FF:Destiny's Children Pt XIV(2)(16/12)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1101

tht was so sad... my heart went out to her... so Milsi's ex-girlfriend is Ayesha only? very well written... don;t kbow why u thought it was not upto mark... i really loved this part.
waiting to read Milind's reaction when he gets back home.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1102

wanted to add... was a little let down by Milsi... I wudn't like it if my husband discuss me with his ex-girlfriend.. however close they are.. i wud never like😡😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1103

Originally posted by: shivgauri
tht was so sad... my heart went out to her... so Milsi's ex-girlfriend is Ayesha only? very well written... don;t kbow why u thought it was not upto mark... i really loved this part.
waiting to read Milind's reaction when he gets back home.

Thanks Kuku. Just felt I couldn't put down everything I felt for Prachi. In my next update you'll first come to know what transpired in Ayesha's house before he comes home.

Edited by optimist - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1104

Originally posted by: shivgauri
wanted to add... was a little let down by Milsi... I wudn't like it if my husband discuss me with his ex-girlfriend.. however close they are.. i wud never like😡😳

Kuku, wait for my next update before you judge my Milsi.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1105

Originally posted by: cbkola
very nice dear Thank you😊

Thanks

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Goldy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1106

So Ayesha is Milind's past?? WOnder what is going on in Milsi's mind.....he seems confused to me...😕 or maybe I m seeing it in a wrong way....

Prachi reaction to everything that happened to her in a single day revealing a lot of painful things was expected. The note she left for milind was the best part for me.....The way she gave him all the details abt the household n the money...ahhh....it tugged my heart but then its no surprise Prachi is such a creature....😳 Can't wait for u to post the next part and see where the story is heading.....Hope Milsi realizes his love for his wife and tries to get her back......

Will wait for the next part...😊

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mehanandita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1107

hi optimist,
i am the silent reader of ur fiction,
ur really doing a nice job👏
i am very impressed,
and the last part prachi leaving milind i felt so sad for prachi really heart touching

keep on rocking

one small request pls try to update cant wait for milind reaction sorry if i said anythink wrong

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1108

Originally posted by: optimist

Kuku, wait for my next update before you judge my Milsi.

oh okie hun.... by the way Ayesha is his girlfriend ri8?

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1109

Originally posted by: milindkidewani

So Ayesha is Milind's past??

Yes, she is.

WOnder what is going on in Milsi's mind.....he seems confused to me...😕 or maybe I m seeing it in a wrong way....

No you are not wrong. The guy is thorougly confused right now, with different emotions pulling him in different directions. All his confusion will be set right in the next update.

Prachi reaction to everything that happened to her in a single day revealing a lot of painful things was expected. The note she left for milind was the best part for me.....The way she gave him all the details abt the household n the money...ahhh....it tugged my heart but then its no surprise Prachi is such a creature....

Yes, even before she leaves Milind she makes sure she fulfills her duty.

😳 Can't wait for u to post the next part and see where the story is heading.....Hope Milsi realizes his love for his wife and tries to get her back......

Dont worry. Michi are meant to be together. This is just a test for them. Unlike Sandy I will not make you wait for three months for a Michi reunion, just two to three days is all that is needed. Storywise it will be a single night.

Will wait for the next part...😊 I do hope I can finish it by tomorrow morning (I have'nt even started as of now) I am not feeling too well tonight and may hit the sack early (after watching the show ofcourse). Otherwise it will definitely be up by Wednesday.