Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 88

OMG now thats a treat lolz😆 2 parts together😲 had a nice time reading both parts

Originally posted by: Herman_4u

me first I am glad Hermoo 😃

haha di, i have read the parts, i'll come back after i have thought about them and edit. but i loved the last joke, poor kasturi, company ka diwala nikal jataa, dat was hilarious.😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 Glad you liked it!

i'll edit this post.

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starting from the beginning, the situation was well explained, i mean robbie being in charge, and doing everything that was needed to be done at that moment. and how robbie was busy but yet thought of kasturi. He was trying to be fair towards both of them! it was pretty gud, and wen he called her and she said maze mein, i found dat line pretty funny, i actually laughed we i read it. I was laughing too while reading it! but however,i think kas should showed a little more sensiblity and asked him about his uncle. She meant too but she was super upset! robbie has so much patience man, he called her 11 times, wow, it's tough for a youngster. When you are in love, its not so tough! 😉 it was his uncle he met an accident, don't u think she should have stood by him, instead of giving him all that trouble, and yet it was robbie who was calling her over and over again to sort out the problems. Well, Robbie was the one who asked her not to call him, so she really could not have, right? As to giving trouble, she was angry, how many of us can really think when we are mad? 😃 and puru's situation was realistic, how he had all these injuires, n all, it would have been fake i u had said there were just some minor injuries in such a huge accident. I wanted it to be serious but not life-threatening! 😆 instead of increasing his tensions ,and troubling him more, she would have just said sorry just for his sake, just lessen his stress. I think this was a step for her to get to that level of understanding that sometimes things should be done to just move on! i felt she could have been more supporting since she was in the hospital. i just wish she understands robbie more than that, seems like gia on the other hand understand her boyfriend more than her, Well Gia was not in the middle of the mess and so it was easier to sit on the banks and pass advice 😆 😆 😆 but the situation was handled by devika very well, matlab saap bhi mar geya aur lathi bhi nahi tuti. Very well said! and that mom and son's conversation was pretty gud. and i would have done the same as divya lol, would have reacted the same way, Nah Hermoo........you seem more matured than her 😃 but why didn't u described robbie's feelings to wat divya had said about kas.🥰 would have loved to read that.Aah......what will come in later chapters 😃

one more thing, not in this particular situation, but u know in some normal situaiton wen we say that mafi mangane say app chhotte nahi ho jauge, so don't u think it should be the same for elders too, if it's really their fault, they can just admit it or perhaps apologize to their younger ones, i mean yeah we respect them n all, but it won't make them smaller either, so i thought it was very sensible of devika to say sorry to kasturi and admit everything with so much dignity and no sign of shame or anything to robbie.👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻That's right. Truth is truth no matter what your age or status or situation!

and i think this just the start of their un bans,😆 they will continue, especially wen their two opposite personalities, I will say it is a good guess! 😆 robbie being mature, understanding, on the other hand, kasturi very imature, and ziddi,I won't call her immature and ziddi at all!! We need to understand the place she has come from! She has come from a place where she was the princess, so based on that I think she has changed amazingly!

and i always thought that gia belongs some higher class family too as she has car n all, She does! She is very rich! but did she date any middle class guy or something. will be waiting for her secret to open up. Her secret will be revealed in the coming parts! keep rolling di, ur hard work is completely visible to ur readers, and i just wish that u continue to write amazingly as u do, and not get lazy like me,😆 Thank you very much Hermoo! 😃

love

harman😜

Originally posted by: robbii

wow... thank u sooo much pragal for giving us double treat by posting 2 parts ...i luv u for the same...🤗... Thank you Shumi! And thank you for your patience too!!🤗

very well and emotionally narrated about devika's wish to hear robbie calling her 'maa'.in ur FF devika is really a sweet heart...i luv her character...but this type of character is rare in real life....Yes, it does seem unlikely that there will be such good people but what I really wanted to achieve was to go away from the typical evil step-mother kind of way a woman is always displayed!

poor girl kasturi ....she was exhausted,angry, hurt and confused...very well said about her condition.Thank you! 😃

midnight when robbie became free and got the time to think about kasturi he should have called her...ufff..so that next day morning atleast kasturi might have found a misscall from him..so that she might have been little bit relived from her anger and tensed condition....Well, he did not want to disturb her that late in the night and besides when one is tired, one tends to be very short-tempered, so he figured he will let the situation cool first!

i think u r very good in science subject...very well explained about puru's cervical herniated disc...i liked that part...Arre nahi Shumi, woh sab google ka kamaal hai! 😆 😆

poor girl kasturi waiting for robbie's call for 3.5*24 ...it is really a very long period for young lover .he called her 11 times...only..???....phew...it is nothing comparing to awaiting for a call for 3.5*24(80 hrs...heeeeeee..)Poor guy, he did keep trying till she picked up the phone! 😳

the phone dialogue between robbie kasturi was very sweet...i liked it.

robbie remainded to kasturi that he said he will not be able to talk to her for a while...omg...for a while he meant for 3.5*24 hrs ...ufff...it is too much lol..

kasturi did not ask about his chacha..aaray yaar she is right...3.4*24 hrs oh pak rahee thee robbie ke call kay liyeah...do u think she will ask about his chacha as soon as she received the call from him ...ufff ..not practical...Thanks Shumi! Well, nothing wrong in his expecting it, right?

robbie said mai apni maa ke baare mei kuch nahi sunnaa chahataa...lol that is too bad...now he is free from all his tention...why dont he listen to kasturi's words about his mom...for the satisfaction of kasturi he would have listen to her....atleast for name sake...It was not because of tension that he was not willing to listen to Kasturi, he had complete trust in his mother and so he did not want to listen about his mother from someone who did not really know her! 😊

robbie told kasturi to apologize to his mom...why should she??...while she did not do any mistake...if he is so concern about his mom he should have asked sorry to his mother behalf of kasturi....At that point, he did not know that his mother was also slightly at mistake!

he did not want to listen to her safaayee...he did not want to listen any thing about his mother ...but he want her to apologize to his mother...that is not fair...instead he should have made her realised the need for apologizing to his mother like gia did...any way i think he left the job to gia cuz he dont want to lose his attitude...ufff...He never really had the time to explain things to her and then all the while he was attempting to really calm the situation down! Hopefully the next part will convince you! 😆

Originally posted by: lwfw

pragz 🤗 this for you just because you go through writer's dilemma about the future of the character 🥰 once again a very well written part.
worth the wait 😉 Thanks Shara! Sorry for the delay and thank you for your patience!

good to know that you have cleared Roka angle issue and along with you have made devika a wonder ful women 👏🏻 I figured you all will be angry with me, if I continue RK tiff! 😆 😆 😆

now i remember that you had a conversation about gift between roka in very early parts. now the gifts he is giving are very apt to that parts discussion. i love this small small things in your FF too Thanks Shara! I definitely tried to maintain the characters as much as possible!

once again thanks for such a wonderful FF. i always read at one breath 😆 Thanks Shara 🤗 your wonderful comments have made my day!

👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻 when is the next part 😉 i know i am shameless when it comes to asking for next part 😆 [color=blue] Everytime I make a promise but several times I have not been able to keep it 😆 isliye I am scared to give a day, but lets say by Friday I will update the next part and it will be full of RK and AA romance in it! 😉 😆 😆

Originally posted by: robbii

thanks for u r bonus part pragal... Thanks for waiting for it Shumi! 😃

robbie told kasturi to say sorry to his mom...ok...fine..i wounder why he did not say sorry to kasturi for his rude reaction on that day?? he dont even think about that...attitude??...ummmm.. No, you eill be happy when you read the whole part! 😃

kasturi told robbie 'dont bother to call me...ever again..' she is right...tho da robbie ko bhee pakk naay dho.Arre yaar, bechaara already itnaa tension mei hai! Upar seh aap usse aur sataana chahti hai! 😆 😆 😆 😆

devika came to know about robbie kasturi relation through his phone conversation...good idea.Thank you!

reunion of robbie kasturi on kasturi's birth day another good idea lol...Thanks again! 😃

gia was butter between robbie kasturi .i liked her character too.gia made kasturi to realize the necessity of saying sorry to robbie's mom...may be if robbie would have told to kasturi she might not have convinced...You are right! she was so angry with him that she probably would not have listened to him!

why gia was emotional while she is talking to kasturi?she told 'mai experience seh bataa rahi hun...' what is her experience..?..eager to know at the earliest...Her story will be revealed in a few parts!

i feel gia understood about robbie more than kasturi while she was convincing kasturi...Because........there is a reason behind it! 😉 😆

atleast robbie was patient enough to listen to his mom's explanation....if not kasturi's...i am happy..Because Devika did not start the conversation in an antagonizing tone as Kasturi did! That made the whole difference!!

aaray yaar instead of celebrating her birthday with her family and friends kasturi was in the studio...omg..to meet robbie???....robbie should learn from her ...she left her family and friends on her special day for this duffer...Well, it was her decision, Robbie did not force her!! 😉 😆 😆

finally he said sorry to her...i am happy.I am sure, you must be!! 😆 😆

he gifted the kathak dancer pandit birju maharaj's ghunghroo...great gift...ofcourse unmooll...i think u r good in art too...cuz i never new about these things...He is a very very considerate guy who put a lot of thought into the things he does! 😛

still robbie is not aware that kasturi said sorry to his mom..i think if he come to know he will be flying...Yeah..😆 😆 he will know in the next part!

why robbie asked kasturi to promise that she will never leave him..???...aaray yaar ...kasturi kay gharwaalay kuch kadbad karnaay waalay hain kya..??..uff..2-3 parts mei pataa chal jaayegaa!

kasturi said 3.5*24 is 80 hrs...pragal she is right cuz she rounded off the figure...heeeeeeeeee...in fact she is smarter...he ..heee...heeeeeha ha Shumi..........you will go any extent to protect Kasturi, won't you?? 😆 😆 😆

note:lol i am fully satisfied and happy with the way u brought robbie-kasturi togeather after a tiff between them..welldone pragal...👏👏👏Thank you very much Shumi! All your encouragement and support is helping me write this!

Originally posted by: RK_fan111

Pragz both the parts were awesome and the dialogues were above par👏🏻'can really see your hardwork yaar. 'don't have any doubts it was a superb fantastic piece of writing. 👏🏻Thank you very much Paddu! 🤗 It gives me a lot of encouragement to write more! 😃

I loved Robbie and Devika's dialogue 'to be frank I loved what Robbie said to Devika and you have portrayed his feelings right from the beginning only to be voiced today to Devika so it was not at all superficial! They both very truthfully revealed their feelings and their fears too! And after such revelation from Devika, he could not hide his feelings anymore!

I could translate to kasturi's anger fully well'.nothing over the top'very well written. Thank you! 😃 From this part I can say that I have started liking your Robbie more than Kasturi🥰😆'phew I so wanted this to happen😆'..ha ha I am very glad!! 😆 😆 his behaviour was so very natural and the way he didn't bring his ego into picture but wanted practical solutions to the problem was excellent👏🏻. That's true Paddu! He is very egoistical too but at this moment he kept it under control! And as you said he was focussing on getting the problem resolved Like he tried her phone many times and even over the phone he didn't get judgemental over kasturi's acidic remarks 'it was like he was very focussed on convincing kasturi that she has to apologise😆.Yep.......because he is thinking about the long run! And wants a solution for this issue! He is not bothered that she didn't pick up his call 'uff I can keep on gushing about him now😉. Either in dialogues with kasturi or Devika you seem to give all ur best to Robbie😉😆. Yes I do! I just cannot help it!! 😆 😆 😆

Looks like u have done some googling over the medical complications'I am so gald Puru is OK😀..Yes, I had to! Nahi toh mujhe body kaa kaun saa bhi part kaa medical term nahi maaloum!😆 😆 😆 I didn't want any major setback which would be like a permanent reminder of this accident.Yeah.......I did not want to take that risk either! 😃

I knew that Devika would hear one of Roka convo and it happened😜 'Ahaa Paddu......very good! You have really given such a marvellous personality to Devika here that I cannot anyway relate her to the showwali😆. Very true 😆 😆😆 But I soooo hope that Devika in the serial also gets a chance to shine!!! And she is one of the most amazing mom and as a human also when she instantly accepts her mistake to Robbie and kastu is awesome. I cant wait to see kastu and Devika warm up more to each other.🥰She is definitely very down to earth and honest! Warming up between them will happen in the consequent episodes and I hope you will find it satisfying!

At last Gia has arrived😀'the sweet angel I was waiting for her..only she seems to solve any problems betn RK. I know! But being a best friend gives one that advantage of knowing a person in and out! So kastu has been hiding from her also..and what is this looks like Gia also has problems😭'poor gal..what might that be and you have still not told us what was kasturi doing in the bustop😆. Yes, she has problems and it is linked to the busstop situation! Will be revealed in a few parts! 😃 I just loved all Gia said to kastu'Prazg I can really see in each dialogue you seem to have put so much effort and thought👏🏻..I am glad or what that ur office project is over😆.Thanks Paddu! 😆 😆 😆 Those are dialogs that I completely believe in!

Even kasturi thinks that Robbie is stingy😆 and not only kastu everyone here also is equally anxious to see what Robbie gives kastu as a gift😆😆😆Well, he has already given her the first gift! Anything he gives her will be different, special and thoughtful! 😳

The sequencing was superb..the way Robbie-Devika talk and he leaves then how kastu calls Devika and when RK meet how the air is cleared before that b'cos when they hug as a reader also you know that both of them have cleared the confusion in their mind and ofcourse for that Devika was very instrumental. Yes Devika was instrumental. At first Devika did not open her mouth because she was not sure how deeply Robbie was involved. But once she realizes it, she is unable to see him suffer and so makes the attempt to settle things between them! I simply loved the way Robbie always lightens the atmosphere with his jokes'.You are simply awesome Pragz..I am so gald to read such marvels. You always put your heart and soul into writing which we can sense and that gives such a magical touch to the parts. So now their fight is over can we expect some intense romance🥰 before you bring in any other twist or problems..pleeeaasseee😆.Thank you very very much Paddu! And yes next part will be as romantic as possible!

PS: I read your comments to others comments..when we write hope this or that is cleared or something like that as a comment even you write yes hope it is cleared...what is this ur the puppeteer and u write like that as if ur helpless😉😆That is precisely the reason I say that!! Because I do not want it to sound like I am controlling the strings! 😆 😆 😆

Originally posted by: Super Kool

both the parts are simply awesum 👏. i m so happy dat devika is such a mature character and the problem b/w roka is over. Thank you very much Suvi!! 😃 Yes, I decided to resolve their issue at the earliest instead of dragging it on and on! Only then I can bring new issues between them! 😉 😆 😆

It was so thoughtful of robz to giv her ghunghroo in gift. i really wish males were so thoughtful in real life too.😉😆Some of them are but mostly we come across the not so thoughtfuk ones! 😆 😆 😆 That is why, kam se kam FF mei apni dill ki muraad poori kar rahi hun! 😉 😆 😆 😆 i m so happy dat robz shared his past wid kas. they ll get closer now.Yes. His past was something that he would only share with somebody he has completely accepted and that is what he wanted to show Kasturi and so shares his past with her! 😊

i really njoyed the part.As always i surey wanna say im a grrr8 fan of ur writing skill.Keep on rocking!!!

👏 Thank you very very much Suvi! Your encouragement goes a long way in keeping me motivated! 🤗

Originally posted by: pop77

awsome parts prags..wait to worth..kya likha hai..Thanks lot Payal sweety! 😳 🤗 accha kiya tumne robbie or kas ki fight khatam kar li.. lekin robiie ko kas ki baat to suni thi..i know he can't hear anything against her chachi.. Haan, sun nee toh chahiye lekin hum bahut baar ghusse mei apaa kho baithte hai and this is what I wanted to portray in that scene! Besides, he has completely trust on his aunt and so does not believe that she can do anything wrong! i really touch robbie &devika convo..read karte dil bhari ho gaya..It was definitely a very emotional talk between them..................a talk they probably meant to have several times over the past year, but never did and probably would never have but this extreme situation had pushed it out in the open!

devika ko patta chal gaya ke robbie kas se pyar karta hai..uski muskil bhi jan gayi..aach huha jo devika ne bola kas ka koi kasur nahi tha..Haan, pehle toh Devika shock ho gayi yeh jaan ke leking pgir baad mei ussned adjust kar liyaa!

wow i love the Ghunghroo for the gift..ye robbie ko kaise mila..Ha Ha 😆 😆 yeh mei bataane kaa koi plan nahu kiyaa. Lekin ab tum poocj rahi ho toh, kuch na kuch sochungi!

😆80 hours..

tumne post karne me dher ki but mindblowing part post kiya..Thanks a lot dear and than you for your patience! My aaj kal bahut slack ho gayi hoon! Time phe post hi nahi kar rahi hun!, Sorry about that!

waiting for next part..Will post in a few days, romantic part hogaa! 😉

Originally posted by: nrasheed

Hi Pragzs.. Yipeeee you posted and not just one part but 2 amazingly emotionally overcharged parts..👏 First off Robina, sorry for the delay and second, I cannot tell you how special I feel that you took the time out of your busy schedule to read and comment! Thanks a lot! 🤗 had a really wonderful time reading the parts.. and i really felt for your delimma as well, and i want to say that i feel you have done justice to the whole roka fight and the patch up, i dont believe anyone could have done it better.. it was Perfect.. felt really flowed really well , ever character was simple bang on with their lines and emtions, and hesitations...fantastic... Thank you so much for such inspiring and encouraging comments! 😃 When I first wrote the parts, I intensified their fight but when I read it I felt it was not justified to their characters! Both Devika and Robbie are mature individuals and there is no way they would have let such a small-sized issue get out of hand! And so then I revised the parts! 😊

I have to say that you know i really liked how robbie handled himself i felt it very realistic.. a guy is attached to his mom... and yeah since he didnt see the whole situation him taking her side was fine.. That's right. Anyday he will lean towards his mother more for what she has done for him! And partly the issue was also that he did not know what actually happened between Kasturi and Devika. He was a witness only to the last part of the situation! as for apologizing..i loved roka's arguement over that cuase seriously again simply very natural.. the hanging up, the waiting the anger when they finally do talk.. uff it was such an emotional rollercoaster.. but you did a wonderful job depicting everything.. all the emotions.. and the dialogue btw roka was riviting.. had me glued to my seat.. brilliant parts Pragzs.. thanks alot.. for i didnt wnat the roka fight to drag on...Thank you very much Robina for liking it so much! I am glad our thoughts coincided on that front that we did not want RK spat to drag too much! And the apologizing.............I wanted to include this situation definitely in my FF because I wanted to show how much a rich brat like Kasturi had changed herself. But inspite of that change, she still had a little bit of the rich arrogance in her which was pricked as soon as Robbie asked her to apologize and so I wanted to show how even that arrogance is curbed by her!!

Devika was simply amazing.. i wonder are there women like that out there. who would be so understanding.. who would own up to their melt downs.. so hats off to devika for being a women of integrity, honor, and most importantly for loving robbie with no strings attached.. their conversations was just mind blowing.. i got sorta teary eyed.. 😭 Oh Robina!!! That made me felt so touched! More so because the mother sentiment in your whispers is at a very high quoteint and so I wanted to atleast match it! The way you depict parental feelings in your FF is so touching that I feel the same way when I read those parts of your's!!! so glad that devika and robbie know how much they love one another.. i luv their relationship, so now i dont see devika being the obstcle in roka's love story. so i guess it has to be kaushalya.. ohhh thats gonna be a very hard lady to convience.. i feel for robbie...!!!(waiting axiously for that showdown...) mmmmm 😃 I am afraid I will hold off my comments on that because anything I say will probably give out the next thing I have up my sleeve 😉 😆 😆 Just 2 or 3 more parts and I think you will get a picture of what exactly will happen between Kaushalya and RK!

okay i really missed ajay.. 😳😉

robbie and kasturi finally coming together uff really loved it and missed it.... they're emotional attachement was sooo tender and sweet.. and what a gift... rocked big time Pragz...⭐️ now thats what i call a gift.. Robbie is sooooo innovative and imaginative...(read to mean yourself😳😃)Oh thanks!😃 😆 😆 Yes, he is very innovative and does not believe in doing the routine that everyone does!! But by projecting him that way, I have basically dug a hole for myself! Now everytime I will have to rack my brains to come up with something unique!! 😆 😆 😆

Okay so now on to what gia is hiding... such a sweetie is hiding some major hurt in her heart... cant wait for that to be revealed... thanks again for such another amazingly emotional charged part. and thank god no cliff hanger...Gia's situation will be revealed in the next couple of parts as soon as I get a placeholder in the FF for her story! Thanks a lot again Robina for taking the time and enjoying it and letting me know!!! Deeply appreciate it! 😳

love robina

Originally posted by: aradana

Pragalbha: I read through all your parts and they are mind blowing and I cannot exprez my feeling . Yipeeeeeee I have a new reader!!!! 😃 😳 😃 I am so happy to read your comments Aradana!!! 😳 It is every writer's dream to see more and more readers for their work and I am so happy that you took the time and interest to read this FF!!! ..Its just too good better than any novel ..I am so addicted to your writing style . I didnt know anyone could write so well. Oh thanks a lot!!! Makes me feel very very encouraged! Thank you for such wonderful comments! 😳 I really feel for me for not reading this for so long. Thanks for thisI do hope you will continue to read and that I will continue to satisfy all of you with my writing! 😃