
N :I admit.i luv prachi.i crave 4 her like u crave 4
milind.don't u feel like going back 2 him?
A :yes N:I also feel the same.but it'l never
happen.bcoz we r already married
A weeps:if we had'nt done that blunder…
N is upset.

P is crying near M.P:I luv neev.i cant 4get
him
M is upset:I think wen we thot we hate ayesha & neev
also we'd luv 4 them.that's why they always came b4
us.we were happy with each other.but still sumthing was
lacking.it was their luv.we cud'nt 4get our past.
P :I wish our past is back with a new happy form
M :its our dream.but is it going 2 happen?
P is stunned & bursts into tears.
M :if we becum practical,we no that its not going 2
happen.bcoz neev & ayesha r very far from us.we cant
reach them.do u think neev luvs u like u luv him?
P is speechless:mayb he loves ayesha now.but I luv him &
cant liv happily without him
M :even I'l b happy only with ayesha.but I don't think she
loves me.i've 2 adit with pain that her present is not
me,but neev
Tears fall from M's eyes.

Valentine's day.P gets up from the bed & says
herself:happy valentine's day neev
N gets up from the bed:why do I feel that prachi
wished me?happy valentine's day prachi
A thinks:however busy,milind used 2 giv me
valentine's gifts.but now…
M thinks abt his past:
M tells A:happy valentine's day
He gives flowers,dresses & perfumes.
A :thax a lot M:where is my valentine's gift?
A is shy & hugs him.

A party.N-A,M-P r there.A has worn
a shining red sari.P has worn a white shining
sari.they both hav matching ornaments.They luk at each
other. A guy:this is a day 4 luvly cuples like u all
P thinks:I lost my valentine.now what valentine's
day

Part-24…
Neev thinks:without prachi,valentine's day is nothing
Ayesha thinks:4 me,valentine's day's charm is lost
Milind thinks:now valentine's day is a waste
That guy:now its time 4 the cuples 2 dance.we've written
u guys' names in a piece of paper.u can choose any paper
u want.ur dance partner's name wil b written in it.u've
2 dance with that person
Each person cums 2 take the paper piece & dance with
their partner.Dance song:seene{ko aap sa}
P takes the paper & is shocked 2 read the name.
P:neev N is shocked.M & A smile.
A thinks:neev is lucky 2 get prachi as his valentine

N-P slowly cum 2gether & hold hands 2gether &
dance.they r silent.N thinks:I new that u'l b my dance
partner.bcoz I'vent prayed this much b4
P thinks:neev,u dunno how happy I'm now.i'm so unlucky
that I cant express my feelings

M takes the paper & is surpised:ayesha
A,N-Pr very happy.A-M r dancing 2gether
A thinks:I dunno what milind is feeling now?
M:r u ok? A:yes A thinks:wen u r with me,I'm
perfectly ok
M thinks:is ayesha happy with me?pr is she longing 2
dance with neev?

All the 4 feel sad at the moment of parting.

P 2 M at home:I feel very upset seeing neev
as I no that I wont get him back.so I want 2 b away from
him.so lets go back 2 switzerland
M:ok,I also feel so

M phones 2 A's house.A picks up the ph:hello
M is speechless as he's excited 2 hear her voice. A is
angry:hello,cant u hear me?
M:hello A is surprised:milind?
M:I called 2 inform that 2morrow me & prachi r going 2
swtizerland 4ver
A is really upset.A keeps the ph down. N cums:why r u
upset?
A:milind phoned.they r going 2 switzerland 4ver.i cant
bear it.wen he was here,I cud atleast see him.but if
goes,I wont b able 2 see him at all
A bursts into tears.N is so upset that he cant react.


Airport.N-A hav cum 2 see off M-P.all the eyes r
filled with tears.
M 2 A:bye A's lips cant move.
Wen P was abt 2 open her mouth, N:don't tell Gud-bye
P is speechless.The cuples luk at each other.song:kabhi
alvida na kehna..

M-P r abt 2 enter the plane. P weeps:no milind.i cant

M weeps.
N-A r walking back with pain.N hears P's loud voice
from back:neev!
N is surprised.P hugs him.N is so happy. P:I dunno whats
there in ur mind.but I still luv u
N:even I luv u dammed
N hugs her tightly.A smiles & thinks:neev is so lucky
that he got his luv back.but my luv…
Sum1 keeps arm on her shoulder.she was surprised 2 see
M:milind?
M:I cant go leaving u here
They both weep & hug.

They all play with kids in the
airport.song:chanda{fanaa}

END

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