One Shot FF: The Broken Promise - Page 5

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

wow shubs gr8 part plzz do write a longer ff as well

Thank you Jyoti. I will try writing if possible.

that was nice and sad at the same time.. thanks

Originally posted by: Milsi

that was nice and sad at the same time.. thanks

thank you.😊

love sees no boundaries...aww so beautifully written😍..great work shubs.....thanx for d short but impressive work..👍🏼

nice story
but i feel quite sad for michi
but in ral life it will happens to everyone
loved the way u written

keep on rocking

Originally posted by: layla44

love sees no boundaries...aww so beautifully written😍..great work shubs.....thanx for d short but impressive work..👍🏼

Yes love is eternal but life isn't. Thank you Layla.😊

Originally posted by: mehanandita

nice story
but i feel quite sad for michi
but in ral life it will happens to everyone
loved the way u written

keep on rocking

Meha, death is as much as part of life as birth. We are born to die hain na?
When I thought of this story I contemplated on if I should make Milind die first of Prachi. I couldn't make Prachi die first and Milind suffer. I too feel sad for Prachi here but at the end of the day, she reached her Milind.
thanks.

this is so beautiful! just loved it! absolutely brilliant!
but one doubt☺️.. did prachi kill herself? or was it natural death☺️
but brilliant work!

Originally posted by: shivgauri

this is so beautiful! just loved it! absolutely brilliant!
but one doubt☺️.. did prachi kill herself? or was it natural death☺️
but brilliant work!

Thank you Kuku. Well Prachi didn't physically kill herself, but her soul gave up. I would say it's a soul suicide to meet her love in heaven asap. Does that make sense?

Originally posted by: michifanreal

Thank you Kuku. Well Prachi didn't physically kill herself, but her soul gave up. I would say it's a soul suicide to meet her love in heaven asap. Does that make sense?

oh that's deep! but yeah makes sense!😃
hope u will write more fanfics like these😛