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Posted: 17 years ago

@ DMG12- 😃 Back at ya!

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Hey Mimi
U finaly updated lolz
Thnx 4 letn me knw

Heyy Hummy! LOL I know I know! No probs!
Ok this is 4 u:
👏
& Im sure ul do gr8 in your exams best of luck 4 the rest of them

AWWW Thanks SOOO much!

2 weeks omg hw am i gna live 😆 😆 😆

😕 You can read all the other AWESOME 'Fics we have here!
Nw wd d part:
😆 😆 😆 Robbie you'll never change dont either 😆 😆
Ok Muskaan makes me laf her teling kasturi who her parents were gan get her married 2 😆

LOL! Im glad Muski makes you laugh!
OMG Anita get over it although i kwn its ROBBIE SABHARWAL
Ok raunak lolz yh i knw poor robbie anitas all over him

😆
hahahah anita u neva got 2 sit nxt 2 robbie but gatuu poor him

LMAO! Haha, you're like HAHA Anita! And AWW poor Gattu baby! LOL
Ok muskaan and rahul siting together that was obvious Haha I know! How "predictable"
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Ok i had a feeling kasturi and robbie had to sit together 😆 😆 😆
Rahul aynt a bakwas name 😆 😆 😆

I know 'ey?
😆 omg robbie dont knw hw to sharpen a pencil omg omg omg rockstar

Teehe, sorry I couldnt think of anything else, I was studying for science and all I could think about was "sciency" stuff
Ok dotn bribe kasturi although its $100 lolz kasturi wont take it 😆
Nobody says no to robbie and now robbie kasturi does 😆 😆 😆
Lol yh if u say robbie kasturi will come begging for that $100

HAHA! Totally, lets see what he does 😉
Mimi u rock totally
👏 👏
keep up the gr8 work
gud luck wd ure exams
tc
luv u loadz
Hummy

Thank you Hummyy! MUAH! You rock! 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Mimiiii, hey fantastic part.. i didnt even know when you updated, haven't been reg. on the forum...sorry for the late reply...😳

okay back to bidness.!!!

this part was sooo funny, so cute and just all around perfect.!!!!! cant tell you how much i enjoyed reading it... faabulous !!!

Really luved robbie and Kasturi's conversations, for i cant wait to see how robbie eventually falls for kasturi, (for i have this gut feeling robbie will fall in luv first..lets see if i'm right or wrong)

and it was soo wonderful that kasturi didnt let robbie bribe her...but i have a feeling kasturi will have to pay for it, 😭 hope robbie isnt too hard on her.!!!

and Gattu of BBB paired with anita was brilliant, totally knocked me off my seat🤣and him licking his fingers and then offering to shake anita's hand was just scene that i could picture in my head.. wow.. your amazing sunshine..

and rahul totally got told off died laughing at their lines sooo well done.. this part had the right dose of laughter, humour, kindness(from kasturi towards gattu, totally agreed) and flirtyness...wayy to gooo.. am soo missing you sunshine, cant wait for your exams to be back.. take care...

luv diiii

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nrasheed

Mimiiii, hey fantastic part.. i didnt even know when you updated, haven't been reg. on the forum...sorry for the late reply...😳

Heyyy Diiii! Thank you 😳 Aww its okay! I don't have the time to reply to all the comments properly, so when I'm officially back I'll personalize all my replies!

okay back to bidness.!!!

this part was sooo funny, so cute and just all around perfect.!!!!! cant tell you how much i enjoyed reading it... faabulous !!!

😃 U really think so? Haha THANKSSSSSS! But its nowhere near perfect! I have yet a lot to learn!

Really luved robbie and Kasturi's conversations, for i cant wait to see how robbie eventually falls for kasturi, (for i have this gut feeling robbie will fall in luv first..lets see if i'm right or wrong)

LOL Thanks Dii! i thought they were pretty lame. Haha! Being a writer and all [and im sure you know this] I can't reveal any information on the upcoming parts! LOL ... that and the fact that I myself don't know whats going to happen!

and it was soo wonderful that kasturi didnt let robbie bribe her...but i have a feeling kasturi will have to pay for it, 😭 hope robbie isnt too hard on her.!!!

Yea, she won't take money from a stranger 😛 I'll try to not make it as violent as I was planning [LOL!] I'm just joking!

and Gattu of BBB paired with anita was brilliant, totally knocked me off my seat🤣and him licking his fingers and then offering to shake anita's hand was just scene that i could picture in my head.. wow.. your amazing sunshine..

😃 THANK YOU DIIII! Haha I love Gattu! 😳 Imagine... Him and Anita WOW! What a couple! I'm SOOO happy it made you laugh!

and rahul totally got told off died laughing at their lines sooo well done.. this part had the right dose of laughter, humour, kindness(from kasturi towards gattu, totally agreed) and flirtyness...wayy to gooo.. am soo missing you sunshine, cant wait for your exams to be back.. take care...

luv diiii

Haha, Thanks Dii! For some reason, I never get tired of writing for R-M, but I thank Mannu di and Sonia for the amount of help they've given me throughout making these characters possible! Thank you both! MUAH!

And My first exam is tomorrow 😕 I'm scared dii! I'll let you know how I do! Haha, and I miss you a lot! But I'll be back regularely very soon!

Love,

Your Sunshine

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Posted: 17 years ago
Dude....I just read this right now & its mind-blowing; continue soon

Kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
^^Hey sweetie! Thanks so much! I'll update when exams are over, but until then: uhmm.. Keep smiling? :P

--Mimi
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi0295

^^Hey sweetie! Thanks so much! I'll update when exams are over, but until then: uhmm.. Keep smiling? :P

--Mimi



All the best for your exam....Mini

Kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Thanks! Haha its Mimi =)



Cool... 😉 Nice name

Kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey Little Baby 🤗

Wonderfull Part dear hamesha ki tarah 👏😳

Wow Anita aur gattu 😆😆...and mere robbie aur kastu 😳

Lekin yee robbie kab sudhrega 😡..sudher jaa ..aur chup chaap pyar karna shuru kar 😉😆...cos mere se Wait nahi hota love scene ke liye 😳😉😆

Mimi jaldii se aa jaayo aur Next part likho ...am waiting ..and jab update karo ..PM me pleaseee😳

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sahib29

Hey Little Baby 🤗

Hii Mannu Dii!

Wonderfull Part dear hamesha ki tarah 👏😳

Thank you!! 😃

Wow Anita aur gattu 😆😆...and mere robbie aur kastu 😳

LOL Anita+Gattu= what a pair 😉

Lekin yee robbie kab sudhrega 😡..sudher jaa ..aur chup chaap pyar karna shuru kar 😉😆...cos mere se Wait nahi hota love scene ke liye 😳😉😆

LOL I'm sorry Mannu dii, I'm really slow in this writing process. I'll try not to make you wait to long! LOL, I just hope by the time I get to the romance ... everyone doesn't stop reading this FF

Mimi jaldii se aa jaayo aur Next part likho ...am waiting ..and jab update karo ..PM me pleaseee😳

I'm posting right now! I have a feeling an angry mob is going to be after me, because I'm updating after a REAALLLY long time! 😕 I'll PM you ASAP!

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago

*Note: I'm really sorry. I know, I know... really late updates, it's just that I'm so caught up with everything lifes throwing at me at the moment, it's just really overwhelming! But summer vaca's here, and Mimi's got nothing better to do rather then write. So I'll update on a regulare basis. 😃

** I know my storys going on a VERY slow process, but I'm new with this whole writing thing! So PLEASE bear with me, and I understand if you stop reading this FF But until then, I'll give my 100% to keep each and every one of you satisfied. If there are any suggestions, feel free to either comment OR PM me =)

Part 6~ The Reject Table

--At Lunch, in the cafeteria

Everyone was scattered out in the large cafeteria. People were in their usual clicks, sitting at their usual tables.

Muskaan: Kassy, mujhe lagta hai ki iss Mr. Wilson ka bheja fry hogeya! (Kassy, I think Mr. Wilson's lost his mind!)

Kasturi: Why? What'd he do?

Muskaan: Ask me what he didn't do! He made me and that Kaan kajhure (a bug of some sort) sit beside each other. Woh-

Kasturi: Rahul. His name's Rahul.

Muskaan: Yea yea, same difference! Woh Rahul ki bache! I swear to Rabba ji, he is such a retard! Main aissa kaun sa kaam kardiya, jo mujhe itni bari saazah milrahihe? (What kind of crime have I committed that I have to go through such a big punishment?)

Kasturi just smiled. Her friend was so childish at times. Sometimes she wondered how her and Muskaan could be so different and get along so well. It was actually quite strange, because Kasturi and Muskaan hadn't known each other for all too long. Maybe a year or two- yet it felt like Muskaan was her sister- a real sister.

Kasturi's thoughts broke with a sudden push from the back.

Anita: Move it loser.

Anita pushed her way to the front of the line. Like always, she got her way. There was no surprise in that. It was as if she had cast a spell on all the people here. If she said sit- you had to sit. If she said stand- you'd stand. Kasturi hated it! She knew how stuck-up Anita was- but Kasturi also knew that Anita was only there in words. Why didn't anybody else see that?

Usually Anita and her little posy cut through, but today she was with Robbie and Rahul. She was trying so hard to hit on Robbie; it was obvious by the way she was acting. Kasturi had known Anita long enough to know her "impress the guys" moves.

"How clingy can she get?"

Robbie on the other hand didn't look much too interested; he just chewed his gum and his eyes wondered around the room, scanning everything ever so slowly.

Kasturi observed how he reacted when he saw the different foods. He at times would stare for a long time and then look away. He'd also block his nose, and make strange faces.

Lunch lady: What would you like today young man?

Robbie: What the Fu*k is this?

He pointed towards the lasagna, which was usually served on Monday's and Wednesdays from the past couple of years.

Robbie: Listen lady (referring to the lunch lady) either you learn how to cook- or get a new job! Like seriously- who in the world eats this... this BLAGH!

Kasturi couldn't help but interrupt. She always thought that the lunches tasted great, and she also knew the amount of effort put into cooking so many different meals all in one day.

"Robbie, if you have a problem with the lunches here- I don't get why you don't go out and buy something else. She (points to lunch lady) sacrifices countless hours in a day preparing food for all of us- just so we get something to eat!"

Robbie: Firstly, I didn't ask for a lecture, especially from someone like you. (Scans her bottom to top) And secondly, she gets paid for what she does. And if she's gonna serve this crap- then why waste the time cooking here?

Anita then had to butt in, like she did in everything!

"Ugh. Robbie darling! Don't waste your time speaking to this loser over here. (Gives Kasturi a dirty look) And don't worry about lunch- Anita Mehra's friends only get the best! My daddy gets his men to bring the most expensive meals available."

Kasturi: Yea. Your daddy is also the one who's got a really big hand in contributing to global warming.

Anita: You know what Kassturi? Just shut up, and get out of my face.

Kasturi watched Anita grab onto Robbie's arm and drag him over to the famously known "popular" table. She also noticed Robbie wrap his arm around her waste (almost touching her... yea I think you know what I'm talking about ; P)

"Disgusting."

But, rather than leaving, Rahul understood how stupidly his friend had acted, and so he apologized to Kasturi on Robbie's behalf.

Kasturi: I don't think you should be apologizing to me Rahul. It was your friend who behaved like an idiot- and honestly, I don't care if he says anything about me. But who gave him the right to diss the lunch lady like that?

Rahul: I know, and I'm really sorry. It's just that he's adjusting you know-

Kasturi: And so are you. But you're not acting like he is!

Rahul (before he leaves to go eat his lunch): I guess some people adapt better than others.

Kasturi grabbed her lunch and walked over to the table she usually sat at- the one near the back. She liked it there because nobody really hung out at the back, it was quiet- but with the exception of Muskaan. But Muskaan was nowhere to be seen; she was probably still waiting in line- or arguing with somebody, which wasn't really new news.

She carefully placed her tray down on the table and got out her history books to begin studying for the upcoming test that was to be taking place next week. She also had two extra credit projects to hand in by the end of next month, and to mention setting up for the annual performance night.

Kasturi (thinking out loud): How in the world will I manage all this?

She immediately began scanning her books, but stopped every few minutes to take a bite out of her sandwich.

"What's this?"

Something that resembled a piece of lined paper was floating above her chicken soup.

"A letter?" she thought as she opened the piece of paper.

"Reject Table." Was handwritten in fine blue felt across the crumpled sheet.

"Reject?" Kasturi thought for several minutes, thus realizing who was behind this scheme.

ANITA (mouthing the words)

She crumpled the piece of paper back into her fist and walked over to Anita's table. Everybody there was caught up in a conversation about Robbie's new concert taking place two weeks from today.

Kasturi: What's this? (slams the paper down on their table)

Anita: What's what?

Kasturi: You know what I'm talking about Anita. What do you mean, "reject" table?

Anita (acting innocent): Kasturi, I don't know what you're talking about. (Breaks out laughing)

Kasturi stole glances with the rest of the people sitting there. They all looked equally as amused, other than Rahul who didn't seem to be really paying attention.

"Is there something funny?"

Robbie (obnoxiously): Funny? Of course there's something funny. After all, you're here aren't you?

Kasturi: Excuse me?

Robbie lifted his feet onto the table, and sat back, a grin spread across his face.

Robbie: You're acting so surprised at being called a reject. Don't you see that you are one?

Kasturi looked directly into his eyes. She tried searching to see if there was any sort of compassion in him, but she sensed nothing. They were Infact cold, reflecting his bitter personality.

"If I'm a reject, then I'm proud of it."

She took the piece of paper in her hand and crumpled it into a smaller ball, then throwing it on to the ground.

-- At her table

Muskaan: Oye Kassy! Sit down na!

Kasturi seated herself beside Muskaan, and stared blankly into her plate.

"Hey!"

The 2 friends saw Raunak approach them with a tray in his hand. They moved over, making space for him to sit.

Raunak: Did I miss anything?

Muskaan: Pata nahin. Main toh abhi abhi ayi hoon. (Don't know, I've just came.) Kassy? (pokes Kasturi in the rib)

"Ouch! Muskaan that hurts!"

Muskaan: Well if you don't put on any weight that's obviously gonna hurt naa? Okay what' ev! Did we miss anything? I mean I saw you at Mehra's table...

Kasturi: You know what Muskaan? It's funny. I'm having more hate towards this Robbie guy then I've ever had with Anita.

Raunak: Why? What happened?

Kasturi smiles to herself J: Nothing happened... yet.

Raunak and Muskaan: Huh?

Kasturi smiles even more widely.

"Mr. Robbie Sabarwal, I'll show you what this reject can do.J"

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