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@reshhhh

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1071

Dear "Optomist"

Sorry I dont know your name, but I am an ardent fan of your fanfic, you have no idea I keep checking every 1/2 hour whether there is any update... it easy to note the change as you use Roman Number.......for the updated part...

you have amazing writing skills and I am impatiently waiting for the rest of the story...

hope finally Milind confess his love to prachi..

take care

reshhhh

let me know your name please.................

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1072

Originally posted by: blind horizon
As expected the lover was Ayesha and as required and again very much expected Prachi left. Woah Opti no suspense but then I had hoped Prachi would leave. It's the only way Milind would know her worth sometimes some things are so close you cannot understand what they mean to you till after they are gone. The trick here would be to wipe out ten years of love in a minimum of time. The clock's ticking!!!!

Munee, the suspense is not this! The suspense is yet to come out. That will out be in my next chapter.

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gawker

@gawker

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#1073

wow, opti. why do you feel you've not written this part well? i thought it was ver good. now this was a shocker for prachi. that was a terrible reveleation for her just when she had fallen in love with milind. as usual, waiting anxiously for the next part.

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1074

omg cant beleive ayesha was milinds past gr8 part cont soon

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#1075

Originally posted by: reshhhh

Dear "Optomist"

Sorry I dont know your name, but I am an ardent fan of your fanfic, you have no idea I keep checking every 1/2 hour whether there is any update... it easy to note the change as you use Roman Number.......for the updated part...

you have amazing writing skills and I am impatiently waiting for the rest of the story...

hope finally Milind confess his love to prachi..

take care

reshhhh

let me know your name please.................

Thank you reshhhh, that is really flattering but dont worry I only update once a day(maybe rarely twice), not every half hour. I am glad you like my writing skills because I don't, especially for this part. Did not think I did justice to it.

Coming to the story, Milind will confess his love, there is no doubt about it but before that something else has to happen. I hope I can put up the update tomorrow but cant promise because I am really saddled at work.

You can call me Opti as everyone here does.

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soul76

@soul76

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#1076

Originally posted by: optimist

Munee, the suspense is not this! The suspense is yet to come out. That will out be in my next chapter.

Aha...... a twist ok hun I'll wait for it and see how much of my guesses work here.😊

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Delena

@Delena-cious

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#1077

c opti...i told u u'l come out great here too🤗...well done
wel, i wasnt really expectin ayesha to turn out to b his past and secondly never ever expected that prachi would simply run away like that. but seeing her nature here, she really couldnt let herself stay with a person who doesnt love her and she had to face him every day with that truth.
i hope prachi's absense makes the difference...i bet wit her absense, Mlind wil realise how much he loves her and how much he need her
continue soon🤗

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#1078

Originally posted by: gawker
wow, opti. why do you feel you've not written this part well? i thought it was ver good. now this was a shocker for prachi. that was a terrible reveleation for her just when she had fallen in love with milind. as usual, waiting anxiously for the next part.

I dont know Manu. There were so many emotions running in my head. Didn't think I was able to put them all down in this part. I still think I suck writing down emotional parts and that is sad because there are more emotional parts coming up and I hope I do better than I did here. Yeah, it is a terrible revelation for Prachi and it came when she least expected it.

I do hope I can post the next part tomorrow but really dont know. Have so many pending items at work and that part is even more emotionally charged than this one. I think it will be the make or break part of the FF. If I am not convincing enough in it, I think many will ditch me!

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Mrs.Edward Cullen

@.Angel

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1079

Opti, something is going on in my head but I don't know what it's cause I'm not shocked or even sad but just can't put two and two together to make it one and tell u how I feel about this part yet,so will just have to come back later on...........

my god Milind should have be man enough to tell her the truth without letting her finding out the truth on her own......

thank god she pack up her things and leave the house for them both......uff I will come back later hun

thank u very much dear👏👏

what u did with this part and how u did it was fantastic.

Edited by angel's life - 16 years ago

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Opti

@Opti

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#1080

Originally posted by: (**sia**)
c opti...i told u u'l come out great here too🤗...well done
wel, i wasnt really expectin ayesha to turn out to b his past and secondly never ever expected that prachi would simply run away like that. but seeing her nature here, she really couldnt let herself stay with a person who doesnt love her and she had to face him every day with that truth.
i hope prachi's absense makes the difference...i bet wit her absense, Mlind wil realise how much he loves her and how much he need her
continue soon🤗

You people are making me feel even more bad about myself. I so wish I had written this part better. I think many had already guessed it was Ayesha but Ayesha will surprise you more tomorrow I hope (that is if I finish my update). Prachi has had to face two major shocks in a day, one her husband whom she thought had atleast developed some feelings for her appears to be still in love with his ex-gf and two, her very dear friend is that gf. I will cover what goes on in her mind in the update after next to give a feel of Prachi's emotions. Will Milsi realise her love? You'll know in my next update.

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