Kaarvan - AA & RK romance...pg 92 & 93 - Page 20

Hey Sonali!!!!!! I was waiting for you 😃 Thanks a bunch for liking it!!! You have 8 more parts to read 😆 😆 Finish them quickly! 😃

Humaira!!! Did'nt see you for a week........but am glad you found some time today!!! 😃
Yup......shirtless Robbie 😉.......must have been a great sight!!!

OK Mannu 😃

Sofia........Thanks for the wonderful comments dear!!! 😃 Yes, he did take his jersey off.......but it was purely need based, he did not have any ulterior motives 😆 😆 😆
Chitra to the hockey match..... 🤣 Awesome thought!!!! Lekin jab woh chakkar khake gir jaati toh ussko ghar lejaana mushkil hota!!! 😆 😆

Mani........Yes, Alaana and Ajay...actually its revenge time 😈, in the serial Nikhil had an affair with Pooja right? So I decided to hook up Ajay and Alaana 😉 😆 😆
And yeah...he is got to win!!! 🤣 🤣


Jaanu...........you are too much!!! Advanced notice??? Arre this FF is about Robbie, do you need any other notice???? 🤣 You have to expect this from him!!!!
Aur tu DU jaake kya karegi??? Robbie khudh wahaan seh nikalne waala hai....do mahinon mei 😉 apne final exmas ke baad! 🤣 🤣 🤣


Harman........oh man, if I had known that you played hockey then I would have sought your help with some details about the game!!! 😛
Iss baar I only allowed Robbie to score 😆 😆 because I wanted him to make an impression on Kasturi.....other matches, others will score!!! 😉 😆
The brother-sisters rapport is very good in my FF because I do believe that siblings share a most beautiful relationship and I wanted to project that! 😃
Thanks for taking the time to read 🤗

Thanks Jima!!!!!!! 🤗 You are too kind!!! 😃
Yeah.....I am trying to be as decent as possible 😉 😆 😆
I am glad you liked the hockey match 😊 .....next part will be up by Tuesday evening!

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Aur tu DU jaake kya karegi??? Robbie khudh wahaan seh nikalne waala hai....do mahinon mei 😉 apne final exmas ke baad! 🤣 🤣 🤣

dii there is a movie called "Na Tum Jaano Naa Hum"😳. Hope you have watched it.I and my Jima dii who will surely be with me will take inspiration from it dii😆....{Ro being our Hrithik😳}

Jaanu

Hey Jaanu.......never watched that movie...so what happens in it??? 😊

Pragalbha.... okay you just raised the bar on the expectations i have for your writing.. that was a really well described hockey game...i luv ice hockey but really got into the depth of how you described the match... fantastic...👏 so now begins their story...i like very much how you are bringing your characters together and leading them down the proverbial garden path...😃 and i soo luv the sibiling connection btw robbie and Divya, i think i almost enjoy reading their relationship more then kasturi's and robbie's..😆 really overall a well penned part.and now i'm waiting to see what robbie does with that bit of info?😉

thanks for the quick turnaround with your fanfic...

tons of regards and a big thank youuuuu

robina😃

Ppppppppppppppp😃

First of all, Robbie shirtless??? Aaaaahhh I can very well iamgine KP shirtless now😳😆😆 And I luved how u caught how the spectators react wen they see their idol shirtless😆😆.... I cud video the gals going gaga over shirtless Robbie....

And Robbie didnt even notice it before?? areee yeh budhdhu kahan se aagaya yaar.. But It was really a very cute scene and I was blushing along with Robbie while reading it😆😆

Loved how u r bonding Divya-Robbie-alaana relation and also Ajay-Alaana story😆..... Ahaaaa so Robbie forgot abt Kas before? So he is just curious abt her for now.... I dont think he has any feelings for her😆

Chal post the next part quicklyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yaar... Cant wait till Tuesday😆.

P.S: btw, I luved how u described each and every goal and pre-match scenes👏

Pragz that was a beautiful part...full of hockey match! I just loved the way you described the match. 👏 You seem to have good knowledge of the sport!😃 You know when Robbie was shirtless and all the gals going ggaga over him I rememeberd the times once in the show when he goes under the shower...all the gals here at the forum were giving the same expressions! 😆

So both of them are attracted to each other! 😳 I liked the way you bringing closer gradually! And Divya-Robbie bonding was too good! They have never tried to show the brother-sis bonding in this show. You have made it so balancing...the way he bonds with Devika, puru, his sis..its so endearing! 😳 I just love this Robbie...cant wait for their meeting! Ajay looks hooked to Alaana..so sweet! 😆

Cant wait for the next part...when are you posting sweety! 😳

Pragggg First so sorry dear ,,main kal read hi nahi kar payi 😕..cos kaam se aayi thi ...ussi waqt online aayi ..aur mera beta mujhe bahut pareshan kar raha tha ...isliye maine socha kal read karungi ...so sorry yaar

back tooo parttt

Veryyyyyyyyyyy Beautiful parttttt 😳....aur jis tah tumne game ke baare meh bataya ..very nice dear ..👏...wesse mujhe game bahut bor lagti hai 😆...lekin tumhare part meh read karke bahut aacha laga 😳...first tumhare likhne ka tarika..aur upper se robbie jo play kar raha tha 😳😆....

and Without shirt 😆.and jis tarah lardkiya shor maccha rahi thi 😆.OMG Pragg tumne mujhe school time yaad dila diya 😳😆..

So ab kasturi ke dil meh feeling aa hi gayi hai 😆..and robbie bhi baar ussi ke baare meh poochta ai 😆......so dekhte hai ..pehle pyar kisse hota hai ?😆...

Pragg i really like ki jis tarah tum har lardi ko dusri lardi se jordti ho 👏..Creatives ko tumse kuch sikhna chahiye ...serial meh jo aaj hota hai next day story ko badal dete hai 😡...

Very well written dear 👏...ab tum next part kab likh rahi ho ??..

Manpreet

pragz : your FF was a nice surprise on monday morning for me 😳

hmm so again kas and robbie meet 😆
hockey match was excellent 😉
me hockey fan after chakde 😆 enjoyed it a lot 👏 👏

waiting for the next part 😳