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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

SHIvz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaghhhh!! Robbie, FINALLY introduced!!! YESSSSS! Best part till date =D Obvious reasons. Lmao

But whats this? He's excited for tomorrow too?!! WHAT's TOMORROW SHIVZ?! This is not done- you cant keep all this under suspense for this long! Its been like a month !!!!!

And you know what? Why is stupid Puru doing this?! What did Robbie ever do to him? Loser. But I might know whats going on... hmmm! Lets see if Im proven right in the near future! =D

And,... since Bani and Robbie are connected in a way.. and Bani happens to know Kasturi.. does this mean RoKa know each other too? Does Raunak know Kasturi?!

Hurry and post the next part! I want LONGER parts! lol and thank you for this "long" part [I can assure you, this isnt that long at all, seeing that you leave so much suspense!! Grrr!]

--- Mimi

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: mimi0295
SHIvz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Miimz!

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaghhhh!! Robbie, FINALLY introduced!!! YESSSSS!
lol
Best part till date =D
really?
Obvious reasons. Lmao
hahah...yea😳

But whats this?
didnt u like the part??dont scare me!😕
He's excited for tomorrow too?!! WHAT's TOMORROW SHIVZ?!
pssst its a secret!
This is not done- you cant keep all this under suspense for this long! Its been like a month !!!!!
mwahahaha...I told u na I m evil!See I m not that nice as u think!😈u will get to kno the secret by the end of the week.😆

And you know what? Why is stupid Puru doing this?!
coz he is stupid!😆
What did Robbie ever do to him?
*HINT:Robbie didnt do anything
Loser.
lol...exactly
But I might know whats going on... hmmm! Lets see if Im proven right in the near future! =D
ok.lets see

And,... since Bani and Robbie are connected in a way.. and Bani happens to know Kasturi.. does this mean RoKa know each other too?
nope
Does Raunak know Kasturi?!
yea....i wrote it in the character sketces tht they r co-stars in almost every film

Hurry and post the next part! I want LONGER parts!
hai rabba!aur kitna long likoo??
lol and thank you for this "long" part [I can assure you, this isnt that long at all, seeing that you leave so much suspense!! Grrr!]
sorry....I promise nxt part will be longer

--- Mimi

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: monaliza$
luved ur ff
aweee thx😊
hey i m using ur sigi of kasturi
wow!thts gr8!
may i if u have probz temme i luved this sigi
its ok...its free 4 use...and I really appreciate u using my kreations thx😊
And welcome to our Kasturi family.😛

Edited by shanu333 - 16 years ago

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

lol extreamly sorry ...i did not noticed that u have up dated...better here after u pm me soon after u r up date.

dear tomorrow ka raaz kya hai? cant wait... to know...😛

super star raunak!!!!....😡

robbie not gud in english?...🤢

lol kaushalya and puru...super combination...👏

robbie is curse on his family...lol...pz don't say that..💔

shanu very good part.this time u served as a plate full of briyani(big part).gud going keep it up.

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: robbii
lol extreamly sorry ...i did not noticed that u have up dated..
there is no need to say sorry😊....its enough that u read my boring FF.😊
.better here after u pm me soon after u r up date.
ok.will do that whenever I update😊

dear tomorrow ka raaz kya hai? cant wait... to know...😛
u will get to know that hopefully by the end of this week.

super star raunak!!!!....😡

robbie not gud in english?...🤢
lol

lol kaushalya and puru...super combination...👏
really??

robbie is curse on his family...lol...pz don't say that..💔
aweee...he isnt but he feels....omg!shumi di!u noticed every small point!😲

shanu very good part.
thank u.😛
this time u served as a plate full of briyani(big part).gud going keep it up.
lol...but which biryani did I serve??Chicken or vegetable😆

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: shanu333
its enough that u read my boring FF.😊 boring ff??😡

ok.will do that whenever I update😊 thank u

u will get to know that hopefully by the end of this week.next week...?never mind worth waiting.

lol...but which biryani did I serve??Chicken or vegetable😆. this time vegetable...hopefully next time chicken.

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: kelly_sui
great part
update soon

thank u😊 and nxt update will be in a few hours

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: robbii

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#79

I wrote this part very late when I was half sleeping😆 at night so please forgive me if there are any errors.😳So here is the longest part till now:

RECAP--
We get to know more about Robbie's life.And more about Puru and Kaushalya.

Part 5--Good Morning or....?

(In Robbie's house)

It is 8:00 am.Robbie wakes up.

Robbie:Aaj!Aaj meri zindagi ka bara dinn hai! (Today!Today is a very big day of my life!)
Robbie:Mes is very exciteds.But,mes is very nervous,too.(U know how they spoke English in the 70's😆)

Robbie's luck was always very bad.So he went to the picture of God in his room and said:Hey bhagwan,aaj mera dinn acha jaye.(O God,I hope I have a nice day today.)

Robbie went to take a shower but while he was taking a shower,the water went away and he was covered all with soap!(😆)

Robbie:Isi baath kah toh dar tha!😡(I was scared about this!😡)

He wraps his towel around him and goes to find water.😆He runs to the fridge to get water making sure that no one saw him.😆But,Raunak saw him.

Raunak:Yeh kaunsa naya fashion hai??(Which new fashion is this??)*Laughing and looking down on Robbie*

Robbie just ignores him and gets water from the fridge,goes to the bathroom and takes a bath with freezing cold water.()

After taking a bath,Robbie comes down.(Robbie was wearing a black and white checkered shirt.*70's style*)

He sees Bani pleading Puru saying:Papa please,papa please!

Robbie interrupts:Kya huwa Bani?(What happened Bani?)

Puru interrupts:Robbie tumne kabhi seekha nahin kya ki jabh do bare baath karahe ho toh doosron koh beech mein nahi bolna chahiye!(Robbie haven't you ever learnt that when two elders are speaking you shouldn't interrupt!)

Kaushalya interrupts:Bani??Bari??(Bani??Old??)

Puru(Ashamed of what he had just said):Par kisiko bhi beech mein nahin blna chahiye chahe woh chota ho ya bara!(But no one should interrupt whether they are elder or younger!)

Bani:Chup karo!Papa,aap batao ki aap bhaiya koh aaj apni nayi car lene denghe ke nahi??(Shut up!Papa now you tell me if you will let bhaiya use your new car today or no??)

Robbie very politely says:Nahi Bani,iski koi zaroorat nahin hai!(No Bani,no need.)

Raunak:Haan!Iski koi zaroorat nahin hai!Kyo ki car toh mai hi loonga!Aur is lalu koh toh car bhi chalani nahin aati!(Yea!There is no need!Because I am going to take the car and this fool doesn't even know how to drive!)

Bani:Raunak!You dog!Better stop barking!OR ELSE!

Puru shouts:BANI!Kya bare se aise baath kate hai?Tumhe koi tameez nahi?Iski saza hai ki tum aaj raath koh humhare saath nahin aa rahi ho!(BANI!Do you talk like that to your elders?Don't you have any manners?Your punishment is that you aren't coming with all of us tonite!)

Kaushalya talks back at Puru:Kyon?Raunak neh bhi apne bare bhai Robbie ke bare mein aise baath ki thi!(Why?Even Raunak talked to his elder brother Robbie like that!)

Puru:Maine keh diya toh bas kehdiya!(I said that that means it's final!)No one was allowed to talk back at Puru.

Puru:Bani!Tum apne kamre mein jawo aur tabh takh bahar math aana jabh takh main na boloon!(Bani!Go to your room and don't come out till I tell you to!)

Bani cries and runs to her room.

At the same time in Kasturi's house:

Kasturi wakes up and says:Aaj!Aaj ka dinn kyu aiya?(Today!Why did today come?)

She takes a shower and goes down.She is wearing a black sleevelaess dress with roses printed on it.Her hair is half tied with a bit curly hair coming out in front.(70's style)

She sees Ganga reading a magazine and saying:Kasturi! Kasturi! Kasturi! Jahan kahan sirf didi kah hee naam hai!Uff!😡(There's didi's name everywhere!😡)

Kasturi goes to Ganga and says with a smile:Good morning,Ganga!

Ganga just gets up and goes away.

Kasturi is hurt by this.

Suddenly Vicky jumps on her and says:Good morning didi!

Kasturi:Aaah!

Then,she calms down and says:Tumne toh mujhe darah hee diya!(You almost scared me!)

Vicky:Acha mujhe bohat bukh kag hai mai khanay jahraha hoon.(I am very hungry so I am going to eat.)

Vicky leaves.

Kasturi goes up to her room to get something.On the way,she sees Devika.

Kasturi:Good morning ma!

Devika:Mujhey bohat der hohrahi hai,mai jaati hoon.(I am getting ver late,I am going.)

Devika didn't even bother to say a hello to Kasturi.

Kasturi was sad once again.

JP came up to her and said:Good morning beta!

Kasturi:Good morning papa!

JP:Aaj raat tumhare liye bohat important hai.(Tonite is very important for you.)

Kasturi(Trying her best to hide her tears):Haan.mujhe sar mein dard hai toh mai dawai lene jahh rahi thi.(Yea.I have a headache so I was going to take medicine.)

JP:Tum theek toh ho na?(Are you okay?)

Kasturi:Haan mai theekh hoon.(Yea.I m fine.)

Kasturi runs to her room,jumps onto her bed,stuffs her head into a pillow and cries her heart out sayin that:Ma aur Ganga aisa kyun kartee hai mere saath?(Why do ma and Ganga do this to me?)

She goes to the picture of God in her room and says:Hey bhagwan aisa kisi koh bejh do meri kamhi koh puri karni ke liye!(O God please send someone to fill the space in my heart!)

At the same time Robbie is praying the same thing.

So that's it for now.I know this part was super boring so please bare with me.And pls leave ure comments.

P.S. I changed the banner on the first page so plz tell me if you like it or not😊

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shumshad parveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#80

hi shiv...good to see u r update.

lol when robbie took bath ..water went off😡...the soap is very lucky😳...dear which brand soap he uses...let me also try😳...heeee

lol he goes out to find water only with towel!!!😳..that too he is searching water in the fridge for bathing.🤣🤣....my god.

shiv i love his new fashion...👏

raunak looked down and critisized...idiot he is...he should have looked up..i am sure he would have became dumb.

poor robbie taking bath with chill water from the friddge😭....lol u did not mention how many bottles of water he took to take bath..or with only one bottle of water he finished his bath????😳

robbie is in 70's style...never mind..i love to see him even if he is stone age...🤣

lol why this puru is absuing my robs..i hate him...uff...

rauk said lalu to our robs?😡😡

robs doesnot know driving😭...don't worry maihuon naa..it is my pleasure to teach him...

yepeee...bani said dog to raunak👏👏...i love that.

lol yeah puru ka kya problem hai.😡he punished bani...

kasturi:thank god no water problem in taking bath.😳

yaar that is too cute ...kas too in 70's.

what is wrong with devika and ganga???

when kasturi was praying robbie too was praying..👏.lol great ming not only think alike they do alike too.👏👏

super boring...😡😡.shnu...if i see this wordings in your ff next time i am nor going to comment on u r ff(but i will read it for sure which i cant resist...heeeeee)

lol great part...keep going.

Edited by robbii - 16 years ago

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