Fanaa-ff 4 Neev,Prachi,Milind,Ayesha - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
waoooooooo very nice part....ohhh felt bad 4 neev n prachi..ma too. 👏
cont soon...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
Part-5…..Prachi is nervous.Her mom Premlatha cums:ma,how
wil b city life?I feel nervous
Pr:its ur decision 2 go 2 city
P:that's bcoz I want 2 make up my career.its my dream 2
b a famous singer.that's why I'm going 4 audition
Her dad Inder:go & win my daughter.no need of
tension.u'l win
P smiles:I'm going with ur blessings
I pats her.

P reaches mumbai.she feels strange.she stays in the
hostel.she goes 4 audition.There a car cums.A glamorous
guy with sun glasses cum out of it.All the girls go
after him 4 autograph.
P:who is he?why r every1 after him?
Then she sees his face.she was excited:That's rockstar
Neev,he's my judge
P smiles.P tries 2 see his face again & again.But the
crowd covers him & she cant see him.

The audition is started.All the girls hav worn modern
dresses like shorts & jeans.So wen P entered the hall in
Punjabi salwar,every1 started laughing.
"see her patiala bottom."N smiles.
P becomes sad.her eyes get filled up with tears.
N feels pity 4 her:ur gud name?
P:prachi
N:Miss prachi,r u confident of ur talent?
P:yes Neevji
N:no need of 'ji'.call me neev.where r u from?
P:Punjab
N:ok,if u confident why r u becoming upset hearing sum1
telling sumthing?
P:I'm from a village.there no one is bothered about our
luks.they giv imp 2 talent.but here…that's why
N:here also talent is imp.so u can sing without no
tension
P sings: Des Rangila..
P is eager 2 no N's reaction. N:why did u choose this
sng?it seems 2 b patriotic
P:I like this kind of songs very much.i luv my India.i
want all the Indians 2 hold hands 2gether
N smiles:ok,now I'm going 2 announce the winners.He
announces the top 7 guys.P loses her confidence.P
thinks:my name is not announced.i'm rejected bcoz of my
luk
N:the last luckiest person is Prachi
P is surprised:thanku
N smiles:now did u understand that we also giv imp 2
talent
P smiles. N:among the girls chosen I'l choose the best
person as my jodi 4 shows.that person is…
All the girls r eager 2 no.

WHO'L B THAT GIRL?

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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
offcoarse its prachi.........4 sure...
ohhh...so sweet neev supported prachi...

btw di i want 2 knoe vich song is this des rangila???????????

mindblowing part.. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
Part-6…Neev:
Prachi
P is surprised:thanx a lot
Her eyes r full of tears.
N:now u r selected.then also tears…
P:it's the tears of happiness
N smiles:O I c.i got tensed
P smiles.

N-P start practicing the song:fanaa{humko deewana ho
gaye}
N:prachi,u r better than I expected
P becomes happy:thanx
N:I'm sure that the show wud b rocking.but this is not
enuf 4 a hit show.u shud'nt b like this 4 that
P's face is dull.
N:I dud'nt say that 2 make u upset.but it's a fact that
celebrities like us shud hav sum special make over.i
mean ur dressing style shud b changed
p:otherwise my song cant b enjoyed by any1?
N:I did'nt mean that.but since we r performing on stage
4 others,we need it.the show wil b more attractive.it
demands it.i hope u can understand that
P is speechless.
N:u did'nt tell anything
P:I'm not that kind of a girl who dresses badly
All other members laugh.
Another girl of their gang:this is the problem with the
middleclass girls of Indian village
P:whats wrong of being a village girl of India?since u r
brought up in states u dunno its value.but I'm prowd of
that.however famous we become,we shud'nt 4get our
culture
P goes.N follows:prachi
P did'nt listen.N holds her hand.P stares at him.N
leaves her hand.
N:I did'nt mean 2 hurt u.i did'nt ask u 2 4get our
culture.i just ask u 2 b more attractive
P:I cant wear the revealing dresses that others wear
N:did I ask u 2 wear those kinds of dresses?
P:but u meant that
N:I did'nt mean that.i no u'l b uncomfortable with it.u
can wear only the kind of salwars that u wear now?cant u
try 2 wear sum modern salwars,skirts,jeans that r not
revealing?
P is speechless.N:plz co-operate.i promise u that I
won't make u luk vulgar b4 others
P luks deeply at N

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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
ohhhhhh woaaaaa this part is the best.........sumthing has started 2 hapeen bw them....ohhhhhh can't w8 nw..
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
Part-7….The show's time has cum.neev luks 4 Prachi
N:where is prachi?
1 girl:no idea
N:how can u all b irresponsible?u all shud've enquired that
She:irresponsible is not us,but ur jodi prachi.u've made the biggest mistake by choosing that stupid middleclass girl as ur jodi.the show's time has cum.but prachi is not seen.ppl r shouting 4 u.go neev.perform without ur fav jodi.i hope u've realized the mistake & wil choose another girl as ur jodi
N does'nt speak anything & goes 2 stage.He starts performing:fanaa{humko deewana}
Suddenly he hears a female voice & turns back.he cud'nt belive his eyes.it was P.she has worn a costly Laacha.she was really glamorous.N becomes happy.they both sing 2gether.
They perform suraj hua..{KKKG}it was very intimate.N-P cud'nt take off their eyes from each other eventho it git over.Wen the audience's claps become stronger,they become conscious & move from each other.

The show is a big hit.N enters the make up room where P is alone.
P:whats the matter?
N:thanx
P:4 what?
N:4 considering my suggestion
P:no need of thanx.i did it 4 our show.how do I luk in this dress?I'm I ok?
N:u luk really beautiful
P:thanx
N:prachi..
P:anything else?
N:ya P:tell N:2morrow there wil b a party 2 celebrate our success.if u cum,I'l b happy.wont u cum?
P:yes,how cum I not cum wen u call
N smiles. P:I mean..this is our success.so I've 2 b there na
N smiles.
280200 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#17
wowwwww...
this is really gud!!! Keep it up!!
karol thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
👏 👏 👏 ANOTHER NICE PART...........bt pls di choose sum jhakas songs yaar 😉 not the sloww songs coz yeh live shoe tha na...............overall...its was amazing..
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
#19
Part-8….Party.Prachi has worn a modern orange
salwar.
Neev smiles;u luk very pretty
P:thanx
All r dancing.song:fanaa{Yuva}
N:wil u dance with me?
P:sorry neev,I cant
N is dull:why?u don't like dancing with me?
P:not bcoz of that.i don't relate myself 2 this
kind of a dance
N:but plz dance with me.just 4 me
P:but I dunno this dance
N:its very easy.i'l teach u
N holds her hand.N-P luk at each other
N holds her tightly & dances.they cant take off
their eyes from each other.
N thinks:I've becum so close 2 prachi
P thinks:whats happening 2 me?


P enters a hall.there N is there.
p:why did u call me here?
N:luk at the room carefully
P luks.The room is dark.only candle lite
N:I've arranged candle nite dinner
P is stunned:but why?
N:that I'l tell u
N-P sit.N holds her arm.P did'nt move.
N:I luv u
P is shocked.
N:I dunno what made me think u r mine.but I'm sure
that destiny wants us 2 b 2gether.that's why it
gave u a place in my heart.now tell prachi,do u luv
me?
P smiles.N sings holding her around:Chand
Sifarish{fanaa}.P smiles.


N-P marry.It became a sensational news as it's the
union of a famous pair.N-P sing:seene{koi aap sa}

P is sitting as a shy bride on the bed.N sits near
her.
N:like our fans wanted we united in real life
P smiles.N's fingers go thru her face:I was
longing 4 this moment
He hugs her.they 4get themselves.




karol thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
#20
no di i'm readind ur ff....
this part was the best....coz i'm dieying 2 c np close 2 each other..............i'm happy if nt in real v had chance..........then y not like this..........
i luved this part realie............want them getting married in kayamath too........ 😭 😭

thanx 4 making my dreams cum true thro.. this fic.
Edited by karol - 18 years ago

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