Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 18

👏 👏 Prag great part again!

Loved the detailed descriptions of every scene.....i can imagin Kasturis studio!! 😃

awwwww Robbie was hoping to see Kas at the bus stop 😳 so sweet.....but they will be meeting often now then wont they? 😉 😉

Great update soon! 😃

Kay

Thanks a lot Pppp😃....

But this part is full of detailing the surroundings and how the characters are feeling and their thoughts..... No RK scene in this part tooo😆

Luved how u r portraying Ajay both ruthless man and also a luving Bro.... Ahaaaaaa so u r pairing Alaan-ajay now??😆😆 Tats soo gud, they look beautiful together😃y

Ohhh noooo, Both naatak mandali and dance studio opposite to each other... I hope they work together and not become rivals😆

Continue soooooooooooooooon and wen u posting next part????😃

You are correct, Divya does resemble Anisha😆, I ll tell her if she misses this😆

Pragz excellent part 👏 👏
your explanations are very good
hmm if you write like this you will end up writing a novel i guess 😉 i definetly do not mind 😃 hope Kas team will get inspired more by your writeups 😳

so kas rememebers robbie too 😉 i am waiting for them to meet again 😆

Pragz it was brillaint...I understand that ur building the basic for the future parts.

Kasturi looks to be a real classic and she no doubt loved the studio. 😳 Just cant wait for the fireworks to begin betn RK ..looks like Robbie is already missing her badly..but you had promised that you would make kasturi go crazy for Robbie and I am so looking forward for that. 😆 Ajay looks to be arrogant person ..he doesnt believe in apologies 😆 ...ur hooking up Alaana and ajay...wow..its so cool! 😉 Didnt u say that ajay was studing in Robbie's college..but here u mentioned that he is a young baron..does that mean that he is managing business along with his studies?

Kaush is Devika here..Ok it will take some time for me to imagine kaush in Devika's dress! 😆 OK cant wait for the next part yaar...where u will make RK meet...so pleasseee make it fast dear! Love you! 😳

Hiya pragalbha, very well written i can now truly appreciate how hard it is to building up to a climax can be... for you it must come alot easier for your fanfic just flows so naturally.... and i luv all the shades of green, and i luved how you described kasturi's dance studio..(kinda pictured Aajah Nachle's studio of New York)

soooo devika and kashalya have switched roles hmmmm okay coming froma devika fan thats a bit tough to picture but i'll give it my best.. 😆

well done, and cant wait to see how you progress kasturi and robbie's luv story... forecaste i say its gonna be a sizzler....

fantastic work

robina

Hey Pallavi..........utnaa applause 😆 😆 😆 Well.......thanks a lot dear, I love your FF very much too!

Sonia : Thanks dear!! In this part, I was building the story for them to come together and also was introducing Kasturi's family........we have to know her background too, right?


Mannu : 😃 Actually serial mei Alaana aur Ajay ke characters ko theek seh nahi dikhaaya, isiliye meine yeh bhaar uthaya hai 😉 😃 Thanks for liking the part!!!! Robbie Kasturi ka saamna hoga ab...almost every day! 😆

Sofia : Robbie is a dear, he absolutely loves his family! In fact seeing this form of him has made him even more endearing!!! Thanks for your time Sofia! 😃

Kay : Yep....they will meet often!!! 😆 And sparks will fly!!!!! 😉 😆

Jima : Thanks a lot Jima!!!!! 😃 They will start meeting soon......I wanted to give Kasturi her due and so dedicated this part for her family and her!


Arre Krishi, Kasturi ki family ko bhi toh introduce karnaa tha!!! 😛 And yes I also think that Ajay-Alaana jodi will look beautiful!!!! I decided to hook them up based on your comment!! 😆 😆
Naatak mandali and dance studio at loggergeads.......maybe!

Shara : Thanks a lot, dear!!! Yep she remembers him, she has no idea what she is going to go through!!

Paddu : Thanks for understanding. I am setting up base for the future story. No worries.....she will be crazy about Robbie!!! Ajay is finishing up his MBA but is already handling business for his mom and dad.
Next part RK will meet in a different way........


Next part will be posted by Sunday morning! 😊

Thanks Robina!!! I really hope I will be able to meet everyone's expectations! 😕
But I am going to take it slow and develop the story gradually!!!! 😊

Krishi.......abhi Bhagya Rekha ka part likh rahi hun....uske baaad I have to start with this one. If not Sunday morning then definitely by Saturday night!!! 😃

i'm sorry for replying late. actually i read the part yesterday morning but didn't have time to reply as i had to leave for school. anyways. the part was guddd. so finally i see some sign of robbie liking and missing kasturi. 😆 i just can't wait for the next part. wen will roka meet again.

love
harman 😛