Maahi Ve...!!! part 17 updated - Page 3

brilliant 👏 .thanx for getting them married in the first part itself.ohhhh i m soglad hurrey!!!!!!!! Continue soon as i m quiet eager 2 kno wat ll happen next.

mindblowing fanfic
its tooooooooooooooooooo good
loved it
plz cont soon



rimli

Originally posted by: Super Kool

brilliant 👏 .thanx for getting them married in the first part itself.ohhhh i m soglad hurrey!!!!!!!! Continue soon as i m quiet eager 2 kno wat ll happen next.

Thanx Suvi..... Putting up the next part soon.... keep commenting!!!

Originally posted by: rimli_remix rox

mindblowing fanfic
its tooooooooooooooooooo good
loved it
plz cont soon
rimli

thank u..... I'm happy that u liked it.... hope u like the next part too.....

Sonia

Thanx ppl for all the lovely responses..... here goes the next part....

Recap: Robbie finds out that Girish is not a right guy for Kasturi and informs Raunak about it….. soon reaches the marriage venue and without giving anyone a chance to speak fills Kasturi's maang with sindoor and ties the mangalsutra around her neck……

Part 2:

Kasturi's eyes are wide open wid shock and colour drains out of her face…… she continuously stares at Robbie and then slowly places her hand at her forehead touches and then slowly looks at her fingers that have now the traces of the sindoor on her forehead and once agin shifts her gaze to Robbie….. There is a plethora things going in her mind but she just can't get herself to speak….. Everybody present is as much shocked and then finally as the realization draws in JP and Kaushalya comes forward…… Oh yes did I mention abt Girish he's as much shocked…. Bechara ab tak zameen par hai…..

Kaushalya holds Kasturi and seeing the pain on Kasturi's face starts crying…. JP comes and stand in front of Robbie and slaps him hard…….

JP: Ye kya kiya tumne?? Tumne jo kiya tum jaante bhi ho uska matlab?? Meri beti ki shaadi ho rahi hai aur tum…..

Girish's mother(helps Girish to get up):Shaadi ho chuki hain bhaisahab… Chal beta Girish…… Ab hamara yahan kya kaam….

Kaushalya: Nahi behanji…. Aisa mat kijeye….. isme hamari Kasturi ka koi dosh nahi hai….. Aur ye shaadi bhi koi shaadi hai….. Abhi to aur kai rasmain baaki hain

Robbie: (with full attitude) Toh woh bhi puri ho jayengi….. (Kasturi who is crying bitterly not knowing wat to say and how to react…. Looks at Robbie disbelievingly)

Alka: wah bhaii wah!!! Arre dosh Kasturi ka nahi uski kismat ka hai….. Bauji ab aap chup kyun hain…. Aur karwao betiyon se naukri…. Ab dekh liya anjaam…. ab bhukto!!!

Robbie: (In a stern manner…. Fully Robbie style) Enuf….. Ab Kasturi meri patni hain…. Aur uske khilaf ab koi kuch nahi kahega (Expression changes from stern to casual manner) Aur maine aisa kiya kya hain…. Main Kasturi se pyar karta hoon aur…..

Girish's mother: Lo sun lo….. Agar yehi karma tha toh hume kyun bulaya…. Humari bezati karvane ke liye…… Ab hum ek pal bhi yahan nahi rukenge….. Chalo sab log (holding Girish's hand) Chal Girish……

Everbody looks on helplessly as they leave and some of the members gives killing glances at Robbie……..

(As they reach the enterance Raunak is standing there and yes he has got police along with him….. As he was about to enter he hears Robbie saying that now Kasturi is his wife…. Realizing wat was happening he was struck in his path..... he knew Robbie loves Kasturi and is very much capable of what he has done…… but know as everyone was leaving…. He comes back to his senses and the inspector steps forward)

Inspector: U r under arrest Mr. Grirish!!! (ok another shock for everyone)

Girish: par maine kiya kya hai??

Inspector: Chawla saree shop main aag lagane aur Insurance company ke saath fraud karne ke jurm main hum aapko giraftar karte hain!!!

(Lo ho gayi ab Girish ki bolti band…..)

JP: yeh aap kya keh rahe hain inspector sahib….
Raunak: (coming back to his senses) yeh bilkul sahi keh rahe hain uncle….. ( he then explains everything to him…. Jp looks at Girish with disbelief and anger…. Raunak also mentions it was Robbie who had asked him to get the police and the proofs as he knew no one will believe him without the evidences…. Ok Chawla's ko ek baar phir jhatka laga…. Kasturi stops crying and looks at Robbie and Robbie looks back at her….. Police takes away Girish and his mother follows them…. Begging and pleading…… Pooja is helpless and just moves away….. )

Alka: Lo bhai….. Kasturi jahan tamashe wahan….. Ek musibat tali nahin ke dusri aa gayi….. girish ko toh police le gayi lekin ab Kasturi ka kya….. Zindagi bhar bethi rahegi ab humare sir par…

Bauji: Alka chup kar ja…..

Alka: galat kya keh rahi hoon main bauji….. Kaun Yeh toh wohi baat ho gayi na ki aasman se tapke khajoor pe atke……. karega ab humari Kasturi se shaadi??

(Kasturi can't take it anymore and runs away from there…. Robbie is sad and helplessly looks on where Kasturi goes and then turns his gaze at JP)

Robbie: Uncle main janta hoon jo maine kiya who mujhe nahin karna chahiye tha…. Par mere pass aur koi raasta nahin tha…. Aur rahi Kasturi ki baat toh (looking at Alka) ab who meri zimedari hai….. Main usse abhi aur issi waqt poore rasmo ke saath shaadi karoonga….

(Raunak looks at Robbie in shock….. He doesn't know whether to stop Robbie or not…. But then remembers that they are almost married and now its too late…. He decides to spk to Robbie later…… He comes and stands beside Robbie as if assuring him that he is with him)

JP: Aur tumhara parivar?

Robbie: Aap unki fikar mat kijiye..... Unhe main samjha loonga……

Raunak: Robbie bilkul theek keh raha hai uncle….. Aap haan keh dijiye….

JP: (turning towards Bauji) Bauji aap ki kya rai hai??

Bauji: Ab kya farak padta hai….. mujhe nahin lagta aur koi raasta hai

Kaushalya: Maafi chahti hoon bauji magar mujhe lagta hain hum eek baar Kasturi se baat kar leni chahiye……

Robbie: Ap sahi keh rahi hain aunty…. Main khud baat karunga Kasturi se aur wada karta hoon jo hoga who uski marzi se hi hoga…..

(JP gives him an approving look and Robbie goes to Kasturi's room….. Kasturi is in her room….. Looking at herself in the mirror….. Robbie comes and stand behind her….. She sees him thru mirror and she at once turns to face him….. Her face is blank as if devoid of all the emotions…. So much has happened within the span of an hour)

Robbie: Kasturi main tumse………

Kasturi: Kuch mat kahiye sir……. Aapko kuch kehne ki jarrorat nahin hai…… Maine aapki aur Bauji ki saari baatein sun li hain….. Main tayar hoon…. Isi main mere parivar ki khushi hai….

Robbie: aur tumhari khushi??

Kasturi: Mere liye mere parivar se badkar aur kuch nahin hai sir….. main nahi janti ki aapne jo kiya who sahi tha ya nahi…. Par samajh sakti hoon aapne aisa kyun kiya….. Main ye bhi jaanti hoon ke aap pyar main yakeen nahi karte (Robbie immediately looks away from Kasturi…. He wants to confess his love to her right then but he thinks this is not the right time as she needs some time to come out of all this) Phir bhi aapne mere liye apni zindagi…

Robbie: Kasturi maine wohi kiya jo mujhe sahi laga….. main janta hoon ke aaj tum ye shaadi sirf apne parivar ke liye kar rahi ho par ek wada aaj main tumse aur apne aap se karta hoon ke tumhe tumhare is faisle ke liye kabhi pachtana nahi padeaga……

(Kaushalya, JP and Raunak comes in….. Kaushalya looks at Kasturi and holds her hand…. Kasturi looks at her and nods her head and gives her consent to the wedding….. Raunak looks at Robbie and gives him a reassuring small smile….. )

JP: Beta tum niche chalo hum Kasturi ko lekar aate hain

(Raunak takes Robbie down…… Everyone looks at them wanting to know wat happened…… But a smile comes across everyone's face as they c Kasturi descending from the steps along with JP and Kaushalya…. Raunak takes Robbie to the mandap and Jp and Kaushalya makes kasturi sit beside him…… Tanu, Navneet, Ajay, Tiku, Beeji, Bauji, Buaji all are haapy…… Alka is visibly upset but gives a fake smile to everyone)

Pandit: Ab aap pheron ke liye khade ho jaiye……

(Robbie and Kasturi exchange looks…… Many things are going on in their heads….. Robbie is ofcourse happy at the turn of events and can't believe that he is finally getting his love….. Kasturi is upset and confused not knowing what to expect from the life that lays ahead her… Kaushalya nudges Kasturi to move on and they take their seven marriage voes…..)

Pandit: ab kanyadaan ke liye haath badaye…..

(JP and Kaushalya places Kasturi's hand on Robbie's and Robbie hold her hand very delicately and wid loads of love as if it's the most precious thing on earth…. Kasturi senses something different in his manner and at once looks at Robbie ….. His eyes were trying to communicate so much to her……. Robbie looks at her with the most loving and understanding gaze ever….. Kasturi for few moments forgets everything around her and gets lost in his eyes…. )

Pandit: Vivah sampan hua…..

Robbie: (to himself) kasturi aaj se main tumhe who har khushi dene ki koshish karoonga jo tumne kabhi chahi hongi….. har buri yaad tumhare dil se mita doonga…….

(they get up and take everyone's blessings…. Kasturi hugs her mom and sisters and Raunak comes and hugs Robbie….. He is happy for Robbie and has no doubts about Robbie keeping Kasturi haapy but at the same time he was tensed as to how to handle the situation at home…… Most importantly how will Devika react to this!!!)

Robbie: Kya soch raha hai Raunak

Raunak: Nahi kuch nahi…… Tu Kasturi ko lekar ghar aa…. Main tum dono ke swagat ki tayariyan karta hoon…. (hugs him again and gives a faint smile to Kasturi and leaves)

Now Kasturi's bidai takes place….. She hugs everyone and cries…… Everyone hugs her and tries to comfort her….. All of them knew that it won't be easy for her…… Robbie feels helpless watching Kasturi cry like that…..

Kasturi: Ma aap bhi apna khayal rakhna aur Bauji ka bhi….

JP: tu humari fikar mat ker beta… tu bas apna khayal rakhna aur apne parivar ka…

Kaushalya: Mujhe pura yakeen hai ki tu jaldi hi apne parivar ka dil jeet legi…. Robbie beta meri beti ka khayal rakhna….

Robbie: (smiles) aap fikar mat kijiye aunty…. Ab main kasturi ke saath hoon…. Aur main ab Kasturi ka saath kabhi nahin chodunga……

(Kasturi looks at Robbie unable to understand him….. For her it was as if she was watching a new Robbie whom she had never seen before…… Robbie looks at Kasturi and she moves her gaze from him….. Finally Kasturi ki bidai bhi ho jati hai)

Ok guys…. That's it for today…… Ab jaldi jaldi batao kaisa hai….. I'm waiting….. I hope I haven't disappointed u guys with this part…..

Sonia

plzzzzzzz.......continueeee......itz great!!! 👏

Disappoint??????? You are crazy to even think like that!!!!!

Too good!!!!Just, too good!!! 👏 👏 .
I loved all the scenes where RK were looking at each other. I could really imagine them looking at each other!!!!!!!

And I am so happy to see Raunak again as a friend and not someone who has separated RK. 👏 .

Sonia, Can't wait for the next part 😭 . Please post ASAP!!!!!

sonia superb luved both d 1st & 2nd part;

Girish's mother(helps Girish to get up):Shaadi ho chuki hain bhaisahab… Chal beta Girish…… Ab hamara yahan kya kaam…. 😆 😆
👏
continue soon...
sonali

they got married...

this is what excatly i wanted to se in real kasturi... great u wrote..
pls continue soon..
davia

Oh my!what an imagination ! 👏 👏 👏 you wrote whatever I wanted to see in the real show! Great! 👏Please continue soon...love to know what happens next....

Originally posted by: samreena

plzzzzzzz.......continueeee......itz great!!! 👏

Thanx.... surely will comtinue soon and I hope u like the next part too.... stay tuned and keep commenting😊

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Disappoint??????? You are crazy to even think like that!!!!!

Too good!!!!Just, too good!!! 👏 👏 .
I loved all the scenes where RK were looking at each other. I could really imagine them looking at each other!!!!!!!

And I am so happy to see Raunak again as a friend and not someone who has separated RK. 👏 .

Sonia, Can't wait for the next part 😭 . Please post ASAP!!!!!

Pragalbha..... Ab toh RK ki shaadi bhi karva di ab kyun ro rahi ho??..... Don't worry sweety will post the next part soon.... don't forget to comment!!!

And yes they'll have lot many eye-locking sessions in the future....

Originally posted by: nimmofan

sonia superb luved both d 1st & 2nd part;

Girish's mother(helps Girish to get up):Shaadi ho chuki hain bhaisahab… Chal beta Girish…… Ab hamara yahan kya kaam…. 😆 😆
👏
continue soon...
sonali

Sonali even while I was typing the part I fell like laughing imaging the scene and what else to do... Robbie aa gaya to Girish kahan se yaad rehta??

Originally posted by: davia389

they got married...

this is what excatly i wanted to se in real kasturi... great u wrote..
pls continue soon..
davia

Thanx Davia.... Even I wanted to c them together in the serial.... keep reading and commenting too.... Btw I'm waiting for ur ff... whn r u updating??

Originally posted by: RK_fan111

Oh my!what an imagination ! 👏 👏 👏 you wrote whatever I wanted to see in the real show! Great! 👏Please continue soon...love to know what happens next....

thanx ya.... hope u like the next part too!!!

Originally posted by: sofia_shiraz95

too good sonia...!! 👏 👏

Thanx sofia.... I'm happy that u r liking it.... keep tuned!!!

Originally posted by: nailaqureshi

lovely lovely atleast they r married in this fc 😳

Thanx.... keep commenting..

Sonia