FF:Destiny's Children Pt XIV(2)(16/12) - Page 113

Originally posted by: michifanreal

Oh Opti Akka, It was Ayesha as I thought. 😭 Yes, it is Ayesha. As I said my fic will resemble the serial very closely upto a poinjt, I thik I did ot actually keep this too much of a mystery although I did not spell out her name.

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Poor Prachi- but I am glad she knows the truth behind Milind's changed behaviour. I think Milind has to first find her, then sit and think, make sure that he loves his wife, and tell her that. He has to first figure out himself before he can figure out where she is. My next update will do exactly that although I have still not started writing it.

So the dude writes diaries.. did he not also write he was falling for Prachi? Or Prachi didn't read beyond Ayesha? No he discontinued writing diaries after his break up because he felt they were too painful. That is why the diary was lying on top of the cupboard where it had gathered dust. The guy had even forgotten he has one at home. he would have destroyed it had he remembered.

These diaries are dangerous!!! I destroyed my teenage scrappings of 7 years when I went home this time.

I never kept one but I really dont need one because my folks know me in and out. I bug them with everything that happens to me. so didn't ever feel to put my thoughts and feelings to a book.

I think the problem with Milind is just that he considers his love for Prachi won't be enough. He probably thinks because he has had a past, he won't be able to do justice to Prachi. It won't be easy for him to come out of this!!!😕😭, But I love him for it. You are not too far off the mark although his feelings are a bit more complex. hope I can describe it properly to make people (not only you) love him at the end of it.

Originally posted by: chillingal16

DI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...

OMG she left!!!!!!...

and he loves ayesha! thought so but it wasnt clarified in the beginning...so wasnt sure!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!

wonder what will happen next!
loved the way that u hve penned this part!

cant wait for more!

do continue soon pls !!!!

Originally posted by: MichiDespo

Opti update karo na...please.....please...please.....

Just write what u want just put it in the words then post it and we will read that and we comments on that.

Plueez plueez plueez.....intezaar nahin hote mujko....

Originally posted by: sailat@PA

Part XIV(I)--

OH MY GOSSSHHHHHHHH!!! Poor Prachi stumbled upon the biggest shockers back to back!! 😭😭 I don't feel anything towards Milind and Ayesha....atleast A. is trying to coax Milind towards Prachi!! and well, one can't even be angry and mad at Milind coz he came unwillingly into the marriage!! atleast he was a decent person towards Prachi!! I wonder how Milind will react when he finds Prachi missing and having found out abt his past!!

Opti--i absolutely loved the pacing of the update!! it had a sense of mystery surrounding it!! Loved it and waiting for Part II!! :DD

Originally posted by: Heeba

hey opti...i missed sooo many updates...really busy studying for my finals...i'm done this friday...i'll catch asap and let u know...i'm sure ur doing a wonderful job😊