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Posted: 17 years ago
hey Ppppppppp di,
sorry i had exams so i didn't come online for a while so couldn't leave comment. i really liked the part, i liked wat kasturi did to robbie wen her mom came. forced him to say ILU. 😆 chutki is 16, me too. 😆 i love her character. i liked how robz cared more of his sis more than his gf, something u rarely see. 😳kasturi seems like a spoiled girl, oh man, kitna jhoot bolti hai, she told them she's going on a wedding. she could've just told them that she's going out with friends. but i'm sure ajay won't tell his parents about this. continue soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago
pregal...i feel sorry to hear that u r not well..get well soon lol our wished and prayers r always with u...hope u will be ok soon ...take care..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey pragz...sorry to hear ur not well~ hope u feel better soon! and take ur time in updating! ur health comes first!

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Posted: 17 years ago
Shara, dalia, annu, Robina, payal, robbii, star and Paddu............Thanks a lot guys, for your wishes!!! 🤗
I am recovering fast and will post the next part soon, probably by tomorrow!!!!

Thank you for waiting patiently! 😳

Hermoo............how did you exams go??? So, it is summer hols now?
I love chutki too 😆 she is too real!!! Kasturi jhoot toh bolti hai but did not think in her wildest imagination that Ajay will pop up there!!!! 😆 😆 😆
Next part will be up tomorrow!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
pragz : good you see back 😳
no issues take you time, take rest 😃
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Hello friends! 😃
OK, am posting the next part. Half of this was written more than 10 days ago and the other half was written today! I apologize if you see any inconsistency! I tried to make it flow together as much as possible.

In this part and the next 2, I have introduced 2 new characters...........cameo roles! One is a guy called Sameer Singhania. Imagine him to be Girish/ Naman Shaw and Rajat Singhania.......imagine him to be Young Prithviraj/Rajat Tokas 😊
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Re-cap : Robbie finally finishes the prototype presentation and has more free time. So he plans a trip to the mountains with his sisters. Kasturi, Gia and Anand also join them. On their way, they stop for lunch and most unexpectedly they come across Raunak and Ajay.

PART - 25 : A PREDICTION

Raunak reaches them first! He grabs Robbie's hand and shakes it vigorously and embraces Robbie, 🤗 saying......"What a wonderful surprise!! Yaar, tu yahaan kyaa kar rahaa hai??" 😃
Robbie is completely taken by surprise to see Raunak and Ajay here! 😳 He feels uncomfortable in the embrace and getting out of it as quickly as possible says......."Mei bhi wahi soch rahaa tha, ke tum yahaan kya kar rahe ho?" 😛
"Mei apne cousines ko ghumaane laaya hun. Mere chachji ke bete aaye hai London seh.".......says Raunak.
He signals to the other 2 guys besides Ajay to come to him. Meanwhile Ajay is walking towards Kasturi and Robbie, looking very very surprised!! 😲 😲 Kasturi could literally see the question that was running in his mind......"Kasturi yahaan kya kar rahi hai? Usse toh Bangalore mei honaa chahiye naa!!!!" 😲 🤔 And along with him is walking towards Kasturi an unpleasant and uneasy memory from Thursday that she had not shared with Robbie yet and that she was trying hard to forget!! 😔 😒 Her mind is racing to find a solution for this problem when Ajay reaches her!! He glances at Robbie and then looks back at Kasturi and questions her....."Kas.......tum yahaan??" 😲 😕
Before a tensed Kasturi can answer anything, Gia tugs at Ajay's arm and says : Ajay bhaiyya......ek minute, yahaan aaiye!
She pulls a surprised Ajay to a corner, away from the rest of them. Kasturi's eyes follow then and so do Robbie's. Raunak's cousins have meanwhile joined them and Raunak starts to introduce them to Robbie who has no option but to look away from Ajay!
Raunak says : Meet Sameer and his younger brother Rajat. They are here on vacation from London.
Sameer and Rajat shake hands with Robbie when Raunak introduces Robbie to them
Raunak : This is Robbie Sabharwal, one of my best buddies! We used to go to the same Uni. And this is Kasturi.......
All turn to look at Kasturi who tears her eyes away from Ajay and Gia and looks at them. She tries to smile and look pleasant but her mind is still playing the scene she has just witnessed between Ajay and Gia! Gia was gesturing towards them and explaining something ardently. On hearing Gia's explanation Ajay had a shocked expression on his face and he had been staring at Robbie looking very surprised!! 😲 😕 Robbie too had noticed Ajay staring at him!

Trying to be friendly, Robbie asks Raunak : Kahaan jaa rahe the tum sab?
Raunak replies : Actually koi concrete plan nahi banaa. Humne socha, mountains ki oor jaate hai, raaste mei sochenge. What about you all?
Robbie says : Hum log Camp Panther ki oor jaa rahe the. Yeh weekend wahaan bitaane ke liye.
Robbie turns around and says : Shaayad tumne meri behnon ko pehchaana nahi hogaa.........its been a while since you saw them! Yeh hai Shivani...
Shivani looks at all of them and pushing her glasses up her nose says.................."Hello". 😊
Robbie calls out to Alaana and Divya. They move towards them and Robbie says........"This is Alaana".....All of them stare at Alaana admiringly, specially Sameer and Robbie continues......"and this is my youngest sister, Divya!" Diyya simply nods her head and says......"What's up??"
Raunak says surprised : Oh God, I still remember them as kids! Its been a while since I have seen them! 😲 😃
Alaana turns to look at Gia and Ajay. Gia and Ajay have just finished their conversation and had turned to walk back when Ajay stops in his tracks noticing Alaana for the first time!! 😲 He was so taken by surprise at seeing Kasturi, that he had never noticed Alaana who had been sitting behind Kasturi and Robbie at the table!!! He simply stares at Alaana who is also staring at him!! Slowly Alaana smiles a hello 😊 and Ajay comes back to his senses and walks towards her completely mesmerized by her radiating beauty!! 😳

Kasturi sees them walking back and is bracing herself for her brother's onslaught 😕 but he seemed quite calm!! She keeps looking at him suprised while he is getting introduced to Robbie's sisters! 😲 Neither Alaana nor him mention anything about having met before! Robbie asks them to join too. Raunak is willing but Ajay refuses saying he is not hungry! 👎🏼 But Kasturi knows the real reason behind him refusing to eat there! It was too low for his standard!
Robbie feels very awkward at Ajay refusing in such a curt manner! And so Kasturi quickly changes the topic saying....."Chalo hum log khaa lete hai, khaana thanda ho rahaa hai! They all sit back with Ajay and Raunak joining Kasturi's table and Rajat and Sameer joining Gia's table. There they get introduced to Gia and Anand.
Ajay goes and sits next to Kasturi and Robbie has no option but to slide over to Shivani. Robbie and Kasturi glance at each other! 😔 Robbie is upset that Ajay unknowingly played the role of a killjoy! And Kasturi, she was too tensed to have any other emotion! 😔 She was still wondering what Gia must have told Ajay!
Kasturi was the one who had suggested they continue eating, but her appetite is dead! 😒 She simply picks at her food while the other's eat.
The suggestion that both the groups should join together for the trip, first comes from Anand. This is seconded by Divya and Sameer, Rajat and Raunak heartily approve. 👏 👏 👏 Specially Sameer who seemed smitten by Alaana! 😳 A disappointed Kasturi is fast loosing hope of a romantic weekend with Robbie, 😔 with all of them wanting to bunch up together!!! Ajay is her last hope! She is banking on her brother's disapproval as she knew that he intensely disliked change in plans! Ajay was a guy who always stuck to a plan that has already been made. He hated deviations! 👎🏼 And that was the reason why he had come down so heavily on Robbie and Ahmed, when the prototype presentation was delayed!
But to her utter surpise, Ajay likes the idea and approves it!!!! 😲 😲 😕 All her hopes are dashed! She loved her brother's company but this weekend, she was not looking forward for it! How could poor Kasturi know that her brother did not want to pass up a fantastic opportunity provided to him by serendipity, to come closer to Alaana? And that too the speed with which Sameer was moving, he could not afford to miss this opportunity!!

They all finish up lunch and move towards their respective cars. Per Robbie's request, Kasturi walks up to sit next to him when Ajay noticing this, asks Kasturi to ride with him! Robbie is upset but he decides to let Kasturi make the decision and Kasturi cannot say no to her brother and so follows Ajay to his car, giving Robbie a regret filled look! 😒 Robbie can understand and so he does not take it too much to heart. Gia sits next to him and they drive out with Raunak following them in his car. Kasturi is apprehensive! She wonders for the millionth time what Gia must have told Ajay! He did not seem agitated at all!!! She wonders if he is putting on an act because there were other people around??? 😔
Suddenly Ajay says to her : I am so surprised!!! I would have never guessed in a million years! 😊
Kasturi looks at him quizzically. 🤔
Ajay continues : I mean, Robbie ka background itnaa different hai! Agar baat jamegi bhi toh kaise??? 🤔
Kasturi swallows hard! 😲 Was he meaning her???? 😔 Has Gia told him the truth??? But he seemed very casual about it!!!
Kasturi musters all her courage and says : Mei samjhi nahi??? 😕
Ajay looks at her and says : Gia........I am talking about Gia and Robbie! Gia and Robbie.....in love!!! I am very very surprised!!! 😛
He turns to look out of the awesome scenery outside the window and so misses the shock that Kasturi was experiencing!!! Robbie and Gia!!!!!!! 😲 Suddenly everything becomes clear to her!!!! 😲 Apparently, Gia had told Ajay that she and Robbie were in love!!!! That they wanted to spend some time together, but because they did not want Robbie and her family to suspect, so she had asked Kasturi to join her in this trip! And so she had made Kasturi lie to her family as she was not ready to reveal anything to anybody yet!!!!!! 😲
Kasturi's head reels with shock but she had to give it to Gia, it was the best plan anyone could have come up with in a fraction of a second and it had saved Kasturi's love life from withering even before it had started to flower!!!! 👏 👏 And in the other car Gia was telling the same to Robbie!

Both the groups reach the Camp Panther main office. Its almost 3 PM. The place has a lot of police jeeps parked around and was swarming with policemen. All of them wonder at so many police personnel. 🤔 When they approach the counter, Robbie tells the clerk behind the counter about wanting some extra tents and supplies as some extra people had joined the trip. The employee quickly makes the extra arrangements, signs them in and hands over all the tents, supplies etc to the groups. Maps of the camping grounds are given, rules and regulations explained, precautions mentioned, excursion/rafting schedules are picked up.
Robbie casually asks : Yahaan peh itni police kyun hai?
The clerk replies : Kidnapping case hai Sir......Kisi bacchi ko kidnap kar liyaa gayaa hai. Usi ki tehkeekaat chal rahi hai. Hum apne sabhi guests ko yeh id cards de rahe hai. Aap yeh hamesha apne paas rakhiye, taaki police ko aapko pehchaanane mei dikkat na ho.
He hands over the id cards to everyone and while finishing up, by casual conversation says
Clerk : Accha hua aap time peh pahunch gaye,Sir! Aaj hum office jaldi band karne waale hai!
"Kyun, kyaa baat hai?"........asks Robbie. 😊
Clerk replies : Aaj melaa hai Sir, Kunjapuri mandir mei! 😃Durga maiyya ki ek bahut hi visesh aur mehetvapoorna mandir hai! Door door seh log aate hai, maa ke darshan ke liye! Subah seh melaa lagaa hai, ab shaam mei badi aarti hogi aur uske baad melaa khatam hogaa. Aap sab log bhi ho aaiye ek baar!
Rajat asks in his English accent : What's a 'melaa'?
Divya replies instantly : Melaa is a fair.
"Aahh" says Rajat shaking his head. Then raising his camcorder he says......."I would love to visit the Melaa! I need something colorful to show my mates in
London!"
Alaana says to Robbie : Haan bhaiyya! Mei bhi maata ke darshan karnaa chahti hun! 😊
Gia and Divya make faces. Divya says........"Dii.....aap bhi na!! Hum yahaan adventure ke liye aaye hai yaa mandir dekhne???" 😡
Kasturi says : Lekin Divya, iss schedule ke hisaab seh toh aaj ke liye sab tours aur excurisons shuru ho chuki hai. Yeh sab toh ab hum kal hi kar sakenge!
Sameer says : Very true! I vote for the temple too! Haven't been to one in ages! 😊
Raunak is open for anything and Ajay was fine with going anywhere as long as Alaana was part of that plan and so he has no problems too. And so Robbie finalizes the decision with a.........."Theek hai. Lets get settled aur phir hum sab tayyar hoke mandir chalte hai! I think it will be fun to see the melaa!"

(Friends, this is how the map of the place will be. I am trying to put my imagination down. There are 2 mountains. The main office is at the base of the first mountain. The temple is at the top of the first mountain. There are 4 campsites. Robbie and party choose campsite # 3, which is at the top of the second mountain. They have to park the vehicles at the bottom where I indicate P, and have to trek up the mountain to their campsite. There is also a wooden bridge between CS3 and the temple. The river at the bottom has a lot of rapids and wounds around the mountains for some awesome rafting and kayaking!)

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Main office Rafting office

..........................................Flowing river for white water rafting................

Both the groups reach the parking area and park. Then they all load themselves up with the supplies and start trekking up. Its about an hour's climb to Camp site # 3. Enroute are some amazing natural sceneries that are breathtakingly beautiful!! The trek is lead by Gia, Divya and Rajat. Divya is so excited that she can hardly keep quiet! Gia being a chatter box herself, they both are perfectly matched and Rajat always wanted to be upfront in anything he did and so the three make a good group! They are followed by Raunak, Kasturi and Ajay, with Anand trying to get inbetween Raunak and Kasturi as much as possible 😆 😆, but unable to! Kasturi could not help but notice that Raunak was making unusually extra efforts to be with her and give her company!!
At first Kasturi had not noticed this but soon she had begun to realize that he was really trying to get close to her!! They are followed by Sameer and Alaana. Sameer had latched on to Alaana as soon as the trek had started and since then he was walking with her. Ajay was constantly turning and checking them out! 😡 Every time he turns, he finds Alaana also looking at him and by the time they reach the top, Alaana had counted that he had turned 73 times to look at her!!!! 😳 😳
And finally the rear is brought up by Robbie, all alone! Kasturi desperately wanted to walk with him, but everytime she stopped for him to catch up with her or everytime she purposefully lagged behind, Raunak and Anand would push her, force her to continue with them!! Robbie had not missed to notice the extra interest Raunak was showering on Kasturi! And Kasturi could feel his eyes on her, not once leaving her throughout the trek! They keep stopping every now and then to catch those sceneries and so its almost an hour and a half by the time they reach up. All the guys and Divya set up the tents. Divya never let any hard manual task go by without taking part in it!! She always believed she was equivalent to guys! 😉

4 tents are set up! One for Gia and Kasturi, one for the Sabharwal sisters, one for Raunak and his cousins and the final one was to be shared by Robbie, Ajay and Anand! All 3 of them look at each other uncomfortable with the thought of having to share sleeping space with each other for 3 days!!! 😔
A ladies room and a men's room are already pre-built at each campsite. After the long, hard trek, all of them are sweating and so one by one they quickly shower and get dressed to go to the temple. It is a 15 minutes walk between the mountains on the wooden bridge.

Alaana could never be caught by surprise, she was always perfectly prepared to dress right for any kind of occasion!! She was the only one who had also gotten a salwar on the trip, which was perfectly suited for this temple trip. To top it, Alaana herself had embroidered the exquisite work on that dress! Alaana in that salwar with the breeze blowing her hair is a sight to see and Ajay is bowled over once again!! 😳 There are several things about her that attract him! First and foremost is her being at ease! 😊 She did not have any issues in expressing her interest in going to visit the temple! She did not have any reservations of dressing so differently from the rest of the group who were all wearing western wear! And neither did she have any compunctions in keeping Sameer at a distance as and when she found him to be too free with her!! He felt, she was perfect! 😊

They reach the temple. Its a beautiful temple and that evening its filled with a lot of people! All of them enter the temple and make their way to the deity. Enroute is the ringing bell overhead. Kasturi looks at it wistfully! 🤔 She was short and as a result she never could reach up to the bell and ring it! She shakes her head in frustration and continues forward. They all have the darshan of the goddess and take part in the beautiful aarti. At the end of it they all get the prasad and start to walk out of the temple. When Kasturi is passing underneath the bell, she suddenly feels strong hands lift her up slightly!!! 😲 😲 Shocked, she looks around and stifles a scream when she sees that it is Robbie!!! 😲 He has hoisted her up closer to the bell and is saying..........."Jaldi seh ghanti bajao!!" Kasturi quickly rings the bell and Robbie places her down! 😳 All of this has happened in the wink of an eye and the next moment they see the rest of the group walking towards them!
Robbie winks at her and says teasingly : See you later, shorty!! 😉
This sudden act of his has sent her heart racing!!! 😳 She is still recovering from this when she hears him say "Shorty"! She hated being called shorty! 😡 😡 She is about to react angrily but Robbie had already left by then, laughing!! 😆 😆 Apparently, Gia had told him that Kasturi hated to be called shorty! Kasturi shakes her head and stares after him!! She thinks how sweet of him to have noticed her wish to ring the bell and make an out of the way effort for her!!! Making her feel so loved one moment and then the next moment teasing her, driving her mad!!! His behavior was so unexpected! He was so unpredictable!! And Kasturi loved it!!! 😳 In fact she craved for it more and more!

She slowly makes her way out of the temple and walks around to the corner. She sees an old man was sitting in a dark corner, lost in meditation. Kasturi is walking past him and sees his torn clothes and unkempt appearance. Assuming him to be a beggar, she reaches for her purse and taking some money out places it in front of him. She is about to turn away when she is startled by his voice!!
His voice was authoritative and deep!............"Iss maaya ko mere saamne seh nikaal deh! Mujhe iski avashyaktaa nahi!" Kasturi turns to look at him and is shocked to see that his eyes were still closed and he was still in a trance! 😲 😲 She hesitates for a moment and then reaching for the money she had placed in front of him, picks it up. She again looks at him surprised and is about to turn away when she hears him say again........"Teraa raasta kaanton seh bharaa hogaa!......Magar kitni bhi kathinaaiyaan aaye, tu chalti jaa.........aage badhne seh hi pataa chalegaa, ke anth mei jo tujhe chahiye, woh milegaa yaa nahi!!!" Kastuti stares at him dumbfounded! 😲 He was still in the trance with his eyes closed! For some unknown reason, Kasturi folds her hands together and bows to him! And then she walks away, scared and confused! 😕 What was he trying to say?? Was he meaning her???

From the temple, they all go to the fair and have a lot of fun there. Finally they have their dinner and walk back to their tents. The words of that person were constantly playing in her head, again and again! Kasturi cannot sleep and so she and Gia go to the little clearing at the very edge of their camp site and sit down talking in the bright moonlight, under the stars with the cool breeze making them shiver! They have not been there 10 minutes when they suddenly hear Robbie behind them!
Robbie : Toh yahaan ho tum log!
Kasturi instantly turns to look and he was standing there in his pyjamas and a blanket wrapped around him! 😳 He had not been able to sleep either and wanting to talk to Kasturi had gone to her tent. But upon not finding her or Gia there, he has set out searching for them!
Gia instantly gets up and says : Thodi thandi hawaa khaa rahe the. Magar ab mujhe neend aa rahi hai, mei sone jaa rahi hun! 😉
She looks at both of them with a twinkle in her eyes and wishing them good night, leaves. Kasturi and Robbie stare at each other. This was the first time that they were alone since morning! 😳 He slowly walks up to her and bending down takes his blanket off and spreads it on her shoulders and then he kisses her forehead softly! 😳 He slides down besides her on her right. His touch will bring out into the open a lot of hidden fears ot Kasturi that she had been trying to keep under control! 😭 She was currently on a very explosive emotional plane and all her heart needed was a teeny weeny bit of fire!
Robbie could see the struggle on her face! He slowly spreads his left arm on her shoulders and brings her close to him. Kasturi clings to him with her right arm around his waist and her left hand on his right shoulder. "Kya hua?"..........asks Robbie. Kasturi is too emotional at that point to answer. After a few moments she recovers and says........"Mei tumhaare binaa jee nahi sakti!" 😕 Robbie lets her continue without interrupting. Kasturi continues....."Aaj poora samay tum mere saamne the, magar mei tum seh baat nahi kar payee! Agar yeh hi mujhseh sahaa nahi gayaa toh, tumhe dekhe bagaair toh mujhseh rahaa nahi jaayega!!
Robbie asks : Lekin yeh khayaal hi tumhaare mann mei kyun aaya, ke tumhe mere bagaair rehnaa hogaa?
Kasturi again takes a couple of minutes before she answers his question with another question.
Kasturi : Tumhaare aur bhaiyya ke beech mei koi problem hai kya? 😕
Robbie senses what the issue is! He and Ajay have been at loggerheads since the day they had the argument in Kaushalya's office. Ajay totally disliked Robbie's working style of wanting to write and execute the most perfect code not giving deadlines due importance 😡 and Robbie hated Ajay's constant harping about meeting dates even if the quality of the product is not upto mark!!! 🤢 They had already had several bouts of arguments in the last one month but Robbie had not shared any of this with Kasturi! He did not want to tense her up unnecessarily and in fact he did not want to discuss her brother with her!! 😕 And so he is surprised that Kasturi has brought this topic up. He asks her cautiously.........."Aise kyun pooch rahi ho?"
Kasturi turns up to look at him and says : Kyunki Thursday ko meine bhaiyya ko tumhaare baare mei Mom seh baat karte hua sunaa! Uss raat jab meine tumhe call kiyaa, I did not tell you the whole truth! 😔
Robbie turns to look at her and Kasturi continues : Mom toh tumseh bahut khush thi magar bhaiyya was mad at you!! They had an argument about you. They.....
Robbie looks away uncomfortably as Kasturi is speaking. 😒 He just did not think it was right for Kasturi to share Kaushalya and Ajay's discussion about him, with him!!! And so he stops her saying
Robbie : Kas......mujhe aur kuch mat batao! Yeh theek nahi hai ke tum unki discussion mere saath share karo!
Kasturi stares at him admiringly! As she had already understood about him, he was a person of character!
Robbie continues : Yeh sach hai ke Ajay aur mere beech mei kuch friction hai. Magar yeh sirf kaam sambhandith hai. Personal level peh, we both are fine. Atleast, I don't have a problem with him!!
He turns to look at her and say : Issliye tum yeh baat apne dil seh nikaal doh ke tumhaare bhaiyya ki wajah seh hamaare beech koi problem hogaa! Aur agar problem hotaa bhi hai toh, I can handle it!! Tumhe mujh peh itnaa yakeen toh hai na?? 😊
Kasturi looks at him with a lot of love in her eyes and says : Haan.......Mujhe yakeen hai! Aur yakeen kaise nahi hogaa? Tum kisi jadoogar seh kam nahi ho! Har baar mujh peh jadoo karte ho.......I am sure tum bhaiyya par bhi apnaa jadoo karoge!!
Robbie says with a smile : Mei, aur jaadugar??
Kasturi replies : Haan!
And he looks deep into her eyes. She was looking ravishing in that moonlight! And the concern and love that he was reading in her eyes was just overpowering him and he says : Toh, how about some Robbie magic?? 😳
(Some music to give the right effect! Music)
Kasturi stares at him while Robbie leans towards her slowly reaching for her lips. The kiss starts off very softly. Both of them slowly push the intensity up a notch, by each second, exploring their resolve to hold back! Kasturi's left hand slowly reaches up to his right cheek and she holds her hand there while her right hand moves up to his head and her fingers fold around his hair. Robbie is still holding his left hand around her shoulders and his right hand is at the nape of her neck. As the intensity increases, they move down together and Kasturi rests her head on Robbie's left hand that he had placed on the grass. His right hand slowly traverses down her back from her neck and moves up front and rests on her waist. He slowly lets his body fall on her's, increasing the pressure on her waist and his weight pushing aginst every curve of her body making him very aware of those curves!! 😳 Their heartbeats seem to fill the valley up!! It seemed more pronounced to them because they were surrounded by the quiet of the forest!! The tall trees, swaying in the breeze seemed to close their eyes so as not to disturb them in their private intimate moment!! 😳 Suddenly Kasturi moves her face a little to her right in an attempt to catch her breath! Robbie leans down towards her stomach and pushing up her loose shirt, kisses her on her stomach!! His hot breath against her cold stomach will leave Kasturi senseless!!! He pushes her shirt further up and kisses her again! The hot kiss leaves her skin tingling!! Kasturi closes her eyes tight and her fingers dig deep into his back. Robbie reaches further up and kisses her again, when unable to stand the overwhelming sensation, Kasturi grabs his hair and pulls his face back to her and this time she reaches up to his lips! They kiss passionately again, enveloped in each other's arms, in the dark of the night and as the crescendo builds up, Robbie gets more and more demanding!! 😳 Kasturi once again breaks away to her right and whispers........"Please stop Robbie! I cannot take this anymore!"
Robbie reaches for the left side of her neck and nuzzles against it! Then he reaches for her left earlobe with his lips and softly bites on her ear with his lips. Kasturi pushes back against him! Everypart of her body seemed to reach for him just like every part of his body longed for her! One part of Robbie is reminding him that he needs to stop right now while the other part of him was pushing him deeper and deeper into this vortex of passion and longing!
Finally he comes to his senses and slowly releases her from his arms and falls back on his back, besides her. Kasturi slowly moves over and sleeps next to him with her head on his left shoulder and her left arm spread on him. Robbie wraps his left arm around her and pulls her closer to him. He turns to her and says........"I am sorry! Pataa nahi mujhe kya ho jaata hai! Jab bhi tumhe dekhta hun, paagal ho jaata hun! Jadugar mei nahi, tum ho!" 😳
Kasturi blushes in reply ☺️and they lie there quietly in each other's arms......and before long they both loose themselves to sleep!! Slowly the night inches towards dawn and dawn arrives spreading an orangish hue on the trees, grass, shrubs and flowers on the mountain. The birds start chirping and that sound wakes Ajay up. He slowly gets up from his bed and lazily walks out of his tent. He stretches his body and looks around at the fresh, dew-drop cleaned natural surroundings! He slowly makes his way to the clearing at the edge of the campsite with an intention to enjoy the sight of the rising sun. He is just a few feet away from Robbie and Kasturi, who, unaware of their surroundings, are blissfully sleeping in each other's arms! 😲

Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
I just read you were sick, I hope you feel better🤗

For this part...

It was the most romantic one yet, I loved the piano music you added!

Aww..that's nice we have more than just 1 love story. 5 girl and 6 guys.😆 Gia is so smart and sweet at the same time, it's nice to see Ka and Gia trust each other so much.😳

Loved the last scene, why is it a shocker with Ajay only.😆

Three guys after Robbie and his love is just funny. It's awesome that you gave Alaana a very sweet character.👏

Overall, this was a really romantic part especially the background music addition was a bonus!!

-Yams
😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow prags..really good part..i am speechless..sameeer to alana ke piche hi tha..73times ajay looked them..
i don't have a word for robbie & kas..marvels..i really like ringing bell...
did you like camping? i only like hiking..your campsite look like yasomite and grand canyon site..
gia 😉 she always come out with idea..
ronuak really love robbie has friend..even their cousin knows his name that means he really means..
i hope ajay don't see them..

take care ..now again asking same..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 17 years ago

Mujhe kuch nahin dikhaayi de rahi hai except for the last part😆 Aaaawwwww its beeeeeeeeeeeeeeennn so loooong since u wrote a romantic part😆 Thank you for the wonderful scene Ppp... Ajayyyyy, wen is he going to talk to Alaana??? Duffer, hurry up man!!!😆 warnaa sameer will sweet her off her feet😆

Loved Robbie asking Kas not to tell Kaushi-Ajay's convo. He is THE man👏😆

Ohhhh nnoooooo Gia said tat Robbie luvs her?? Y do I think tat this info is going to cost RK a lot in future I really hope this doesnt create any misunderstanding

Luving Ajay-Alaana, aawww he turned around 73 times????😆😆😆 Tats cute...

Chalo, please likh fastttttttttttttttttttt😃 and also do take care of ur health😳, woh sabse zyaada important hai mere liye😳

Krishi

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