'4' KAHAANIYAAN ...Nu part pg 29 - Page 22

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanx guys for all ur sweet sweet comments and anyone who really wanna go to veegaland, donot at all hesitate to book a two-three day ticket, becos 1 day is not enuf even to visit all the food courts, let alone enjoy the rides.

DILS MIL RAHE HAI!!

This part is dedicated to Manni baby.

*dishyum* the rock at the side of the cave exploded and all the pyaari premis came back to reality..i mean 'horribility'.The part where the cave exploded is bathing in smoke.And a scary dim blue light mixed with the smoke.Kas is abt to fall off.But she is clinging on Ro. A skeleton slowly appeared next to Raunak's seat.
Skeleton:"HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHHEEHEHE"
Raunak:MAMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
KT and Vikky:Mooooooooooom...Koi muje bachao...
Ariv:Hai Ram..Ram ram...
Ro:Cant you stop pinchimg me u idiot?😡
Kas:Hello, its u who is hugging me Mr.?😡
Ro:It was u who hugged me first.😡

Manni:Laksh Are u deaf? Move away from me U monkey.
Laksh:Jaan pls...I'll buy u anything.Lays, kurkure,Cheetos..any thing.
manni:no thanx. if u wanna buy anything buy it for UR sweety, not me.

Suddenly the skeleton near RAunak got hold of the train and began to push it to and fro.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGHHHHHHHHH"
And finally they began to move after so much of ARGHS.

Train 1
krishi dii: Mannu, robzii., Praggu ...kya tum sab log teek hoon..meeiiii......
nikhil:Not again.(And a ghosty, with open long hair blood red eyes, bloodstained teeths and almost chalk white skin with a half burnt face rose from the side.She is looking into the mirror and is combing her hair. (Beauty conscious ghosty😳).
Ghosty (in her natural voice which resemble BT suond system):

"Krazzy with a k…. that's the way
Say k…r…a…zee…zee…y
Do it anyway…just put the k…
In k…r…a…zee…zee…y (2) "

{In original the ghosty sing a scary creepy song.}
Rosy :oh my God even Ghosts see Krazzy 4.
Robina dii: Arre yaar what all heck is in this cave. YUCK just look at that cockroaches moving on the sides of the window...
Mannu dii: Bhagwan hamei pls pls bachao.i will do only good things from now.i do NOT wanna go to hell.
Suddenly a voice:"Adjyuibjhihnmyutiwwhihmnxbcgjvn Bhoom" and the fire burst out from the pond filled with watre.All the guys turned back to see a man, alive a fresh, burning in the fire.He is waving his hand, and YUCKSS his leg just slipped off from the body...🤢

train two:
Ariv:oh my dear why didnt i listened to Mom. i shdnt have come.Atleast i shd have gone to Vintage Kitchen Restaurant with Nandini anty.( Mystery looms over here. Just by the side of Vintage Castle and the Balrama Cave, this restaurant serves North Indian, Continental and Chinese; non-vegetarian as well as vegetarian dishes. )
KT:How sick?? How can u think of food when i am abt to vomit.
Ra:WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?
KT: oh ho..i meant literarily.Even my kutha wont vomit on u man.
Laksh: KT when we went to Singapore, do u remember we went on a roller coaster. And that time u almost tore my shirt.
KT:Heee thats right.
Manni (Angrily that even the ghosts and the ghostys got afraid) Cant U ppl gimme a lil concentration.I wanna enjy this ride.
Vikky: Arre yaar I have shut my eyes with cello tapes and u R talking of enjoying this ride.
Manni:Leave it lolz...
Kas:Oh my God manni..see that ghost over here..the one combing, look at the dressing table.She uses Ponds Age Miracle.
Ro:How wonderfull..U wont even leave the ghosts in peace.
Ghosty:
Mere jaise lakho mile honge Tujhko piya
Mujhe to mila tuu hi
Tu hi mere hooton ki khilti hui se hasi
Gila bhi piya tu hi
Dekho na dekho mujhe kya hua hai
Tujhe sapno mein lakar dekho na dekho
Pucho na pucha mujhe kya
Hua hai teri baaton mein aakar
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan
O raama
Yeh Ishq Haaye Baithe bithaye
Jannat dikhaye haan......

Vikky:How cute..😳
Ariv:Thank God Nondini aunty stayed with Dushyanth Uncle.*Phew*
Kas:Ohh look at it Manni there see the snakes ... It is actually eating that frog *YUCK*
Manni:Kas can u kindly shut UP please......😡

And kas sulk while Ro burst out laughing.

And finally they end the ride and come out to the lighted corridor, where the guards took off there seat belts and wished "Have a happy day Sir"
The others had already been waiting there for them.They seems like they are just back from seeing "THE MUMMY".
Raunak (with a sweet smile): That was really nice to meet u guys esp U miss KT.
KT: What??? Who said U to call me KT?I am Tulsi. Krishnatulsi.U cant call me so, becos we are never gonna meet again.
RA:Not if u ppl mind sharing a lil snacks and ice cream with me and my family.
Ro:Oh Sure. No problem at all.
Mannu dii: So U have got your whole family here Mr....
Raunak:Raunak.
Mannu dii:WHAAAAAAAAAAAATT?? I mean Mr.Raunak. (she suddenly composed herself).
Vikky:Lets Go.Mom and Dad are in Vintage.
And they go to Vintage which is opposite to the Balarama cave.
Kas the cleanliness freek who was disheartened when she read that FOOD FROM OUTSIDE PROHIBITED gasped loud when she saw the cleanlinest food court ever.Even with 500 ppl, all hungry like bears, the food court is more cleaner than her own kitchen.
Ra:there...MOM..DAD..
And they all go to the table where a man and a woman both in pants and t shirts, are enjoying a Double Sundae.
Ra:Mom Meet these ppl Robbie, Kasturi, Mannu, Laksh, Robina(etc etc )...and Krishna tulsi.
Vikky:and meet our Dad and Mom.The two sitting over there(pointing to a couple at the table on the other side) are Ariv's Mom and Dad Alka chachi and Vishesh uncle.😉
Nandoo:Namsthei beta. pls take Ur seats. raunak Beta order icecreams and snacks for them.
Raunak:err what do u guys like.
Kas: Chocolate soundae with almond paste.
Mannu dii , Manni,and Jima dii: Strawberry with plane fresh salad.
Rosy and Aishoo:Pista Vanilla coopes and a spoon pls.
Priya: Me and Krishi and KT wud love Dbl choco walnuts.
Robina dii: i want ..er...Praggu U order man
Pragalbha dii: Butterscotch twirls.
Robbie:*Ahem * i want ..... Chocolate sunadae with vanilla mix.
Giri, Nikhil Laksh: Mango bars or Strawberry bars.......


So how was this part.Next parts sre gonna be more action packed than this one..

Jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Jaanu..............by far this is your best update!!!! 👏 👏 👏 thank u dii.Thanx a lot 👏 Girl.....................your humor is absolutely fantastic!!!! Asolutely enjoyed it!!!🤣 🤣 🤣🤣haaaann thats all i need to hear.😳 These were my favorites:-

This takes the icing on the cake......Jaanu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was brilliant!!!!🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣oh my god i'm ☺️☺️☺️

The seating arrangements were brilliant and I wan to visit Veegaland!!!!!!! next time u visit Kerala, drop a message dii.Even the history of veegaland will be on ur table😃😆 😆 😆 You have done a brilliant job in describing the ride!!! 👏again THANK UUUUUUUUUUUUUUU😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: nrasheed

OMG jaanu what is this , now how am i going to sleep tonight???? oh hooo dii its ride for small kids.Then whats gonna happen when i am gonna take u to the adults rides😆i'm scared out of my mind. your description of the ride was mind blowing, yup, amazing yaar, thank u.....😳i want to goooo visit Veegaland sounds beautiful..once u visit it then u'll never wanna go back.I had gone there alost 10 times.Yet it feels new each time i go.Becos standing siting upside down for 5 mins at a 10 feet height above the ground with nothing but a seat belt holding u is not a common experience😳 and the way ronauk popped out of nowhere had me 😆 thanckooooooo awesome part jannu, hats off your writing is just simply amazing, but nothing more or near to your excitement box😳i luved...it..... but i dont think i'll be able to sleep and its all your fault i'll be seeing dead bodies everywhere..diiii Dont worry son u may feel u are walking in the moon😆 at least now robbie and kasturi are moving closer together fantatic cant wait for the next part..luv robin diiiii 👏👏thanchooooooooo dii

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Posted: 17 years ago

Manni u caughtme at Shiv OK OK..KT is gonna help us..😳

@Rosy baby..read it faaaaaasst and i'll be waiting for ur comments.

Jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago
haila It took me entire last nite and today morning to read your FF!!! It is amazingly wonderful....man I am waiting for your update...plz do it soon
Edited by livelygal - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
really liked so nice !!!

just compelete the next part soon !!!


Urs
AishooO😳!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

@Pallavi thanx yaar thanx a lot for the effort u took dear🤗..it really touched me..😳

@AIshoo ohh thanx baby.🤗🤗.will try to continue soon.

Jaanu

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Posted: 17 years ago

😆jannu dat was fabb👏👏👏

lakshya call me jaanomg😲😍this was da bst thing in dis part👍🏼 thankoos babe🤗

omg i told kasturi 2 shut up dis was hillarious 🤣

bhooth is krzzy 4 fan 😉 but she sings a nice song 😳ye ishq hai frm jab we met😳 nyc song nd movie😉

BTW wats Lays, kurkure,Cheetos i dont noe wat r they😕 can u explain me plz😳

Laksh: KT when we went to Singapore, do u remember we went on a roller coaster. And that time u almost tore my shirt.
KT:Heee thats right. lakshya u break my heart🥺😭 jannu ab mera heart ko ase ban do❤️😉 lolz😆

dill mange more😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *princess*15

😆jannu dat was fabb👏👏👏 thanchoo so much dearie..😳

lakshya call me jaanomg😲😍this was da bst thing in dis part👍🏼 thankoos babe🤗 aaah i got the hugs...😳

omg i told kasturi 2 shut up dis was hillarious 🤣 U R soon gonna DO more, let alone say..

bhooth is krzzy 4 fan 😉 but she sings a nice song 😳ye ishq hai frm jab we met😳 nyc song nd movie😉 Thanx yaar..actualy the bhooth"y" is singing a creepy, scary song.

BTW wats Lays, kurkure,Cheetos i dont noe wat r they😕 can u explain me plz😳 ooh they are nothing..Things like Prinkles and all..Potato chips with tomato flavour...that type..😃

Laksh: KT when we went to Singapore, do u remember we went on a roller coaster. And that time u almost tore my shirt.
KT:Heee thats right. lakshya u break my heart🥺😭 jannu ab mera heart ko ase ban do❤️😉 lolz😆 baby Anyways U are getting jelous nah...Son ur jelousy may end in ❤️ who knows of the future *sigh*

dill mange more😆 oh ho..sure....😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

BTW wats Lays, kurkure,Cheetos i dont noe wat r they😕 can u explain me plz😳 ooh they are nothing..Things like Prinkles and all..Potato chips with tomato flavour...that type..😃 oh ok thnx nywayz😳

Laksh: KT when we went to Singapore, do u remember we went on a roller coaster. And that time u almost tore my shirt.
KT:Heee thats right. lakshya u break my heart🥺😭 jannu ab mera heart ko ase ban do❤️😉 lolz😆 baby Anyways U are getting jelous nah...Son ur jelousy may end in ❤️ who knows of the future *sigh* yea dear im fellin jealous 😕i wait 4 dat moment whn me nd lakshya *ahem ahem*😉

dill mange more😆 oh ho..sure....😳

Edited by *princess*15 - 17 years ago

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