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Posted: 17 years ago

hey Mimiiii.. so sorry for the late reply..been busy...😳 but i'm thrilled that you finally updated... very maddening part.!! uff this anita i could just bash her up and then some!!!😡 you've done a great job in letting the readers want to hate her.. ohhh. shes just horrible and Robbie is a close runner up!!! Reject table had me lol... god even i remember there being so called the popular table when i was going through school...you brought back some memories👏. I could just picture robbie telling off the lunch room lady...

okay wayy to much stuck up attitudes.. I cant wait to see how kasturi battles her way through this... 😉cause by the looks of it she has her work cut out for her...

sunshine the part was sooo very well written, for the negative feelings have been described perfectly not over done...👏

Muskaan is such a cutie.. she's quite the bubbly spirt.. i look forward to seeing what happens and who she gets paired up with.. okay hope you update sooner then soon...

I cant wait to see how you get Robbie the stuck up to fall head over heels in luv with simple sweet kasturi!!!

keep it rollling.. your awesome sunshine..

luv diiii

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nrasheed

hey Mimiiii..

Hey Dii! 😊

so sorry for the late reply..been busy...😳 but i'm thrilled that you finally updated...

Hey Dii! No probs! You had thrown a party yesterday right.. how was it? As far as updating goes.. I know, I've been very lazy ! LOL

very maddening part.!!

😕

uff this anita i could just bash her up and then some!!!😡 you've done a great job in letting the readers want to hate her..

I know I know.. I hate her too! Blagh! But I've started hating Anita after reading your FF lol, and I guess your little sister's taking on your footsteps 😉

ohhh. shes just horrible and Robbie is a close runner up!!!

LOL, ahww. Robbie's not that bad of a guy.. trust me 😉

Reject table had me lol... god even i remember there being so called the popular table when i was going through school...you brought back some memories👏.

Tehee. I know what you mean, there still is the whole division between so called populars and lames. It's quite sad actually..And I hope that the memories were of good ones.. 😛

I could just picture robbie telling off the lunch room lady...

Can't we all. Haha,

okay wayy to much stuck up attitudes.. I cant wait to see how kasturi battles her way through this... 😉cause by the looks of it she has her work cut out for her...

Mmhmm, she has a lot to work on

sunshine the part was sooo very well written, for the negative feelings have been described perfectly not over done...👏

Aww thank you so much Dii! Means SOOO much more then just words!

Muskaan is such a cutie.. she's quite the bubbly spirt.. i look forward to seeing what happens and who she gets paired up with.. okay hope you update sooner then soon...

She is, isnt she? I'll find someone perfect for her 😉 and I'll update soon dii! You do the same.. okie?

I cant wait to see how you get Robbie the stuck up to fall head over heels in luv with simple sweet kasturi!!!

😃 I think I'll get you to help me when that phase comes upon. LOL I'm so used to watchin the shows drag, that I don't realize that that's exactly what I do with my FF.

keep it rollling.. your awesome sunshine..

Your the one who's awesome dii! =)

luv diiii

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey Everyone! How're you all? I'm good thanks 😛 Okay, so this part MAY be boring to a lot of you (sorry no Robbie today) but this part unfolds some secrets that will hold MAJOR importance in the future! I've also added music to this part- at the end of this part you will get all the information of the songs (who sang them,etc) Okay so REALLY sorry if you get bored, but bare with me! In the next few parts, this story will take a major turn! 😉

Part 7- Father,Daughter moments

She quietly stepped into her house, carefully trying not to make a sound. JP must have been taking his evening nap, which he truly deserved after working the night shift at their store. After her mother passed away, JP had stepped into what the doctors called "depression." He'd begun working like a madman, not coming home for days!

Over that period of time, Kasturi had been living with Principal Gupta and his wife. Since they didn't have any children, Kasturi was never treated like a stranger. They spoiled her with gifts, and take extremely good care for Kasturi while her dad was gone.

But as the months passed, Kasturi had become more and more worried over her father. He was beginning to look ill, and became extremely tired over the smallest things. The doctors told him to lay off heavy work, it took time, but JP began calming down. And soon, he'd been taking only the night shifts.

JP didn't like to worry his daughter, so he came up with excuses, blaming his old age. But both knew that there was something horribly wrong with him. It wasn't until the summer of 2004 where Kasturi had found out that her father was a victim of blood cancer. The doctors predicted that JP had 2-5 years left to live. After that, her life had taken a drastic turn.

Her dad was everything for her; he was the reason why Kasturi wanted survive. And it pained to see her father dying in front of her, but she couldn't do anything about it. She couldn't save the only man she had loved so much!

JP: Kasturi! Honey, are you home?

Kasturi: Yea dad!

She walked into the kitchen, and grabbed an apple from the fruit basket.

Kasturi: What're you doing awake?

JP: Well, I was kind of hoping that we'd have a day all to ourselves you know? I mean, I don't have much time Kas-

She blocked his mouth.

Kasturi: No dad! (Eyes tearing up) Don't say that. (Voice fades off) Please.

Watching her daughter break in front him made JP became emotional. But he had to be strong. He had to be both a father and a mother to his daughter, and he swore to his wife that he would never give up on life. Even if he didn't have enough life in himself.

JP (breaking the tension): So, you ready to bake some cookies?

Kasturi: SURE! J

After months, Kasturi and her father were spending quality time with each other. They were very close, and shared a very strong bond- but after JP's illness had been discovered, Kasturi tried to distance herself from her father. She loved him, but she couldn't watch him die! He meant way too much to her, and she hated God for breaking her family.

Kasturi: Dad! You can't have the chocolate ones!

JP: But Kasturi! You always get the chocolate ones!

Kasturi: That's because I can eat chocolate- doctors told you to stay away from sweets, remember?

JP: Oh Kasturi! You're such a mom!

Both began laughing.

Kasturi: Like mother like daughter-

She stopped mid sentence.

Kasturi: D-dad, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to

JP: Mean to what? Kasturi come here! (puts one of his arms around her) Just because she's not here with us, doesn't mean that she won't be remembered. She'll always be your mother, and she'll always be my wife. J"

Kasturi: I know.

JP: Okay! So what're you standing around for! Go turn on some music!

Kasturi turned on the radio to her favourite station.

Song: What I like about you~ by the Romantics (link provided: http://youtube.com/watch?v=Jp5GhTty_TQ&feature=related)

Kasturi: C'mon Daddy!

She pulled her fathers hand and began dancing around the kitchen floor, pretending to sing into a mike (which was actually a spatula)

"What I like about you."

Kasturi (singing): You really know how to dance!

"Keep on whispering in my ear!"

JP singing: TELL ME ALL THE THINGS THAT I WANNA HEAR!

"Cause it's true! That's what I like about you!"

Kasturi: Daddy, I never knew you could dance that well (being sarcastic)

JP: You haven't seen anything yet!

After all that heavy duty dancing, Kasturi decided to take a seat, while her dad placed the cookies into the oven.

Radio person: Well that was "what I like about you" by the famous Romantics! And now, our last song for the hour... what we've all been waiting for! Give it up for Robbie's new release- me against the world!

This caught Kasturi's attention. She'd heard so many people go on and on about how good of a singer he was- she had to see this for herself.

(Guitar plays, and gets louder Song link: http://youtube.com/watch?v=y3VdqxS8mEs)

"We're not gonna be just a part of their game. We're not gonna be just the victims! They're taking our dreams and they tear them apart 'till everyone's the same!"

She tried to listen to the words, but the music was just so loud!

"I'm a nightmare, a disaster."

Kasturi (thinking to herself): You bet you are.

"That's what they always said. I'm a lost cause, not a hero. But I'll make it on my own. I've gotta prove them wrong. Me against the world. It's me against the world."

Kasturi: People actually like this stuff?

JP: Like what?

Kasturi: Oh! Dad you scared me! (turns off Radio) No, I was just listening to this song.

JP: It's certainly something I never pictured you listening to.

Kasturi (laughs): Daddy! It's just that the guy who sang this song happens to be our new student.

JP: Oh yes! Ram (principal Gupta) told me about some new students who arrived a few days ago. And you're handling them?

Kasturi: Yea. Unfortunately! I don't get why Ram uncle always puts me in charge. I have so much to do dad. I can't keep putting this extra load on me!

JP (sits beside Kasturi): Whoa whoa! Kasturi... what's wrong? You've never spoken like that before! Do you not like the new students?

"Like? HA! Like is a far way to go dad."

"Kasturi?"

Kasturi: Huh? Uh- no dad. It's nothing like that. I think I'll go get some sleep okay?

JP (calling after Kasturi, who's already headed upstairs): But the cookies?

Kasturi: I'll eat 'em tomorrow! I'm sure Muski and Raunak will love them too!

-- Next day, at Kasturi's locker

Kasturi was busy organizing her locker just like the way it was earlier. She placed her textbooks on the top left sideboard, and her notes on the bottom shelf. She tried stuffing her bag inside, but there was no room!

"Ugh! Stupid locker!"

Rahul, whose locker was beside Kasturi's, was having a hard figuring out how to use this "contraption."

Rahul: Uh. Kasturi?

"Yea, any problems?"

Rahul: How do you open this thing?

Kasturi couldn't help but laugh to herself. "You don't know how to open a locker Rahul?"

Rahul, totally embarrassed feeling as though he had asked the most stupid question ever, hesitated in answering her.

Kasturi: Here, let me help you!

She showed him step by step how to use a combination lock. Rahul had explained how in his previous private school, all the lockers had voice activated locks- not combos.

"There! J"

Rahul: Oh! So that's how it works! Thanks Kas!

Kasturi: No problem.

She went back to her organizing, when Muskaan approached her!

Muskaan: Oye! Are those Uncle J's cookies?

Before she could answer, Muskaan had already dug into Kasturi's bag and pulled out the cookies and began munching on them- 2 at a time.

Muskaan: Mmm! Kassy tere dad bohut acha baker hai! (Kassy, your dads an awesome baker!) I LOVE these things!

Rahul: Tumhe toh sab pasand hai! Suvar! (You love everything! Pig...)

Muskaan: Oye pagal! Suvar kisse keh rahi hai.. tu toh kissi kaam ka nahin hai! (You idiot! Who're you calling a pig- you good for nothing fool!)

Rahul: Kissi kaam ka nahin?? Kya isse zyada bezatti meri bhi tum kar sakte ho?? (GOOD FOR NOTHING? Is that the best insult you can come up with?)

Muskaan: Oh...isse bohut zyada kar sakti hoon... bewakoof, khota, pagal! (Oh I can come up with so much more! You loser, donkey, foolish retard!)

Kasturi, who had been watching Rahul and Muskaan fight for the past five minutes, was actually quite amused. It was funny how they argued over the strangest things- "What were Aunty and Uncle thinking, wanting to get them married?" But as soon as Muskaan grabbed Rahul's collar, she knew it would get violent!

Rahul: Ki karan wali hai tu?? Huh?? (What're you gonna do ' huh?)

Muskaan: Abhi dekatha hu! (I'll show you right now!)

Muskaan grabbed Rahul's sleeve, and both Kasturi and him watched in horror as she slowly tore it off the rest of his shirt.

Rahul: MY CASHMERE SHIRT! Tere toh!

Kasturi stepped in between the 2, not wanting to turn a simple argument into the talk of the school!

Kasturi: MUSKAAN! (grabs Muskaan's arm) What are you doing? What were you thinking! What's Rahul gonna tell people if they ask?

Muskaan: He should have thought of all that before messing with me. (Gives Rahul the fist, and walks off with Kasturi.)

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Haha, so you made it! 😃 Okay a few things to acknoledge:

1. The Hindi/Punjabi translations credit goes to Sonia Dii, whose kindly been willing to help me out while Mannu di is gone, so please everyone help me thank her!

2.The first song "What I like about you" is by the Romantics, who happen to be a really old band .. now don't think that I listen to old music, which I do at times, but I particularely like this song, and thought it would be perfect for this part!

3. The song "Me against the world" is sung by Simple plan- my favourite band, and I have a feeling I will be using a lot of thier songs! Maybe by the end of this FF, ya'll will love them as much as I do 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey mimiiii, lol me first!!! i was about to hound you to find out when you'll be updating...

okay I'm backkk..

ohh miiimii your an awesome sentimental, emotional writer.. i was soo moved by JP and Kasturi's daughter and father bonding.. it was sooo simple and sweet, them two baking aww they say baking is good for the soul...

and what is this JP is dying?? NOooooo that just breaks my heart😭 kasturi is going to be all alone..the way you said kasturi had been distancing herself from JP i totally understand how she feels about that.. for her dad must be going through hell over having to leave his daughter all alone.. soo sadd, you've written this part brilliantly.. luved it adn not at all boring.. it was just soo heart wrenching to read..superb.. mimiiii..

and lol you a romantics fan... yeah i know that song really well.. very cute how JP adn her were dancing to it.. 😳 moments kasturi will cherish when JP is gone.. 😭

and i died laughing when you wrote that line i'm a nightmare a disaster and kasturi said you bet you are had me🤣 it was a nice relief from the heartache i had reading about JP's death...

okay yeah the second song isnt my thing. but will try to listen to it later..😆 uggg perhaps i'm getting too old...😭

thank you soniaaa for helping my sunshine with the transliterations.. fantastic job...such a sweetie you are...👏

i really enjoyed rahul and muskan's fight it started with literally nothing, and bang they just tore into each other.. i luved it.. so funny how much these two luv to hate one another.. hmm perhaps there really is a fine line btw love and hate.. huh!!!!

really a well written part, it was sad, sweet, funny, took me through an emotional rollercoaster ride thanks sunshine..and i really hope you update sooon... i cant wait to read the next part...

fantastic....

luv diiiii

Edited by nrasheed - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesomely done 👏

Also I was in tears..... 😭 after reading the scene between Kasturi and her father... How sad 😕 Kasturi's father is dying and Kasturi can't even share her pain with anyone.... 😕

Kashish 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nrasheed

hey mimiiii, lol me first!!! i was about to hound you to find out when you'll be updating...

😆 I was about to do the same for you , but then I noticed that you updated Dastak and I was like "Oh YAY!"

okay I'm backkk..

ohh miiimii your an awesome sentimental, emotional writer.. i was soo moved by JP and Kasturi's daughter and father bonding.. it was sooo simple and sweet, them two baking aww they say baking is good for the soul...

😲 Really dii? Thank you 😳 Yea, I needed to show the bond b/w the 2, because I'm not sure if I'll keep JP's character alive for too long.. after all, there's no cure for cancer

Bakings good for the soul! Really? WOW! Too bad I can't cook or bake.. 😭 Looks like I'll be needing to take those tips from you! lol

and what is this JP is dying?? NOooooo that just breaks my heart😭

Ahww! Don't be sad Dii, things like that happen in real life! I've lost my grandpa to cancer.. *emotional*

kasturi is going to be all alone..the way you said kasturi had been distancing herself from JP i totally understand how she feels about that.. for her dad must be going through hell over having to leave his daughter all alone..

Yea... but hopefully by then I'll bring in someone who can be Kasturi's support system! I'm so glad you liked that part, I mean when I wrote it I thought everyone would be like "WTH?" .. but thanks dii!

soo sadd, you've written this part brilliantly.. luved it adn not at all boring.. it was just soo heart wrenching to read..superb.. mimiiii..

😃 Now that makes me give a 100 watt smile right there! Haha, THANK YOU DII! I guess I'm better with making someone cry rather then laugh 😕

and lol you a romantics fan... yeah i know that song really well.. very cute how JP adn her were dancing to it.. 😳 moments kasturi will cherish when JP is gone.. 😭

Not exactly a fan.. I love this song tho! You know it too! I was hoping that someone knew it, so they wouldnt think I'm musically challenged! 😆

and i died laughing when you wrote that line i'm a nightmare a disaster and kasturi said you bet you are had me🤣 it was a nice relief from the heartache i had reading about JP's death...

😆 Tehe, I'm not a really big fan of this song- I love simple plan, but not this song but the attitude it gave off was how I pictured Robbie! And HAHA I know, I personally thought that was the funniest thing I've ever written! Teehee I hope I didn't change the emotions too quicky, see I'm bad at the whole timing thing!

okay yeah the second song isnt my thing. but will try to listen to it later..😆 uggg perhaps i'm getting too old...😭

LOL ahww no your not! I dont really like this song, just liked the lyrics! I don't like rock and roll as much, but since he's a rockstar- I have to search day and night for the perfect songs!

thank you soniaaa for helping my sunshine with the transliterations.. fantastic job...such a sweetie you are...👏

Yess she is! Thanks Sonia dii, I hope you're reading this!

i really enjoyed rahul and muskan's fight it started with literally nothing, and bang they just tore into each other.. i luved it.. so funny how much these two luv to hate one another.. hmm perhaps there really is a fine line btw love and hate.. huh!!!!

Haha, I hope it wasnt too much! I'm creatively challenged too! but haha yes, they do love to hate each other 😆 As you can probably tell, Muskaan is WAAY out there.. poor Rahul and his Cashmere shirt! 😆

really a well written part, it was sad, sweet, funny, took me through an emotional rollercoaster ride thanks sunshine..and i really hope you update sooon... i cant wait to read the next part...

fantastic....

Thank you SOOO much dii! I'm glad you felt the emotions come alive! That's exactly what I wanted! Thanks for reading this torture, haha, I'm trying to be as good as the others.. but who knows when that'll happen!

Thanks again! Love you dii!

luv diiiii

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharman-Siya

Awesomely done 👏

Hey Kashish! How're you? I haven't been able to PM you in the longest, sorry for that babes! Thanks for liking!

Also I was in tears..... 😭 after reading the scene between Kasturi and her father... How sad 😕 Kasturi's father is dying and Kasturi can't even share her pain with anyone.... 😕

Ahww! Sorry to make you cry! But yea, It was really hard for me to write this part, because I used my own real life experiences. I'm just so glad you felt these emotions! Means so much!

Kashish 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
thanx dear.

itz sad that kasz father is fighting against cancer.poor gal she is having such a difficuilt time.

Robz knows himself too well haan. the song suits him best. 😆 .

rahul muski r cute and mad.i luv their madness. its fun 😆

iN all a beautiful part. i luved it. The interaction b/w father and daughter was beautiful.the part was simply awesum. dear u r doing a fab job. Keep on rocking 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Mimi
wowwwwwwwwwwww u updated finally lolz
no robbie 😭
but it was ok 4 this part.
The part was not boring it was interesting mimi as secrets did unfold
wowww ok JP working like a mad man he really is depressed init
ah ok kasturi lived with the principal aw thats sweet
omg JP got blood cancer. No wayyyyyyyyy only 2-5 years heck no i think i know where this storys heading or do i?????? 😕
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww 😭 thats so sad dont wory kasturi
aww baking cookies thats kul
😆 😆 😆 kasturi your such a mum
aw that songs kul goes with the scene kasturi n her dad r duin
omg kasturi pretending to sing awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how sweet
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww kasturi what a good singer robbie is
i gues youve got his song in this part 😆 😆
😆 his a night mare his a disaster
😆 😆 😆 kasturi robbies hard to handle but hey his mates not as bad as him 😆 😆
😆 😆 😆 rahul u dont knw hw 2 open d locker lolz it aynt as worse as not knowing how to use a sharpner 😆
ohhh rahul u just daynt cal her a pig muski calm dwn ok lolz
calm down - calm down - calm down
😆
mimi keep up the gr8 awesome fabulous superb work up
👏
update soon
Luv u loadz
Hummy
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Posted: 17 years ago
Heheh..Rahul and Muskaan are getting violent. 🤣

Where's Robbie?? Yeah RoKa fanfic seh zyaad Rahul-Muskaan fanfic lagta hai. 😆 Although you did a pretty good job with it! 😉 😳

Waiting for the next part soon...

-Yams

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