'4' KAHAANIYAAN ...Nu part pg 29 - Page 18

Originally posted by: nrasheed

januuuu ki bachi mujhe se carpart saaf karvarahi hoi, itnah kaam ghar mein karthi hoon, aub tumhari fanfic main bhi karnah paregah😡😆 oh ho dii app bhi nah..Cleanliness is way up to godliness....😉just kiddin kiddo.. very amazing part, i dont know how you included everyone in this fanfic, its very wonderful to see us like this😳 i know dii and everytime i wish if we were all in the same place..U know seeing each other, shoping, partying😃how fun it wud have been nah...😳

aur yeah kya, itnhi khubsoorat saree barbadh kardeyai rosy ne, mannu ne nazaar lagadiya tha 😭😭,dii she did it to save you from wearing sareee..i cant just say u appeared in a frock all of a sudden.So i made rosy spill the food😉 and wow what a beautiful dress for moi😃excellent choice jaanuuu👏 thanchoo dii you wud look stunning in that stunning but beautifull dress..SURE.😃Pragalbha koi aub pragzi i like it.. sweeeet Robina diii😳

and you arent feeling well i hope you will get better soon, jannu, rest up...dii dont laugh at me if i say something.I wasnt eating properly for two days and it was all well when i went and ate Chappathi and curry😆 and be back with a bang sooon.... u bet 😃cant wait to see what happens on this boat, what a beautiful way of describing and seeing Kerala.. i feel in luv just reading what you wrote.. aub to South India koi dheekha nah hain mujhe...dii one day you must seriously come and visit this God's own country...it is worth a visit😃

amazing fantastic jannu, and this time i thought it was a beautiful tent, with all the candles... keep it up girl.. sure dii will try my best😃luv you robina diiii

Jaanu

Originally posted by: pragalbha

OMG...........What a party!!!!!!!!!!! 😲 Sach kahaa mannu..........issmei hum SAB ki watt lag gayi!!! 😆 😆 nahi dii aisi koi baadh nahi..I am trying hard NOT to give Kastoo chances to speak..becos u know her😉..and that brings in the nhok jhoks of my diis..😉
I absolutely loved all the characters!!! 😆 😆 becos it is all us in it😳
Robbie neh mujhe 'Di' kahaa 😡OK di he later changed it to Pragziii😉 Chal koi baat nahi, mei na sahi lekin mere patidev toh khush honge yeh sunkar!!!! 🤣 Achaaaa..... yeah dii i can uderstan all my jijus becos my diis keep on saying "Robbie" Robbie"😆

And I absolutely loved the look of that tent in the moonlight!! And the house boats you described are soooo endearing! I won't miss to ride one when I visit Kerala next time!U must not dii ..becos the feeling u have in the middle of the lake at night, alone with the breeze hugging you😳, I go for a ride whenever i go home😳 I was there last year.....I came to Guruvayoor 😊 wooooooowww..Thas so nice to hear dii... So U wore set saree and all..... i wud have loved to see that😳..next time you come miss me too ok dii😉....but did not have the time for a houseboat! 😕 a great loss..😭

And the way I greeted and hugged Robina........I would definitely do that if I met her really too!!!! 🤗 i know dii becos the emotions each of us share is thick to get unnoticed..😳

I made Unniyapaam for him???? Fat chance 😡 😡 😡 aur woh bhi mujhe 'Di' bulaane ke baad???? 😡 😆 oh hooooo didi.aap bhi nah..If u dont want to make things that he like, koi baadh nai..gurlz are on queue😃😉
All the 3 songs were great!!!!!! thnx diiiii

Jaanu...........hats off to you!!! 👏 👏 👏 I really mean it!!!!can you just see me on cloud 10 dii😳 This is the only FF I have read where the members have been involved as characters in the FF!!! It is extremely creative of you to come up with such an idea!!!!
Keep it rocking, girl!!! will put the best i can dii😃

And hope you feel better soon! 🤗 i took my breakfast and it is alright now..😳thanx diii thanx a loooooooooooooooooooooooooootttt..😃

Jaanu

jaanu u aint revealed it yet😔 wats wiv me nd lakshya😕i really wanna noe dear🤔 plz reveale it on da nxt part 😳lakshya sing Maine Pyar Kiya to me OMG😲☺️ so sweet i lv u jaanu🤗i really wanna noe wats gonna happen nxt😍😆 im loving kerala now 😉beautifully describe da houseboats jannu 👏👏

get well soon jannu🤗 whn u feel better thn continue 😊

lv ya lods🤗

mani😛

THE JOURNEY CONTINUES
Warning:I am not at all responsible for any heart attacks and high BP's..😆

Recap: The party in the tent ends and masti starts in the house boat.

Mannu dii:And here comes our next challenger.................. ROBBIE SABHARWAL....😳
And this time the cheerings was so loud and this irritated Kasturi all the more.😉
Jima dii:So Robbie, the Rockstar are you ready..😃
Robbie(getting up): Yeah 'honey😉' (Girls control urself🤢)
Jima dii went strawbwerry color😳 and whole color drained out of Mannu diis face😡.😆
Mannu dii (without hiding her anger😡):So Ro I'll give you the dare. You have to sing and impress a lady of your heart....😉
Ro:Thats not a big deal Sweetou😳 (Manii, Rosy,Aishoo,Pragalbha dii, and Robina dii Control it🤢)
Mannu dii:So go for it then Rocking Robbie..😳

And Ro goes to the window and sit on the brim, he look outside at the moon (girls i neednot say how hawt he looks).The cool breeze is playing with his well cared, soft hair, his naughty smile has made two cute dimples on his cheeks...And the music begins....😳

Robbie (softly driving even the night crazy):
Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam
Pyaar hota hai deewana sanam
Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam(he is till looking outside the window.)

he turns around spreading his intoxicating naughty naughty smile and look at all the girls)

Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam
Pyaar hota hai deewana sanam - 2(first time Pointing at Robina diii then moving to Pragalbha dii)
Ab yahan se kahan jaaye hum
Teri baahon mein mar jaaye hum(This one is to Aishoo)

Mannu dii gets angry and she get up and grab Ro(Cheaterrrrrrrrrrrr😡)

Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam
Pyaar hota hai deewana sanam(giving a devil look at the girls😡)
Ab yahan se kahan jaaye hum
Teri baahon mein mar jaaye hum

Robbie holding Mannu diis hands...😳😡

Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam

In the music time Girish and Nikhil approaches Rosy and Priya.And try to flitr.But Rosy's heels did the job...

Manni to Robbie....

La la la la la, la la la la la
La la la la la, la la la
Aankhen meri sapne tere
Dil mera, yaadein teri

Laksh..I mean jelous Laksh to Manni..😉

O, mera hai kya

Manni
(La la la)😆

Laksh..
Sab kuch tera

Manni..
(La la la)

Robbie to Aishoo..
Jaan teri, saansein teri😳

Aishoo smiling and giving Ro her hand...😳
Meri aankhon mein aansu tere aa gaye
Muskuraane lage saare gham

Ro looking at Robina dii and Kasturi...(Kas is swollen like a bug😡)
Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam
Pyaar hota hai deewana sanam

Robina dii..(she is actually looking at Jima dii and Mannu dii and is saying wih her eys "Dekha tum logon nei😉..")

Ab yahan se kahan jaaye hum
Teri baahon mein mar jaaye hum(smiling broadly at Robbie😃)

Robbie running to the front of the boat and standing hands open like Jack on Titanic..(hope u got it)
Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam😳

Jima dii and Mannu dii competing to see whose voice reaches Ro first..😆
Yeh dil kahin lagta nahin
Kya kahoon, main kya karoon

Laksh involuntarily taking Manni's hands.😉.
Haan, tu saamne

Manni giving a "NOT AGAIN😡" look..
(La la la)

Laksh giving is masterpeice wink to Manni😉
Baithi rahe

Manni trying hard to loosen her hands😡..😆
(La la la)

Robbie dancing with all the girls except Kastoo😆
Main tujhe dekha karoon

Aishoo and Rosy..😳
Tune aawaaz di, dekh main aa gayi
Pyaar se hai badi kya kasam

Laksh to Manni againn..😳
Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam
Robbie looking at the moon...😉
Pyaar hota hai deewana sanam

Robina dii playing with the water by leaning from the window😳..
Tujhe dekha to yeh jaana sanam
pragalbha dii with a deep deep deep smile..😃
Pyaar hota hai deewana sanam

Nikhil and Girish, the two poor guys looking at each other..😆
Ab yahan se kahan jaaye hum
All the boys......😉
Teri baahon mein mar jaaye hum

All the girls.....😳(no kastoo😆)
Teri baahon mein mar jaaye hum

"HURRAYYYYY..👏" everyone claps loud....
Mannu dii:"That was excellent Robbie....it was Excellent😳"
Robbie:See Jaan i know i am the best. And now tell me where do you put me.😉
Robina dii:In the VULNERABLE group😆...
Robbie:Oooohh Thank you😳...

Mannu :So lets continue... Robbie you take the lot..
And Ro takes the chit.... "Girish..😃"

Girish:Haan soo tell me guys what shall i do😃...
Jima dii:Tell me how do you feel abt this moment...😉

Girish: OK..

And he hums..

gup-chup gup-chup chup chup.....(And his eyes fell on Rosy 😳who is looking deeply at him {Rosy =dear dont kill me plsss😭})
do dil mil rahe hai.n magar chupke chupke...
sabko ho rahii hai
haa.n sabko ho rahii hai khabar chupke chupke
do dil mil rahe hai
.n magar chupke chupke .
saa.nso.n me.n baRii bekaraarii
aa.nkho.n me.n ka'ii raat jage t
kabhii kahii.n lag jaa'e dil to
kahii.n phir dil na lage
apne dil me.n zaraa thaam luu.n
jaaduu ka mai.n ise naam duu.n
jaaduu kar rahaa hai asar chupke chupke .
do dil mil rahe hai.n magar chupke chupke
aise bhole bankar hai baiTHe
jaise koii baat nahii.n .
sab kuchh nazar aa rahaa hai
din hai yeh raat nahii.n
kya hai kuchh bhii nahii.n hai agar
ho.nTHo.n pe hai khaamoshi magar ..
baate.n kar rahii hai.
n nazar chupke chupke silently .
do dil mil rahe hai.n magar chupke chupke .
kahii.n aag lagne se pahale
uTHta hai aisa dhu'aa.
jaisa hai idhar ka nazaara vaisa hii udhar ka samaa
dil me.n kaisii kasak sii jagii
dono.n jaanib baraabar lagii
dekho to idhar se udhar chupke chupke .
do dil mil rahe hai.n magar chupke chupke
sabko ho rahii hai khabar chupke chupke
do dil mil rahe hai.n magar chupke chupke
gup-chup gup-chup chup chup...
magar chupke chupke...

Till the song ends perfect silence in the boat..Laksh is speaking the song to Manni😳..And Aishoo, Jima dii, Mannu dii, Pragalbha dii, Robina dii are looking at Ro😉, who is sitting on the sofa near the balcony and is speaking to the nature😳...And in the mean time Nikhil and Priya too look at each other as if this song is made for them.....😳

The song ends and a clapping of two hands👏 😡bring all the others to reality😡.It was kasturi.She wasnt having any feelings when the song is sung and was looking at each of them with "U R Nuts😡" look.😡(Kasturi...😡)

Mannu dii(angrily that Kasturi broke her dream😡):It was perfect Giri...😃The feel was so nice.So which were the two hearts..😉.
Kas(irritatedly😡): Can we get on pls...
Rosy give an elbow kick to Kasturi👏 and hiss "SHUT UP😡" (3 cheers to Rosy👏)

Suddenly Mannu dii'd cell phone goes out and she answer it....
Mannu dii: hello ....* a pause* WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTT....

So read it fastly and i am waiting to hear ur comments..
Jaanu

@Jima dii first of all take good care of the health and take complete rest too😊..OK..And next I am sorry dii i am back after a long time.I went to see IPL😉. OK I tried to get Ra but the guy was busy with Preity.😆.u know how he is working in the family planning section and all.😉..Jima dii ab tum Ro ko "Duffer" bulaya...He wont leave you dii SURE😆.And dii i'll try to make him open an extension in Canada.But ...Jima dii next time you come to Kerala, never miss a houseboat ride.😃.Becos is worth going, esp a night in the middle of lake is FANTASTIC😳. Jima dii once agaain take good good care of URself and rest a lot...😊
*EDITED*
Jima dii i said in the first line itself to practice some laughing tips from devu😆.And if u go thud, who will teach me karate😭.Thanx dii...I'll try and update tonight itself becos i am also so interested now😉.And each secs new ideas are hitting me like the spinners.😆
@Manni:Thanx baby thanx a lot😳..And do u want me to say it so openly.😕.then hear it "Laksh is madly in love with you😆.😳.But u are the attitude girl.😉" there is a reason for it which i'll surely write in a part.😊..Just take a lil suspense bachoo.😉.and next part will come tonight with no doubts.😃
@Aishoo...Oh my darling, darling Aishoo thanchoo so much 😳yaar.😳😳😳.Really really thanx..And U are a BEST Friend of Robbie who hold a strong part in his life😃.So keep tuned.Next part tonight..😊

@Everyone..Thanx a lot guys😃.Your encouragement is my Boost and Horlicks to write each part😃...Thank u so much.😃..
Jaanu

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Jaanu..........I am laughing away at your decription of our expressions and feelings 🤣 me too same dii..😉

While its true that none of us 'dis' will give such leverage to KP in real life 😉 but I am absolutely willing to go with the flow in your FF 😆 😆 😆 Dii my strategy is that we see movies, read books and create things for those things that have no chance of happening in real life.If life can give us the joy, then why waste time in imagining it😉 do u agree dii.Its only my personal view😊

Man........Robbie know how to play the field does'nt he???yeh ofcourse😳 Ek ko bhi nahi choda, he had everybody twirling on his song 😆 😆 😆 our Ro is a naughty lil boy nahh😆But ofcourse he probably had only one person in mind and that is Kas!!!!!!! 😆 you cant bet....😉
Lakshya and Girish songs were good and Mani and Rosy were too funny!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 You are not urself less dii..😉😆

Great job....... 👏 👏 👏 Very funny!!! thanx a looot dii😳😳😳.i wish all my relatives, friends and neighbours read it, becos they say i am so serious all the time...😭😆