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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nrasheed

jannuuuu, that is one of my all time fav. songs, tujhe dheekha to jaanah..... πŸ‘mine too dii..esp the music of it😳 you brought back alot of good memories for me. thanks kiddo..never mentionπŸ˜‰ Me going gagga over Robbie, was hillarious, i have to agree with praglabha on this one i dont see any of the di's doing it, but it still was soo funny imagining it..drooling over Ro, dinnering with Angelina, chatting with Ranbir etc etc etc will never come true for common ppl like us. But we can put our imaginations wild. nah diiπŸ˜ƒ. i kinds saw me, jima, mannu and pragalbha pushing each other around to get the lime light..perfect dii..that is how i write each line..😳 thanks jannu for making me laugh so hard in the morning... fantastic part.thanx a lot diii😳 you know its very hard to make a story, and then to incorporate real people into it is even more difficult and then to use a song and put these people's interaction into that is a huge challenge,and you did all three wow i am blushing too much dii.thanx a lot to my sweet didi😳Jannu, your a bundle of talent and i'm just so proud of how your doing this... πŸ‘ haaa the contentment i have cant be xpressed in words didi...touch my heart you'll feel it😳
Manuu being calling robbie a cheaterrrrr, 🀣 nah nah i called her for grabbibg Ro..πŸ˜‰
rosy ka heel ouch.....that reminded me of kasturi in Pragalbha's Kaarvan πŸ˜‰ yeah good guess didi..it was that sweet idea of Pragalbha dii, i chorified...πŸ˜†
okay times to write the next part waiting axiously... it will be up by around 11.00..(IST).

thanx once again didi...............
robina di

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: GAPS

@Jima dii first of all take good care of the health and take complete rest too😊..OK..And next I am sorry dii i am back after a long time.I went to see IPLπŸ˜‰. OK I tried to get Ra but the guy was busy with Preity.πŸ˜†.u know how he is working in the family planning section and all.πŸ˜‰..Jima dii ab tum Ro ko "Duffer" bulaya...He wont leave you dii SUREπŸ˜†.And dii i'll try to make him open an extension in Canada.But ...Jima dii next time you come to Kerala, never miss a houseboat ride.πŸ˜ƒ.Becos is worth going, esp a night in the middle of lake is FANTASTIC😳. Jima dii once agaain take good good care of URself and rest a lot...😊
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Jima dii i said in the first line itself to practice some laughing tips from devuπŸ˜†.And if u go thud, who will teach me karate😭.Thanx dii...I'll try and update tonight itself becos i am also so interested nowπŸ˜‰.And each secs new ideas are hitting me like the spinners.πŸ˜†
@Manni:Thanx baby thanx a lot😳..And do u want me to say it so openly.πŸ˜•.then hear it "Laksh is madly in love with youπŸ˜†.😳.But u are the attitude girl.πŸ˜‰" OMG r u serrious 😲or u just kidding on me πŸ˜•but how can i b an attitude girl πŸ˜•im so friendly wiv every1 naaπŸ˜†πŸ˜• there is a reason for it which i'll surely write in a part.😊well u hv 2πŸ˜† ..Just take a lil suspense bachoo.datz wat i cant do PATIENCE uffffffπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰ .and next part will come tonight with no doubts.πŸ˜ƒ will wait 4 itπŸ˜ƒ
@Aishoo...Oh my darling, darling Aishoo thanchoo so much 😳yaar.😳😳😳.Really really thanx..And U are a BEST Friend of Robbie who hold a strong part in his lifeπŸ˜ƒ.So keep tuned.Next part tonight..😊

@Everyone..Thanx a lot guysπŸ˜ƒ.Your encouragement is my Boost and Horlicks to write each partπŸ˜ƒ...Thank u so much.πŸ˜ƒ..
Jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Jaanu..........I am laughing away at your decription of our expressions and feelings 🀣

While its true that none of us 'dis' will give such leverage to KP in real life πŸ˜‰ but I am absolutely willing to go with the flow in your FF πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Man........Robbie know how to play the field does'nt he??? Ek ko bhi nahi choda, he had everybody twirling on his song πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† But ofcourse he probably had only one person in mind and that is Kas!!!!!!! πŸ˜†
Lakshya and Girish songs were good and Mani and Rosy were too funny!!!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† is dis a compliment pragzπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Great job....... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Very funny!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

OMG Jannu ..both parts very nice and Funny πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Yee aacha hai ki Robina ko carpet saaf karne laga diya 🀣🀣🀣..Sarra din Free hoti hai ..kuch toh kaam karna chahiye na 🀣🀣🀣

and yee kya Pragg tumne Robina ko Frok kyu di ?? ..arre yee koi uski Umer hai Frok dalne ki ??🀣

and Jannu another part is very Funny yaar...yee robbie sabke upper line maar raha hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...mujhe keh raha tha ki song sirf tumhare liye sunayunga ..lekin Dekh na ..sabko hi suna diya πŸ˜­πŸ˜†

and Song selection is very nice dear πŸ‘..

and mujhe kiska Phone aaya ?..maine toh ring suni hi nahi πŸ˜†

Jaldi se next part likh main dekhu ..kaun hai jisne mujhe Phone kiya? πŸ˜†

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sahib29

OMG Jannu ..both parts very nice and Funny πŸ˜†πŸ˜†thanx dii..thanx a lot..😳

Yee aacha hai ki Robina ko carpet saaf karne laga diya 🀣🀣🀣..Sarra din Free hoti hai ..kuch toh kaam karna chahiye na 🀣🀣🀣arre dii woh humari robina dii hai na..poor diiπŸ˜‰

and yee kya Pragg tumne Robina ko Frok kyu di ?? ..arre yee koi uski Umer hai Frok dalne ki ??🀣never mind diiπŸ˜‰

and Jannu another part is very Funny yaar...yee robbie sabke upper line maar raha hai πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...mujhe keh raha tha ki song sirf tumhare liye sunayunga ..lekin Dekh na ..sabko hi suna diya πŸ˜­πŸ˜†thats another witty Ro..πŸ˜†

and Song selection is very nice dear πŸ‘..thanchoo diiiii...😳

and mujhe kiska Phone aaya ?..maine toh ring suni hi nahi πŸ˜†i had written it in the next part dii..so check it then,And if u put on the vibrating mode, how will ju hear the ringtoneπŸ˜†

Jaldi se next part likh main dekhu ..kaun hai jisne mujhe Phone kiya? πŸ˜†dii i am sorry but not today. only tomm becos its so late now and i had just finished writing it into the paper😊

Manpreet

@Everyone:Guys i'm really sorry yaars.but will update tomm becos tomm morning i've class and its late now for bed..So, i'll be back tomm ..take care.and once again sorry😊

Jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago

No problem jaanu ..hum wait karte hai 😳..kal part post kar dena 😳

Manpreet

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sahib29

No problem jaanu ..hum wait karte hai 😳..kal part post kar dena 😳

Manpreet

pucca.πŸ˜ƒ.actually i had typed it three times earlier, but somehow / the other i kept on hitting no for do u wanna save the message?πŸ˜† Now i am all drowsy di.So i thought i'll become fresh tomm and type it with good sense..😳

jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago

Sorry guys for being late..Extremely sorry..i couldnt help it.so here is the next part.πŸ˜ƒ

Something is Up..
(This part is entirely deicated to our Mannu dii 😳)

So lets take a leap of three days and lemme invite ur presence to the gr8 Kochin😳.Kochin is the very famous port-commercial city of Kerala, where the Paris and Mumbai masal mix with traditionality of Kerala.πŸ˜‰

And do u see any familiar faces here diis.Yeah that two ppl seems familiar.it is the Marine Drive on an evening😳 and pls dont make me explain the place becos i'm completely fidaa on it.πŸ˜†
So who are those two figures acsending the steps..Oooohh its Jima dii and Pragalbha dii.πŸ˜‰(girls come on.lets evesdrop themπŸ˜†)
Jima dii:Arre Praggu comeon, dont be a kid.Ismeh sharamaanei ki kya baadh hai.We all are doing it nah.πŸ˜ƒ
Pragalbha dii:But Jima we are not kids to do this crap.🀒
Jima:Excuse me...Who R not?U may not be, but i am still young to enjoy my 20's.πŸ˜†
Pragalbha dii:20....OK leave it..but πŸ˜•
Jima dii:But wut..whats this.Are u coming or not.😳
Pragalbha dii:If U insist..πŸ€”πŸ€”
Jima dii:But i dont.πŸ˜†
Pragalbha dii:wel i'll come Alright.πŸ˜‰
Jima dii:Thats a good girl.πŸ˜ƒ
And they enjoy the wind from the sea lil more and turn left to enter the park.(Guys the location is in the song Maine Pyaar Kiyaa)
And they walk in b/w thw flower beds and past the solar-wind station and reaches the skating ring.A lot of children are practiscing there.But it is not at all hard to pick up ManniπŸ˜ƒ, the best player in the ringπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘.Rosy is a perfection and wonder as a beginner😳,πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ but Kasturi is yet strugglingπŸ˜†.Jima dii comment on Manni's perfection and they move to the small boating area past the dancing floor.Aishoo,Robina dii, Mannu dii and Krishii di are peddling a boat😳.Laughing, joking and smiling..they are having a whole lot of fun.😳

By the way did i said Krishi diiπŸ˜•....Go back for 5 mins to the house boats.πŸ˜‰

mannu dii gets the phone:
"hello..*pause*..WHAAAAAAAAAAAAATTT...U R coming"
And a lil more pause and Mannu dii happily cuts the phone and turns to the girls."Guys..guess what Krishii is coming day after tomm..πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ‘"
Everyone jumped with happiness..and Mannu dii :*Ahem* Manni U neednt be so happy.KT is with her.🀒..(KT is Mouni)
Manni's face become cold and if looks could kill ppl, Laksh wud have burned up without leaving ashes..πŸ˜†

So to the present:
Manni, Rosy and Kas come to the pool side where Jima dii and Pragalbha dii are standing ,Manni spinning the skating shoes 😳(Like Katrina in Namathe LondonπŸ˜‰).
Manni( putting a hand over Jima dii😳):So guys lets go, the boys wud be back now.😳
Jima dii:Kyuin Manni..KT is with them nahπŸ˜‰..And Priya too.They'll take care.πŸ˜†
Pragalbha dii:(pulling Manni's legs) Jima that is boiling our manni bachi... Right manni...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

manni gave her usual "HOW CARING" smile to Pragalbha diiπŸ˜†
And the other girls also join them after 5 mins and they all go back to their flat a lil away from Marine Drive.(It is KT's flat😊)

So I know this part was small.But it have a second instalment, which will come tonight.πŸ˜ƒ

And guys..Pls dont forget to put ur comments.πŸ˜ƒ

Jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago

OMG u updated😲 thnk u so much😳 i was dying 4 readin itπŸ˜† me nd skating 😲ooo u remind me whn i used 2 skate😍 but i go 2 da ice skating nowπŸ˜† i remember da day whn i first ice skate 😍it was so enjoyable 😍well bk 2 da part lolz πŸ˜† i really enjoy readin it πŸ˜‰nd y is ever1 pullin my leg πŸ˜†i feel shying yaar πŸ˜†wat am i going 2 do in KT's flat😑 i really hate her now😑 πŸ˜† nd wow krishi dii is in ffπŸ˜ƒ now all kasturi members r in dis ffπŸ˜‰

i cant get over ur ffπŸ˜† so u need 2 continue soonπŸ˜†

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Posted: 17 years ago
just want yaa compeleteeeeeeeeeeee !!!

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iwant the next part !!!
but ilike it jaanu !!!

Love yaaa alottt!!!

Urs
AishooO!!!

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