FF:Destiny's Children Pt XIV(2)(16/12)

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1091

Oh Opti stop it ofcourse you'll pull thru it you know you can so clear you brain and just write irrespective of what comes out sometimes we think of something and when we finish it's different than we thought it would be. We'll all be waiting to read the crystal clear revelation tomorrow now don't tax your brain over it.

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1092

Originally posted by: kountheya
opti, gr8 , dont tell cannot promise, you have to update. VERY INTERESTING, YOUR IDEAS ARE GREAT, DONT THINK ABOUT ANYTHING, JUST UPDATE.

THANK YOU AND WAITING.

Kountheya, you make me laugh. How can I write without thinking? Anyway I'll try my best and leave the rest to you all to tear me to pieces if I cant make you love my Milind after that.

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1093

Originally posted by: blind horizon
Oh Opti stop it ofcourse you'll pull thru it you know you can so clear you brain and just write irrespective of what comes out sometimes we think of something and when we finish it's different than we thought it would be. We'll all be waiting to read the crystal clear revelation tomorrow now don't tax your brain over it.

Munee, I think I am having a panic attack now. Its like I have started something and cant stop it. Anyway may be I am just exaggerating a bit. Oh, things are crytal clear in my head. The trick is to convert that thought into words on the PC. Any way I am done with the thinking for the day. Will do the thinking tomorrow if I have the time.

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pranati puspanjali

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1094

Nice part opti....

firstly sorry i cant post reply 4 last part.So here I m replying 4 both the parts.

In last part ur janamastami celebration description was mindblowing.and u have a good knowledge on south indian dishes also.

this part is a shocking one.Finally prachi came to know abt the truth behind her husband's confusing behaviour.Feel sorry 4 Prachi😭😭.I agree with her decission of leave the house.Both her husband and best friend hide their love.she never expecting such things from the most trustworthy persons of her life.Earlier neev did exactly that to her.He did not share his secret with her and she preapared 4 the marriage.And we know what is the result.Now milind done the same thing with her.I just wrote what i feel.And u did a great job to portray the emotions of prachi...👏

eagerly waiting 4 ur next update to know milind's reaction.........

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1095

Oh...Poor Prachi....she has been decieved again....first Neeve, and now Milind and Aayesha....niether trusted her with the truth. I can totally relate with her anger...but I expected more anguish....then what you presented....is this what you weer ereferring to when you said it was clear in your head but couldn't pen it?

Waiting to feel more of Prachi's turmoil and pain in the next update.

This update was ggod too....but I felt it was abrupt...could have elaborated more on fer feeling aas she the diary.

Looking forward to the next part....Thanks.

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soul76

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1096

Originally posted by: optimist

Munee, I think I am having a panic attack now. Its like I have started something and cant stop it. Anyway may be I am just exaggerating a bit. Oh, things are crytal clear in my head. The trick is to convert that thought into words on the PC. Any way I am done with the thinking for the day. Will do the thinking tomorrow if I have the time.

Hun I can relate to the panic attack I totally went through torture writing the showdown in KIT. It's like this weight keeps you restless wondering whether you'll pull it off rightly or not.

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johnangad

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1097

ayesha?????? i totally forgot abt her! prachi left! fantastic part

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1098

Originally posted by: dreamyanjali
Nice part opti....
firstly sorry i cant post reply 4 last part.So here I m replying 4 both the parts.

In last part ur janamastami celebration description was mindblowing.and u have a good knowledge on south indian dishes also.

this part is a shocking one.Finally prachi came to know abt the truth behind her husband's confusing behaviour.Feel sorry 4 Prachi😭😭.I agree with her decission of leave the house.Both her husband and best friend hide their love.she never expecting such things from the most trustworthy persons of her life.Earlier neev did exactly that to her.He did not share his secret with her and she preapared 4 the marriage.And we know what is the result.Now milind done the same thing with her.I just wrote what i feel.And u did a great job to portray the emotions of prachi...👏

eagerly waiting 4 ur next update to know milind's reaction.........

Thank you anjali. Yes, Prachi came to know the truth and yes, she feels deceived again by the people she trusted and loved the most. Yes, Milind's side of the story is coming up next. Hope you can understand him better after that. Nothing is black or white as you will soon see.

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Opti

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1099

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Hun I can relate to the panic attack I totally went through torture writing the showdown in KIT. It's like this weight keeps you restless wondering whether you'll pull it off rightly or not.

Munee, I am glad somebody can empathise with me. Since I feel so deeply for my fictitious Prachi and Milind, I get upset if my feelings do not come across the way I want them to. Right now everyone's feeling is totally justified. this is what I wanted but if my readers sympathise with my Milind if not emphasise with him after my next update I will take consolation that I have achieved my objective.

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GoGreen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1100

Opti me back with my comments...bear with me....

Independence day celebrations....hero busy in organising....

Loved manju and her hubby nok-jok...as 99.9 hubbies comment the same after some yrs of marriage....

So much proximity betweem MICHI that too for the first time and in public....feling sorry for prachi as i read the all parts.....poor girl.

So finally they won the race....and loved the song prachi sang and she conveyed her feelings to the duffer poor girl dint know anything...my heart goes for prachi...and what is it....he ran to park ....

Rakhi...festival.... i am sure praachi might be curshing herslf why she had conveyed her message to this duffer the way he is behaving with her...it is killing her....

Prachi saved money and even bought saree to sukruti and instead of appreciating for that he was mad at her....

Alaap heis such a jerk...cant he stay quiet till prachi completes all rituals..as because of him only his siater in baring the burnt.....

Alaap when will he get straight.....even Milind too have to face stupid behaviour.i really for once want milind to bash alaap.

Janmasthami...murukulu...i love them but when ever i try to prepare them they wont come like the way my mom and grand mom does..long way for me to fet perfect murukulu..may be i will become expert once i become a grandmom..

If milind wasnt interested in prachi why is he following her like puppy tagging as he is visitng for PL sake.

PL indirectly hinted that she wants anather grandkid...poor prachi felt sorry for her as the poor soul is blushing thinking one day she will become a mother..and why is this fellow felt embrassed.....opti tell me one thing....is this guys fuses r well functioning.....

so even after prachi cintunious pleading he went to hit daahi haddi so if he win the oprize he will sent money for mala wedding..is this guy wants to blow of 10 lakhs on mala wedding or thinking of starting his own bussiness if he saves some money after after malas marriage.

Poor prachi she was so scared even passed out and none watched it as everyone were busy in drooling milind. why is he so concerned when he saw her passed out....is it only sympathy that he is showing....towards prachi.

Manju is she a tubelight...she is married for 7 yrs and having 2 kids..dint she sensed the type of relation MICHI r sharing when Milind dint came farward to change the cloths of prachi...that guy stood numb in his tracks without bulging an inch...instead she hit her own forehead and went away saying ayyo rama...

So ayeesha is Milind love from past 10 Years and still..this guy dint moved on and it is very difficult for him to move on seeing Ayeesh infront of him....poor prachi she got biggest schoks in her life...

she felt completely betrayed...

her father betrayed her with his untimely death he dint think he have to shoulder her daughter as her engagement broke off..

her brother betrayed her by trading her just for the wealth her father had left on the guy who will marry her....her brother just wanted money ...her brother who have to get nice and eligible man to her and who must keep her happiness before his happiness just trraded her..

her two best friends..neev and ayeesha...these two betrayed her..neev dint even confied in her about his love and marriage even she used to confine singel thing she di..and same goes to ayeesha.....what type of friends neev and aeyeesha are...Ayeesha betrayed her

Her husband yes he too betrayed her ...dint he find necessary to confine that he married her just her brother had made a deal...

why everyone betrayed prachi ..is she not the worth enought trustworthy...

prachi is a girl and humble human being she gave 100% for herself weather in friendship or as a wife...even these people dint trust her.

Hope her mother PL trusts her and give her shoulder to cry for praachi as she needs emotional support and only her mother can give it.

Good thing she left Milind house..and i dont want her to return as may be milind may feel guilty and want to take their relation stepfurther but no that relation is formed just out of sympathy not by love..i dont want prachi BETRAYED again in the name of husband-wife relation..as Milind never does justice to prachi.

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