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Posted: 17 years ago
Jaanu........Thank you. I love to spend time with Jima too!!!
And btw, what are Jima and me doing?? Did'nt catch that........and don't say skating because for the life of me I cannot skate or ski.... I tried twice, fell both the times, almost dislocated a shoulder when I went skiing on the Rockies......and have sworn off skating and skiing!!!! 😆 😆

Aah.........I am very glad Krishi has joined us!!! 😃 Ab jamke ladaai hogi Robbie ke liye!!!!
And why did you bring KT in??? Mani ko jalaane ke liye!!!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

@jaanuuu such a frolicking part, it was light and i luved it, i understand why its dedicated to manu diii...😃 she deserves it..

and rosy twirling around on her skates just imagined how cute she'd look.. (i miss you rosy hope you come back soon..😳)

so now KT is coming in, what a crowd pleasser she will be)

cant wait for the next part. and me boat paddling... was krishi with me???

well just wanted to say i luv rowing and its a fav. past time for me and my hubby.. we luv going fishing.... so totally reminded me of that..thanks 👏

luv robina diiii

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Jaanu........Thank you. I love to spend time with Jima too!!!
And btw, what are Jima and me doing?? Did'nt catch that........and don't say skating because for the life of me I cannot skate or ski.... I tried twice, fell both the times, almost dislocated a shoulder when I went skiing on the Rockies......and have sworn off skating and skiing!!!! 😆 😆

Aah.........I am very glad Krishi has joined us!!! 😃 Ab jamke ladaai hogi Robbie ke liye!!!!
And why did you bring KT in??? Mani ko jalaane ke liye!!!! 😆

pragz mujhe jalane nahi rona araha hai😭😭😭 cuz im scared now 😕kahin KT mere aur lakshya ke bich me kaabab ki haddi na ban jaye😡😡 mujhe juda kiya ja raha hai lakshya se😭😭😆

Edited by *princess*15 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Something Up..Continues...

sorry uys but for the past 3 hrs i am struggling to get to IF..Finally i made it..😃

this part deicated to dear our Aishoo

"Get up u lazy Aishoo.or else we'll leave u here.This is the final Aishoo" Kas has lost her patience with Aishoo.
Aishoo gets up slowly and gets herself ready.She is wearing a wrinkled blue jeans and pink top.As she comes to the hall everyone is busy taking bags, checking the camera etc and Priyaand Rosy are sitting in the corner planning what to do.Priya is in a black jeans capris and white sleevelss Kurtha.Rosy is in cotton bell bottom and short tops.All the other girls are preparing breakfast/ helping the boys ? checkin their fv IF before they satrt the journey.

they finally reaches the hottest destination in Kerala, the gr8 amusement park, Veegaland.The group include Pragalbha dii, Robina dii, Mannu dii, Jima di, Krishi dii, Aishoo, Manni,rosy, Kasturi,Priya, KT ,Laksh,Giri, Nikki and last but not the least Robbie.

(Veegaland is located in outskirts of Cochin, one of the biggest cities in south India. It is a very convenient location and also not too close to the city as it is located on top of a hill.Spread over a whooping 24 acres of land, its 7 storey high Vintage Castle and Caterpillar Village give a Fairy Tale atmosphere. The musical Fountains, flower gardens, water pool and water slides, thunder fal, monster twister, balarama cave add to the attraction of the Veegaland Amusement Park.
It is one of the finest amusement parks in India. And the cleanest park in India acc to my personal opinion and the Govt recrds. it had got even internatinaol awards for its never compromising tideness) &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp;

"So guys lets smash this trip..And be ready for any surprises ladies.." The boys and girls seperated to the changing rooms. (everyone had to wear pants and top becos there water rides and U cant go in sarees).
All the girls wear full sleeved T shirts and pants while the boys wear Shorts and T shirt..As usual the forgetfull Ro forgot to take his T shirt ..😳(*ahem * keep UR heart beats still) So he bought a T Shirt from the dress shop inside the park.😆
And they moved down to the world of fun, thrill, laughter, magic and ****.
They first go to the Caterpillar Ride.the boys didnot went in saying it was stupid going on a caterpillar inside the ant hill.But when Manni decieded to go Laksh said, "Come On guys.it'll be fun.Atleast we can see whats in the ant hills."
Ro:Ohhhoo Laksh ....😆
And they all enjoyed sitting on a catterpillar and going in out central middle out through the caterpillar hill feeling like ants themselves.
And when the ride got over Nikhil was most releived.
They got out of it and next walked in the photospot near the lil Kangaroo(its for kids) and took photos.
Manni and Laksh took photos of everyone and robina dii was strangled b/w Mannu dii and Pragalbha dii. Rosy, Girirsh, Robbie and Kastoo posed together and Ro Ka were standing almost miles apart."Whats that rush over there.?" Aishoo asked looking over to the rushing crowd infront of a cave.The cave is in the shape of a demon with red eyes and the entrance is thru his open mouth.
Robbie:Lets check it...
Kas:Do we have to..I mean see all the children coming out are crying.I think its an injection booth.
Rosy:Dragging Kastoo..."Come On U ******😡"
And they all go to the cave and ask the guard,
Mannu dii:Excuse me Can u tell me whats this ride.
Guard:yes Maam this is Balarama cave. You travel in a train, in the darkness, various characters in the balarama stories like Kuttosan, Dakini etc comes to see you. And takes a bit guts too maam.😉
Robbie:Oh I see ..Then its the perfect ride for Miss.Hiccups Katuri ji.😆What say guys.?
Aishoo:I am already in.
guard:I am sorry maam. But U have to stand in queue.
And they wait for the long que to end.Kas is getting wried feelings when she sees all small girls crying and coming out.But kids are always like that Kastoo. nothing is inside it.Just chill.She taught herself not to show her anxiety.And FINALLY our group reached the door.And they entered the cave and walks inside a cave dim;y lit with lanterns.It is a bit creepy and Mannii and KT and Priya too are getting a bit wried feelings.
And they went in the cave.Two trains were there waiting for them.8ppl can sit in one.Two in a seat.Robina dii and Pragalbha dii preferred the front seats.Mannu dii and Rosy behind, Nikhil Priya , then Jima dii andAishoo, Giri and Krishii dii. on the other train World War three is going for seatings.Robbie wanna sit front and so does Kastoo.But they dont wanna sit together.Behind them Manni is fighting with laksh to sit with giri and send Krishii too her but no use.
Finally the guards MAKE ro and Kastoo share front seat😳 , Manni and Laksh😳 behind them.Another 3 ppl join them..(Raunak, Vikky ie, Vikas, Ariv).KT had to sit with Raunak.😉
And the guards check the seat belts and give them instructions not to remive the belt or noy put hads outside etc.
And the first train moves into a door that opens itself..and is lost..
After sometimes the next rain also starts and it too enters a the darkest track anyone had ever seen.(the train is open.. no covering at all)
(The following parts are my best effort to explain something that can only be experienced)

First train:
Mannu di:oooh it is so creepy and a bit...........
She broke the sentence mid air when the train suddenly stopped in the middle of nothing but total blackness.
No sound, No noise.....
All of them Shocked:Aaaaaaaaaaaaahh..My God we are lost we are trapped here.
And they wait with their heart beats rising in the trai8n for the technicians to come..
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH..
Robina dii:Who was it what..Before she could remove her seat belt ashe stopped mouth open and abt to vomit.
A headless human body oozing blood is waking up.Dim red scary light is on its neack, showing the remains of flesh that is abt to fall off.
They couldnt beleve it..and Suddenly the train began to shake..shake so violently..
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
theirscreams could surely out run the Loksabha meetings.
And ..MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD SPIDERS..
And suddenly the train starts moving.the guys were snapped back to reality..
Robina dii (unbeleivingly):Oh my God its the ride............

Second train (It is a way behind the other train so that they couldnt hear all this screamings.Its type of voice proof.)
Kasturi:Oh God its stupid..Its only travelling in the dark.
Manni:laksh do u mind moving a lil.U R not an iron or me neither a magnet.
laksh:oH i am sorry Manni..
Raunak:hi i am raunak, and u R miss..
KT:Sorry but not intrested ..
Vikky:seems like bhaiyah had got his first slap.
Suddenly the train stops.
Total blackness.Blackness and blackness only. 'Oh my God..' gasped Manni.
Kas:what had happened?Are we stuck? Helloooooooooooooo koi hain..??? hellooooooooo ..
Ro: kas maaam can u pls keep quiet while the guards find them.
Kas was abt to say something but the sight behind Ro's head made her inside come out...
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRG GGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Kas had hugged Ro so tightly SO SO tighly that he is choking.She is peicing into his flesh with her long nails.
Ro:What happened ?what are you doing girl?
Kas is shivering and Ro put a hand behind her tensed.And he turns.the air almost kicked out of him.There is a girl..I mean a girly fig with her inside out..I really mean and say INSIDE OUT.
And this time Ro is gripping hard on kastoo becos the terrible thing is a breath away from him.
And the sec where a small light dims Ro catches Kastoo's eyes..And they stare ..gaze deep into each others eyes.......Manni hugging Laksh as tightly as fevicol holding paper...KT is literally inside Ra's shirt...And the slowesttest tune of Kuch tho hua hai starts in the background
Kuch To Hua Hai.......................................................
Kuch Ho Gaya Hai......................................................... ...........
Kuch To Hua Hai......................................................... .
Kuch Ho Gaya Hai......................................................... ...................................................................................

And I leave u there.....Keeping u ppl imagine RoKa, LaMa, RaKT gazing at each other while the creepy spiders, headless ghosts and inside out deadbodies are waking up in the back ground...😆

Hope u liked this part.
will soon update the next part.Pls comment too.
jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jima

jaanu...wow.. u paired praggu with me!!! yeah dii i know Praggu dii dont want Robbie😆i feel more comfertable with her..i luved the park..i felt as if i was physically present in that park with praggu...thank u diii becos that was a compliment😳

but i am still young to enjoy my 20's.😆 again u made my day...i think..i can call pragalbha as praggu dii.. she is looking at me...😡 and also i should pass this comment to my husband...👏And tell him dii i often lie😉

where is robbie dear?...still in the house boat...fir mujay kyun park mai laayee...u'll find it soon😳

as usual i enjoyed it...keep writing ... thanx dii😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *princess*15

OMG u updated😲 manni sometimes i do such things too😉thnk u so much😳u r most welcome baby😳 i was dying 4 readin it😆 me nd skating 😲ooo u remind me whn i used 2 skate😍 but i go 2 da ice skating now😆 oops sorry yaar but Kerala dont have ice😉i remember da day whn i first ice skate 😍it was so enjoyable So u'll be a SUPERB SKATER right😍well bk 2 da part lolz 😆 i really enjoy readin it 😉nd y is ever1 pullin my leg 😆i feel shying yaar 😆wat am i going 2 do in KT's flat😡 u have to wait😉i really hate her now😡 😆 nd wow krishi dii is in ff😃 now all kasturi members r in dis ff😉except...........😉

i cant get over ur ff😆 so u need 2 continue soon😆OK i continued..i tablet each night😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Karan Lover

just want yaa compeleteeeeeeeeeeee !!!

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aishoo dear..thanx a looooooooooooot jaan...😳

iwant the next part !!! ofcourse u have it..😳
but ilike it jaanu !!! thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanx

Love yaaa alottt!!! me too bachoooo😳

Urs
AishooO!!! Aishoo's jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Jaanu........Thank you. I love to spend time with Jima too!!! arre dii no need for any thanx wanx..😳
And btw, what are Jima and me doing?? Did'nt catch that..dii u both are enjoyig the evening, walking through marine drive😳......and don't say skating because for the life of me I cannot skate or ski.... I tried twice, fell both the times, almost dislocated a shoulder when I went skiing on the Rockies......and have sworn off skating and skiing!!!! 😆 😆 but watch and wait dii...😉by the way dii failures are ------

Aah.........I am very glad Krishi has joined us!!! 😃 Ab jamke ladaai hogi Robbie ke liye!!!! any doubts???😕😆
And why did you bring KT in??? Mani ko jalaane ke liye!!!! 😆 😆 that too any doubts???😆

thanx a looooooooooooooooooooot dii keep reading more plssss

jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nrasheed

@jaanuuu such a frolicking part, it was light and i luved it, i understand why its dedicated to manu diii...😃 she deserves it..not only deserves it dii but more😃

and rosy twirling around on her skates just imagined how cute she'd look.. shed look awesome..seen ice princess the movie..oooooooh i can easily imagine manni and Rosy😃(i miss you rosy hope you come back soon..😳)yeah dii me too miss Rosy baby a looot😭

so now KT is coming in, what a crowd pleasser she will be) KT is a sweety dii..and she'll be....😳

cant wait for the next part.i did it dii😳 and me boat paddling... was krishi with me??? yeah ofcourse😃

well just wanted to say i luv rowing and its a fav. past time for me and my hubby.. we luv going fishing.... so totally reminded me of that..thanks 👏my god dii that means my intusions are surely working better...😳and thanx dii..thanx a lot for such sweety comments....

luv robina diiii

Love yah

jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago

januuuu where is the next part????

diiiiii😃

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