One Shot FF: The Broken Promise - Page 4

Originally posted by: sailat@PA

JOpt/MFR/Shubhie?!! well, take your pick....u have ThReE options!! :P lolsi!!

Shubhie sounds the best of the three choices I have!😆

achha so i absolutely loved this one shot FF idea....u can satisfy the hankering u get as a writer and altho it is compensating for detail atleast u get that high post-writing!!
I used to write in my language when I was a teenager. Looks like those days are back though time and other responsibilities come my way.

coming down to IT--i absolutely loved it....kya love thha!! she was pining for him after he passed!! how sad was that....i got all teary eyed when i read that last sentence!! it was soo bittersweet...
Awwww... I was almost in tears too when this idea crossed my mind and when I was writing those last lines.

i was glad that they cud be together after their respective deaths but was nonetheless sad!! 😭 Thankssss Shubhie for reminding that once upon a time (which seems like ages ago) that i was in love with Michi and righfully so!👏👏
That's how I am able to write this for Michi too- the Michi of those golden days. I wish the creatives.. Grrr. Kya wish- koi fayda nahi.😭

those bloody idiotic writers robbed us of our love for Michi....so much so that when i log into IF and read the gist on the update i chuckle to myself (eg Prachi tried to kill dadi whatevs!!)!! yeah that was me rambling!!😆

I know yaar, of all the people Prachi is killing daadi. Hasna hain ya rona hain samajh mein nahi aata.😕
thank Saima for reading amd commenting.😊

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

Originally posted by: kaswetta

The story was beautiful written. That was very sad but they had a fabulous love life. Their souls were sisters.thanks mfr.