FF..Tumse Hi part 8 on pg.8 - Page 6

Aweesomee! Pavs, keep up the good work!

Hey Pallavi..it was too good yaar...and where are you...continue soon! 😳

Pallaviiii dear where r u ? Come and update soonn . Don't make us wait more 😭 .

Dear I can't believe u r just 15 how beautiully u write 👏 😃 and dear the start was amazing 👏

Waiting for next parts

Rosy

Hey! 😃

Just caught up with your FF!! Its great! so detailed and full of suspense 👏 👏 👏

The beginning was very different....very well written! 👏

Update soon yaar.....who is this man in Kasturis life? will Robbie express his feelings? im dieing to know 😳 😆 😆

abh chalo jaldhi se next part likhdho 😃

Kay

mmm sorry guys I was out of station ...so couldn't update well I'm back now so probably I can give you some more delight!!!! 😃

Pallivi sooo glad you came back, i was worried where were youuuu??? okay aub jaldi se next part please likhoooo... cant wait to read it. and i cant believe your 15, your one amazing younge girl... wow.....totally impressed

robina

thanx yaar all of you!!!I'll update soon 😉

Update soon... we've made us wait a looooong while!

I am really very sorry or keeping u ppl waiting...dont bang me!!!My computer was tampered so could not update or even visit IF ...I am really very sorry!!
here is my update for all those who are still interested!
He sat there twirling the pen in his long fingers...his rugged handsome looks gave him an overdose of attention wherever he went. Right now silence was doing its duty in his room...the shadows were tying to consolidate their territory but failed miserably as the silvery moonlight washed the walls of his well urnished room with its splendorous glory.
(Wanna see who he is...revealing to you guys-Mr.Nakul Kashyap)


'Life can change in a heart beat!' no was more experienced than him in this concept. His memory played a reel beore him like a movie...a little child whose eyes are blazing with innocence and then suddenly cherry red blood and a heavenly last smile biddding him farewell......Angad opened his eyes as tears threatened to flow ceaselessly
"What would you do if you had a son" he thought to himself"a son whom u can never share the enjoyable sports talk with...a son who could never again get you trophies and tell you passionately about his success..a son whom you could never again hug and let him hear ur heartbeats which throbbed with love for him...a son with whom u could never spend enough time with so that u could cherish those moments later on....A son whom U could never ever tell how much you love him....."
"a son whom you can never bring back from that world of starry secrets..."
Then he picked up a photograph of that son whom he had lost even b4 he had found him......

Kasturi looked at robbie and raunak . She couldn't tell them ...she couldn't tell anyone...thats why she worked so hard ...to flee away from those memories...she had never felt any emotion before ....not after that nightmare..but robbie's entrance into her life had opened doors to many emotions....attraction,pain,regret and above all hope...she hoped that one day may be she will melt in robbie's arms..but then could she share her burden of guilt with him???She looked at Robbie and was surprised to find a deadly deep concern in his eyes...was it for her??? And there was something else too mixed with that concern...no it couldn't be....the timing was bad very bad indeed she thought...his eyes were darkening....a signal...she waved the red flag...stop!!!

Raunak-Okay then if you dont wanna share it with us its okay but remember we are always there for you...

He winked at her adorably and walked out. Robbie stood there and continued staring at her..
Kasturi- Tumhe ghar nahi jana hai?
Robbie- I wanted to tell you something..
Kasturi- Abhi nahi robbie baad mein please
Robbie -Theek hai magar main yahi pe rahoonga
Kasturi- Irada kya hai tumhara?😆
Robbie- Irade mere bahut kuch hai magar filal tumhara dekh bhal karna
Kasturi- Hark! U r robbie rite? or are u an imposter?😆
Robbie- Jo bhi hoon...tumhara hoon😳
Kasturi- Pardon?
Robbie- Haan main robbie hi hoon ab tum aaam karo main tumhare paas hi baitha hoon
She wished he would go away he was sitting next to her tooo close...she was finding it very hard to resist his charm...she looked at him...He looked like heaven and smelt like sin!!! Her phone sprang to life giving her some time to breathe..this man Robbie was dangerous...extemely dangerous!!!
She put the phone in loudspeaker mode...
A crisp voice said "Meet me at water's edge." A long pause followed as she felt shivers going down her spine...."Dont fear I wont harm you." She looked pale..ghastly pale..Robbie had heard it. He looked at her ...the need to comfort her...or rather touch her overwhlming him....She stared at him and then the next thing Robbie knew was she flew into his arms and nestled there as though it were her home....
Enjoy and let me enjoy ur comments plz!!

Ok omg Pallavi

Ive just read your parts all of them to Tumse Hi
Omg thats all I can say
OMG OMG OMG OMG

What a gr8 FF yaar.

OMG ok if i can say anything else besides OMG
Wel its such a different FF, Kasturi coming in to robbies life and then Robbie bringing her back in such a way for a challenge. But his fallen in love with her awwwwwwwwwwwww 😳

I'm curious what is about Kasturis past that she is so scared about. I wonder what is hse going to do now? She has 2 tel robbie as robbie heard it on the loudspeaker 😕

Oh and thats so good im happy with Raunak in your FF atleast his a true robbies freind and that his the one who chose Kasturi to work 4 robbie 😆 😆

Keep up the gr8 work Pallavi and update the nxt part soon. will be waiting 2 read it 👏