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Posted: 17 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: mimi0295

Shivz!!!
Miimz!!!

I'm very proud of you today-
omg!really but for what??😕
you've proven that you're an amazing writer,
omg!really?😲miimz I m not!!I m the worst writer in town!
way better then I ever will be!
Nooooo!miimz!u r one of the best writers!If u say tht one more time i will never talk to u!*folded arms*
You make me SO proud!
aweeee.....NOO!dont say tht!
I feel so old watching you grow up *tears* lol
aweee...u r making me cry!u cant imagine how happy I am!😳u r just sooo sweet!😳
Okay, enough of my melo-dramaticness!
lol😆
This part was definately the longest one till date!
yea....lol
And see- now you know what an FF writer has to go through with all the updating!
yep...now i understand
People dont spare you even when you stay up all night long!
exactly..lol😆
lol Trust me. I had 10 PMs today asking me to update... *sigh
omg!really?!😲see...tht shows tht ure FF is one of the best!😳
My thoughts:
1. Aweee chooo chweet! Robbie wakes up and is so excited for today!! Myy babbieee!!
yea.....sooo sweet!!😳
2. Hawww... whats this? The water runs out when he goes into the washroom? Grrrr!!!
hahah..I wish I was the soap😳...I would be on him 4 a long time😆
And stupid Raunak- what does he think of himself? Loser.
exactly....he s a loser no.1!
Oh btw, I loved Robbie's English Accent! lmao!
oh really??even I did.😆
I couldnt stop laughing!
lol....me too😆
It reminded me of this one scene in OSO (Om Shanti Om- when SRK says "Smarties Panties" lol lol lol!
yea.....I am thinking about putting that dialogue....
3. WHY THAT RETARD PURU! I will KILL him!
noooo!!!that place has been reserved by me....buh if u want we can kill him together😆
Bani is soo sweet, asking her dad to give her brother the car...
glad that u like her....she is my fav character
but NOOOO! I hate him .HATE HIM! And I hate Raunak too!
But I love Bani!
me too
lol And who's older..Bani or Raunak?
Raunak is older but Bani dsnt call him bhaiya.she calls him dog!🤣
Seems to me that they dont get along very well.
yea..lol...they dont😆
4.OMG I loved how you made Ro-Ka so different.
aweee...thank u sooo much!
Robbie is so excited for today- but not Kasturi! I wonder what today is! And Kas in sleeveless? *drools* lol
lol...I thought of giving her a makeover....
5.Aweeeeeeeeeeeeee Devika and stupid Ganga! Losers. They're just jelous! J-E-L-O-U-S!
lol...yea..they're jealous
And Kas better have been praying to get a Robbie in her life! lol
not really Robbie....she was just praying to get someone who she can share everything with.....but when god hears....she gets her lovvee!!😳😳
I cant WAIT for the next part!!!
will be updated within a few hours....
Keep doing me proud!
yeshh!!mes will try me bests!😆
And I saw the new banner...
oh...really?? did u like it..??
SOOOOOOOOOOO beautiful Shivz! Brilliant job! LOVED it so much!! : )
aweeee...thank u.....U r sooo sweet!!😳I still have to improve it by putting the 70's effect...so plz keep watching the front page😃
-- Mimi

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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
So here is Part 6-

NOTE-I wrote this part when I went to the Immigration Department to get my ID Card😆....I wrote it in a hurry so it might be not that good...plz forgive me if u find any errors.😊

RECAP-
We get to know more about their families,their life...etc.

Part 6--Get Ready!

Kasturi has to get ready unwillingly.

Kasturi:Ufff!6 bajh gaye hai aur mujhe tayaar hona hai aur 8 baje jaana hai!(Ufff!Its 6 o'clock and I have to get ready and I have to go there at 8 o'clock!)

Kasturi:Nandu Kaka!Meri dress aagayi?(Nandu Kaka!Has my dress come?)

Nandu Kaka:Haan beti,mai abhi laya!(Yes,my child,I 'll bring it now.)

Nandu Kaka brings the dress.

Kasturi:Shukriya.(thank you.)

Nandu Kaka:Koi baath nahi beti.(Never mind.)

Kasturi sees the time.It is 6.15pm.

Kasturi:Abhi takh waqt hai.Tohri der leth hoon.(There is still time.I will just lie down for some time.)

But,Kasturi falls asleep.

Kasturi wakes up.

She sees the time.She panicks seeing that it is 7pm.

Kasturi:Hey bhagwan!Sirf ek ghanta?!(Omg!only 1 hour?!)

Kasturi gets ready quick.

By the time she gets ready,it is 7.45pm.

Kasturi comes down.She is looking beautiful.She is wearing a white full sleeves lehenga,which had silver embroidery with a long dupatta only put on one side.
Her hair was tied up in a bun with a diamond clip in the middle.And,she had flowers in her hair.She was wearing a beautiful diamond necklace with rows of diamond flowers.

She was looking pretty much like this:


(NOTE-Plz ignore Deepika and SRK and the people in the background.just look at Deepika's dress.Kasturi's dress was white in colour not pink. so please imagine the dress in white.thx😳)

Everyone else was ready waiting for her.

As soon as Ganga saw her,her blood started boiling with anger and jealousy.

Vicky:Kuch jal raha hai.I can smell it.(Something is burning!)

Ganga showed him an angry face.😡

JP:Abh chalo.(Let's go.)

They all leave.

At the same time in Robbie's house:

Everyone left before Robbie as he was taking too long to get ready.

Robbie gets ready.He is wearing:


(NOTE-Please ignore SRK,Deepika.Just look at SRK's clothes.thx.)

Armaan comes to pick him up.

Armaan is wearing a multi coloured shirt.

Armaan:U looks very handsomes!

Robbie:U toos!

Robbie:Abh chale?(should we go now?)

Armaan:Chalo!(Let's go.)

Robbie:Ek minute ruko.(Wait for a minute.)

Armaan:Kyun?Kya huwa?(Why?What happened?)

Robbie:Aaj subah koh,papa ney Bani koh aaj raat aane se mana kiya tha.(This morning,Papa refused Bani to come tonite.)

Armaan:Tera baap kabhi nahi sudhrega!(Your father will never improve!)

Robbie:Aisa math kaho!Woh dil ke bohat ache hai!(Don't say that!He is very
good at heart.)

Armaan:Itna bhi jooth math bol!Tere baap ke liye toh gaana banaa dena chahiye:(You shouldn't lie that much!I should make a song for your dad!)
Puru is my names,
What I wants is moneys,
Puru Puru Puru!
Puru Puru Puru!

Robbie:Apna bara moo bandh rakh!(Shut your big mouth!)

They go up to Bani's room.The door is locked from the outside and only Puru had the keys!

Robbie:Abh kya karein?(What should we do now?)

Armaan:Ideas!Windows!

Both of them climb till the window.

Both at the same time:Bani!

Bani was already ready!She was wearing a pink and white polka dot kurta,with pink churidar and white duppata tied on her head.

Both of them:😲

Robbie:Tumhe kaise pataa tha ki hum tumhe bachane aayenge?(How did u know that we will come to save you?)

Bani:Kyu ki mujhe pata tha ke mere bhaiya mujhe bachane aiyenge jaise roz karte hai!Abh chalo der ho rahi hai!(Because I knew that my bhaiya wld come to save me as always.Now lets go!we r getting late!)

Armaan:Abh hum neeche kaise jaayenge?(Now how will we go down?)

Bani:Simple!

She grabs both of them and they close their eyes and jump down.

They were lucky that nothing happen to them.

Armaan:Chalo!(Let's go!)

They get in to the car and rush to the place as they were late.

Ok.so thats it for now.I will try my best to update tomorrow as I am vry busy tmrw.

Plz leave ure comments.

And I have addes the 70's effect to the banner...Plz tell me if u like it😊







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Posted: 17 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: monaliza$

briliant job man!
thx😊
luving it
glad to know that😳
post next part plz
already posted😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: sum_cooll

new part
shanu now u r writing lenghty parts thanx
thanks😊
O great going
glad that u liked it😊
keep it up
thank u😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#95

hi shiv.

i like kasturi's dress discription.i can imagine how she can look.(lol do u know deepika has one of the words best face cut i think next to aysh...may be top 5 i think. i like her too)
every one left robbie????😡
robbie's dress...ha..ha..haaaa.lol this dress karan wore it in nachbaliyeh 3.
robbie said his father is heart wise good.sooo sweet of him.
puru puru puru...🤣super song .
robbie is bani's saver👏...sweet again.
shiv...again an excellent part...continuation of pizza party👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
thx😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
SHANU DEAR
SO SWEET OF U
U MADE WONDERFUL FF
KEEP WRITING BUDDY
I LUVED IT
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: robbii

hi shiv.

hi shumi dii.

i like kasturi's dress discription.
oh really?I m glad that u like it😳
i can imagine how she can look.(lol do u know deepika has one of the words best face cut i think next to aysh...may be top 5 i think. i like her too)
yea....i kno....and she is my fav actress😊
every one left robbie????😡
they r mad....leave them alone😆
robbie's dress...ha..ha..haaaa.lol this dress karan wore it in nachbaliyeh 3.
yea....it suits him so I made him wear tht😆
robbie said his father is heart wise good.sooo sweet of him.
yeaa...I love him 4 tht😳
puru puru puru...🤣super song .
ohh....thx.....my sister made tht up. when the show had just started....she used to hate him....and I used to feel bad 4 him at tht time....lol...it flashed in my mind ydy...and thot of sing it in my FF😆😆
robbie is bani's saver👏...sweet again.
yea...lol...thx again😳
shiv...again an excellent part...continuation of pizza party👏
yumm yumm😛...thx😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: cutykoo20

SHANU DEAR
hi sari😊
SO SWEET OF U
aweee......u r so sweet to comment on my FF
U MADE WONDERFUL FF
aww...thx so much.
KEEP WRITING BUDDY
thx😊
I LUVED IT
thx again..😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
great part..........loved how u've described kasturi & robbie's outfits....😊.........its a little difficult to ignore SRK in the pictures though....😉 😆 Arman is too funny......the way he says tera baap & the song is hilarious....🤣 i love Bani's character......she's so cute....😳 So are they going for the Premier of Kasturi's movie.....😛

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