One Shot FF: The Broken Promise - Page 3

Originally posted by: blackcurrant

That was sad and wonderful at the same time. 👏 At least they lived a long and fulfilling life.

Originally posted by: (**sia**)

wow shubs...another one SHOT ff...superb...a very heart-breakin one and faboulus...glad that michi has shared their life in the most wonderful way...really brilliantly written
thanks for this🤗

Originally posted by: optimist

Very well written Shubs. Succintly put. You gave the whole life history of Michi is just one part, commendable.

Originally posted by: michifanreal

thank you so much Sia. I am so glad you liked it.😊🤗

Originally posted by: Insomniac

Hi Shubhs I was wondering when I'll be getting the pleasure of reading another FF from you ' and here it is - it's always a treat to read your FF.

Every time I finish a FF, I decide not to write anymore, but ideas flash in mind and try to suppress them for a while, finally by the weekend they come out. 😊 I am so happy you like reading my FFs.

This was just so serene, sad and beautiful all at the same time. You captured the whole essence of what true love between two people actually is - it's all about two bodies but one soul. The concept that she fulfilled his broken promise by joining him for eternity was heart-rending but at the same time inevitable since I guess that's what soul mates do.

Yes, that's what love is at the end of the day. Michi belonged to each other, lived and died with each other.
One day it just flashed my mind, what will Milind or Prachi do if the other died? Answer was simple that they would look forward to unite again. I am glad you liked the broken promise idea. I almost choked writing it.

Love this FF - sometimes it's refreshing to read one-off stories like these and then ponder on them after.

thanks. 😊

Hope the serial ends on a similar note to this then perhaps we can look back on Kayamath with fond memories while blocking the weird, stupid and annoying ones out.

I also hope for the same dear. I think we deserve it for putting up with this show for so long.

Originally posted by: (**sia**)

shubs hun...dn take me rong but ur last two one shot FF's have michi as budda's😆...the first one they were celebratin their 25th anniversary and this one has michi dyin and unitin in heaven...so wats the next one?! m so curious to knw😉😆

Originally posted by: chillingal16

hey loved this ff...

excellent way of showcasing the whole lofe of michi...so theya re buddha's in this...

hmm..

hope u write more

Originally posted by: Heeba

OMG this was simply WOW....spechless.👏
its soooo BEAUTIFULLY written...
Hats off to you...
I honestly LOVED IT...it touched my heart....
THANKS A LOT

Originally posted by: michifanreal

🤣🤣🤣 Honey I didn't want to restrict Michi love to just young age. I did write about young married Michi in PKHH. Then I wanted to write about Prachi being a widow, Milind still falling for her. Now old age Michi. next one, I am not sure. Though I am not going to write about their life after death- as I hardly know anything about it- if at all it exists!