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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: robbii
shannu...thank u...finally up dated.
thank u for reading it...😊

shannu dear i love bani's letter.the way she said good luck is so sweet👏.their special way of communication..made me 🤣
awee...thank u so much...and it made me laugh a bit,too

lol only this much😲.it is like for a 3 days hungry man u served only one tea spoon of food that too briyani in a big plate.
omg!shumi di u r too funny!Btw..which biryani did I give??Vegetable biryani or chicken...😆...I promise nxt part will be longer😊

but even it is short it was sweet.i love the way u translate the hindi in english.that shows the uniqueness of u r ff.👏
awee thank u so much!😊

waiting for the next part.
will be updated within a few hours

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: swan20
great u updated........but it was soooo short...😔.
promise tht nxt part will be long😊
.Kas & Bani's way of communication is so sweet....😳..
awee...thx
.whats happening the next day????
me no telling!😆

plzzz update soon....😳
I will update within a few hours😳

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: muneefah
nice work girl👏

thx munu di😛

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Finally this is a long part hope you all like it😊
@Miimz--this is one of the parts I stayed up all nite to write.

RECAP
We get to know a bit about Kasturi and Bani

Part 4--Robbie

It was 12 am at midnight.Robbie was standing in his balcony excited but, he was jealous,too.

Robbie thinking to himself:Kal meri zindagi mein ek bohot bara din hai.Main bohot khush hoo par yeh becheni kyon ho rahi hai?Ek bohot hee ajeeb feelings hai!(Tomorrow is a very big day of my life.I am very happy but,why am I felling so restless?It's a very weird feeling.)

Aur main jal raha hoon!Lekin main kyon jalraha hoon?Mujhe toh hamesha se pataa hai ke papa Raunak se pyaar karte hai mujhse nahin!(And,I am jealous!But why am I jealous?I always knew that papa loves Raunak more than me!)

Agar papa mujhse pyaar karte toh mujhe Raunak keh tarah superstars nahin banate?Aur mujhe ache schools mein nahin bhejhteh?Agar mujhe ache schools mein bhejhteh toh meri English Raunak keh tarah achi hoti!(If papa loved me,wouldn't he make me a superstar like Raunak?And wouldn't he send me to a nice school?If he would have sent me to a nice school,my English would have been nice like Raunak's!)

Kaushalya hears this and feels bad for Robbie.She enters the balcony and tells Robbie:Robbie beta.Dil chota nahin karte.Jalte nahin.Agar Raunak aur papa tumhare saath nahin hai toh kya huwa?Main,Bani aur tera dost Armaan toh hain na?Chal jaldi se jaa ke soh jaa!Kal tere liye bohot bara din hai na?(Robbie,don't lose hope.You shouldn't be jealous.So what if Raunak and papa are not with you?Me,Bani and your friend Armaan are there right?Now go to sleep.Tomorrow is a very big day for you.)

Kaushalya goes to her room.Puru is sitting there.

Kaushalya goes to him and says:Aap kyon aisa karte hai?(Why are you doing this?)

Puru:Maine kya kiya?(What did I do?)

Kaushalya:Aap koh toh pataa hai aapne kiya!Aapne bechara Robbie ki zindagi narak banaa di!(You know what you have done!You have made Robbie's life into a living hell!)

Puru:Hum is faltu baath pe roz kyun jagrah karte hai?Tumhe pata hai keh yeh karne se humme kuch nahin milta!Mujhe din mein dus baar yeh baath karne ka waqt nahin!(Why do we fight over this useless matter everyday?You know we get nothing out of this!I don't have time to discuss this ten times a day!)

Kaushalya:Aap se toh baath karna hee bekhar hai!(It's useless to talk to you!)

She turns off the light,turns her head to the other side and she goes to sleep.

Robbie watches all this and thinks that because of him his family can never stay happy and blames himself for all this! According to him,he is a curse on his family!

That's it for now.Hope you all liked it.Next part sometime today or tomorrow.

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#65

oh gosh!its been 6 hours since the update and still 0 replies??I m the worst writer😭

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: sum_cooll
oh dear
gud FF
awee...thank u soo much and welcome to our Kasturi family😊
update soon
nxt update tmr

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: sum_cooll
thanx
i love to read ff so plz update soon
i luved ur ff
aweee thts so sweet of u😳ill try my best to update tmrw😊

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: sum_cooll
thanx

aweee...i shld say thx to u for taking ure precious time to read my FF😊

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: fary*fary
its too short make it large
yep....nxt part is gonna be very long!😛
otherwise lovely FF
awee thx so much😛 and welcome to our Kasturi family.

and I am shocked to see someone using my siggies😃thx