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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

Hey Pragz dii wowwwwwwwwwwwww u updated n dt 2 not 1 but 2 gr8 awesome parts.Each part just gets better n better Thanks a lot Hummy! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

ok Part 31:
That is so true trust does take time to build
awwwwwwwwwww devika u wanted robbie to call u maa since ages n he did awwwwwwwwwwwwwww
awwwwwww devika u did so much 4 him jus like he in your own blood how sweet Yes, she has been very caring and loving towards Robbie!
that must have and is an emotinal part between robbie and devika
ok alaana shivani and divya finding out like that definately they mus hav been dead worried all mixed emotions going through them awwwwwww bless They were naturally very worried for their dad considering that it is a very close knit family!
ok kasturi i feel sorry for you but dont worry everything happend at the wrong time and with the wrong ppl
awwwww her heart not listening to her mind that explains it all
10 hours 4 his call?????? omg
4 sleeping pills wowww
ok robbie you do that let the misunderstandings be cleared between kasturi n devika
kasturi dont worri although you had no miss calls youll be seeing him soon Its really cute the way you console Kasturi! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
wowwwww a slipped disk
robbie you being the pillar as ure aunty n uncle have shatterd is jus so awesome knowing that you can support them in this time the most It was his way of loving them back and showing his gratitude for what they had done for him! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
ok kasturi apologising to your cha chi i think thats going to be more harder than it seems
wow kasturi you are damn angry Very true Hummy, it was hard for Kasturi to do it, specially considering her background!
kasturi no matter how much you lie to robbie hell always know
wowwwww kasturi u calculated it all 3 and a half days 80 hours wowwwwwwwwww
that conversation from where to where
thats true
"Jahaan pyaar hotaa hai, wahaan vishwaas bhi hotaa hai!!! "
and robbie thats so sweet you do totally love her
i knew that would happen kasturi would never agree to apologise to devika
kasturi your too angry cool down Well, she certaingly did after a few days! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
and awwwwwwww kasturi robbie was just going to say dont put the phone down but thats what u did
ok devika u mus be thinking what has happend to robbie?????
his totally in love with kasturi ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Yes, he is!!! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Part 32:
wow devika u got a shock didnt you.
But kasturi is not a bad girl she is jus so gr8 once u get 2 knw her ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I think Devika will need lot more convincing than that to accept Kasturi! ๐Ÿ˜•
wow kasturis bday on Saturday bless
HAPPY BDAY KASTURI I will pass on your wishes to her, Hummy! ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†
awwww kasturi ur stil in a depressed mood and that to because of your face off with robbie.
U shidl seriously answer his call Well, anger can sometimes make us act against our wishes!
Ok Gia only u culd do something
yh u both should forgive and forget
ok well said Gia Yes. Gia is a much more level headed about this situation because she is not directly involved in it!
you are going to have to adjust kasturi alot
ok i jus love how gia said: "yeh koi teen ghanton ki movie nahi jiss mei hero hamesha right hotaa hai aur kabhi koi galti nahi kar saktaa!! This is real life, baby!"
so true ok devika thank you sooooooooooo much 4 having that conversation with robbie ro nothing would ever happen Thank you for liking that dialog Hummy.............Its all the more important for you teenage girls to realize this!
yup totally a freind in need is a freind indeed totally yh jus imagine what kasturi can do for her love
awwwww kasturi u managed to phone to apologise bless wowwww bet you were shocked kasturi n thnx soooo much the misunderstandings are cleared now between them
kasturi u finally answered the phone fast init
10 minutes like 10 hours wowwwwww ๐Ÿ˜†
ok kasturi n robbie hugging like that jus shows how much they missed each other and kasturi totaly is goign to stay and love robbie for ever and ever
๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† ok kasturis back to normal ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†robbie she did wnat the gift lol Glad you liked their making up part!
robbie thats an awesome gift for her wowwwwwww a gr8 khathak dancers anklet ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† yup robbie has his connections that is jus such an awesome gift It was definitely a most unique gift!
awwwwwwwwww robbie telling kasturi about his life about his parents awwwwwwwwwww
๐Ÿ˜† robbie lolz kasturi is bad at maths not 80 hours but 84 hours ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
๐Ÿ˜ก a furious kasturi ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† while robbie dodges her punches
ok pragz dii u ended in such a gud way and totally it was the best birthday i bet for kasturi thats he culd ever have ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
keep up the gr8 awesome superb fabulous terrific work up Thank you very much Hummy! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ And my apologies for replying to your comments this late! Sorry about that!
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Update the nxt part soon
Luv
Hummy
xxxx

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *princess*15

OMG now thats a treat lolz๐Ÿ˜† 2 parts together๐Ÿ˜ฒ had a nice time reading both parts Thank you very much Mani! And I am sorry for the delayed response to your wonderful comments!

RoKa fight and there patch up it was WOWโญ๏ธ and very well written dii ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
there dialouges were amazing๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Glad you liked them! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
In RoKa fight i noticed something i saw that Robbie isn't like a angry guy or something
he handled situation very well๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ but im angry with him๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜† for one thing he should'v call
her when he was thinking about her ๐Ÿ˜ณwhen he (well both of them๐Ÿ˜†) cantbe able to sleep๐Ÿ˜† Well, as you yourself said that he handled the situation very maturedly...........so he thought it was best not to call her so late in the night and disturb her!
Devika and Robbie's bond is really nice๐Ÿ˜ณ and you have written that amazingly๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Thank you Mani!
Kasturi's anger was so natural๐Ÿ˜ณ OMG i can understand how she was feeling๐Ÿ˜ณ She was furious! ๐Ÿ˜†
OMG Gia had experience in middle-class family๐Ÿ˜ฒ but she is does not belong from
middle class family๐Ÿ˜• then how come she knows about middle class families
tradtions and stuff like that ๐Ÿ˜•hmmm maybe she had a boyfriend from middle
class family ๐Ÿ˜•just like Kasturi ๐Ÿ˜ณif that happens to Gia then why did they broke up ๐Ÿ˜•
OMG i want to know Gia's truth๐Ÿ˜† You will! I will be able to reveal that in a few parts! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I thought there fight will go on like 3/4 more parts๐Ÿ˜† but because of Devika
that didnt happen๐Ÿ˜† Nah! I did not want to stretch that fight unnecessarily! And yes this time it was resolved by Devika herself!
Finaly!!! Devika agree that was her fault ๐Ÿ˜†so now i guess she wont have
any problems with RoKa๐Ÿ˜ณ As of now, she has none! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Gia is the only one who can make Kasturi understand๐Ÿ˜›
So now Robbie told Kasturi his life truth๐Ÿ˜ณ
The Great Kathak Dancers Anklets WOW Kasturi got a really
nice boyfriend๐Ÿ˜† She sure does!!! ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†
Eagerly waiting for the next part dii ๐Ÿ˜ณi want to know Gia's truth ๐Ÿ˜†
please post the next part ASAP๐Ÿ˜› I will Mani! But the current situation with SA vs the new girl has really upset me!
Mani๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 17 years ago

Friends, I am off to California! Next part will be posted on Tuesday! Sorry for the delay! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Friends, I am off to California! Next part will be posted on Tuesday! Sorry for the delay! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ



prgz no problem, enjoy yaar. but thanks for the note this way i do not have to keep reloading till tuesday ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago

hey pragg so sorry dear for late ...actully aaj subha hi spain se wapis aayi aur aate hi shaam ko login kiya toh tumhara parts read kiya .

teeno parts hi bahut pyare likhe hai ....u know jab maine latest parts se pehle wala part read kiya toh main bahut upset huyi ki ab kya hoga ...Roka meh problems kesse solve hogi ...and second last part meh kasturi ki ego dekh kar aur bhi bhi pareshan ho gayi ...lekin last part meh sab pareshani dur ho gayi ๐Ÿ˜ณ... Robbie bahut hi pyara bahut hi samaj daar hai ...waqt ko bahut aache se sambhalta hai ....jis tarah usne apne ghar ki duty aur pyar ko sambhala mujhe bahut aacha laga .....aur itna pareshan hone ke baad bhi kastu ko 11 baar phone kiya ...balki kastu ko iss mauke meh saath dena chahiye tha ...u know pragg ..real life meh bhi kehte hai ki couples meh ek.. dusre se jayada samajdaar hota hai ...aur same yahi tumne bhi kiya hai ...robbie ko jayada samajdaar bana kar
thank god ..devika aur kasturi ke beech meh koi problem nahi raha ...nahi toh future meh problem ho jaata ......and pragg ...gia ka kya problem hai ??...kya baat hai ...wo apne kis dard ko chupa rahi thi ??...kya tum iss baare meh pehle kuch likh chuki ho ??.yaa maine kuch miss kiya hai ...jaldi batayo
last scene bahut hi pyara laga ๐Ÿ˜ณ......mujhe wait hai ki ab kasturi ki family aur robbie ki sister iss news ko sun kar kya react karte hai ...ki robbie aur kasturi ka affair hai ...
pragg har baar tumhe kehti hoon ki tum bahut aachi writter ho ...lekin aaj nahi kahungi ...kyu ki tum aachi writter hone se pehle ek aachi insaan ho ...kyu ki tumne jis tarah apni ff ke characters ko dhaala hai ..wo sab ek aacha insaan hi kar sakta hai ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘....tum apne characters ko itna aacha bana deti ho ki har character se pyar ho jaata hai ...thanku verymuch for lovely FF๐Ÿค—
kab likh rahi ho tum next part ??
Manpreet
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Friends, I am off to California! Next part will be posted on Tuesday! Sorry for the delay! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

are you living in california?
thanks for info..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Mannu............Yaar tune toh IF seh badi lambi chutti le lee hai! ๐Ÿ˜•
But thank you for making the time and stopping by to read the FF! And for all those wonderful comments! ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
The next 2 parts are coming up.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Re-cap : The face-off between Robbie and Kasturi ends thanks to Devika who tells Robbie that Kasturi's behavior was perfectly alright. Kasturi and Robbie make up on her birthday. Robbie gifts her a fantastic gift. And Kasturi also makes it up with Devika by apologizing for her behavior.

PART- 33 : ANOTHER LOVE STORY
After she has disconnected Kasturi's call, Devika remembers that she forgot to wish Kasturi on her birthday! She regretfully recollects that she does not have Kasturi's number with her and so could not even call her back. She makes a mental note to take her number from Robbie and wish her later. ๐Ÿ˜Š

"Party mei.....?".......asks Kasturi hesitantly. ๐Ÿ˜› She had locked up the studio and she and Robbie were walking down to their parked vehicles. She badly wanted him to come to the birthday party but could not outright ask him, because of his uncle's delicate situation!
"I am sorry Kas, I can't! Kya situation hai, yeh toh tum jaanti ho".........apologizes Robbie. ๐Ÿ˜• Kasturi shakes her head indicating she understood. Robbie continues......."But I promise! Jaise hi chachaji ghar aa jaayenge, tumhaara birthday phir seh celebrate karenge.......just the two of us! ๐Ÿ˜› You can turn 22 again!! Theek hai? ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Kasturi's face breaks into a happy smile! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ She loves the idea and whole-heartedly approves it and jokes with a twinkle in her eye......."Gift bhi phir seh chahiye!"
Robbie replies with a wink : Lagtaa hai tumhaare bhai seh baat karni padhegi.......mujhe salary increment dilwaane ke liye!" ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜†
They both laugh their way to the vehicles. There are a lot of people around and so Robbie gives her a quick hug and a slight peck on her left cheek while Kasturi gets into car. ๐Ÿ˜ณ He wishes her a happy birthday once back and Kasturi drives away waving to him. She does not tell him that she called and apologized to his aunt! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

When Robbie reaches home, Devika tells him that Kasturi had called and apologized as soon as he had left! That information will leave Robbie very happy and relieved! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ He immediately calls her up and thanks her for doing it for him and also conveys his aunt's birthday wishes to her. Then, he and Devika get ready to go to the hospital so that Alaana can come back for the night.

Alaana had been a pillar of support for Devika this past week! She had taken over the responsibilities of the house such as cooking, cleaning etc with such ease that Devika had been left wondering! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ She had always known her kids were capable but the way Robbie and Alaana had quietly and unassumingly taken over the responsibilities of the house, she had no words to express!!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ A couple of days ago watching Robbie and Alaana take care of an unexpected development, Leela had turned to her and had said
Leela : Tere bacche bade ho gaye hai Devika! Ab tujhe kisi baat ki fikar karne ki zaroorat nahi! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜Š
Tears had crowded her eyes at that statement ๐Ÿ˜ญ and she had stared at both of them surprised, shocked and wondering.๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜›............"When did my children grow up?? How did they grow up so quickly?? How did all that time pass............where did it all disappear?? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ It seemed like just yesterday when she was still forcing a fretting Alaana to apply coconut oil to her hair and and was asking a hyper-active teen Robbie to choose between either Cricket or Hockey or Basketball and not try to play all 3 games!!!" (๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†)..............Those thoughts had suddenly made her feel old but she was proud to feel that way knowing that she and Puru had done an excellent job in bringing them up and teaching them the values of life!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜Š


Devika and Robbie reach the hospital to take over from Alaana. Alaana kisses her dad's forehead and bidding Robbie and her mom goodbye, she walks out to grab a taxi home. She tries to flag down a couple of taxis but they don't stop. So she starts walking a little further when suddenly a car whooshes past her and stops right next to her! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Alaana jumps with fear and shock when Ajay quickly lowers the power window and calls out to her
Ajay : Hey Alaana, mei hun! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Alaana : Jeez Ajay, tumne toh mujhe daraa hi diyaa tha! ๐Ÿ˜ก
Ajay says : Sorry! Actually mei idhar seh guzar rahaa tha jab meine ekdum seh tumhe dekha! Kahin tum miss na ho jao iss darr seh thodaa sharp turn lenaa padaa........Ghar jaa rahi ho?
Alaana says : Haan ๐Ÿ˜Š
Ajay : Aao, mei chodh detaa hun.
He pushes open the door and Alaana climbs into the car.
Ajay asks : Ab kaisi tabiyat hai tumhaare bauji ki?
"Theek hai"...........says Alaana sadly ............"Unkaa slipped disc problem abhi abhi resolve ho rahaa hai. Abhi aur ek-do hafte lagenge, shaayad!"
Ajay says quietly : Don't worry Alaana........Sab theek ho jaayega!
The tone of his voice will make Alaana turn to look at him. Her eyes meet his and they both stare at each other! ๐Ÿ˜ณ He was finding it very difficult to see her so sad! ๐Ÿ˜• He wanted to hug her and comfort her! God knows, he himself was suffering quite a bit!! It was a week since he had seen her and it was getting increasingly difficult for him to keep away from her! But, he had stopped himself from calling her several times, knowing that Alaana was concerned and worried about her father and busy with her responsibilities!
She breaks the eye-contact and turns away. Ajay also starts driving. Her mind and heart were in such a conflict!! ๐Ÿ˜”
In her very first meeting with Kasturi, she had found her very arrogant and frivolous!! After that Kasturi's behavior seemed to change but as they say the first impression is the last, she was still very unsure about Kasturi! ๐Ÿ˜• When she came to know that Kasturi's friend had caused her parent's accident, she was very angry and emotional at Kasturi!! ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก But slowly reason prevailed and she was able to see the truth that it was the same Kasturi who had also rushed her father to the hospital, where the immediate assistance he was provided had helped to save his life!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ And this was the precise reason that when Ajay had called after, she had not mentioned anything about his sister's involvement in the accident. She just did not want to burden him with any guilt!!!

"Kya soch rahi ho?"............asks Ajay. ๐Ÿ˜Š They were sliently driving to her house.
"Kuch nahi..........bas yahi soch rahi thi ki apne manager seh chutti kaise loon? Abhi abhi join hui hoon, toh mere paas zyaada leave nahi hai. Aur kaam bhi bahut hai! Magar mujhe aur ek hafte ki chutti leni hogi, to help mom out!"............says Alaana. ๐Ÿ˜•
Ajay says : Ek baar apni manager seh pooch kar toh dekho........maybe she will understand. ๐Ÿ˜›
Alaana shakes her head in agreement and decides to go to work on Monday and talk to Ritu, her manager and seek a leave extension. Ajay drops her off and leaves. He had wanted to talk to her more, but seeing that Alaana was too preoccupied, he decides to postpone the conversation for a later date!

On Monday, Alaana goes to work. She tries to schedule a meeting with her manager but somehow no time seemed suitable for her manager. She seemed to be too busy! Finally, just before the end of the day a frustrated Alaana manages to catch hold of Ritu outside her office and quickly asks for permission to take another week off. ๐Ÿ˜’ Ritu gives Alaana a cold stare and says very cuttingly
Ritu : Mere permission ki zaroorat bhi kya hai tumhe? Tumhe toh har cheez ki choot hai yahaan! ๐Ÿ˜ก
Alaana looks at her surprised and says : Ji.....mei samjhi nahi maam! How do you mean? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Ritu says : Itni bholi mat bano Alaana! Har choti-badi cheez ke liye upar seh recommendation laati ho aur yahaan...........here you act like an ideal employee who is trying to follow the rules and regulations of the workplace! ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก
Alaana is shocked at such anger directed towards her!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜•
She says : Maam........please! I am not sure what you are saying.....
Ritu interrupts her sharply : Mujhe upar seh order aaya hai ke, tumhe jitne din leave chahiye, utne din leave grant kar diyaa jaaye!! Aur tumhaare sab pending tasks kisi aur employee ko saump diyaa jaaye! ๐Ÿ˜ก
Alaana looks at her surprised! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Why and how did the upper management know about her request??? She looks on confused when Ritu says sarcastically
Ritu : Ofcourse, it is no surprise to me! Har roz tumhaara uthna-baithna, khaana-peena sab bade logon ke saath jo hai! ๐Ÿ˜ˆ Jab tum unkaa itnaa khyaal rakhti ho, toh unhe bhi toh tumhaara khayaal rakhna chahiye, hai na??? ๐Ÿ˜ˆ ๐Ÿ˜ˆ ๐Ÿ˜ˆ So, feel free to come and go to work when you want! ๐Ÿ˜ก Waise bhi I don't think you need this job to earn your living............I am sure you have other means!! ๐Ÿคข

She gives an ugly look to Alaana and leaves!! ๐Ÿ˜ˆ A shocked and hurt Alaana simply stares after her. ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜” Then she quickly rushes to her office, grabs her bag and stumbles out. Tears were blinding her eyes! ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ She had never been subjected to such censure in her life! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ญ Her self-respect was severely bruised by such cheap and baise comments by Ritu!! How could she talk so dirty ?? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ญ It did not escape her that Ritu was pointing out and referring to her lunch dates with Ajay Chawla! And suddenly Alaana realizes that Ajay must have spoken to his friend, their boss who must have passed on the request to Ritu about her wanting to leave! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ She stops in her tracks and suddenly anger builds up in her! ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก She whips her phone out and calls Ajay!
Ajay was lifting weights and was in the middle of his workout when his phone rings. Seeing her caller id on his phone, a smile spreads on his lips and he quickly answers the phone. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Even before he can say hello, Alaana starts off
Alaana asks furiously: Kyun kiyaa tumne yeh? ๐Ÿ˜ก
Ajay, expecting a thanks but instead hearing this, says : Whoa!! You are welcome!! ๐Ÿ˜›
Alaana : Don't expect a 'Thank you' from me!!! Tumhaari wajah seh aaj mujhe kaisi kaisi baatein sun ni padhi! ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก
Ajay asks concerned : Arre, kya hua?? I thought I was helping.......๐Ÿ˜ณ
Alaana : Who asked for your help? Meine, poocha tumseh? ๐Ÿ˜ก
Ajay : Arre, tum pareshaan thi! Tumhaari pareshaani kam karnaa chahta.......
Alaana : Kam??? Meri pareshaani kam nahi, aur badh gayi hai!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก
Ajay : Well, sorry about that! But I did not mean to.........
Alaana : But why? ๐Ÿ˜ก Kya zaroorat thi tumhe kuch karne ki? ๐Ÿ˜ก
Ajay : Because I cannot see you in pain Alaana.............I love you!!! ๐Ÿ˜ก
Alaana : Please............
Her mind screeches to a stop!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ His last statement echoes in Alaana's ears!! What did he say?? What did she hear?? Did he say, what she heard?? Alaana stops in her tracks! Suddenly she feels she is all alone on that busy street! Ajay grips his phone hard!! He had wanted to tell her this for a long time but he had not expected to say this over the phone!! ๐Ÿ˜•
He quickly gets up from the bench and stands with one hand on his waist and the other holding the phone. He was not expecting a reaction from her. He says softly
Ajay : Mei kai dinon seh yeh baat tumseh kehnaa chataa tha........
Click............he hears the phone go dead!!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ He immediately calls her back! Alaana is still standing at the same place! She takes the call but still does not say anything!
Ajay says softly : I love you Alaana! I really do.......Sorry.....aise phone peh bataana padhega, meine socha nahi tha.......๐Ÿ˜•
"Ajay!"............interrupts Alaana......."Mujhe....mujhe abhi jaana hai, mei phone rakh rahi hun!!!" ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜’
Ajay starts to say.........."Plea..."........but Alaana had already disconnected the phone! She stands there, shocked!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Don't know when she flagged a taxi but she finds herself sitting in one and recollecting what just happened!!............"OMG!! He really was in love with her!!! It was not her suspicion............a suspicion that had become really strong in this past few days when they seemed unable to stay away from each other!!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ It was a beautiful dream come true for her!!!! Then why did she not respond?? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ She did not respond because she was scared...........scared stiff that this could not be true!!! ๐Ÿ˜” That somehow this was a fantasy........a fantasy that will never come true!!! ๐Ÿ˜• So much happiness and pleasure............was she so fortunate? Was she really so fortunate????

Ajay was restless and was going crazy with anxiety! He had decided to not call her back because he wanted to respect her need for space! ๐Ÿ˜• He knew this must have been a big shock for her!! Eventhough they both had been feeling the vibes over the past several days, it was the first time that it was finally brought out upfront!!!

A week passes! Ajay and Alaana were still where they had left it off! By now, Ajay was desperate to hear anything from her, even rejection! ๐Ÿ˜’ But he wanted an answer!! He simply could not take this tension of now knowing what was going on her mind! ๐Ÿคข He finally decides that he is going to give her that Sunday night and then on Monday he was going to go and meet her and get an answer out of her!!!

At around 9.00 PM in the night, Alaana finally calls him! Ajay was sitting on his bed and working on his laptop when the phone rings. He reaches for it and when he sees her caller id, Ajay pauses for a second!! His heart races with expectation!! ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜ณ He quickly takes her call and says........."Hello!". He tries to keep his voice as emotion-less as possible but Alaana could feel the urgency in his voice! She says slowly
Alaana : Kaise ho?
Ajay replies : Accha nahi hun!
Alaana is taken aback by his answer and asks worried : Kya hua? ๐Ÿ˜•
Ajay : Uskaa jawab tumhaare paas hai Alaana, phir sawaal poochne kaa matlab? ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Alaana becomes quiet and says : Dekho Ajay.........mei
Ajay : Alaana, mujhe bas ek hi jawab chahiye........tum mujhseh pyaar karti ho yaa nahi? ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Alaana : Yeh itnaa asaan nahi...... ๐Ÿ˜’
Ajay : Uh.huh......Haan ya Naa! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Alaana : Magar Ajay....... ๐Ÿ˜•
Ajay : Haan ya Naa??? ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Alaana hesitates for a few moments and then whispers into the phone : Haan.......I love you! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
A smile spreads on Ajay's face ๐Ÿ˜ƒ and suddenly he is so excited that he cannot sit!!! He stands up, letting the joy flow through his veins!! He says
Ajay : Tum kahaan ho?
Alaana replies : Hospital mei.
Ajay : Mei aa rahaa hun abhi....
Alaana says shocked: Nahi nahi.....abhi nahi! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Hum subah milenge.
Ajay : Sorry Alaana..........mei subah tak intezaar nahi kar saktaa! ๐Ÿ˜ณ Mei wahaan pahunchte hi tumhe phone karungaa, tum reception area mei aa jaana!! ๐Ÿ˜Š

He does not give her another chance to protest and disconnects the phone! He quickly grabs a pair of jeans and whatever T-shirt he can lay his hands on, changes and drives to the hospital as quickly as possible!!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ A scared and tensed Alaana walks around in the corridor uncomfortably! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜•
She instantly answers her phone even before the first ring has completed!!
Ajay says : Mei reception area mei wait kar rahaa hun. Can you come down? ๐Ÿ˜›
Alaana says : Haan.....haan!
She cuts the call and glances into the room. Her dad was sleeping peacefully. She makes her way downstairs to the reception area. Ajay was standing next to the elevator, leaning against the wall. The moment Alaana steps out, he is right next to her! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ They stare at each other, their eyes glowing with a new found happiness!! Ajay pushes himself off the wall and walks to her. They stare into each other's eyes trying to guage who was happier!
Ajay : Chalo, baahar chalke baat karte hai!
Alaana meekly agrees. They both walk out of the hospital and walk outside to the slight wilderness that was on one side of the hospital. As they are walking out, Ajay slowly reaches for Alaana's left hand with his right and wraps it around her hand! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ Alaana swallows hard and is very glad that it was dark outside and not lighted enough for him to see her struggle! โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ His touch was never this electric as it was today! As soon as they reach the secluded vegetation, he slowly turns Alaana towards him. Suddenly Alaana says agitated
Alaana : Meine bahut koshish kee......tumseh pyaar nahi karne ki......magar.....magar.......๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜”
Ajay looks at her surprised! She was struggling to get something off her chest! He stays quiet allowing her to continue!
Alaana says : Agar.....agar tumneh kabhi mujhe dhoka diyaa toh........toh mei mar jaaungi! Mei ek bahut seedhi-saadhi ladki hun......mere liye pyaar, pooja hai.....mei.......๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜•
Ajay places his finger on her lips indicating her to calm down and says
Ajay : Shhhh........calm down Alaana! Mei jaanta hun! ๐Ÿ˜Š Pehle mei tumhaari taraf tumhaari sundartaa ki wajah seh khichtaa gayaa. Lekin dheere dheere mujhe samajh mei aaya ke tum sirf baahar seh nahi, andar seh bhi bahut sundar ho!!! ๐Ÿ˜› Alaana, aaj tak meri girlfriends rahi hai lekin koi saathi nahi !!! Woh kami aaj poori hui hai!! Mei isse jeevan bhar kaa saath banaana chahta hun......thode pal kaa saath nahi! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Ajay brings her hands to his mouth and kissing them says : Mei tumseh ek din shaadi karnaa chahta hun! ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Alaana stares at him, stumped!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Her impossible dream was coming true!!! Ajay was telling her that he wanted to marry her!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ณ She suddenly feals weak in her knees!!! She stares into his eyes and sees the truth in them! Her knees give way and she leans towards him, weak with emotion! Ajay slowly wraps his arms around her, ecstatic! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
She had finally found her Hrithik Roshan and was totally in love with him! The tension that Ajay had gone through the past week simply disappears! He could not believe that his love was finally reciprocated! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ณ He slowly separates Alaana and kisses her softly on her forehead and a blushing Alaana simply enjoys it! โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ
They sit there for a while enjoying the bliss and excitement of sweet romance till finally Ajay lets Alaana go back to take care of her dad and leaves with the promise of meeting her the next day. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Dear friends,
I will post the next part in an hour or so! This part was difficult to write specially because of the current situation in the forum with KP, SA and the RoKa jodi!
Imagining RoKa romance was tough! It always brought back the bad memories of their fights. So, I really hope that you will find the romance in this next part convincing! ๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 17 years ago
HEYYA PRAGZ!
So so so so so so sorry for the delay! Will post my comments for both parts as soon as I read this one~
edited:
woohoooo...i'm first! don't think i've ever been first on your FF pragz! sooooo cool! LOL
okay...lemme start off by apologizing! I was one of the first few people to read the last part, and i even reserved a spot for comments!
I thought I edited it after reading, but then yesterday I discovered that I hadn't! I'm so so so very sorry for that Pragz! Hope you're not mad!
Okay so last part:
They made up!!!...That wsa the best part ever!
I loved the talk between Robbie and Devika....so emotional and yet so realistic! Just like a real mom and son! I also liked how she rationally analyzed the situation and didn't shy away from admitting her own mistake. She seems to be a very respectable woman.
next, I loved that Kasturi finally got the sense to call and apologize to Devika. It migth not have been her fault, but she still had to apologize if she loved Robbie enough. I don't think he would have ever forgiven her if she hadn't. I also liked the talk between Kas and Devi. Very to the point and natural. They seem to be developing a bond now, which is great for the future.
Ha ha ha...I was so going to ask, "why didn't devika wish her?"...but you covered that in the next part!
This part:
I loved the "we'll celebrate your b'day again...just the two of us.." part...and esp. the "you can turn 22 again"...LOL...hilarious! and cute at the same time!
I didn't first understand why Kasturi didn't tell Robbie taht she called devika, but then when he found out from Devi herself, I was like, " Oh yeah!"...I loved that! It was so cute that he called Kas instantly and was so happy and relieved!
Now, coming to AA jodi:
Man! This Ritu character made me hate her with just a cameo! So cheap! The words she used, the looks she gave, a total vamp in the making! I really felt for poor Alana there.
Her anger at Ajay was totally justified, and yet, so was his attempt at helping her.
His "I love you" was so abrupt, I was like, "Whoaaaa"....and I bet that was Alana's reaction as well! But very well depicted Pragz! Loved it from top to bottom!
I liked that Alana took her time to respond, and how hestitant she was with her own admittance of her feelings. But I was so happy for Ajay when she finally said it as well! I could imagine the wide grin he would have had. BTW...just out of curiosity, I don't personally think the Alana and Ajay in the show would be the perfect actors here, so do you have anybody in mind? Just so I can start imagining with real faces!
Okay, the romance.....uffff! So cute and lovely! I can't wait for more AA jodi romance...its almost as cute as RoKa!
Okay continue soon! I can't wait for Kas' second b'day!
Love, and apologies again,
STAR โญ๏ธ
Edited by stars_shine - 17 years ago

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