~*~Dil ka rishta|Pt 2 pg. 4~*~

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Hey all, After all this sadness about kasturi ending and stuff I thought this might make a change this is my first FF on kasturi hope you like it...

Title: *'Dil ka rishta'*

character Analysis

kasturi:a sweet and simple beauty, lives in Delhi with both her sisters tanu and navneet and her mom and dad. They are very rich..and live in a grand mansion

Robbie: heartthrob of every girl in town.a guy with the best voice in India Robbie the rock star...very rich multi millionaire lives with his mom, dad, both sisters(divya,allana) and 3 brothers(raunak,vikas,areev) in delhi and he has the biggest mansion anyone could ever imagine

kasturi's dad(jp): a very rich business man rival of sabharwal group of industries..

Robbie's dad: very rich and rival of chawla group of industries

kasturi's best freind piya:loving and sweet married to raunak sabharwal..and the eldest bahu of sabharwal family

Extra character-Samiya-Piya's little sister!!

Extra character-hummy-samiya's BESSST mate...[they're like sisters]

This is set in the beautiful grand mansion of the chawla's and showing the beautiful sights nearby..a very grand view of the sea from kasturi's bedroom a pure beauty looking out of her balcony watching her sisters play basketball in the pitch.

Eyes as shiny as crystals. With a wish sparkling inside them, Sweet pink lips smiling and the moment we've all been waiting for...there stood a pretty face

kasturi calls out from the balcony in her room

kasturi:tanu! navneet! tum log basket ball khel rahe ho..do you know what the time is? its 12:00pm and your still not in college kitne late hogaye ho!! Oh tum ono kya mein kya karoo!!

tanu shouts above from below

tanu: kasturi di! aaj college nahi hai aaj tho Saturday heina

kasturi:kya!!!oh no! mujhe piya ko milne jaana tha how could I forget!! Mujhe usski madad karna hai engagement ki tayari mein..oh no kasturi your in trouble!!

Tanu carries on playing basket ball

kasturi calls her friend piya

piya:hello kasturi!

kasturi: hi piya im sorry I really thought it was Friday today aur tumhare ghar jaldi aarahi hoon ok bas thodi der mein aati hoon im sorry

piya:no kasturi its fine don't rush wese bhi im so lazy tody kuch karne ka man nahi hai im still sleeping

kasturi: PIYA!! Tum bilcul pagal ho!! Jaldi se utho main abhi aake tumhe theek karti hoon..your getting engaged today sweetheart..now get up quickly and tell samm to help you out

piya:kasturi tum kitni ziddi ho tikhe ajao mein tumhari intezar karoongi ok..oh no and im not calling her she ate all my chocolates yesterday you know and mom didn't even say anything

kasturi: I always knew she was cool! You deserve that piya ab jaldi utho!! N im cumin in 2 minz I shud see you up and ready ok

piya: ok Meri maa..jaisa aap kahe..waise kasturi tum saree pehenke aana ok?

kasturi:saree! par piya mujhe saree peheni nahi aati

piya:o kasturi c'mon tum ek pink saree leke ajaoo mein pehenaoongi akir engagement hai jeans pehenke nahi aasakte ho na aur tanu aur navneet ko definetly leke aana ha

kasturi:ok then piya ill hang up bye..lekin mujhe sare waree pehen nahi sakti tum pehena dena ok see ya!

piya: pehenadoongi see you!

kasturi gets ready and takes her sari with her then she informs her sisters and the 3 get into kasturi's car and kasturi quikly drives over to piya's place..wearing skinny jeans and a casual top(but she is gonna change later)

Kasturi and piya hug each other

piya: kasturi!tum agaye?..hi you two!

Samiya: Hi you guys!!

Kasturi:hey! I heard u ate all her chocs. Gimme 5 you're the best

Samiya: I done your job for u ok by eating di's chocs..normally that's your job na..

Kasturi: Yh I knw an I coud have done that myself as well?.

Samiya:oh well too bad!

Kasturi: I'll get you later

kasturi:kesi ho piya im sorry im late yaar ab chalo lets get on with the decorations

piya:hey kasturi don't worry yaar koi baat nahi..lekin tumhari aunty tumpar chilayegi..

kasturi: Don't worry ab mein agayi hoon na tho wo nahi chilayenge waise bhi I bet she was screaming at you for not waking up on time na

piya: Yh she was!! Arrangements tho hojayenge kasturi lekin mere jaane ke baad kaha milenge hum har roz?[n she was a lil teary]

Kasturi:piya..aaj tho sirf engagement hai aur tum abhi se rona dhona shuru?[wipes her tears] dekho piya mat ro main naraz hojaoongi

piya:chalo kasturi, navneet aur tanu tum bhi chalo

They all go in and help piya out with the decorations

devika:Robbie! Robbie utho Robbie tum itni der tak so kyun rahe ho yaad heina aaj piya ke ghar jaana hai hume..shagun lekar!!

(Raunak is Robbie's older brother)

You could see this really cute guy with sweet eyes and he looks so hot!

Robbie: Yh I know mom..But not now...thodi der baad please

devika:jaldi karo robbie we have to go..and give it then you can come back again...

Robbie:no mom please..It's like at 6:00pm and why do I have to go to give it early in the morning aur sirf mein hi kyun ramu kaka ko send kardo na..

Devika: Ramu kaka kyun tum kyun nahi?Ab jaldi utho warna main raunak ko bulati hoon

Robbie: Nahi nahi usse mat bulaana call nandu then..

Devika: nadu or ramu..none of them will go YOU'LL go!! or shal i call raunak?
Robbie: NO! don't call him ill go!!
Then he jumps up and runs!

Precap: RoKa meet up!!

It is necessary for your comments for me to continue so please leave comments..I included Hummy and me just for fun!! Because a few scenes need two more characters. Then I thought why not me and Hummy so we could have fun with robbie too😆!!

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Edited by *Twinkle_Shine* - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice..........like the character sketch.......robbie seems the same as in the serial.......love that........😉.......its good that kasturi is rich for a change.......😊........waiting for ROKA meeting.....😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@Swan20: Thanks so much you made me happy!😃 RoKa will meet very soon...keep reading😉BTW can I ask what's your name? then I don't have to keep saying Swan20...😃
Samiya=)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Samiya........no need to say thanks dear......i'm a big fan of FFs......waiting to see what happens in yours.........btw I'm Anu........😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😲
what am i seeing?
youve started an FF 😲
why am i getting so many shocks today
OMG ure staring an FF
Dil ka rishta
wowwwww
CONGRATZ ON URE FIRST FF
🥳


yay kasturi same character as like the show, but wowww shes rich thats a change
i wonder if kasturi is modern in your FF 😕😆

robbie still our rockstar yayyy!!!! his mansion i wish i could imagine how it was beyond imagination though lolz

That makes it a whole lot better that kasturis dad is a rival

wowww piya shes married 2 raunak
😆 lol u included ur slf 😲 no shok dre
so your robbies cuzion in the FF and raunaks your JI JU
how was the wedding hey
did you invite me and the rest kasturians to it (we wanted 2 c our rockstar lmao)
omg u did what???????????? 😲 u put me in dre y????? lolz
thank u sooooo mch 4 putinng me in dre as ure best m8
omg that means i can see robbie in your FF yayyy lolz
thanx 4 adding me
no ones ever done that added me in their aFF (or aded themslf lolz) Your the first as always

Okay wowwww you done first part already??? or is that a lil promom like or lil introduction lol
so it is set out in a beautiful place
wow her sister s play basketball id so challenge them 4 a match lmao
eyes as shiny as crystals wow love your intro of kasturi
lolz tanu playing basketball she a tom boy as wel?
kasturi its a saturday what world you in? lol
engagament so that means priyas not married 2 raunak yet or is she? 😕😆
lolz priyas stil sleeping wel shes mad shes your sister in the FF lol
you eat all the chocs moti
wow saree that means kasturis in to western clothes lolz saree good lcuk with that kasturi
lolz hehe tahts impossible soemone asleep on their engagment day hehe
i want my chocolate sokay sam? lolz
wow robbie stil the ususal rockstar asleep
him and his bhabi gna get on well to people who wake up l8 lmao
hottest guy robbie is in the universe lolz one of the hottest 😆
oh ramu kaka in thsi FF lolz normaly its nandu kaka lol
lolz hehe is robbie scrae dof his big bro or is that how they are really close
okay i dont know why you aded me in your FF but thanks soo mcuh
lolz i guess will do loadz of masti in the shaadi and that thats why lolz


okay you have 2 post th next part
roka meeting up
yay!!!! lolz

4 a shock im not that l8 in reading your FF but hey u never told me u were gna write an FF?????????
keep up the gr8 work
and hopefully i know loadz of ppz wil luv ure FF

👏
👏Luv Hummy
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

btw soz 4 the long comment
(i dont even know if you got what i writ lolz)😆
Edited by PrInCeZz07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

😲
what am i seeing?
youve started an FF 😲
why am i getting so many shocks today ...
OMG ure staring an FF
Dil ka rishta
wowwwww
CONGRATZ ON URE FIRST FF
🥳

...ohhhhhhhhh thanks hummy!!😃i lovvv u!!!!!


yay kasturi same character as like the show, but wowww shes rich thats a change
i wonder if kasturi is modern in your FF 😕😆...she mt b😆

robbie still our rockstar yayyy!!!! his mansion i wish i could imagine how it was beyond imagination though lolz .......ur funny😆

That makes it a whole lot better that kasturis dad is a rival...yh so theres no kiranz or ishitaz or kabirz n stuff😆

wowww piya shes married 2 raunak
😆 lol u included ur slf 😲 no shok dre ..oh yh man i had to
so your robbies cuzion in the FF and raunaks your JI JU .........oh yh n urz too😆
how was the wedding hey
did you invite me and the rest kasturians to it (we wanted 2 c our rockstar lmao)..oh yh EVERYONEZ invited!😃
omg u did what???????????? 😲 u put me in dre y????? lolz
thank u sooooo mch 4 putinng me in dre as ure best m8 ...u r though already my bst mate lolz😃😃😃
omg that means i can see robbie in your FF yayyy lolz
thanx 4 adding me
no ones ever done that added me in their aFF (or aded themslf lolz) Your the first as always....is is??tht's even better!!xtra funn!😆

Okay wowwww you done first part already??? or is that a lil promom like or lil introduction lol
so it is set out in a beautiful place ..tht's 1st part
wow her sister s play basketball id so challenge them 4 a match lmao ......go on hummy!
eyes as shiny as crystals wow love your intro of kasturi
lolz tanu playing basketball she a tom boy as wel?.....she myt b ..u lyk it thnks!😃
kasturi its a saturday what world you in? lol...robbiez😆no she dnt see him yt
engagament so that means priyas not married 2 raunak yet or is she? 😕😆...no nt yet😆
lolz priyas stil sleeping wel shes mad shes your sister in the FF lol
you eat all the chocs moti. moti?? main moti nahi hoon😆tum moti ho lolz😆
wow saree that means kasturis in to western clothes lolz saree good lcuk with that kasturi
lolz hehe tahts impossible soemone asleep on their engagment day hehe...she wrn't bothered to gt up..
i want my chocolate sokay sam? lolz........yh u cn share it wid me😆
wow robbie stil the ususal rockstar asleep
him and his bhabi gna get on well to people who wake up l8 lmao.......yh th'yr gnna gt on well😆
hottest guy robbie is in the universe lolz one of the hottest 😆
oh ramu kaka in thsi FF lolz normaly its nandu kaka lol...this tym it's ramu...who's the house one nandu is only robbiez one in here😆coz hes xxxxtrrra special😆
lolz hehe is robbie scrae dof his big bro or is that how they are really close
okay i dont know why you aded me in your FF but thanks soo mcuh
lolz i guess will do loadz of masti in the shaadi and that thats why lolz....yh i needed u in dre thts why lolz😆


okay you have 2 post th next part
roka meeting up
yay!!!! lolz

4 a shock im not that l8 in reading your FF but hey u never told me u were gna write an FF?????????
keep up the gr8 work
and hopefully i know loadz of ppz wil luv ure FF ........if u lyk it thn everyone el probably wud😃

👏
👏Luv Hummy
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

btw soz 4 the long comment
(i dont even know if you got what i writ lolz)😆

U knw u mke me hppy allllll the tym thnks sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much for tht many clpz hummy u totally rockkkkkkkkk!!as i allllwayyys say!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: swan20

hey Samiya........no need to say thanks dear......i'm a big fan of FFs......waiting to see what happens in yours.........btw I'm Anu........😃

Your anu ok nice name😳...keep reading!!=)😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Excellent, another kasturi FF!!
Thnaks for starting a new, the character sketch and intro looks great!
Keep updating!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow another kasturi ff. gr8 character sketch........wow kasturi is rich. she wont have money problems now 😆 (just kidding). cant wait for the ROKA meeting. update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinguunique

Excellent, another kasturi FF!!

Thnaks for starting a new, the character sketch and intro looks great!
Keep updating!!!

Thanks pinguunique!!
Will update soon keep reading!BTW what's your name?
Samiya!=)

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