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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

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i think im going to stick to my normal speech this time 😆Lol okey dokey
Lovely update!!!! 😃Thank you! 😳
Awww robbie kasturi shopping was so cute!! 😛Hehe glad you liked it 😛
And i really loved the rain scene!!!!! 😳 Reminded me of the good old rain scenes in Kasturi!! 😃Ooh wow I miss those! 😃
Hehehe milind showing off his car...aah boys will be boys =P Ahahaha so true 😆
Ooooo kasturi's delivery!!! Hope everything goes well!!!
hahaha milind's sharaab comment made me laugh!!!!!! 🤣Lol good 😛
fantastic part!! 👏 👏Thanks again 😃
Oooo can't wait to read next part!!! Yay will try! 😊
Update soon huni!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi everyone
Thanks so much for your lovely comments. really aprreciate them
Hope you enjoy this part
Tell me what you thought
Love TJ
Chapter 44 ~ Roshni se jaise bhara

"Badhaai ho. Beti hui hain. Bacchhe aur maa dono sahi salaamat hain. Aap mein se teen log usse milsakte hain."

Robbie breathed a sigh of relief, relaxing his fist which he had unconsciously clenched. He hurried into the room. Devika smiled and her and Prachi followed him.

"Kasturi," breathed Robbie, his voice full of so many emotions: pride, love, relief and amazement.

She beamed back and raised herself. Cradled in her arms was a tiny baby girl,

Robbie took in her arms, delighted and slowly rocked her, gazing at his daughter adoringly. He then passed her over to Devika and Prachi, who immediately began to croon, and sat next to Kasturi. Gently, he hugged her, and happiness overflowing, she buried herself in his arms. They stayed in their embrace for many moments, drinking in

Devika smiled, saying to Kasturi, "Beti, tumne mujhe aaj itni bhari khushi dehdi hain. Shukriya."

She hugged her and handed the baby back.

"Bahut hi pyaari hain, Kasturi. Tumne koi naam socha hain?"

"Kuch ideas hain. Usse dekh kar, Roshni sahi lagraha ain. Par hum panditji se baat karke koi decision lehnge.

"Haan, acchha hua ke tumne mujhe remind kiya. Ghar pochte hi hum usse phone kardenge. Naam karan jald se jald karna hain

"Jee, Mrs Sabhawal. Aap bilkool theek kehrahi hain. Aur aap log kuchnaseeb hain, Kasturi ki delivery bilkool normal thi. Aap apne saath jaldi lehjaayenge. Kal subaah aajaye."

Robbie looked rather mournful at the prospect of leaving. He hugged Kasturi tightly, then kissed his daughter's forehead.

"Kal milenge."

"Bye, Kasturi," called Prachi.

***

"Hi, can I please speak to Mrs Kasturi Sabharwal?"

"I'm sorry, hum patients ke saath phone pe baat karne ki ijaazat nahi dehsakte," stated the head nurse sternly.

"Please, ma'am, sirf das minute ke liye," pleaded Robbie.

"Maine kahaan na.."

"Woh kya hain, na, ma'am, meri biwi ki aaj hi delivery hui hain. Mein unne bahut miss kar raha hoon. Isliye, please sirf.."

"Theek hain," relented the nurse at last. "Aap line hold kijye. Mein uski room mein dilwaaoongi."

"Thank you so much, ma'am," finished Robbie politely.

***

"Mrs Sabharwal? Tumhaare liye phone hain."

Confused, Kasturi asked, "Hello? Kaun hain?"

"Main."

"Robbie, tum? Mein tumhe bahut yaad kar rahi thi."

"Haan, isliye maine phone kiya. Woh khadoos nurse ke saamne girgirane bhi pada. Par koi baat nahi. Tumhaare liye, mein kuch bhi karsakta hoon."

"Mein jaanti hoon," she agreed with a smile.

"Tum kaisi ho? Aur hamari beti?"

"Bilkool theek hoon. Aur woh sorahi hain. Tum jaante ho, Robbie, sab ne bahut kahaan ke maa banne duniya ki sabse kuchnaseeb pal hain. Aur ab mujhe laga ke woh sahi kehrahe the. Mein usse pura din dekhe dekh kar takhti nahi hoon. Woh itni pyaari hain."

"Sach, Kasturi. Mujhe bhi thoda sa ajeeb lagraha hain, ke yeh choti si bacchhi, hamari pyar ki nishaani .. se mujhe kitna lagaaw horaha hain. Ek din bhi nahi hua, per jaan chirakta hoon unpe."

"Nurse bularahi hain. Lagta hain tumne uspe puri tarah se jadoo nahi kiya."

"Uff! Yeh nurse bhi na. Koi baat nahi, mein tumse jaldi miloonga. Gyaara ghante mein. 660 minutes mein. 39600 seconds mein."

"Waah, Robbie. Tum toh maths me bahut kacchhe the. Yeh sab kaha se seekha?"

"Raaz batao tujhe? Calculator ka istemaal kiya."

"Yeh to cheating hain."

"Nahi toh. Poore paachis minute lage."

Kasturi laughed, then quickly said: "Nurse bahut annoyed lagrahi hain. Mein phone rakhti hoon. I love you."

"I love you too."

***

"Aaja, Kasturi. Bacchi ko cradle mein rakho." Kasturi gently places her daughter in the decorated cradle and sat next to Robbie. The priest began to consult his charts.

"Raashi ke mutaabik, bacchii ka naam "S" ya "R" se shuru hona chahiye," announced the pandit.

"Theek hain, panditji. Robbie, beta, tum dono ko koi naam pasand hain?" inquired Devika.

"Roshni", answered Robbie and Kasturi simultaneously.

"Theek hain. Bacchhi ke naam uski kaan mein chupke se kehdijye."

Robbie leant forward and whispered "Roshni" into his daughter's right ear. Everyone smiled and applauded.

"Sach mein. Naam bahut suhani hain, bilkool hamari gudiya ki tarah," commented Meher. "Dekho, kaise hasrahi hain woh."

The guests took turns to rock the baby's cradle, whisper blessings and feed her honey as part of the ritual. Robbie and Kasturi stood hand in hand, watching happily, proud parents at last.

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Chapter 44 ~ Roshni se jaise bhara (English)

"Congratulations. It's a girl. Mother and child are both safe and sound. Three of you can go in and meet them."

Robbie breathed a sigh of relief, relaxing his fist which he had unconsciously clenched. He hurried into the room. Devika smiled and her and Prachi followed him.

"Kasturi," breathed Robbie, his voice full of so many emotions: pride, love, relief and amazement.

She beamed back and raised herself. Cradled in her arms was a tiny baby girl,

Robbie took in her arms, delighted and slowly rocked her, gazing at his daughter adoringly. He then passed her over to Devika and Prachi, who immediately began to croon, and sat next to Kasturi. Gently, he hugged her, and happiness overflowing, she buried herself in his arms. They stayed in their embrace for many moments, drinking in

Devika smiled, saying to Kasturi, "Dear, today you've given me such a big happiness. Thank you."

She hugged her and handed the baby back.

"She's really sweet, Kasturi. Have you thought of a name?"

"We have a fewideas. Looking at her, Roshni comes to mind. But we'll consult the priest first."

"Yes, it's good that you reminded me. As soon as we reach home we'll phone him. We should hold the naming ceremony as soon as possible."

"Yes, Mrs Sabhawal. That's a very good idea. And you're in luck, Kasturi's delivery was completely normal. You can take her with you very soon. Come tomorrow morning."

Robbie looked rather mournful at the prospect of leaving. He hugged Kasturi tightly, then kissed his daughter's forehead.

"See you tomorrow."

"Bye, Kasturi," called Prachi.

***

"Hi, can I please speak to Mrs Kasturi Sabharwal?"

"I'm sorry, we can't give permission for you to speak to patients over the phone," stated the head nurse sternly.

"Please, ma'am, just for 10 minutes," pleaded Robbie.

"I said.."

"The thing is, ma'am, it was my wife's delivery today. I'm missing her a lot. So, please just.."

"Fine," relented the nurse at last. "Kindly hold the line. I'll get it taken to her room."

"Thank you so much, ma'am," finished Robbie politely.

***

"Mrs Sabharwal? Phonecall for you."

Confused, Kasturi asked, "Hello? Who is it?"

"Me."

"Robbie, you? I was missing you a lot."

"Yes, that's why I phoned. I even had to plead in front of that nasty nurse. But doesn't matter. I can do anything for you."

"I know," she agreed with a smile.

"How are you? And our daughter?"

"I'm completely fine. And she's sleeping. You know, Robbie, everyone told me over and over again that becoming a mother was the most lucky moment in your life. But today I found out how right they were. I can watch her all day and not get tired. She's so lovable."

"True, Kasturi. It feels strange to me too, that I'm so attached to this small child, the symbol of our love. It's not even been a day, and already I would lay my life down for her."

"Nurse is calling. It seems like you didn't charm her enough."

"Uff! This nurse is just too much. Oh well, I'll see you soon. In 11 hours. In 660 minutes. In 39600 seconds."

"Wow, Robbie. You were very bad at maths. Where did you learn all that from?"

"Shall I tell you my secret? I used a calculator."

"That's cheating."

"Not at all. It took me a whole twenty-five minutes."

Kasturi laughed, then quickly said: "Nurse seems very annoyed I'm putting the phone down. I love you."

"I love you too."

***

"Come, Kasturi. Put the baby in the cradle." Kasturi gently places her daughter in the decorated cradle and sat next to Robbie. The priest began to consult his charts.

"As per the horoscope, the child's name should begin with 'S' or 'R'," announced the pandit.

"Fine, panditji. Robbie, dear, have you two thought of any names?" inquired Devika.

"Roshni", answered Robbie and Kasturi simultaneously.

"Fine. Whisper the name into the child's ear."

Robbie leant forward and whispered "Roshni" into his daughter's right ear. Everyone smiled and applauded.

"Truly. The name is very beautiful, just like our princess," commented Meher. "Look how she's smiling."

The guests took turns to rock the baby's cradle, whisper blessings and feed her honey as part of the ritual. Robbie and Kasturi stood hand in hand, watching happily, proud parents at last.

Thanks for reading and commenting 😊
Edited by missindia26 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Me firsht Me firsht!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing part TJ!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
Awwwwww yayyyyy Robbie Kasturi are proud parents of a beautiful baby girl!!!!! 😳 😛 😃
Awwwww yu described the scene beautifully TJ!! ⭐️ Well Done!!! 👏
Hehehe Robbie's bechaini was funny 😆
And their dialogues were so sweet!!! 😳
And omg i loved that second counting thing and how he had to use a calculator to work that out.....in 5 hours?!! 😲 🤣🤣🤣
Awww lovely scene at the house!! Yayyy roshni is such a beautiful name!!!!!!!! She's gonna bring so much roshni to their house 😃
Lovely part TJ!!!
Update soon!!
Love yu 🤗
xx
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

Me firsht Me firsht!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yay! 😛

Amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing part TJ!!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏Thank you 😳
Awwwwww yayyyyy Robbie Kasturi are proud parents of a beautiful baby girl!!!!! 😳 😛 😃Yep! 😃
Awwwww yu described the scene beautifully TJ!! ⭐️ Well Done!!! 👏Aw thanks glad you thought so 😃
Hehehe Robbie's bechaini was funny 😆Lol I know cant live without her 😛
And their dialogues were so sweet!!! 😳Hehe glad you liked them 😛
And omg i loved that second counting thing and how he had to use a calculator to work that out.....in 5 hours?!! 😲 🤣🤣🤣Haha..well bechara Robbie is very bad at Maths and lol Im just at bad at Hindi I meant to write 50 minutes 🤣
Awww lovely scene at the house!! Yayyy roshni is such a beautiful name!!!!!!!! She's gonna bring so much roshni to their house 😃Yay I'm glad you liked then name! And yeah I thought it would be appropriate as she will lighten up their house 😃
Lovely part TJ!!!
Update soon!! Will do 😊
Love yu 🤗Love u 2 xx 🤗
xx

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Posted: 15 years ago
oops TJ yu did write 50 mins but this time i made a typo!!! 🤣🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
🤣 must be my bad influence If you're still here, chat 2 me :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
That was a very cute part
Aww they had a baby girl and named her Roshni!
Robbie's charms seemed to have failed on the nurse
Thanx for the PM
Cant wait for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
well written TJ....

Luved the baby's entrance to the story......

I wish there were baby parts in the serial too.... gosh yeh ektha bi na....

you FF writers should have done the show... and we fans wud have had a masti time watching it....

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

That was a very cute part Thank you 😃

Aww they had a baby girl and named her Roshni! Yep hope you like the name 😊
Robbie's charms seemed to have failed on the nurse Lol I know 😲
Thanx for the PM You're welcome 😛
Cant wait for the next part Good good will try and update soon 😊

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