One Shot FF: The Broken Promise - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: MichiDespo

So Shubs u made MICHI buddas and even kicked Milind first them Prachi followed him.



I know I made it sad Sumu. But wanted to say even death couldn't keep Michi apart.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: blind horizon

How do you guys pull off one shot ffs I swear everytime I try that I end up writing atleast ten bloody parts..... Well enough of my complaints I loved it from start to finish. Aw Milsi was such a wonderful husband I'm weeping it was sad but beautiful thanks Shubhs for this.


Munee it's a compromise to concise everything into one part. But the lack of time forces me to do so. Though I don't want to write the writing bug has bit me kya karu?

I am glad you loved it Munee. Yes Milsi is the best husband and Prachi couldn't have lived without him after living with him for decades. His love pulled her off of this world may be.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: AKANargis

Awwwwwwwwwwwww Shubs....such a sweet short FF of MICHI. i hope this is how the show will end too....with MICHI always together and in Love with each other. Thanks!!



thank you Nargis. 😊 I too hope the serial ends with Michi together- though not the way it did in this FF.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ambul30

That was a sweet story of michi's life. so sad though😭. But they had their journey together in life and in death, wow 👏


Thank you Ambul. I am glad the story wasn't just sad but sounded sweet too. Yes their journey was together forever and ever!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very well written Shubs. Succintly put. You gave the whole life history of Michi is just one part, commendable.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Shubhs I was wondering when I'll be getting the pleasure of reading another FF from you – and here it is - it's always a treat to read your FF.

This was just so serene, sad and beautiful all at the same time. You captured the whole essence of what true love between two people actually is - it's all about two bodies but one soul. The concept that she fulfilled his broken promise by joining him for eternity was heart-rending but at the same time inevitable since I guess that's what soul mates do.

Love this FF - sometimes it's refreshing to read one-off stories like these and then ponder on them after.

Hope the serial ends on a similar note to this then perhaps we can look back on Kayamath with fond memories while blocking the weird, stupid and annoying ones out.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabzc1

beautifully written shubs.👏


thanks Shabz.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey loved this ff...
excellent way of showcasing the whole lofe of michi...so theya re buddha's in this...
hmm..
hope u write more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG this was simply WOW....spechless.👏
its soooo BEAUTIFULLY written...
Hats off to you...
I honestly LOVED IT...it touched my heart....
THANKS A LOT
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Posted: 16 years ago
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JOpt/MFR/Shubhie?!! well, take your pick....u have ThReE options!! :P lolsi!!

achha so i absolutely loved this one shot FF idea....u can satisfy the hankering u get as a writer and altho it is compensating for detail atleast u get that high post-writing!! coming down to IT--i absolutely loved it....kya love thha!! she was pining for him after he passed!! how sad was that....i got all teary eyed when i read that last sentence!! it was soo bittersweet...i was glad that they cud be together after their respective deaths but was nonetheless sad!! 😭 Thankssss Shubhie for reminding that once upon a time (which seems like ages ago) that i was in love with Michi and righfully so!👏👏
those bloody idiotic writers robbed us of our love for Michi....so much so that when i log into IF and read the gist on the update i chuckle to myself (eg Prachi tried to kill dadi whatevs!!)!! yeah that was me rambling!!😆

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