'4' KAHAANIYAAN ...Nu part pg 29 - Page 21

Originally posted by: nrasheed

januuuu where is the next part????

diiiiii😃

dii its on pg 27😃..actually icouldnt get the net properly.So i posted the part and then the replies..sorry.

Hey Jannu ..sorry yaar bahut busy thi time nahi mila read karne ka 😕

Both parts very well written 😳..so mujhe Kishu ka phone aaya tha 😳...Thanku dear ..cos aaj kal main usse bahut miss kar rahi hoon ..busy hone ki wajah se baat nahi ho payi ...

Meri Taraf se Tumhe Biggg Hug 🤗..Tum bahut he aachi aur sweet ho 😳..

Great parts dear ..so ab kab kar rahi hoon Next part ?😛

Manpreet

Originally posted by: GAPS

Something Up..Continues...

sorry uys but for the past 3 hrs i am struggling to get to IF..Finally i made it..😃

this part deicated to dear our Aishoo

"Get up u lazy Aishoo.or else we'll leave u here.This is the final Aishoo" Kas has lost her patience with Aishoo.
Aishoo gets up slowly (lazy fellow😆) and gets herself ready.She is wearing a wrinkled blue jeans and pink top.As she comes to the hall everyone is busy taking bags, checking the camera etc and Priyaand Rosy are sitting in the corner planning what to do.Priya is in a black jeans capris and white sleevelss Kurtha.Rosy is in cotton bell bottom and short tops.All the other girls are preparing breakfast/ helping the boys ? checkin their fv IF before they satrt the journey. we r IF addicts😉 in ur FF as well😆

they finally reaches the hottest destination in Kerala, the gr8 amusement park, Veegaland.The group include Pragalbha dii, Robina dii, Mannu dii, Jima di, Krishi dii, Aishoo, Manni,rosy, Kasturi,Priya, KT ,Laksh,Giri, Nikki and last but not the least Robbie.

(Veegaland is located in outskirts of Cochin, one of the biggest cities in south India. It is a very convenient location and also not too close to the city as it is located on top of a hill.Spread over a whooping 24 acres of land, its 7 storey high Vintage Castle and Caterpillar Village give a Fairy Tale atmosphere. The musical Fountains, flower gardens, water pool and water slides, thunder fal, monster twister, balarama cave add to the attraction of the Veegaland Amusement Park.
It is one of the finest amusement parks in India. And the cleanest park in India acc to my personal opinion and the Govt recrds. it had got even internatinaol awards for its never compromising tideness) &am p;nb sp; &am p;nb sp; &am p;nb sp; &am p;nb sp; nice explanation jannu👏👏👏

"So guys lets smash this trip..And be ready for any surprises ladies.." The boys and girls seperated to the changing rooms. (everyone had to wear pants and top becos there water rides and U cant go in sarees).
All the girls wear full sleeved T shirts and pants while the boys wear Shorts and T shirt..As usual the forgetfull Ro forgot to take his T shirt ..😳(*ahem * keep UR heart beats still) So he bought a T Shirt from the dress shop inside the park.😆 i can imagine him widout a T-shirt😍
And they moved down to the world of fun, thrill, laughter, magic and ****.
They first go to the Caterpillar Ride.the boys didnot went in saying it was stupid going on a caterpillar inside the ant hill.But when Manni decieded to go Laksh said, "Come On guys.it'll be fun.Atleast we can see whats in the ant hills."😲🤔
Ro:Ohhhoo Laksh ....😆☺️
And they all enjoyed sitting on a catterpillar and going in out central middle out through the caterpillar hill feeling like ants themselves.
And when the ride got over Nikhil was most releived.
They got out of it and next walked in the photospot near the lil Kangaroo(its for kids) and took photos.
Manni and Laksh took photos of everyone and robina dii was strangled b/w Mannu dii and Pragalbha dii. Rosy, Girirsh, Robbie and Kastoo posed together and Ro Ka were standing almost miles apart."Whats that rush over there.?" Aishoo asked looking over to the rushing crowd infront of a cave.The cave is in the shape of a demon with red eyes and the entrance is thru his open mouth.
Robbie:Lets check it...
Kas:Do we have to..I mean see all the children coming out are crying.I think its an injection booth.
Rosy:Dragging Kastoo..."Come On U ******😡"
And they all go to the cave and ask the guard,
Mannu dii:Excuse me Can u tell me whats this ride.
Guard:yes Maam this is Balarama cave. You travel in a train, in the darkness, various characters in the balarama stories like Kuttosan, Dakini etc comes to see you. And takes a bit guts too maam.😉 soundz scarry😕
Robbie:Oh I see ..Then its the perfect ride for Miss.Hiccups Katuri ji.😆What say guys.?
Aishoo:I am already in. brave girl😆
guard:I am sorry maam. But U have to stand in queue.
And they wait for the long que to end.Kas is getting wried feelings when she sees all small girls crying and coming out.But kids are always like that Kastoo. nothing is inside it.Just chill.She taught herself not to show her anxiety.And FINALLY our group reached the door.OMG 😲And they entered the cave and walks inside a cave dim;y lit with lanterns.It is a bit creepy and Mannii and KT and Priya too are getting a bit wried feelings. offcource im getting wierd felling🤢
And they went in the cave.Two trains were there waiting for them.8ppl can sit in one.Two in a seat.Robina dii and Pragalbha dii preferred the front seats.Mannu dii and Rosy behind, Nikhil Priya , then Jima dii andAishoo, Giri and Krishii dii. on the other train World War three is going for seatings.Robbie wanna sit front and so does Kastoo.But they dont wanna sit together.Behind them Manni is fighting with laksh to sit with giri and send Krishii too her but no use.😆
Finally the guards MAKE ro and Kastoo share front seat😳 , Manni and Laksh☺️😳 behind them.Another 3 ppl join them..(Raunak, Vikky ie, Vikas, Ariv).KT had to sit with Raunak.😉 thnx jannu mera rasta saaf hogaya😆😉
And the guards check the seat belts and give them instructions not to remive the belt or noy put hads outside etc.
And the first train moves into a door that opens itself..and is lost..
After sometimes the next rain also starts and it too enters a the darkest track anyone had ever seen.(the train is open.. no covering at all)
(The following parts are my best effort to explain something that can only be experienced)

First train:
Mannu di:oooh it is so creepy and a bit...........
She broke the sentence mid air when the train suddenly stopped in the middle of nothing but total blackness.
No sound, No noise.....
All of them Shocked:Aaaaaaaaaaaaahh..My God we are lost we are trapped here.
And they wait with their heart beats rising in the trai8n for the technicians to come..
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH..
Robina dii:Who was it what..Before she could remove her seat belt ashe stopped mouth open and abt to vomit.
A headless human body oozing blood is waking up.Dim red scary light is on its neack, showing the remains of flesh that is abt to fall off.
They couldnt beleve it..and Suddenly the train began to shake..shake so violently..
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
theirscreams could surely out run the Loksabha meetings.
And ..MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD SPIDERS..
And suddenly the train starts moving.the guys were snapped back to reality..
Robina dii (unbeleivingly):Oh my God its the ride............

Second train (It is a way behind the other train so that they couldnt hear all this screamings.Its type of voice proof.)
Kasturi:Oh God its stupid..Its only travelling in the dark.
Manni:laksh do u mind moving a lil.U R not an iron or me neither a magnet.😆
laksh:oH i am sorry Manni.. 😳
Raunak:hi i am raunak, and u R miss.. flirter
KT:Sorry but not intrested .. shame raunak
Vikky:seems like bhaiyah had got his first slap. lolz yes vikky by KT 🤢😆
Suddenly the train stops.
Total blackness.Blackness and blackness only. 'Oh my God..' gasped Manni.
Kas:what had happened?Are we stuck? OMG 😲Helloooooooooooooo koi hain..??? hellooooooooo ..
Ro: kas maaam can u pls keep quiet while the guards find them.
Kas was abt to say something but the sight behind Ro's head made her inside come out...
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRG GGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Kas had hugged Ro so tightly SO SO tighly that he is choking.She is peicing into his flesh with her long nails.
Ro:What happened ?what are you doing girl?😉 robbie itne bhi bhole mat bano😆
Kas is shivering and Ro put a hand behind her tensed.And he turns.the air almost kicked out of him.There is a girl..I mean a girly fig with her inside out..I really mean and say INSIDE OUT.
And this time Ro is gripping hard on kastoo becos the terrible thing is a breath away from him.
And the sec where a small light dims Ro catches Kastoo's eyes..And they stare ..gaze deep into each others eyes.......Manni hugging Laksh did i 😲as tightly as fevicol holding paper☺️...KT is literally inside Ra's shirt😆...And the slowesttest tune of Kuch tho hua hai starts in the background
Kuch To Hua Hai.......................................................
Kuch Ho Gaya Hai......................................................... ...........
Kuch To Hua Hai......................................................... .
Kuch Ho Gaya Hai......................................................... ............................................................ .......................

And I leave u there😡😆.....Keeping u ppl imagine RoKa, LaMa☺️, RaKT gazing at each other while the creepy spiders, headless ghosts and inside out deadbodies are waking up in the back ground...😆 dnt scare me yaar

Hope u liked this part. loved it
will soon update the next part.Pls comment too.
jaanu

jannu u made my day yaar🤗 im so happy 2 read it 😳well now ab KT humare bich nahi ayegi usse raunak jo mil gaya hai😉

update da nxt part ASAP😆

Originally posted by: sahib29

Hey Jannu ..sorry yaar bahut busy thi time nahi mila read karne ka 😕thats Ok dii..😳better late than never..😉

Both parts very well written 😳.thanchuuuuu.so mujhe Kishu ka phone aaya tha 😳...Thanku dear ..cos aaj kal main usse bahut miss kar rahi hoon ..busy hone ki wajah se baat nahi ho payi ... 😭

Meri Taraf se Tumhe Biggg Hug 🤗..Tum bahut he aachi aur sweet ho 😳..aaaaaaaaaaaaaaah got it dii and mein cheeni sei sweet hoon😳

Great parts dear ..so ab kab kar rahi hoon Next part ?😛tommorow..

Manpreet

@manniii..I dear i thought of updating tommorrow.but i am on my way to write down the thrilling experience at Veegaland..Dont be scared Manni..even i coped up with it..by the way the ride is a 15 mins one and u are just at the doorsteps....The shiver i had that day i went inside it is still FRESH in my mind☺️And Shiv is gonna help us a looooooooot😉

@Aishoo...thanx a loooooooooooot dear..When u visit kerala, U must go to this park, or else u are gonna miss THE BEST TRIP of the lifetime😳

Originally posted by: jima

jaanu dear...it was so scary to read this part yaar... dii its the ride for kids...And elders sre the ones who shiver after the ride..My cousins 2yr old, 5yr old were all laughing while i was screaming at thr TOOOOP of my voice "BACHAOOOOOO"😆do u really have this type of rides in u r state? yeah and baadh yeh hai kii u havent yet entered the park, let alone the ride U fell for it..Then just imagine U visiting it...MUst surely visit it dii with whole family..Rides for a day old kid to 100000 year old nannies😳see i am speechless i cant write any think... aap teek haina 😳gud u brought raunak too...i thinku r gud in writing not only fairy tales but scary tales too.pl next time dont write this type of scary thinks.diii if any of UR students see this they'll have a blast..Next time i am gonna take u to the ride, this time u just entered the gates😆.i donot have guts to read... chyawanprash will do i think dii..

Jaanu..............by far this is your best update!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 Girl.....................your humor is absolutely fantastic!!!! Asolutely enjoyed it!!!🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 These were my favorites:-

checkin their fv IF before they satrt the journey.

As usual the forgetfull Ro forgot to take his T shirt ..😳(*ahem * keep UR heart beats still) So he bought a T Shirt from the dress shop inside the park.😆

Laksh said, "Come On guys.it'll be fun.Atleast we can see whats in the ant hills."
Ro:Ohhhoo Laksh ....😆

I think its an injection booth.

on the other train World War three is going for seatings

theirscreams could surely out run the Loksabha meetings.

Manni:laksh do u mind moving a lil.U R not an iron or me neither a magnet.

Raunak:hi i am raunak, and u R miss..
KT:Sorry but not intrested ..
Vikky:seems like bhaiyah had got his first slap.
This takes the icing on the cake......Jaanu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was brilliant!!!!🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

The seating arrangements were brilliant and I wan to visit Veegaland!!!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 You have done a brilliant job in describing the ride!!! 👏

Originally posted by: GAPS

@manniii..I dear i thought of updating tommorrow.but i am on my way to write down the thrilling experience at Veegaland no u didnt 😕 ..Dont be scared Manni..even i coped up with it i guess😆..by the way the ride is a 15 mins one and u are just at the doorsteps wat doorsteps😕 so u mean its just a trailler picture abhi baki hai 😕....The shiver i had that day i went inside it is still FRESH in my mind☺️ OMG dont u feel scared if i was u OMG i will b lyk 😆And Shiv is gonna help us a looooooooot😉 who shiv if im not rong there is no shiv in ur ff😕 hv i missed any part😕