I wrote a fanfic too! QUESTION TO U ALL! - Page 3

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Okay guys continuing on...im just goin to write a longer part since ill be out all day 2morrow and wont be able to write. So beginning frm where we left off, which is at Kasturi's house

Part 10

*everyone eats and talks a while, while kasturi just goes upstairs with tanu and prepares where everyone will sleep, she is about to go downstairs when everyone heads upstairs and her bauji comes up the stairs with robbie*

Bauji: kasturi beta ya robbie ko apna kamara dikha thana

Kasturi: ji bauji

Bauji: main un saab ko unka kamara dikha thu ga

*Bauji exits with rest of family*

kasturi: *looks at robbie* ji aiya main aap ko apna kamara dikha thi hun

robbie: *follows kasturi without saying anything, kasturi takes him to a nice room with a balcony in it and she is about to leave when...*

robbie: tumara naam kasturi ha na? *is confused on how to start convo*

kasturi: *turns around* ji...aur hain tum balcony ka door bi band kar sak tha ho agar tume tund (cold) laga

robbie: nahin bas teek hai

kasturi: ji goodnight *walks off*

robbie: *sits on bed and sighs* ya tho bilkul nahin bolti yaar, aab main kya karun. is ko tho hanji, ji woh ji ya hi kana aatha hai...no party animal at all. aara how do u appeal to woman such as that i mean-

*Tanu giggles as she is standing in the door with a cup of milk*

Tanu: ya aap kya karan hai...

Robbie: woh main bus...*turns around and rolls his eyes*

Tanu: acha, maa na ya aap saab ka liye thooth (milk) baaja ha...main isko night table main rakh thathee hun *puts milk on night table* good night *and giggles as she walks out*

NEXT MORNING

*Everyone is already awake and has eaten breakfast and now are doing their own activities, the woman have gone for shopping and then men are outside talking and our robbie is still asleep and its past noon, robbies dad is about to wake him up when he sees kasturi goin up the stairs and asks her too, being the good girl she is she agrees.*

Kasturi: robbie ji...woh aapka dad na mujhe kaha hai ka aapko taltha

*no answer, robbie snores away*

kasturi: please aap ut ya na

*still no answer and kasturi gets a bit worried and is about to go shake him when robbie starts talking in his sleep*

Robbie: acha...main bi tume both pyar kartha hun Zeena, actually tuma nahin tumara jism se *kasturi is shocked and covers her ears and robbie continues* tum jaab nach thi ho na...hain...acha mujhe wahan math shar na (dont touch me there)...hahahahah *robbie gets really into his dream and falls off the bed waking himself, he realizes hes on the floor and gets up and sees kasturi*

Kasturi: ji woh...aap ka papa na humse kaha tha hum aap ko tal tha...is liye hum yahein...waisa huma koi shok nahin hai kise ka sapne interupt karna ka *leaves the room*

Robbie: *kicks the bed post* shit! woh zeena aaj kahan sapne main aa gayi...aur woh seethi saathi kasturi mara bara main kya soch thi hogi...aab jaan main aisa act kari gaya tho ya tho mujhe kabhi nahin aapnaya gi. patha nahin kyun par main isa ya bi nahin batha saktha ka main hi raunak hun...waqt pa nahin bathaya aur aab kahun ga tho she'll be upset i lied the whole time. par maina teek hi kiya, raunak ban ka main jo kehna chatha tha kisi aur ka chehra ka peecha ka thiya, aab thak tha hain kya ya aisli robbie se pyar kara gi ya nahin...

*robbie gets ready and goes downstairs to find kasturi setting up the table and gets an idea in his head to help her*

robbie: main aap ki koi madat kar sak tha hun?

kasturi: nahin, aap kyun karan ga...aap tho apne mahman hain

*robbie helps her anyway and she smiles and they get done setting up*

robbie: *sees this as an oppurtunity to ask her something* tum raunak sa kafi bathein karthi ho na?

kasturi: ji woh dost hai mera...

robbie: acha? haan woh tumara bara main mera saath kafi bathein kartha hai

kasturi: sach? *notices she gets excited and bites her tongue and he notices this and smiles*

robbie: hain...tum ko waisa raunak kaisa lag tha hai *smiling*

kasturi: woh-

Kaushalya: KASTURI! ZARA ITHAR AANA *yelling from outside*

*Kasturi just smiles at robbie and runs off. Robbie smiles as he picks up an apple and bites it, he obviously thinks she likes him*

*Robbie later joins everyone outside, and then bauji brings up and idea*

bauji: robbie tumne kabhi chandni chok nahin thaka ho ga

alka: aur yahein dekh na laik kya hai?

robbie: nahin

ra's dad: then its done! main aur bauji soch raha tha kyun na kasturi, tanu aur navneet tuma chandni chok dikha tha

*robbie gets excited at the thought and shakes his head yes*

kasturi: aap saab bi sath chaliya uncle ji

uncle: nahin kasturi, tum saab bacha ghum na jao, hum kahan bura jaaya ga

*everyone laffs*

kaushalya: acha phir kasturi tum thora picnic wala saaman pack kar lo, trip ka liya, tum saab abhi chal jao

robbie: great!...i mean main bi chandni chok dekh na chatha hun

*kasturi nods and gets everything ready and the 4 of them (kasturi, robbie, tanu and navneet) go into the van tanu and navneet take the back seat and kasturi has to sit in the front with robbie*

Tanu: wow what a nice jeep

Robbie: yea, raunak ki hai

Navneet: is liye tho itni achi hai kyun na kasturi di?

Kasturi: who

*Robbie looks at her and smiles and drives off*

K guys so I had some time on my hands, so I decided just to write another part and thanks for the comments u all…reallly nice of u guys for ur positive feedback = )
Part 11
Continuing on…frm the jeep

*Robbie drives to the chandni chok bazaar, he steps out of the car and immediatley hears the noises, smells the smells and can almost taste all the oily food being made. He gives a disgusted face and covers his mouth and nose*

Kasturi: ji…robbie aap teek tho hai na?

Robbie: hai..woh bus, yahein smell itni…uh…itni strong hai na

Kasturi: hain, yahi tho hamara chandni chok ki khushbu hai

Robbie: aara isa jaa khushbu katha hai, tho buri smell kaisi ha yahein par

Kasturi: ji?

Robbie: kuch nahin bus kuch soch raha tha, acha chalo

*Everyone walks around the bazaar, navneet goes to look at the nearest cricket bats while tanu looks at choorian, kasturi looks at suits and choorian with tanu. Robbie just walks around with his mouth covered and decides he needs to puke, after he vomits in the nearest alley kasturi notices he may be sick, so they all decide that mayb they should go have their picnic on the outside of town where there is more clearings and no traffic, noise and pollution, robbie drives off and they reach a nice picnic area and kasturi begins to set everything down*

Tanu: wow…kitna nice din hai na robbie ji?

Robbie: ya.

Kasturi: ji robbie ji aap kana kaiya na.

*everyone is eating*

Navneet: kitna upsetting hai na ka raunak nahin aaya, unko ya jaaga bothi pasand aathi

Tanu: ha agreed

Robbie: hai, usko aisi jaaga hi pasand hai

Kasturi: aur aap ko nahin robbie ji?

Robbie: sach kahun tho nahin, mujhe woh party wala mahol pasand hai

Tanu: chi chi, city parties main tho larkhian bilkul kapara nahin pathian

Robbie: aha, tum tho aisa ka rahi ho ka buri bath hai

Kasturi: aap city main pala bara hain, is liye tumara liye ya saab teek ho ga, likyan hum yahein isa nahin maan tha

Robbie: kya? Yahein chandni chok wala lok fun karna nahin maan tha?

Kasturi: maina ya kaab kaha, maina to sirf kaha ka hamara liye fun karna parties ka bina bi ho sak tha ha…aur vaisa bi parties ki zaroorat nahin hai

Robbie: ya aap ki opinion ho gi…parties both fun hothian hai…you never been to one…aap ko kaisa patha woh kasiyan hothian hai

Kasturi: ji apne ya kaisa assume kar liye ka main kabhi parties main nahin gayi…sirf is liye because main chandni chok ki rana wali hun

Robbie: hain par chandni chok ki parties kahan aur delhi ki parties kahan

Kasturi: excuse me?!

Navneet: *notices tension and cuts in* dee, woh chalo hum robbie ko mandir ka sath wala ganga dikha thatha hain…

Kasturi: hain…chalo.

*Everyone finishes eating but kasturi just sort of breaks away from the crowd and then finally they all drive to the ganga beside the mandir, after that they all go to the mandir and robbie never have really gone to the mandir since a kid doesn't know what he is doing and kasturi notices this and tanu and navneet tell him how to do it, after they all pray they all go back to the jeep but before entering the jeep kasturi stops robbie*

Kasturi: kathan hai ka delhi both bara shar hai…delhi main lok itna kuch seek jatha hain…likyan ajeeb bath hai ka aap ko bhagwan ka ghar teek sa pooja bi nahin karni aayi…aur meri liye ya saab itne aasan hai jitna saasan lana hai (as easy as breathing) aur ya chandni chok na sikaya hai mujhe. Aur aap ko delhi na partying karna sikaya, par mujhe malum hai ka main kon sa seekna jahoon gi…partying ya phir mera bhagwan ki pooja. *gets in car*

*Robbie rolls his eyes, and gets into the car, the rest of the journey home is silent, they arrive at dinner and everyone eats and then later robbie goes to his room to read. Robbie even though doesn't seem like the reading type occasionally secretly reads, he was reading a novel by John Grisham his fav author, which he told kasturi while acting as raunak on the net, kasturi walks in to give him milk and sees what he is reading*

Kasturi: john grisham…mujhe bi iski novels pasand hai

Robbie: *smiles* hai woh main occasionally par latha hun

Kasturi: raunak ko bi iski books kafi pasand hai

Robbie: *smiles* acha

Kasturi: hain

Robbie: *robbie smiles at the thought of a girl actually knowing his choice in books, most girls he goes out with are in it for his looks and wouldn't bother remembering his favourite books* apne ya wali pari hai?

Kasturi: nahin

Robbie: well maina 6 bar pari hai…tum isko borrow kar sak thi ho

Kasturi: *takes book from robbies hand* thanks

Robbie: acha good night

*As kasturi leaves robbie pulls out his laptop and sees and email from kasturi, which asks how london is and he smiles at the irony of it all because he isnt even raunak nor is he in london, he gets his sweet on and gives a nice reply back.*

IN THE OTHER ROOM (KASTURIS)

*Kasturi checks her email and reads the one from raunak and gets all shy and then re reads it…after reading it she lays on her bed and grabs the pillow and thinks about how sweet raunak is, and how she gets excited just to read his mail and its such a confusing thing, then from her room she hears some yelling downstairs and goes to check what it is and robbie goes downstairs too*

Raunak's dad: *on the phone* hai beta hai…teek hai *cuts the phone and turns to face everyone* saab ka liye ek good news…raunak ka kaam jaldi ho gaya, is liye woh bi yahein hum saab ko join karna aara hai!!!!

*Family gets happy, and kasturi shies away and runs up the stairs, and navneet and tanu follow her*

Tanu: dee! Woh aara hai!

Kasturi: *giggles* aaj maina yahi prathna ki thi mandir main

Navneet: dekha na dee, bhagwan bi tumari side pa hai
*All of them laff*

*In his room robbie throws a pillow*

Robbie: raunak tume bi abhi aana tha yaar…abh kasturi ko ja sach patha laga tho…shit!
Aab main kya karun ga?