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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mehanandita

hi optimist,
i am the silent reader of ur fiction,
ur really doing a nice job👏
i am very impressed,
and the last part prachi leaving milind i felt so sad for prachi really heart touching

keep on rocking

one small request pls try to update cant wait for milind reaction sorry if i said anythink wrong

Thanks Meha. So this update has unearthed some silent readers of my fic! There is nothing more I wish to do than to break the suspense and post my next update but unfortunately I am not feeling too well now. Dont have a single line of the update and tomorrow I will be very busy at work. So if I dont finish it before I go to work, I cant post anything before Wednesday. Kindly bear with me.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Opti, I got to admit, I had a bit of a giggle when I read Prachi's note. Inspite of her broken heart and broken marriage, she didn't forget about the electicity bill and vegetables. But then I remembered reading a book, where the heroine reminded her husband to feed the cats in her running away from home note. She was too numb with pain to deal with anything but the practicalties of the situation. I guess that's the case with Prachi too. 😭
Ayesha is one cool customer. How did she hide her feelings everytime, she saw Milind and Prachi together? And not just hide it but put on a happy face. At least Milind, seemed a bit uncomfortable when she visited them for the first time after the wedding. This Ayesha is seemingly as selfless as Prachi is on the show. I also want a really good ending for her. I can't make head nor tail of Milind right now, so not even going to bother.
Prachi's reaction was so consistient with her character thus far. Instead of getting mad with Milind, she seemed to be blaming herself for standing in the way of his happiness. 😭 Boy, Milind rather make it up to her. In some way or another she has been let down by everyone but she put their needs before her own. And she also proved she truly loves Milind by putting his happiness before her own.
Aaah, Opti who said you're not good with suspense. I cannot wait to see what happens next cos I have absolutely no clue. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

Kuku, you did read my update didn't you? Why this question?


no... just tht it was not mentioned tht Ayesha is his girlfriend, just Prachi guessing it and "our past" cud be anything... just forget it, me thinkin too much into it😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blackcurrant

Opti, I got to admit, I had a bit of a giggle when I read Prachi's note. Inspite of her broken heart and broken marriage, she didn't forget about the electicity bill and vegetables. But then I remembered reading a book, where the heroine reminded her husband to feed the cats in her running away from home note. She was too numb with pain to deal with anything but the practicalties of the situation. I guess that's the case with Prachi too. 😭

BC, that's an interesting take. Actually I made Prachi come back because she is that kind of a person who believes in fulfilling her duties right up to the last minute before she leaves for good, no matter how much she is hurting. Yes, the pain will hit her more hard once she leaves because she is still in the process of assimilating it.
Ayesha is one cool customer. How did she hide her feelings everytime, she saw Milind and Prachi together? And not just hide it but put on a happy face. At least Milind, seemed a bit uncomfortable when she visited them for the first time after the wedding. This Ayesha is seemingly as selfless as Prachi is on the show. I also want a really good ending for her.
Dont worry she is in good hands. I have no intention of making her into an obsessed crazed lover. Ayesha has much more susbstance and you'll appreciate her better as the story progresses because I have something special planned for her.
I can't make head nor tail of Milind right now, so not even going to bother.
Good, dont break your head over him. I hope my next update will make you see him in a positive light, if not emphasise with him atleast sympathise with him.
Prachi's reaction was so consistient with her character thus far. Instead of getting mad with Milind, she seemed to be blaming herself for standing in the way of his happiness. 😭
Yes, right now she is not angry with anyone, just disappointed that people did not trust her enough to confide in her. She would have gladly united Ayesha and Milind if only she knew the truth about their relationship. she loved them both to care for their happiness.
Boy, Milind rather make it up to her. In some way or another she has been let down by everyone but she put their needs before her own. And she also proved she truly loves Milind by putting his happiness before her own.
Yes, she trully loves Milind and you soon find out that it has not all gone waste. Milind will make it up big time, dont worry.
Aaah, Opti who said you're not good with suspense. I cannot wait to see what happens next cos I have absolutely no clue. 😊 Well, I hope you can pallate what I am about to give you in my next update.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shivgauri


no... just tht it was not mentioned tht Ayesha is his girlfriend, just Prachi guessing it and "our past" cud be anything... just forget it, me thinkin too much into it😆

Well, you thought Milind had more than one past????
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

Well, you thought Milind had more than one past????


no😆😆😆... i felt tht "past" cud mean anything! ... i know i am not making any sense, so just forget it😆😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
i am so confused with milind rite nw! poor prachi...gr8 prt
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shivgauri


no😆😆😆... i felt tht "past" cud mean anything! ... i know i am not making any sense, so just forget it😆😆😆

Kuku, dont think too much, just wait for the next update which will be up either tomorrow or the day after. All your doubts about past, present and hopefully even future will be cleared.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

Thanks Meha. So this update has unearthed some silent readers of my fic! There is nothing more I wish to do than to break the suspense and post my next update but unfortunately I am not feeling too well now. Dont have a single line of the update and tomorrow I will be very busy at work. So if I dont finish it before I go to work, I cant post anything before Wednesday. Kindly bear with me.



its ok yaar, will wait for ur update
u take care of ur self.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh Opti Akka, It was Ayesha as I thought. 😭
Poor Prachi- but I am glad she knows the truth behind Milind's changed behaviour. I think Milind has to first find her, then sit and think, make sure that he loves his wife, and tell her that.

So the dude writes diaries.. did he not also write he was falling for Prachi? Or Prachi didn't want to read beyond Ayesha...? These diaries are dangerous!!! I destroyed my teenage scrappings of 7 years when I went home this time.

I think the problem with Milind is just that he considers his love for Prachi won't be enough. He probably thinks because he has had a past, he won't be able to do justice to Prachi. It won't be easy for him to come out of this!!!😕😭, But I love him for it.
Edited by michifanreal - 16 years ago

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