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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
hey
lovely part-once again
keep writin & updatin
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: robbii

hi shiv...
hi shumi di😊
good to see u r update.
thx

lol when robbie took bath ..water went off😡..
lol😆
.the soap is very lucky😳.
Lol exactly😆
..dear which brand soap he uses...
he uses Kasturian brand which I dont think is available anywhere except Kasturian land😆
let me also try😳...heeee
hahhaah😆
lol he goes out to find water only with towel!!!😳.
yea...lol....I can imagine😆He must be looking so hawtt😆
.that too he is searching water in the fridge for bathing.🤣🤣..
lol...yea...bechara kaha jayega...he was so hawwt that he needed something cold...tan tara!he is searching in the fridge😆😆
..my god.
shiv i love his new fashion...👏
thank u!😛
raunak looked down and critisized...idiot he is..
exactly😭
.he should have looked up..i am sure he would have became dumb.
hahah...Raunak is male not female!😆and hopefully he is normal...😆nothing much would have happened to him🤣🤣
poor robbie taking bath with chill water from the friddge😭....lol u did not mention how many bottles of water he took to take bath..
aweee...so sorry I forgot to mention that😳
or with only one bottle of water he finished his bath????😳
yea...possibly....coz while bathing in cold water he was shivering so all the soap was shaking away😆
robbie is in 70's style...never mind..i love to see him even if he is stone age...🤣
hehe😆
lol why this puru is absuing my robs..i hate him...uff...
Puru is an abuser...thts why...(altough he is a producer)😆😆
rauk said lalu to our robs?😡😡
dnt worry there was a mirror opposite him when he said tht so it went back to him😆😆
robs doesnot know driving😭...don't worry maihuon naa..it is my pleasure to teach him...
okie....u can teach him😛
yepeee...bani said dog to raunak👏👏...i love that.
I was gng to do that dialogue in hindi but I thought it wld be very abusing so I did it in english😆😆
lol yeah puru ka kya problem hai.😡he punished bani...
I told u na he is an abuser😆😆
kasturi:thank god no water problem in taking bath.😳
haaha😆
yaar that is too cute ...kas too in 70's.
yep....if its 1970's she will be in 70's 😆😆
what is wrong with devika and ganga???
they r retards😉
when kasturi was praying robbie too was praying..👏.lol great ming not only think alike they do alike too.👏👏
awee...shumii di u r so sweet😳
super boring...😡😡.shnu...if i see this wordings in your ff next time i am nor going to comment on u r ff
aweee...plz dont do tht
(but i will read it for sure which i cant resist...heeeeee)
omg!this is my best comment till now!😳
lol great part...keep going.
thnk u shumi dii....u noticed every small point😳....and didnt i serve any biryani this time??..lol😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: shanu333


he uses Kasturian brand which I dont think is available anywhere except Kasturian land😆.lol i can try in ektamai shop
yea...possibly....coz while bathing in cold water he was shivering so all the soap was shaking away😆 i cant imagine how forcefully he might have shivered so that all the soap went away...ufff
okie....u can teach him😛...lol first i have to learn...heeeeee...
they r retards😉 heeeeee...
omg!this is my best comment till now!😳 u deserve it shiv...👏
didnt i serve any biryani this time??..lol😆 yep no briyani....but it is a pizza party👏...

Edited by robbii - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: rokajani

update soon luving it

thx😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: muneefah

hey
hi munu di!

lovely part-once again
thank u
keep writin & updatin
ure wish is my command!😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: fary*fary

gud start........
thx😊
when will roka meet
soon😛
keep wirting in
thx

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Parts 4 & 5..........Awww poor Robbie.....he's so insecure....😔.....why is Puru being so mean to him...😡.........i don't like this Raunak either.........khud ko kya samajhta hai.....😡..........Bani is really sweet.....😳......she's Kasturi's best friend & so nice to Robbie.......i love her for that.....😳
Poor Kasturi......like Robbie she too is not happy....😭....i hope they get together soon....😳
I love the 70s theme.......something different & unique...😊
You still haven't told us what is tonight.........i wanaaaant to know....😉......plz update soon.
Enjoying reading ur ff.....😃...don't call it boring...😔
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: swan20

Parts 4 & 5..........Awww poor Robbie.....he's so insecure....😔..
yea...i kno😭
...why is Puru being so mean to him...😡.
coz he is mean😆
........i don't like this Raunak either.........khud ko kya samajhta hai.....😡...
exactly😡
.......Bani is really sweet.....😳......she's Kasturi's best friend & so nice to Robbie.......i love her for that.....😳
yea...she is my fav character😳

Poor Kasturi......like Robbie she too is not happy....😭....i hope they get together soon....😳
dnt worry they will😳
I love the 70s theme.......something different & unique...😊
aweee...thx so much...u r sooo sweet
You still haven't told us what is tonight.........i wanaaaant to know....😉......plz update soon
nxt update hopefully by tmrw😊.
Enjoying reading ur ff.....😃...don't call it boring...😔
awweee...thx so much!😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Shivz!!!
I'm very proud of you today- you've proven that you're an amazing writer, way better then I ever will be! You make me SO proud! I feel so old watching you grow up *tears* lol
Okay, enough of my melo-dramaticness!
This part was definately the longest one till date! And see- now you know what an FF writer has to go through with all the updating! People dont spare you even when you stay up all night long! lol Trust me. I had 10 PMs today asking me to update... *sigh
My thoughts:
1. Aweee chooo chweet! Robbie wakes up and is so excited for today!! Myy babbieee!!
2. Hawww... whats this? The water runs out when he goes into the washroom? Grrrr!!! And stupid Raunak- what does he think of himself? Loser. Oh btw, I loved Robbie's English Accent! lmao! I couldnt stop laughing! It reminded me of this one scene in OSO (Om Shanti Om- when SRK says "Smarties Panties" lol lol lol!
3. WHY THAT RETARD PURU! I will KILL him! Bani is soo sweet, asking her dad to give her brother the car... but NOOOO! I hate him .HATE HIM! And I hate Raunak too! But I love Bani! lol And who's older..Bani or Raunak? Seems to me that they dont get along very well.
4.OMG I loved how you made Ro-Ka so different. Robbie is so excited for today- but not Kasturi! I wonder what today is! And Kas in sleeveless? *drools* lol
5.Aweeeeeeeeeeeeee Devika and stupid Ganga! Losers. They're just jelous! J-E-L-O-U-S! And Kas better have been praying to get a Robbie in her life! lol
I cant WAIT for the next part!!! Keep doing me proud! And I saw the new banner... SOOOOOOOOOOO beautiful Shivz! Brilliant job! LOVED it so much!! : )
-- Mimi
Edited by mimi0295 - 17 years ago

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