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Posted: 15 years ago
#31

If you are in my life...Part 8


K:I and Robbie are childhood friends.Devika aunty decided to conduct our wedding.But when Robbie told her that he loves Kasturi,she did'nt oppose against his wish.I was very happy.Because I'm in love with Ranbir.One day i went to see Devika aunty.

Flashback..
Kanya enters the house:Hi Devika aunty...
D:Hi Kanya..
Devika hugs Kanya.
K:Aunty..i heard that Robbie is getting married to Kasturi.
D:I'm sorry Kanya.I did not want to break my promise.But i was forced to do that because of Robbie's horoscope.
K:What?
D:It is written in Robbie's horoscope that his wife will die.If you marry Robbie,you will die.I did'nt want that to happen.But don't worry...let Robbie marry Kasturi.I won't allow them to live together even for a single day.Kasturi will die soon.After that you can enter this house as Robbie's wife.. as my daughter in law.The astrologer assured that Robbie's second wife will not have any problem.
Suddenly they hear Robbie scream:Mom!
Devika and Kanya turn back.Robbie is trembling.
R:So this is your plan?No...i won't allow Kasturi to die.Kasturi is my life and i don't want to lose my life.Kanya...don't think that i will marry you.
Robbie goes out.Kanya follows him.
K:Please listen to me Robbie.
R:No.
K:I have never seen you that way.I love someone else.
Robbie is surprised.

Present:
Kanya:You said Robbie saw you as a tissue paper.But remember..he never touched you with a bad intention.Kasturi...that day what you saw in the restaurant was a drama...to avoid you...because Robbie wants to save your life.
Kasturi cries.
She sings for Ranbir and Kanya...
"Kyonki itna pyaar tumse karte hain hum.."{Kyonki}.
Her mind is full of Robbie while singing.

Robbie is in the temple.He prays:God...please save my Kasturi..
He opens his eyes.He sees Kasturi smiling at him.He is surprised.
He pretends to be angry:Why are you infront of me?
K:No need of drama.Kanya told me everything.
Robbie is shocked.
K:Marry me Robbie.i can't be away from you.
R:Kasturi...no...if you are in my life..you will lose your own life.I can't put your life in danger.
K:No...nothing will happen to me.It is just a superstition.
R:No..i can't take a risk.
K:Ok..i don't mind dying.I want to just live one day as your wife.
R:You are crazy.
K:If you don't marry me,i will die now.
R:Kasturi!
She hits her head on the wall.Robbie is shocked.He pulls her back.
She is really tired.Robbie sits down.Kasturi sits close to him...almost on his lap.Her tears are falling down.
Robbie takes sindoor from the temple and puts it on her forehead.They both look at each other's eyes.Their hearts have become one and the heart is singing:
Jaaniye heeriye
mere mann ye bata de tu
kis or chala hai tu
kya paya nahi tune
kya dhundh raha hai tu
jo hai ankahee jo hai ansuni
woh baat kya hai bata
mitwa kahe dhadkan hai tujhse pyar
mitwa yeh khudse toh na tu chhupa..{Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna}.
They both feel the music in each other's eyes.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#32
part-7
girrrr...robbie ditched kasturi...😡
poor kasturi...feel sorry for her.hope robbie realise his mistake
why robbie is crying looking at kasturi's photographs.? i am confused😕
eww...kanya is with ranbir...godd for robbie ...tasting his own medicine😉
great work dear...👏awaiting for the next update ...😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
wooo....me first...
oh you updated part-8!
let me read right now...😃
oh i see robbie and kanyawere childhood friends!
Robbie's horoscope says that his wife will die...😲 ...oh! that is y devika said yes to kasturi...what a evil minded she is? argh!
aw...robbie came to know about his horoscope...good for him.so sweet he don't want to marry kasturi and let her die.
good kasturi came to know all thr truth...so no missunderstanding between roka😛
woo...robbie put singoor on kasturi's maan!
again mitwa song...i love it.
wonderful update dear.keep it up👏
Edited by shumi. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
Just caught up with the whole thing Very nicely written Look forward to reading more
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35

If you are in my life..Part 9






Robbie and Kasturi enter Sabarwal house.Devika is shocked to see them together.
R:Mom...i married Kasturi.
She is shocked.She smiles.
She thinks:My plan is going to be successful.
D:Good.The outside world does'nt know that you both are married.So we will conduct the wedding for the public.Only after that you both should live together.
R:Ok.

They both get married infront of others.

Kasturi wears a grand green saree and matching ornaments for the wedding reception.She sits infront of the mirror and thinks:I feel that i'm dreaming.Robbie is my husband now.
Robbie comes near her:What are you thinking?
K:I'm thinking how lucky i'm to get you.
R:But Kasturi..i'm scared.
K:Tommorow onwards we will go to temples.God will save our married life.I'm planning to take vrath.Till then we have to control ourselves.
They both smile.

Party...
Robbie and Kasturi dance to the song 'In Lamho Ke Daaman Mein..'{Jodha Akbar}.

Robbie and Kasturi visit temples.
They reach home.Robbie goes to the room.
Devika whispers to Kasturi:However you pray...you can't save your life.You can't change your destiny.
Kasturi becomes upset.

Kasturi is sitting on the bed.Robbie finds her upset and goes near her.He caresses her face and hair.
R:What happened Kasturi?Why are you upset?
K:Nobody is supporting our pilgrimage.They think that i will die.
He keeps his finger on her lips:Don't say like that.Kasturi...now i have faith in God.God will not give us pain.
K:But...
Robbie sings the song 'Kuch na kaho..'{Kuch na kaho}.
She is surpised.She smiles.
K:You sing so well Robbie.
R:Stop joking.
K:No..really you sang very well.You should sing in public.
R:No..but i will sing for you.
She smiles.
K:I have arranged a puja.We have to buy some stuffs for the puja.
R:Ok.

Kasturi wears a black saree to go for shopping.Robbie goes near near:You look very pretty.
She blushes.
He gets a phone call.He attends the call.
R:No..i can't attend the meeting.
K:What is the matter?
Robbie cuts the call.
R:They are calling me for the meeting.I will not go.I will accompany you for shopping.
K:No need.You attend the meeting.That is important.I will buy everything for the puja.Don't worry.
R:But Kasturi...
K:Go...attend the meeting..
R:Ok..

Kasturi is walking on the road.Suddenly a car hits her.She falls down.The guy who was driving the car takes her to the hospital.

All are in the hospital.Robbie is nervous.
Devika:I told you...we can't change destiny.Kasturi can't be saved.Even the doctor could not give any guarantee.
R:Mom!
The person who hit Kasturi goes to Robbie:I'm sorry...because of me.. your wife...I did'nt do it purposefully.I don't know how i did this mistake.
Robbie weeps and goes near the Lord Shiv's Idol in the hospital:Kasturi went out to do puja for you.Still you tried to take away her life?Please...you have to return her life.
Robbie cries.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36
Part 7
omg poor Kasturi I feel sorry for her robbie has hurt her badly
so kasturi is going to sing at ranbir party
omg his gf turns out to be kanya
she is cheating on robbie like the way he played with poor kasturi feelings
what truth is kanya talking about even i am confused
great part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

If you are in my life...Part 10





25 years later...

A party....
A stylish guy and a cute chubby girl come upon the stage.
He:Hi...i'm Nakul.
She:I'm Archita.
N:We are here to celebrate our parents' 25th wedding anniversary.We invite our parents here.
Robbie and Kasturi arrive.Robbie has worn a black outfit.Kasturi has worn a beautiful violet saree with matching ornaments.
Archita and Nakul together:We both wish our parents a very happy wedding anniversary.
Everyone claps their hands.
Robbie:I'm happy that Kasturi is my life partner.Kasturi...there was a time when i used to think that if you are in my life i will lose you forever.But it's been proved wrong by you.You proved that only if you are in my life i can live happily.
Kasturi:I'm happy to be Robbie's wife.His love and prayers saved me from a major accident.His love and prayers changed our horoscope and destiny.
Archita:Mom...you look gorgeous in this violet saree.You look so young that you don't look like my mother.
Kasturi smiles:The credit goes to your dad.He makes me happy.So still i look young and fresh.This saree is his selection.His wedding anniversary gift for me.
Nakul tells Robbie:Dad...you look so young and hot.If we both walk together girls will look only at you.
Robbie smiles and his dimple is evident.
A:What is your gift for dad?
K:I have made a chocolate cake for your dad.
The maid brings the cake.They look at the cake.With white icing it's been written 'I love you' on the cake.
Seeing that Robbie's eyes shine.He looks at Kasturi.She blushes.
N:Wow Dad...mom has baked a cake specially for you.It looks yummy.
A:Mom's message is also seen on the cake.Mom loves dad very much.Dad..what are you going to give mom for making a yummy cake for you?
Robbie looks into Kasturi's eyes deeply and sings the song
'Dil Mera Pooch Raha Hai Tujhse
Kya Pyaar Karoge Mujhse Mujhse
Dil Mera Pooch Raha Hai Tujhse
Kya Pyaar Karoge Mujhse Mujhse...'{Kuch to hai}.
N:Wow!Dad..you sing so well.We always hear mom's songs.But for the first time we heard you sing.We never knew that you can sing so well.
A:Yes dad.Your song was a surprise for us.
K:Your dad sings very well.
A:That means he sings for mom.
N:He sings only for mom.How romantic!
Robbie and Kasturi are shy.
R:No party is complete without Kasturi's song.Kasturi...sing a song.
She smiles and looks at obbie. She sings the song
'La, la la la la la, la la la la la la la
La, la la la la, la la la la la
Tu tu hai vohi dil ne jisse apna kaha
Tu hai jahan main hoon vahan
Ab to yeh jeena tere bin hai saza
O mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah
O mil jaaye is tarah, do lehre jis tarah
Phir ho na judaa, haan yeh vaada raha...'{Yeh vada raha}.

Robbie is deeply involved in the song as he knows that Kasturi is singing specially for him.
A:Now it is the time for dance.
Nakul and Archita push Robbie and Kasturi to the dance floor.
They dance to the song 'O Re Piya..'{Aja Nachle}.

The end.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#38
Part 8
I knew it was to good to be true for devika to be good
omg she has such an evil mind
robbie found out the truth that his wife will die
poor guy feel sorry for him
good thing all the truths revealed now
aww robbie filled kasturi mang with sindoor
happy days for roka
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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
That was a very cute ending Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
#40
Part 9
finally roka are married
devika is so evil still thinking of kasturi death
cute moments between roka
aww kasturi is going to keep a puja
oh no she had an accident
and devika is still being mean
plz dont let anything happen to her

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