FF-Thoda Sa Pyaar(RoKa)NEW-part-47 to 50 pg107 - Page 12

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Posted: 16 years ago
aww wow di exellent mind blowing good job di roka r going to married soon wow bohot ache se describe kia hai aap ne good writer n story ofcorse!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: missindia26

Ooh Im first ๐Ÿ˜›welcome dear
Fantastic parts Shumi ๐Ÿ‘thanks lol
Wow three all in one go what a surprise ๐Ÿ˜‰i know๐Ÿ˜›
Poor Kasturi had to go along with it but no worries shes closer to RoKa ๐Ÿ˜›let us see how she is going to handle it. it is going to be a challenge for me.
Kiran committed suicide? How sad! me too feel sorry for her.๐Ÿ˜ญ Lol you make us work so hard just slipping in little clues ๐Ÿ˜•heeee
Hm liked how Alana supported Kasturi ๐Ÿ˜Š.she is going to be a very sweet character here
And loved the mehndi rasam loved the matching clothes choces for rRoKa very attractive ๐Ÿ˜›thanks
And him finding her name ๐Ÿ˜ƒheeeee found it too

She said I love you! She said it! She said it! So cute ๐Ÿ˜ณbut it was the word from her lip not from her heart๐Ÿ˜”
Aw so sweet how Robbie was all excited poor man but he better watch out cos Kasturi is not happy...๐Ÿ˜‰yep she is going to be dangerous to him
Wonderful parts thanks update soon
๐Ÿ˜Šwill try to

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow 3 parts together......thanks Shumi........๐Ÿ˜ƒ.......btw why isn't your ff on the main page....i had to access it via the post where Shruti has compiled all the FFs.......

fantastic parts.........so much happened.

liked how you described robbie's excitement but i feel a little bad for kasturi.......right now she hates him so it must be very difficult for her to accept him as her husband..............also she's so young. So Ajay & JP don't know the reason why kiran committed suicide....

massi's scene was very funny.......loved how alana took kasturi's side.....๐Ÿ˜Š

the entire mehndi sequence was very well written........๐Ÿ‘......even though kasturi hates robbie she's attracted to him....๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰.....hope her misunderstanding is cleared soon.

great going....๐Ÿ‘.......thanks for the PM Shumi.....๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: swan20

wow 3 parts together......thanks Shumi........๐Ÿ˜ƒ.......btw why isn't your ff on the main page...i know๐Ÿ˜ญ.even i was wondering when my ff thread was missing from the first page of kasturi section.shruti moved my thread to ff section.she want to organize and keep all the ffs in one thread
..i had to access it via the post where Shruti has compiled all the FFs........that is the way i am also reaching my ff thread.i find it very difficult to do so

fantastic parts....thanks.....so much happened.i know.i want to move my ff fast.before i go on vacation i am thinking to end.

liked how you described robbie's excitement but i feel a little bad for kasturi.......right now she hates him so it must be very difficult for her to accept him as her husband.........for sure .....also she's so young.exactly.that is why frequently i memtion she is too young.i want to show how a mature man is going to handle a young college going girl(not very young though) as his wife.it is very dufficult for me to write .still i will try my best. So Ajay & JP don't know the reason why kiran committed suicide....yep.other wise they would not have acepcted their proposal.

massi's scene was very funny.......loved how alana took kasturi's side.....๐Ÿ˜Šthanks for liking it

the entire mehndi sequence was very well written........๐Ÿ‘thanks dear......even though kasturi hates robbie she's attracted to him....๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰.hahaha...i made her so.....hope her misunderstanding is cleared soon.will try to

great going....๐Ÿ‘thanks again.......thanks for the PM Shumi.....๐Ÿ˜Šthanks.lol i think here after i have to pm all my reader to say that i have up dated๐Ÿ˜ญ because my ff thread is now in dungeon๐Ÿ˜ญ

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Innocent02

Roka's marriage soo soon ...i don't want to drag it๐Ÿ˜‰...I am soo Happy
yipeeee

in 11th part the last paragraph was soo sweet when robbie entered the house n kept staring at Kasturi......sho shweet.thanks for liking it.

Mehndi ceremony was very nice thanks .
ofcourse the I LOVE U part was awesome ! yep.i want he to say love u to robbie...heeee

all the 3 parts were amazing !!! thanks

great job dii. . . . . .๐Ÿ˜ƒ.thanks for your continuous appreciation dear

I am getting soo excited for ROKA's marriage๐Ÿ˜ƒ next part may be roka marriage

thanks !๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Harlowdqueen

u've done a splendid and remarkable job.tanks for your kind words dear the whole scene was just so breathtaking.thanks for liking it today is my 10th board result within one hour and i was shivering badly omg๐Ÿ˜ฒ.don't worry every think will be fine.my sincere prayers are with you for ypur outstanding results.. but this made me quite overwhelmed....good for your health and mind.you need to relaxed doring such time...................
i m getting curious to watch the next part will post soon and i hope this time i wont bring tears in ur eyes.so sweet of you dear๐Ÿ˜ƒ.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nehaaa nawab

thanks for the pm...mention not dear... wow wow wow three parts together......... all the 3 parts were just mindblooooooooooooowing......thanks dear..... u are an excellent writer, u make us feel the scenes by ur description, seriously the way u expressed kasturi's anger, robbie's happiness, his love for kasturi was just superb....thank you for all your apreciation.i love your broad mind.. robbie made the best use of the opportunity of making kasturi do whatever he wants and finally kasturi had to tell that she loves him...hahaha...that was a good trick of robbie na๐Ÿ˜‰.. m just waiting for the parts after their wedding....difficult part.let us see how it comes out.... pls pls pls update sooooooon, will try to and thank u sooooooo much for updating 3 parts together.....your happiness is my pleasure.๐Ÿ˜ƒ.........

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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh wow!
Fantastic! RoKa will soon be getting married....yipee!!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome part as usual!
Keep it up!
Cheers;;;;;
Amita!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mini1roka

omg shumi di,,this was awesome....๐Ÿ‘ thanks dear

love this robbie....โค๏ธme too๐Ÿ˜ณ
n the suspense u created abt robbie's arrival ,robbie finding his name in kasturi's palm n kasturi sayin i love u made me bite my nails...๐Ÿ˜•hahahaha...thanks ...keep some for next part๐Ÿ˜‰
n ye the last scene in part 11 was soooooooo cute...robbie cud nt get his eys off kasturi.....๐Ÿ˜›true
also the whole scene of mehndi ceremony is so well described...๐Ÿ˜Šthanks again
n vry happy to knw that RoKa r going to get married soon.... very soon
love u diiiii๐Ÿค—love you too ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: reenbana

aww wow di exellent mind blowing good job thanks for all those apprications. di roka r going to married soon very soon wow bohot ache se describe kia hai aap ne thanks for liking good writer n story ofcorse!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผthanks again

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