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Posted: 17 years ago
hey mimmi,
sorry for not posting any comments for sooooooooo long. and u know in one of the part where robbie took over her locker, it's not possible cuz i don't think teachers would do that here in canada. it was funny how anita ripped rahul's shirt. and wat was more hilarious was wen rahul walked up and down the stairs trying to walk like a model. i couldn't stop laughing, man.and that falling part of kasturi was described very well. can see the efforts ur putting in mimiπŸ‘πŸ» and wen she said that she doesn't need his help and didn't really mean that, could def understand that , i do that a lot. hahaha. and wen rob got his frustration out on her, was real, cuz i see that happening a lot these aday, teens do that a lot these adays. keep it up mimmi. wanted to know that r u punjabi?
love
harman😜
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Posted: 17 years ago
The page is screwed up.. lol I'll reply to all your comments as soon as I get a little spare time! Thanks Herman, and Hummy! Will reply asap!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

wowwwww mimi u updated

dnt wori im stil readin ur FF n im sure laodza oda ppl r
Ahww! Thanks HUmmy! I hope so, I mean I know the beginning ish parts are pretty boring, but It'll get better.. I'm really hoping so! I mean I have so many ideas, I just cant get it to fit in a story! haha
keep up the awesome work n dnt wori u cn always count on me on readin ure parts.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† I think
lol, you better! Teehee, or I will hunt you down too! Oh and what happened to that FF I was nagging you to write?
πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† lol rahul what happend to your shirt lolz muskaan wat dd u do lolz
lol πŸ˜†
robbie u wana shw d chiks hw good u r at basket ball u catched the ball but kasturi 2 busy revisin
lolz haha go kasturi you called him an idiot
LOL girls rock! =D
lolz You both shoked on seeing each other
awwwwwwww kasturi it really pained u init awwwwwww robbie u r such an idiot lol or as u say a jerk
Haha! "Jerk" well he is now isnt he?
lolz yh kasturi he did offer to help you thats shockin coming from robbie
lol Just goes to show that he isnt that bad of a guy, like she thinks he is
πŸ˜†πŸ˜† wowwwwwww 2 years that long that means its going to take robbie for ever
awwwww raunaks always dre 4 her hw sweet what a m8.
ice awwwwwwww lol
Lmao! Yeah, I havent really used Raunak in the story, so had to pop him in there somewhere, because later on he will play a prominent role... you'll see!
omg muski u might excited but kasturi a science fair come on
LOL omg I personally HATE science fair, we had one this year... but I got second place (and it was my first one, so I'm happy lol) But like Muski, I'd choose sports... I'm more like Muski then I am of Kasturi!
ok that person talking is definately robbie lol
woww u smashed d phone robbie calm dwn
lol anger management much?
aw kasturi u care but its R robbie
πŸ₯° Had to drop some hints
wowwwwww robbie ure proper angry
aww kasturi you cnt see someone sad even if its your own enemy lolz
LOL just like our real or should I say reel Kasturi =P
ok robbie you holding kasturis hand like that pulling her towards you
aw robbie shes only trying to help you
n you think youve taken a lot more like kasturis taken a lot 4rm u
If only he understood...
omg robbie you took your anger at wrng tym n she was onyl trying to help
yh u messed up big tym robbie
LOL wow HUmmy! So much enthusiasm! I love it! =D
wowwwwwwwwwww mimi that part was jus awesome
keep up the gr8 awesome work
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update soon wen uve dun d nxt part
Love you loadz
Hummy
AHWW! Thank you babes! Your such a sweetheart! I'll let you know! I'm hoping to update tomorrow, because starting friday I'll be in B.C vacationing! (H)
xxxxx

Edited by mimi0295 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Herman_4u

hey mimmi,

Hey Herman!! How're you?
sorry for not posting any comments for sooooooooo long.
Ahw! Dont worry about it, no need for any sorry's! =D
and u know in one of the part where robbie took over her locker, it's not possible cuz i don't think teachers would do that here in canada.
Hmm, well I dunno about University/Highschool, but it has happened in my school before (I live in Canada) and well I guess it was wrong, because the teacher (wont mention any names for their personal rights, blah blah) was showing more favourtism towards the pasticular student. And Like I said, haha I am definately not the down to facts type of person.. lol so this FF is more like a fairy tale.. sorry for that! But thanks for letting me know! I'll definately keep that all in mind! πŸ™‚
it was funny how anita ripped rahul's shirt.
Lol Muskaan ripped his shirt, not Anita! lmao
and wat was more hilarious was wen rahul walked up and down the stairs trying to walk like a model. i couldn't stop laughing,
AWW Really? That makes me SOO SOOO SOOOOOOOO happy!! πŸ˜€ I'm glad you liked it, seriously I think thats one of the best comments I've ever received! Muah!
man.and that falling part of kasturi was described very well. can see the efforts ur putting in mimiπŸ‘πŸ»
Thank youuu! That was the one part I worked on most. All that editing, and re-editing.. UGH drove me insane! But I'm glad you liked the final outcome! Thanks so much!
and wen she said that she doesn't need his help and didn't really mean that, could def understand that , i do that a lot. hahaha.
LOL don't we all? I remember being so upset at my friends for not being there with me when I was learning how to ride a bike, and when they came later to hang out and asked If I needed any help I told them off! Lol, I feel so bad looking back now, because I dint mean it, and I was angry at them for not understanding where I was coming from. But then again, they aren't mind readers, so it was technically my fault! =P
and wen rob got his frustration out on her, was real, cuz i see that happening a lot these aday, teens do that a lot these adays. keep it up mimmi.
Yea I knw.. Ouch It's sad, but reality is reality, and we cant change that! A lot of attrocious things happen ot those people. Sad.
wanted to know that r u punjabi?
Lol No I'm not! I dont know anything about Punjabis, but I love how they speak and all! My Rahul-Muskaan dialogues are really good because I get only the BEST people (Mannu dii and Sonia Dii) to help me translate. I can't speak any other language rather then English/French, and a but of Bengali. Haha!
love
harman😜

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Posted: 17 years ago
opps, i'm very bad with name mimmi, sometimes it takes me a month to memorize new people's name. lol. i just remember that it was kasturi's friend, and yeah anita is her enemy. and yea teacher def favour sum ppl more than others, it happens to everyone in schools, but i just thought giving someone's locker to someone else was kinda too much. anyways, don't take long to update.
love
harman😜
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi mimi...i hope u r exams r over...yep i finished reading all the parts of ur FF from the begining ...
part1: gud introduction of kasturi and raunak...while introducing itself u showed that kastui is an outstanding student....i liked that...
raunak is her best friend and he has ADHD omg...ramkapoor as a principal...yes he suits for that character...
part2: gud introduction of robbie and rahul....poor nandu kaka he is all in one in sabarwal house...missing his daily soaps cuz of robbie.....ufff..
robbie should go to public school...gud idea mimi...in that way robbie can come in contact with normal middle class brilliant people like kasturi...
part3:introduction of robbie to kasturi as a new student..fantastic idea mimi ...
part4:so...robbie is a attitude wala...ummmm...i love the bubbly muskaan...she said pagal billi and khote to rahul..he..heee...heeeee...this part remainded me my few years back college days...
ur panjaabi language is excellent...
part5:robbie refered kasturi as chick....heeeeeeee..i love it...
Annual migration idea was very gud...ur seating arrangement were fantastic..rahul-muskaan,robbie-kasturi,anitha-gattu..where from u get all these ideas..???
ohhhh u have gattu too in ur FF ...that is so nice..i luv that character...i watch BBB regularly...
robbie trying to sharpen his pencil...mimi it is so funny to imagine rock star robbie sharpening his pencil......heeeeeeeeeee...
part6:canteen scene was very well narrated...kasturi said anitha's dad had a big hand in contributing to global warming...heeeeeeee...
part7:JP was suffering from blood cancer..o...no..mimi...it is pathatic already kasturi has no mother...if she loss her dad too...that will be very sad...
SIMPLE PLAN song was very good i liked it....
part8: this part moved in jet speed...robbie showed his frustration on kasturi...poor girl who realy want to help him ..never mind i think things will be ok between robbie kasturi soon...waiting for ur next part...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesomely written Mimi

Please continue soon

Sneha
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Posted: 17 years ago
yaar mimi u r tooooo gud.πŸ‘πŸ» i really luved the part. Poor kas every time robz irritates her.lolz.πŸ˜†
The best part was wen robz takes out all his frustration on kas and then realises wat he has dun. u kno it actually happens coz of anger and frustration we tend to say things which we actually never wanna say.Ouch u potrayed it so well.πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»
Lil girl u r a bundle of talent.keep on rocking!!!!πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Herman_4u

opps, i'm very bad with name mimmi, sometimes it takes me a month to memorize new people's name.
LOL dont worry about it! I'm really bad with names too! I cant even remember all my cousins names properly! lmao
lol. i just remember that it was kasturi's friend, and yeah anita is her enemy.
LOL good start!! =D
and yea teacher def favour sum ppl more than others, it happens to everyone in schools, but i just thought giving someone's locker to someone else was kinda too much. anyways, don't take long to update.
Yea, they do. I've been in that position so many times. I had to give up my locker to this retard.. but that was like in grade 5! I really appreciate the feedback Harman! Thanks babes!
love
harman😜

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: robbii

hi mimi...i hope u r exams r over...yep i finished reading all the parts of ur FF from the begining ...

Hey Shumi dii! How're you? I'm good thanks! Yeah exams are long over! lol Ahww, you read them all! Sorry if I put you to sleep! lol
part1: gud introduction of kasturi and raunak...while introducing itself u showed that kastui is an outstanding student....i liked that...
Ahww! Thank youuuuu!!!! I'm glad you liked it! XD
raunak is her best friend and he has ADHD omg...ramkapoor as a principal...yes he suits for that character...
Yeah, he had ADHD, I wanted to have each character where someone could relate to them! Haha, thanks! Everyone loves Ram Kapoor!
part2: gud introduction of robbie and rahul....poor nandu kaka he is all in one in sabarwal house...missing his daily soaps cuz of robbie.....ufff..
Haha I know! Nandu Kaka, ahh I miss him! He'll be back soon! He plays an important role too!
robbie should go to public school...gud idea mimi...in that way robbie can come in contact with normal middle class brilliant people like kasturi...
Thank you dii! Yeah, that was basically the whole storyline! lol
part3:introduction of robbie to kasturi as a new student..fantastic idea mimi ...
Thanks so muchhhh!!
part4:so...robbie is a attitude wala...ummmm...i love the bubbly muskaan...she said pagal billi and khote to rahul..he..heee...heeeee...this part remainded me my few years back college days...
ur panjaabi language is excellent...
lol yeah the typical Robbie! Ahw thank you! I love Muskaan too! Haha, Rahul- Muskaan fights will continue on! Teehee, really? Ooh sounds interesting! What happened?
And as far as the language goes, all the credit goes to Mannu dii and Sonia dii, because they are the ones who translate all the Hindi/Punjabi words for me! If I were to try without help... ahaha I dont think anyone wants to know what will happen!
part5:robbie refered kasturi as chick....heeeeeeee..i love it...
lol πŸ˜†
Annual migration idea was very gud...ur seating arrangement were fantastic..rahul-muskaan,robbie-kasturi,anitha-gattu..where from u get all these ideas..???
Thank youu! Haha I was creatively struck that day.. lol Uhmm, well if you;ve read Whispers in the wind by Robina dii, then you'll see how much I hated Anita in her FF. So I basically hate her here too, and therefore she deserves the worse no? lol But being honest, I love Gattu! I needed him in there!
ohhhh u have gattu too in ur FF ...that is so nice..i luv that character...i watch BBB regularly...
lol I love him tooo! He's SOOO cutee!
robbie trying to sharpen his pencil...mimi it is so funny to imagine rock star robbie sharpening his pencil......heeeeeeeeeee...
LOL πŸ˜† I'm sorry, I coulnt think of anything else, i mean it was really dumb, but it was the best I could do that day! I was having exam preps, but I wanted to write! lol Sciene was on my mind, so you can basically tell from the class lectures
part6:canteen scene was very well narrated...kasturi said anitha's dad had a big hand in contributing to global warming...heeeeeeee...
Ahw Thank youuuuu! Yea, I'm such a nerd at times. lol I love how you do that "heeee" so cute! lol
part7:JP was suffering from blood cancer..o...no..mimi...it is pathatic already kasturi has no mother...if she loss her dad too...that will be very sad...
Ouch I know! But JP's illness has a very very VERY important part later on in the story, you'll see!
SIMPLE PLAN song was very good i liked it....
Thank youu! I'm glad you did! I needed a cocky-ish song for Robbie!
part8: this part moved in jet speed...robbie showed his frustration on kasturi...poor girl who realy want to help him ..never mind i think things will be ok between robbie kasturi soon...waiting for ur next part...
Shumi dii, thank you! I feel so touched that you actually read ALL the parts! You're so awesome di! Thank you so so SO much! It means so much to a first timer like myself!

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