I wrote a fanfic too! QUESTION TO U ALL! - Page 5

loved it nav..
well i was just wondering...is this ff based on RoKa or RaKa...because both raunak and robbie play an important role here..

yea it will kind of seem like raka for a while, but then thats only cuz kasturi thinks the person she was talking to the whole time was raunak 😉

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you are absolutely brilliant .

Originally posted by: CanadianAddict

yupp im a RoKa fan 😃

Thanks for the clarification dear, helped me to decide if I want to continue reading your ff or not!!!!!!

Sorry, I don't mean to be rude. But when I was reading all that stuff about RaK, I was like . Now I am happy!!!!

Man, it was too good. I burst out laughing when you said "Pooja was looking at her nails" during the cricket match!!!!!! 🤣.

You have a great sense of humour 👏 👏.

Keep them coming!!!!!!

aw thanks and yea im trying to make robbie jealous somehow, + as u can see roka connect on things wayy more.

dont worry just read 😆

K Guys heres another part for u, hope u like, im just trying to add some more mirch to the bowl 😆 😕
Part 14
STILL AT KASTURIS HOUSE

*After breakfast everyone goes out for and outing as tomorrow night Raunak + Robbie and their families will be leaving since business matters cannot be left for too long, Robbie although inisists he is too tired to go and decides to stay home and Navneet who cannot miss another cricket match whines to JP and Kaushalya that if she misses it she will die and that its not even about her going out, it should be about the visitors having fun, JP is about to say no when...*

Purshotam (hopes thats how u spell his name): *walks into room and laughs* aara JP saab aab bachi itna insist kar rahi hai tho usa rana tho na

JP: likyan tum saab har roj nahin aatha aur cricket match ki update tho news pa ajaya gi

Navneet: likyan...update aur match main both difference hotha hai

Purshotam: Hain sahi bath Navneet, aur waisa bi JP Robbie ghar par hai tho Navneet usa company rakh laha gi (she will keep him company)...im sure robbie uska sath cricket match dekh laya ga

Kaushalya: likyan...

JP: acha Purshotam ji, chal Navneet tum ghar main robbie ko company rakh na

Navneet: *yells* YESSS!

*Navneet leaves the room in excitement*

Purshotam: chalo phir baisaab hum tho chal tha hain

*All of them leave, everyone leaves the house and Raunak once again tries to convince Robbie to come along*

Raunak: robbie yaar it will be fun

robbie: nahin raunak, bus mood nahin hai...ziddi math ban

Raunak: likyan robbie

robbie: raunak man, dont let me ruin your fun, main bus...im just not feeling well

raunak: fine fine, neways saab mujhe neecha bula rahan hai, later man

robbie: have fun

*Raunak leaves and joins everyone downstairs, and everyone says bye to robbie and navneet and promise to be back by dinner, kaushalya tells navneet about the lunch she has left in the kitchen and she should just warm it up and give it to robbie and have some herself, and then kaushalya starts listing off all these safety hazards in the home and Navneet laughs saying she is far too concerned and she will be fine, everyone leaves. Raunak sits in the jeep with kasturi and tanu and everyone else in other cars, as kasturi leaves navneet winks at her and kasturi shakes her head, then navneet goes inside.*

Navneet: robbie, woh chalo hum cricket match dekh tha hain...2 minute main shuru (start) hona wala hai

Robbie: nahin tum dekh lo, mera mood nahin hai, main upar apne kamara main hun ga.

*Robbie leaves upstairs, for around 2-3 hours navneet watches the cricket match, and then later she goes to serve robbie lunch but he says he is not hungry, then she tells him if he needs nething she will be outside of the house playing cricket with some of the kids from the neighbourhood she proudly tells him she teahces them cricket.*

*Navneet plays with the kids for a couple of hours and then just walks around and hangs out with some of the neighbours, by the time she comes back home it is around 6'o clock and she expects that everyone will be home soon, she then slaps herself on the head and realizes she has been gone for a long time and maybe she should check on robbie if he needs something or not, so she goes to fix him something to eat in the kitchen, something light since dinner is soon, but she knows even that will take a long time since she isnt a great cook like kasturi or nething*

IN ROBBIES ROOM AT KASTURIS HOUSE

*Robbie is re-reading the emails that kasturi sent to him, and he keeps smiling at all the sweet things she says, he wonders why he feels jealous when her and Raunak are together and supposes its just because raunak for once seems to be winning a lady over him.*

Robbie: I'm sorry kasturi, tumse main itna bara (big) sach chupa rahan hun...likyan kya karun, majboor hun...shayad mujhe khush hona chaiyeea (maybe i should be happy) i mean mera vaja sa tumhe raunak main ek dost mil gaya...aur shayad dost sa aur bi kuch zada. Likyan main Raunak ko saab batha thu ga (ill tell raunak everything)...HAIN! *excited at his idea* ill show raunak all these emails...phir raunak ko saab background bi patha lag jaya ga...aur raunak wont tell neone if i tell him not to...and then tum aur raunak khush raho and no one gets hurt.

*Robbie smiles at his idea about telling Raunak everything so that kasturi will never know he lied to her and raunak and kasturi can be together...but then that feeling in his gut creeps in again, and its almost like he doesnt want to tell raunak anything, he doesnt want to see raunak and kasturi together, he shakes his head telling himself once again its probably jealousy because this is the first girl who has paid more attention to raunak then to him, he finally goes to the washroom to take a shower and cool himself down but before he does that he writes about how he is feeling in his diary and puts it under the pillow and walks off (he has a diary but hes the only one who knows about it, and he vents out his emotions in it)*

*Once Robbie is in the washroom navneet comes up with his food but she sees he isnt there*

Navneet: robbie...robbie! patha nahin kahan gaya, main ya wahan table pa rakh thathi hun..*puts food on the table and is about to leave when she notices the computer on, she tells herself not to snoop but moves closer and sees kasturi's name on one of the emails and intrigued she moves closer to the screen and sits down, she looks around to check if neone is coming and opens the email*

*Navneet begins to read the email and sees that they are all adressed to raunak, and then she goes back to read most of them...and is shocked! some of the emails she recognizes because kasturi had read them out loud to her before sending them, but she wonders what robbie is doing reading raunak's emails.*

*Navneet is about to leave sensing mayb she should have not read anything and then when she is about to leave she trips and holds the bed and pillow to help herself from falling she pulls the pillow off enough just to see the diary underneath. She picks up teh diary on the page it is opened to and begins to read it, letting her curiousity get the better of her once again and then she is shocked...ROBBIE IS RAUNAK!*

thanks glad u like it so far 😳

its navneet, lol i know so coincidental but just call me nav 😃