Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 87

Pragz both the parts were awesome and the dialogues were above par👏🏻…can really see your hardwork yaar. …don't have any doubts it was a superb fantastic piece of writing. 👏🏻

I loved Robbie and Devika's dialogue …to be frank I loved what Robbie said to Devika and you have portrayed his feelings right from the beginning only to be voiced today to Devika so it was not at all superficial!

I could translate to kasturi's anger fully well….nothing over the top…very well written. From this part I can say that I have started liking your Robbie more than Kasturi🥰😆…phew I so wanted this to happen😆…..his behaviour was so very natural and the way he didn't bring his ego into picture but wanted practical solutions to the problem was excellent👏🏻. Like he tried her phone many times and even over the phone he didn't get judgemental over kasturi's acidic remarks …it was like he was very focussed on convincing kasturi that she has to apologise😆. He is not bothered that she didn't pick up his call …uff I can keep on gushing about him now😉. Either in dialogues with kasturi or Devika you seem to give all ur best to Robbie😉😆.

Looks like u have done some googling over the medical complications…I am so gald Puru is OK😀..I didn't want any major setback which would be like a permanent reminder of this accident.

I knew that Devika would hear one of Roka convo and it happened😜 …You have really given such a marvellous personality to Devika here that I cannot anyway relate her to the showwali😆. And she is one of the most amazing mom and as a human also when she instantly accepts her mistake to Robbie and kastu is awesome. I cant wait to see kastu and Devika warm up more to each other.🥰

At last Gia has arrived😀…the sweet angel I was waiting for her..only she seems to solve any problems betn RK. So kastu has been hiding from her also..and what is this looks like Gia also has problems😭…poor gal..what might that be and you have still not told us what was kasturi doing in the bustop😆. I just loved all Gia said to kastu…Prazg I can really see in each dialogue you seem to have put so much effort and thought👏🏻..I am glad or what that ur office project is over😆.

The sequencing was superb..the way Robbie-Devika talk and he leaves then how kastu calls Devika and when RK meet how the air is cleared before that b'cos when they hug as a reader also you know that both of them have cleared the confusion in their mind and ofcourse for that Devika was very instrumental. I simply loved the way Robbie always lightens the atmosphere with his jokes….You are simply awesome Pragz..I am so gald to read such marvels. You always put your heart and soul into writing which we can sense and that gives such a magical touch to the parts. So now their fight is over can we expect some intense romance🥰 before you bring in any other twist or problems..pleeeaasseee😆.

PS: I read your comments to others comments..when we write hope this or that is cleared or something like that as a comment even you write yes hope it is cleared...what is this ur the puppeteer and u write like that as if ur helpless😉😆