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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Super Kool

thanx dear.

Thanks for what Suvi dii?
itz sad that kasz father is fighting against cancer.poor gal she is having such a difficuilt time.

Yea... I was hoping that a lot of you will understand these emotions, because sadly cancer is one of the main reasons for death- it's an uncurable illness

Robz knows himself too well haan. the song suits him best. πŸ˜† .

Haha, Glad you liked it! It took me forever to find this song!

rahul muski r cute and mad.i luv their madness. its fun πŸ˜†

Haha, I know- we need some fun in our lives! I didn't want my FF to be so melodramatic, haha and w/o R-M it so would be.. πŸ˜•

iN all a beautiful part. i luved it. The interaction b/w father and daughter was beautiful.the part was simply awesum. dear u r doing a fab job. Keep on rocking πŸ‘

THANK YOU DII! Muah! My dad is SO important for me, so everytime I read or write a story, it's what makes me happy! And I really REALLY like how you're supporting me dii, means so much!

Lovee you,

Mimi

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Hey Mimi
wowwwwwwwwwwww u updated finally lolz

LOL Yess Hummy finally!
no robbie 😭
but it was ok 4 this part.

Haha okay- thanks for understanding! Robbie will be in the nest part- after all he is one of the main characters! πŸ˜‰
The part was not boring it was interesting mimi as secrets did unfold

Ahww! Thanks for not falling asleep lol! But this part was necessary in order to move the story onwards!
wowww ok JP working like a mad man he really is depressed init
ah ok kasturi lived with the principal aw thats sweet

😊 yea see principals come in handy lol
omg JP got blood cancer. No wayyyyyyyyy only 2-5 years heck no i think i know where this storys heading or do i?????? πŸ˜•

Yea, usually cancer victims dont get that long to live- especially in last stage, but I'm not a doctor, so ... lol I dunno where the story is going actually.. :S I usually come up with things along the way- but you're a smart person so PM me if you have any ideas!
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww 😭 thats so sad dont wory kasturi
aww baking cookies thats kul

LOL I love baking.. although I almost burnt my friends house down once.. πŸ˜•
πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† kasturi your such a mum

πŸ˜†
aw that songs kul goes with the scene kasturi n her dad r duin
omg kasturi pretending to sing awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how sweet

Thanks HUmmy! LOL I love that song too!
wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww kasturi what a good singer robbie is
i gues youve got his song in this part πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
πŸ˜† his a night mare his a disaster
πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† kasturi robbies hard to handle but hey his mates not as bad as him πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

LOL! It'll take her a LOONG time before she finds his music appealing! Haha
πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† rahul u dont knw hw 2 open d locker lolz it aynt as worse as not knowing how to use a sharpner πŸ˜†

LMAO! Haha... rich brats!
ohhh rahul u just daynt cal her a pig muski calm dwn ok lolz
calm down - calm down - calm down
πŸ˜†

Teehee, I know 'ey ? He started it- so muski had to show that guy how she handles people who mess with her!
mimi keep up the gr8 awesome fabulous superb work up
πŸ‘
update soon
Luv u loadz
Hummy

Thank yu Hummy! I'm working on the next part! Will post very soon!

Muah!


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yummys

Heheh..Rahul and Muskaan are getting violent. 🀣

LOL! That's Rahul-Muskaan for you! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†

Where's Robbie??

He'll be back soon! 😊

Yeah RoKa fanfic seh zyaad Rahul-Muskaan fanfic lagta hai. πŸ˜† Although you did a pretty good job with it! πŸ˜‰ 😳

LOL oh don't worry about that! RoKa were and will always be the main characters, their story will progress very soon! But thanks so much! I''m glad you liked it!

Waiting for the next part soon...

I won't make you wait for too long! Thanks so much!

-Yams

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi guys! Thanks so much for all your support! Means SOOO much, seriously! It's an overwhelming response, especially for a first timer! Thank you all! Love you guys!

P.S Does anybody know where Jaanu went missing? lol She's been gone for the longest!

-- Mimi
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Posted: 17 years ago
*Hey guys! Here's the new part, I'm gonna move the story on a faster pace.. a lot of people have quit reading Opposites, and I dont want you all doing that! So I'm gonna try my hardest to please you all, and so I need some feedback! What do you want happening, and blah blah! =) I wanna keep you all happy, and to those of you have stuck with me through this journey, thank you SO much!
P.S My table of contents is sort of screwed up at the moment, I'll go and fix that asap!
Part 8- He says She says

Anita: Rahul! What happened to your shirt?

Rahul forged his arrogant smile. He couldn?t let this ruin his reputation; he had to come up with something fast!

Rahul: Actually- it's a new style. You know (modeling himself, walking up and down the stairs)

Robbie: New style my foot! It looks like someone tore the sleeve right off of you!

Rahul was totally embarrassed "Robbie! C'mon man! Someone tore this off my shirt (begins fake laughing) You?re such a joker!"

Rahul (thinking of a way to change the subject): Yo! Robbie- catch!!

He had thrown a basketball towards Robbie, which caught him off guard! Robbie took fast steps back, trying to catch the ball that had been flying in the air. He wanted to show the ?chicks? how good we was.

Robbie wasn?t watching his step, and Kasturi was busy revising facts for her history exam, both weren?t paying attention.

Robbie (reaching out for the ball): I got it!

He leaped out to catch it-

Kasturi (murmuring): French men, English men- 2 prime groups. Natives, Vikings.

Robbie took a step backwards, while Kasturi took a step forward. Robbie caught the ball, accidentally causing Kasturi to fall to the ground.

Kasturi: Ow! You idiot!

She squeezed her elbow, which pained from rug burn.

Kasturi: Can't you watch where you're going?

Robbie turned around to see which rude fool had been throwing insults at him, and interrupting his game.

Both: YOU!

Robbie: I'm not surprised. Only goofs like you would complain.

Kasturi: Complain? You pushed me!

Robbie: I pushed you? No I didn't! Why don't YOU watch where you?re going?

Kasturi was appalled by Robbie?s behavior. Instead of apologizing, he just went back to playing his little catch game with Rahul.

"Ouch!"

She watched the palms of her hands change from different shades of red. The rug was really old and rough, which made her hand burn every time she pressed onto it to get up.

Robbie: Oh c'mon!

He lent out his hand for support.

Kasturi: I'd rather die then get any help from you.

Robbie: Fine!

He turned around and walked away.

Kasturi: Uh! What a jerk!

-- Upstairs, in history class

Muskaan: But Kassy! You told him not to help you!

Kasturi: I know! But it's just an exaggeration! I didn't mean it!

Muskaan: Oh Kasturi. He's new; it'll take him a while to understand you r"figures of speech." After all, it took me 2 years.

Kasturi took her seat and pulled out her notebooks to do some final studying.

Raunak: Hey!

"Oh. Hey Raunak! How're you?"

Raunak: I'm good. What happened to you? You're arms look all red.

Kasturi: Ugh. Don't even ask.

Raunak: Does it hurt a lot? (Getting worried) I'll get some ice for you!

Kasturi: Raunak- I'm fine. Don't worry about it. So, how did your studying go?

Raunak (not convinced): Good. But it's hard remembering it all.

Raunak and Kasturi's conversation had been interrupted by a loud noise- initially; this sound was to catch the attention of all students and staff members before an announcement, but the speakers had broken down, causing untimely screeching noises throughout the school.

Announcement: Attention all students and staff members. As most of you may know, it's the time of year again where we hold our annual sports day. Starting next week- various types of sports and activities will be held all throughout campus. Students will be divided into 5 teams, and compete for the trophy. The lists have been made! Teachers please send a runner down to the main office to collect these lists.

"Screeching noise."

Muskaan: Psst! Kassy!

Muskaan threw pieces of paper at Kasturi to catch her attention.

Kasturi: WHAT!

Muskaan handed her a note.

"Aren't you excited? I?ve been waiting for this all year!?"

Kasturi wasn't really the sporty type. She wasn't really looking forward to this "big" event; it was just a waste of time and money. Why couldn't they have something more meaningful- like a science fair or something?

Teacher: Kasturi!

Kasturi- startled, dropped the note out of her hands.

Teacher: Why do you look so tensed dear?

Kasturi: No reason...

"Thank god she didn?t see the note!?"

Teacher: Go down to the main office and get the lists please.

She rushed out of her seat, and ran down the stairs.

After getting the papers, she was walking back to class, when she overheard someone talking.

"But mom! I hate it here!?"

Kasturi poked her head from the side of the wall. The person was speaking into a phone, it seemed as if there were a very heated conversation going on. She tried looking to see who it was, but there back was to her.

"No! You don?t understand! IM A F'EN BILLIONARE DAMMIT! HOW CAN YOU EXPECT ME TO STAY HERE!?"

Kasturi quietly walked towards the person.

"MOM! I demand you get me out of here! I can't stand this place- nor the people here! UGH! I'M DONE!"

They slammed down the phone, and threw it on the ground.

Kasturi watched the screen shatter into billions of smaller pieces.

She carefully placed her hand on the person's shoulder.

"Are you okay?"

She felt a strong hand touch hers. Kasturi watched the person turn around, she was shocked to see Robbie.

Kasturi: R-Robbie?

His eyes were bloodshot red. Was he crying? He looked angry- really angry.

Kasturi: Who were you talking to? Why're you so mad? You can tell me, you know?

He gave no answer to her questions. Kasturi wanted to help- she hated seeing someone sad!

"Robbie. I can help, just tell me what's wrong." She tried speaking as calmly as she could.

Robbie: NO! GET LOST!

Kasturi: No! Robbie, you can talk about it. It'll help you feel better!

She watched Robbie shake in anger. Kasturi could tell he wanted her to leave. She decided that would be the best thing to do, so Kasturi tried walking away. But Robbie held tightly onto her hand and pulled her towards him. Her heart skipped a beat, what was he doing? Kasturi gave him a confused stare.

Robbie pushed her against the wall and clutched onto both her arms. He stepped closer towards her, his nose brushed against her cheek.

"Robbie! Let go of me!"

She tried pushing him away, but his grip was too strong. Kasturi stood hopelessly, she felt hot tears stream down her face.

Robbie: YOU KASTURI CHAWLA- mind your own business! I've taken a lot of crap from you, and a lot of crap from everyone else- no more! Who do you think you are interfering in MY life? HUH? (He squeezed her wrist tightly)

Kasturi let out a squeal of pain.

"You're hurting me! LET GO!"

Robbie: And who the hell asked for your help? I don't need anything from you- understand? I HATE YOU AND I HATE THIS DAMN SCHOOL!

He released Kasturi from his grip. Her hands felt numb, and her eyes had swollen up from crying. She couldn't believe what had just happened. Kasturi just wanted to help- why had Robbie reacted this way?

Robbie was driven back to reality. He didn't mean to release his anger on Kasturi, but he couldn't control the rage and frustration building inside of him.

Robbie: Kasturi I- I didn't mean to

Kasturi: Just save it okay! I don't wanna hear any bull from you Mr. Sabarwal! I'm sorry I even tried helping!

Kasturi ran up the stairs, leaving him there alone.

"SHIT!"
Edited by mimi0295 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Oh, Yeah! You updated again!!πŸ‘πŸ»

The last part was a little confusing, Robbie took his anger out on her and then said he didn't mean to do it.Ermm

BTW, why are all your ' replaced with a question mark ?πŸ₯°

I don't know about others, but you still got me hooked to it.πŸ˜‰

Are Anita and Rahul and Robbie suppose to be friends?

Waiting for the next part soon...

-Yams
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Posted: 17 years ago
Mimiiiii, you finally posted, and my lucky break that i finally am logged onto the forum in a such a long time... well kinda feels like a long time.. anyway i really was happy to see that you posted your next part and that the story is moving at such an awesome speed... loved this part sooo much, it had such intensity and man when robbie grabbed kasturi by the lockers i thought he'd be sobbin his sad story but nope he just was his normal rude self, i liked how you made him feel really lousy at the end though. hope something good happens btween the two HINT HINT..LOL....
okay i loved how this sports teams day.. that sounds very promising to bring kas and robbie together..
and i luved how robbie was playing catch and bumped into kasturiii.. UFF these two are forever crossing into each other, its sooo cute.. i feel their electricity whenever their together, your doing such a fantabulous job Sunshine.. this part was soo peepy and full of just spunk.. awesome job really well written please continue.. cant wait to see if roka are on the same team...jaaldiii likhoooo... pleaseeeeee...
I just realized that robbie right now always ends up giving pain to kasturi but i'm sure there will come a time where all he will want to do is protect her and give her his undying love.. cant wait.....
sunshine its been such a termendous pleasure reading Opposites... i really find that your talents are exactly like your nick name sunshine.. it keeps giving me warmth even after reading it.... leaves such a warm feeling inside.. lov you loads...diiiiiii
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yummys

Oh, Yeah! You updated again!!πŸ‘πŸ»

LOL yeah I did!

The last part was a little confusing, Robbie took his anger out on her and then said he didn't mean to do it.Ermm
I know, I'm sorry, I wrote it all in one day! I'll try not doing that next time! Sorry!

BTW, why are all your ' replaced with a question mark ?πŸ₯°
I dunno, it's not like that on my computer, But I'll go edit it again! lol

I don't know about others, but you still got me hooked to it.πŸ˜‰
Ahww Thank youu! πŸ₯° I'll try to keep you hooked!

Are Anita and Rahul and Robbie suppose to be friends?
Not exactly friends, just the rich spoiled brat gang! lol I'll focus more on them on the next part to clear
out any other confusions!

Waiting for the next part soon...

-Yams
Thank you Yamzyy! Means so much to me! Thank you thank you THANK YOU!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nrasheed

Mimiiiii, you finally posted, and my lucky break that i finally am logged onto the forum in a such a long time... well kinda feels like a long time.. anyway i really was happy to see that you posted your next part and that the story is moving at such an awesome speed...
Diii! =D You're finally online!! LOL I know what you mean, 2 hours for me seems like a really long time!
loved this part sooo much, it had such intensity and man when robbie grabbed kasturi by the lockers i thought he'd be sobbin his sad story but nope he just was his normal rude self, i liked how you made him feel really lousy at the end though. hope something good happens btween the two HINT HINT..LOL....
LOL Thanks! I wrote it all in one shot, I didnt really think anyone would like it.. but again you have proven me wrong! πŸ₯° lol I get the HINT HINT, so I'm hoping you get my HINT HINT too! Haha
okay i loved how this sports teams day.. that sounds very promising to bring kas and robbie together..
Haha, I will not disappoint you! (I hope)
and i luved how robbie was playing catch and bumped into kasturiii.. UFF these two are forever crossing into each other, its sooo cute.. i feel their electricity whenever their together, your doing such a fantabulous job Sunshine..
OMG DII! Stoop it.. you're making me blush! πŸ₯° I love you for loving them! I try my best to create characters like you have! Thanks DIII!! And fantabulous! Omg I love that word!
this part was soo peepy and full of just spunk.. awesome job really well written please continue.. cant wait to see if roka are on the same team...jaaldiii likhoooo... pleaseeeeee...
AHWW! Thank youuu! *blush blush Sports part will be the next one... I think I'll get some help from you! Haha, there is no way that I'll be able to portray that part in a good way!
I just realized that robbie right now always ends up giving pain to kasturi but i'm sure there will come a time where all he will want to do is protect her and give her his undying love.. cant wait.....
Ahww, I know! I'm focusing on Kasturi (the real serial's) initial storyline, as I mentioned before! So there will be some.. a LOT of similarities, but no big twists and drags.. I hope lol
sunshine its been such a termendous pleasure reading Opposites... i really find that your talents are exactly like your nick name sunshine.. it keeps giving me warmth even after reading it.... leaves such a warm feeling inside.. lov you loads...diiiiiii
AWWWWWWWWWWWW! (Big hug) Thank you dii! Reading your comments leave me smiling so wide! The first thing I ever do before making a post is pray that my dii will like it! Because you are the one who makes people like me want to do something! Muah!

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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwww mimi u updated
dnt wori im stil readin ur FF n im sure laodza oda ppl r
keep up the awesome work n dnt wori u cn always count on me on readin ure parts.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I think
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† lol rahul what happend to your shirt lolz muskaan wat dd u do lolz
robbie u wana shw d chiks hw good u r at basket ball u catched the ball but kasturi 2 busy revisin
lolz haha go kasturi you called him an idiot
lolz You both shoked on seeing each other
awwwwwwww kasturi it really pained u init awwwwwww robbie u r such an idiot lol or as u say a jerk
lolz yh kasturi he did offer to help you thats shockin coming from robbie
πŸ˜†πŸ˜† wowwwwwww 2 years that long that means its going to take robbie for ever
awwwww raunaks always dre 4 her hw sweet what a m8.
ice awwwwwwww lol
omg muski u might excited but kasturi a science fair come on
ok that person talking is definately robbie lol
woww u smashed d phone robbie calm dwn
aw kasturi u care but its R robbie
wowwwwww robbie ure proper angry
aww kasturi you cnt see someone sad even if its your own enemy lolz
ok robbie you holding kasturis hand like that pulling her towards you
aw robbie shes only trying to help you
n you think youve taken a lot more like kasturis taken a lot 4rm u
omg robbie you took your anger at wrng tym n she was onyl trying to help
yh u messed up big tym robbie
wowwwwwwwwwww mimi that part was jus awesome
keep up the gr8 awesome work
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update soon wen uve dun d nxt part
Love you loadz
Hummy
xxxxx

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