FF:Destiny's Children Pt XIV(2)(16/12) - Page 107

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Opti!😆I realise I just never came back...so apologies for that firstly! Just got caught up in things but am deff catching up soon!

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Part VIII (5) Prachi's an artist! I absolutely love that fact...dont know, cant explain why😆but makes me happy. (yes, call me sad! right now!) I mean, if you had such inspiration as Milind *swoon* How wouldn't become one! I'm glad that Milind found them...and there was a teasing manner in him which was reminecent of the post PA Milind, that was good.

And a wonderful way to bring up the Baba situation; about her visiting him!

Thanks Saima. I did mention in an earlier update that her two passions are drawing and singing. Thaks for pointing out the Baba issue. I had completely forgotten about it till then.

Part X (1) Firstly! Good reason to get Milind and Prachi going to Lonavala...you've covered all your bases Opti!
Actually when I said that Mala lived in Lonavala, I did not have the bike ride in mind. All I wanted to do is to get Mala out of the house on Michi first night. So I picked a place close to Mumbai. Later I realised that it came in handy to strengthen Michi bond. You see I have not plannned out the fic at all. It is going purely by instincts. Dont know how long I can carry on this way, though.

and Bike rides!! Wonderful! I love them!! and I'm sure Prachi and Milind enjoyed their's too😃...OMG...You've actually given me a GREAT idea..ahhh why Opti why?????????

It was such a sweet scene you penned there under the waterfall (but Prachi! White clothes and water...am shaking my head...not a good combo)

Why dont you like white wet Prachi? I thought that would be more seductive.

(2) Opti...I dunno why I never asked this before...but is Mishra a Marathi surname? Just got me curious.

No it is not. Mishras are either from Rajasthan, U.P., Orissa or Bihar. But people living in Mumbai end up celebrating all festivals since it is a cosmopolitan city.

I abolutely stunned by Milind especially in this bit,it was my favourite from the whole update. His uncle tried hard to smile at her but his paralysed facial muscles restricted the movement of his lips. He tried to say a few words but his speech was slurred and incomprehensible. Milind held his hand understandingly and asked him not to trouble himself. Mala held a glass of juice in her hand for him. Taking it from her, Milind made the old man sip it from the spoon he extended to him.

Why were you stunned by Milind?

Opti...😆😆😆at one point, I though Mala and Milind's friend would get together😆😆😆I know Silly of me....I gathered that from what...ONE ride home?😆Mmmmm....No comments now.

But seriously, Mala is one couragous girl! I applaud her strength and decision,👏...she's a brilliant, strong, admirable woman.Yes, I like strong women. You'll see them through my fic. There is Mala, ayesha and later you'll see Prachi too done the strong supportive woman avtar.

and Praci was very kind and right to defend her! But I cant help but think, the Family that shunned Mala's father once, doesn't deserve her at all. Nonetheless, perhaps they will treat her and her father justly.

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Was a lovely little scene between Milind and Prachi in the room, adorable and did you have to mention cockroach? I actually wont be able to sleep now😆...though I've never actually ever seen one!😕😆I'm terrified too, so Milind baby, I got your back.😉Sorry Rima, did not mean to sacre you. I dont like those creatures too.

Opti! Thank you for a wonderful read...will catch up with the remaining three tomorrow if time permits!😃 Loved it all!! thanks Rima. 👏As always you cheer me up with your comments and encourage me to do better.Will wait for the rest