I wrote a fanfic too! QUESTION TO U ALL! - Page 7

hey praghabola ur back. we all were waiting for u. just check Robbie and Kasturi scenes. u'll understand.

K guys continuing on...
and thanks once again for reading guys 😃 😃
Part 15

STILL AT ROBBIES ROOM AT KASTURIS HOUSE

*Navneet reads the diary entry again just to check if she hadn't read wrong, or tries to look for another explanation, she is in shock. Meanwhile Robbie comes out of the shower rubbing his hair with his towel and walks into the room and sees Navneet with his diary!!*

Robbie: YEH TUM KYA KAR RAHI HO?!!

Navneet: *turns around abruptly dropping the diary onto the floor and looking at robbie, she is still shocked and seems to be on the verge of tears, but then all of a sudden her expression changes into a mad persons expression and it looks like shes ready to kill robbie*

Navneet: main yeh sawal (question) ap sa bi pooch sakthi hun...kya tum yeh kya kar raha ho?

Robbie: meri life main tumara koi interest nahin hona chaiya...hasn't anyone taught you not to go through people's personal things?

Navneet: hain main maan thi hun ka maina tumara stuff ko char ka (touched ur stuff) meri gaalti (mistake) hai...likyan acha hi hai ka maina yeh saab dekh liya, acha hi hai ka maina tumari aisleeat (your true side) dekh li

Robbie: *picks the diary off of the floor and turns to look out the window*

Navneet: Kyun?! kuch aur nahin kahen ga aap? Meri di ka saath itna bara jhoot...aur kaisa aadmi hai aap? Tumko maza aatha hai yeh saab dekh ka...maza aatha hai kisi ka dil ka saath kad (play) ka...tum itna kudgarz ho saktha ho, maina socha nahin tha...kaisa aadmi hai aap?!

Robbie: *all of a sudden starts yelling and goes crazy purging out all his emotions* HAIN HAIN! MERA BURA HUN...TUME KYA LAGTHA HAI KA MUJHE YEH SAAB DEKH KA MAZA AARA HAI?! NAHIN AATHA! HAR ROJ JAAB SA MAIN YAHEIN AAYA HUN MUJHE YEH SAAB...I DONT KNOW WHAT TO BLOODY SAY! GOD DAMNIT! KYA KAHUN MAIN?! I DIDNT MEAN TO HURT ANYONE. I WANTED TO TELL YOUR SISTER...*stops and start breathing heavily and looks out the window again clutching the railing*

Navneet: *sees his distress and lowers her voice* likyan yeh tumne saab di sa bathaya kyun nahin (why didnt u tell her) aap ko shayad malum nahin ho ga par woh apse bohoth pasand kar thi hai...aur aab woh raunak ko woh insaan samaj thi hai jo insaan usna itna waqt main batha ki...she doesnt like raunak, she likes you, she likes the person she talked to

Robbie: *looks at ground*

Navneet: kya woh saab bathein jo aapna meri di sa ki thi, woh saab ek natak tha...kya aap meri di ko pasand nahin kar tha...

Robbie: *still looking at ground* mujhe nahin malum main kya chatha hun...mujhe nahin malum ka meri feelings kasturi ka liye kya hai...

Navneet: aur woh emails? u acted like u loved her in them...aur aab ka raha ho kya tum ko malum nahin meri di ka liya feelings kya hai

Robbie: please navneet, understand my situation

Navneet: kya understand karun?? ka tum ek aisa insaan ho jo...kyun kiya yeh saab? agar meri di ko aap chatha nahin hai...kyun phir usko apne kareeb aana diya? kyun?

Robbie: please navneet, aap kasturi ko kuch math batha na...hai main kudgarz tha...woh saab pehle ek mazak tha (Robbie leaves out part about the bet because he sees how upset navneet is) likyan aab kasturi sa milka, maina dekha ka woh kitni achi insaan hai...aur mujhe nahin malum aab main kya karun...please let me tell kasturi...please.

Navneet: *just looks at him angrily, but she notices how distressed he is and doesnt know if she should take his side or not or even to trust the fact that he will tell kasturi later*

*Just then everyone comes home and kasturi walks into the room looking for navneet, she stops at the doorway and notices the tension between navneet and robbie*

Kasturi: Navneet! Kya hua?

*Navneet and robbie turn around to see kasturi, robbie looks at navneet pleading her not to tell and thinks in his mind that it is all over*

Navneet: *closes her eyes and breaths for a moment and then takes a big decision* kuch nahin di, woh hum cricket ka bara main ek argument kar raha tha, chalo neecha chal tha hain

*Kasturi smiles and nods and walks out with navneet, navneet turns around to look at robbie who says thank you, but she just turns her head and thinks she shouldnt have trusted him, but she says if he wont tell kasturi in time she will*

k guys its kind of short this time but i most likely will have time by 2nite to write some more 😊

Nav,

👏 👏 👏... amazing concept... A fresh story... Just read all the parts and must say they are fabulous.... Loved it.... the scenes and situations are all brilliantly framed and written...

Thank you so much.... for writing such a beautiful story... Loved RK 😳 ...

👍🏼 way to go gal.... Continue soon!!!

Sonia

awww thats really sweet

thanks so much sonia 😳 😳

awesom 👏
eagerly waitin 4 next ven robbie reveals d truth 2 kasturi ,her reaction??

thanks nimmofan

i assure u that kasturi will find out veryy soon 😊

Originally posted by: CanadianAddict

thanks nimmofan

i assure u that kasturi will find out veryy soon 😊

Arre yaar, ab aage bhi bado na... 😡

We are all waiting waiting Nav....We get our Robbie dosage from your FanFic...😊...Serial tho waise bhi faaltu hai aaj kal...😆...

awesomeeeeeee!!I just started reading ur ff.... i couldn't stop till i finished ur last update .. pl continue !!!
😊
thanks!

wow..really nic ...that was a really great part .. 😃 but though there was not all lot of rob/kas scence but still a good part 👏 lookin farward to u r nxt part 😍 😍 😍